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Posted: 16 years ago
#51
this is such an amazing FF!! I totally love itt!!!!
ur a wonderfull writer👏 👏one of the best i have come across on I-F =]
keep up the gr88 work!!!
continue soonnnn please😳
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Posted: 16 years ago
#52
awesum amazing fatabulouss!!!! i wud luv to read more..
Kanika
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Posted: 16 years ago
#53
I just read this fanfic and it's absolutely superb. You are a very good writer and this story is really interesting.
Continue soon and pm when u update plz
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Posted: 16 years ago
#54
thank you soo much every one!! your comments mean soo much to me😳🤗
esp. @
tangina r: your comment means a lot to me. thank you soo much. this is one of the greatest comments i have ever received🤗😃
WoW! it has been a while. Well, i am back with an update😃


How Many Stars. Chapter...(i still have no clue what chapter it is...lol)
Recap:
Edward walks into Elizabeth's room to talk to her.
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Edward's Point of View

"So, did you want something?" Elizabeth asked me.
"No, I was just wondering if we could talk, perhaps?" I asked her in a polite tone.
"Umm...okay." She replied. She sounded rather surprised.

I noticed that she had prepared her room in a very unique style. Not teenager like at all. It was almost very similar to the kind of room you would imagine some extremely aristocratic family would have if they lived in the Victorian Time Period of English Literature. There was a large chair made of red decorative fabric and the legs and arms in a golden color in the right corner of the room. Of course, her room was being shared. With all these kids, i don't see how even the biggest house could avoid having two people share a room.

Thats when i noticed her roommate, i think her name was Emma? She was talking on her cellphone quite loudly and disturbingly, so I asked her politely if she could step out for a minute.

She did so, and i began my conversation with my little sister.

"So, are you enjoying your stay here? Meaning, are you adjusting well?" I started to make some small talk. It just seems better than "so, why do you hate our father?"

"I'm adjusting well." was all she said.

"So, can i ask you why you aren't that fond of dad?" I asked her in a casual tone.

"I am not so sure myself, i suppose its because i blame him for keeping me away from my family. I always thought that it was his fault that the Volturi did this. And, of course, there is the fact that i was forced to become completely and totally independent at such a young age because of him." She told me.

Now i understood why this was such.

"oh" I said.

"So, if you are so fond of him, why don't you ask him for advice on how to deal with your crush on Bella instead of me?" She asked me out of the blue. How in the world did she know that I...?

"I too can read minds." She explained. "But don't worry, I can block out anyone i wan't at any time. And i will in most cases"

I didn't really wan't to talk about my issues with my little sister. So i just closed the conversation with a goodnight.

I realized that it was late and a school night, and as a vampire pretending to be a human, i must go to sleep.
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Next up: School. Bella's P.O.V. sorry about it being sooo short. i will try to update soon. 😳


Edited by ~devi~ - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#55
wow im glad u updated it
its awesum!!
cnt wait 4 moree
continue soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
#56
Great part. It's cool that Edward is not the only mind-reader in the family.
Plz continue soon 😊
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Posted: 16 years ago
#57
Hey
how are you? havent seen you since ages on IF 😆 Im sorry im late in reading the last two parts you updated. Woww although there short there amazing. elizabeth edwards little sister can read minds too. woww. 😆 and her knowing edwards crush on bella. woww please update soon cant wait to read the next part. bellas p.o.v
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Posted: 16 years ago
#58
Just read your FF and i loved it
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Posted: 16 years ago
#59
hey,

i just read ur ff, it's pretty cool. keep it up,


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