AjNa ss: From Heartbreak to love updated part 10 pg13, 26/09/15

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Aayushi15

@Aayushi15

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Posted: 10 years ago

#101

Oh my God I don't know what to say after reading this. It was beyond perfection. I loved this part to the moon and back and I am extremely sure that I will read it for innumerable times. In fact I have already read it for 2 times.

I really can't pinpoint which lines I loved the most because each word was just bang on.This is the most beautiful AjNa confession I could have imagined. The creative's really should visit the forum and take ideas from people like you.

And yes please continue this with another chapter and add some sweet romantic AjNa moments please please please. And also please write more Ajna stories. You are a superb writer and I truly wish to read more from you.

Thank you for this marvellous story. :)

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Nisha

@moonlitnisha

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Posted: 10 years ago

#102

Rish Thankew Thankew Thankew Thankew...sweetie...I just loved It a lot...It was just awesum waiting for d next chap...i wish u would have been d writter of THBST.Atleast we could have got some good AjNa scenes...Thanx a ton again It was an amazing Piece Loved AjNa confession and Loved Sanju's outburst.But am glad Sanju accepted Ajay's Apology.
Dnt keep us waiting for a long tym...Plsss and am sure the next chappy is gonna be splendid again.

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grandtheft5

@grandtheft5

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Posted: 10 years ago

#103

Absolutely superb Part 10. Loved it, especially the below parts. I admire this strong Sanjana. I don't like the mature, motherly one that we saw last week.

" I am not finished!... Wait your turn. You have spoken enough in the past few days." Sanjana said, her eyes shooting daggers at him.😆😆

"Do you think that I am some piece of luggage than you and Ajju can exchange between you at will and I should just shut up and go? ...So what are you going to do if Ajju suddenly decides that he does love me? Will you toss me back his way? You were the one who wanted this wedding even after you knew how I felt about you. Now you come and say that Ajju doesn't love you so now I can love you. Wow Ajay, any girl would be so flattered to know this. I wanted so badly for you to feel the same way about me but now I am not sure I care anymore." Sanjana said as she turned her back to him. " I think you should leave."👏👏

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Rishma

@darrish

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Posted: 10 years ago

#104

So many lovely comments. thanks guys.

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smileeee

@smileeee

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Posted: 10 years ago

#105

Loved it, As usual its far far better than show.. I have shared your story link in Chandni's instagram, WIsh she will read it, she will love to act in the character which u have narrated in this story rather than character Sanjana in show.. Thanks a lot for uplifting our moods by your creativity..

Edited by smileeee - 10 years ago