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Posted: 16 years ago
#41
hey
sorry im late
wow omg
its awesome
loved the parts
hey thats not fair
who are they?????????
lol does jacob come in here? hehe could it be him?
lol just a wild guess
oh no please you have to update soon the next part lol
and make it kind of longer if you can
tc

-hummy
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Posted: 16 years ago
#42

wow awesum!!!!👏

continue soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
#43

Originally posted by: PrInCeZz07

hey
sorry im late
wow omg
its awesome
loved the parts
hey thats not fair
who are they?????????
lol does jacob come in here? hehe could it be him?
lol just a wild guess
oh no please you have to update soon the next part lol
and make it kind of longer if you can
tc

-hummy


Thanks for commenting hummy=)🤗
hehe...i know its not fair😆
don't worry, you will find out very soon who they are. & i'll try to make it longer, but you know how it is--matter of time and all
thx again😊


Originally posted by: angelic shaz



wow awesum!!!!ClapClapClapClap
continue soon


Thank you very much for commenting and i am glad you like it🤗

Originally posted by: desigurl_77

Awesome!! Pm me when u update!


Thanks!! 🤗And i most certainly will
😃

Next update is comming up soon😊
Edited by ~devi~ - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#44
this is soooo good
update soon!!!!😃
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Posted: 16 years ago
#45
Continue soon..
cant wait for the next part!
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Posted: 16 years ago
#46
sorry i'm late... the part was cool !! and i really like the banner!!
ud soon!
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Posted: 16 years ago
#47
Hey!!...just read ur ff.....its really nice!!....
do continue soon!
n could u pls pm if possible?....thank u
-Simran
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Posted: 16 years ago
#48
thank you very much Mallika, Nishttha, and Simran🤗

recap: EPOV: i turned around and i saw them


{This is a very short chapter, i apologize}

EPOV:

It really bothered me to see them here, in my school. I felt like they were invading my territory, which wasn't fair under any circumstances. I don't really mind that they are now apart of my family, but i just really hope that they don't try to start acting as if they know me, not exactly cool.

One of the girls winked at me, which i just ignored. Finally, the bell rang.

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English class:
The teacher assigned new seats, and i was right in front of Bella. Bella is simply too nice, more than whats good for her. I mean, she's on crutches and yet she doesn't ever ask for help, which is why i just offer/do things for her anyways.

I think i am beginning to really like Bella, but it would be impossible for me to actually, i mean, I'm a vampire and she's the most gorgeous, kind creature i have ever met.

Bella is very content with where she is right now, and i wouldn't want to take that life away from her.

I spent the rest of class pondering over this, and then left for home.

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Home:
There were so many people in this house it was ridiculous! I mean, i know that the house is huge, but your eventually going to bump into each other anyways.

The only people i liked around here were mom, dad, Alice, Emmet, and Elizabeth. She was pretty cool, her being my lil sis and all.

Dinner time was horrible as usual. I wonder why Elizabeth resented dad so much, it was as if she was blaming everything bad in her life on him.

I chose to knock on her door after dinner.

"Elizabeth? Its me, Edward." She said to come in, and so i did.

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Posted: 16 years ago
#49
Omd Devi ur ff is so gd ,.... please continue this soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
#50
Omgf...i lovee your ff...its really cooll..
continue soon..cant wait for the next part!

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