AjNa ss: From Heartbreak to love updated part 10 pg13, 26/09/15 - Page 5

Wow... such a beautifully written chapter. I so loved it. You portrayed ajay's confession so nicely and realistically unlike the show. The lines I loved the most were:

"You know why I will marry her. It is because I love her. More than anything in this world. She loves me too. I can't believe I was stupid enough to give her up for you."The many daydreams he had where everything worked itself out and he had the right to claim Sanjana as his. Except this was not a dream, but reality.
He could not believe the silent wish his heart kept repeating over and over was going to come true. Sanjana , "his Sanjana", two words he had lost hope of ever saying, was finally coming back home.

Looking forward to reading the next part and I am really excited to know how ajay is going to convince sanjana who is so angry with him.
Please update soon:)

Awww Ajay Confessed dat too in his anger...It reminded me of the epi where Ajay confessed his love for Sanju...I actually Loved this Ajju from ur story.And Ayush Bhaiya has always been great.Ok so am waiting how Sanju would react...enough of their Sufferings...So now even u plan to end dis but plsss put sum cute AjNa moments .Thanx again for starting this SS and never ever stop writting On AjNa plsss...Rish.

beautifully written...thank u for such a wonderful SS...but a small request...don't stop this SS. continue this after AjNa re-union. plzzz...with the current track of thbst..i am like totally down...plz do write on ajna to keep our spirits up...plz do make time and write on ajna

Omg this is written with too many emotions, as I was reading it I could imagine #AjNa in front of my eyes nice and clear. I so wished they have used this in the show. Loved every bit of it dear thanks a lot and plz keep on posting.

Oh my God I don't know what to say after reading this. It was beyond perfection. I loved this part to the moon and back and I am extremely sure that I will read it for innumerable times. In fact I have already read it for 2 times.

I really can't pinpoint which lines I loved the most because each word was just bang on.This is the most beautiful AjNa confession I could have imagined. The creative's really should visit the forum and take ideas from people like you.

And yes please continue this with another chapter and add some sweet romantic AjNa moments please please please. And also please write more Ajna stories. You are a superb writer and I truly wish to read more from you.

Thank you for this marvellous story. :)

Rish Thankew Thankew Thankew Thankew...sweetie...I just loved It a lot...It was just awesum waiting for d next chap...i wish u would have been d writter of THBST.Atleast we could have got some good AjNa scenes...Thanx a ton again It was an amazing Piece Loved AjNa confession and Loved Sanju's outburst.But am glad Sanju accepted Ajay's Apology.
Dnt keep us waiting for a long tym...Plsss and am sure the next chappy is gonna be splendid again.

Loved it, As usual its far far better than show.. I have shared your story link in Chandni's instagram, WIsh she will read it, she will love to act in the character which u have narrated in this story rather than character Sanjana in show.. Thanks a lot for uplifting our moods by your creativity..

Rish... I just read both the chapters and they were AMAZING👏

Ok am waiting for Tiana to give a Title so that I can make a banner cmon Tiana Sweety act fast.