RiYu - SS ----- Winds of Change (Part - 2 Page - 4 updated)

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Taahir

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Prologue - Emotional

Abhi is truly torn between hiss mum and Ria and its very difficult to just
choose one of them

Thank you Shanti for starting a SS

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Originally posted by: taahir004
Prologue - Emotional

Abhi is truly torn between hiss mum and Ria and its very difficult to just
choose one of them

Thank you Shanti for starting a SS

Thanks Taahir,

I wanted to write a OS first but thought SS would give me greater scope to express the various characters in my fiction.

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Taahir

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Part 1 - Not sure how I skipped it , anyways it was Awesome just Excellent its such a great start , I liked how Sheetal made her point to
Sarthak but more than that her POV was strong ,
Abhi speaking to a stranger but does not know why he is in love yet cannot marry and bringing Jaintin into it makes me think that again
one had to sacrifice his love for his mother

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sandiab

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Posted: 11 years ago

#14

Really nice chapter Shanti and she is jatins gf that's cool. And I got to ask why the name souwmya? I am dealing with another souyma on my fav show just hate her to bits disgusting girl. Atleast u made this 1 nice

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kmfan_2

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Originally posted by: sandiab
Really nice chapter Shanti and she is jatins gf that's cool. And I got to ask why the name souwmya? I am dealing with another souyma on my fav show just hate her to bits disgusting girl. Atleast u made this 1 nice

😛..Sandia, when I was writing this part I was looking for someone to just cool off the tense moments at both the places ---The Maheshwari Mansion and The Pavement ---

Sowmya means gentle, calm,

This is what I read too...means a mentally calm or placid or balanced; beautiful, majestic, dignified, unruffled.

So I chose that name for the girl in Jatin's life...

Now whether she will actually be that or the opposite is to be seen...

Thanks for reading...😊

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kmfan_2

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Posted: 11 years ago

#16

Originally posted by: taahir004
Part 1 - Not sure how I skipped it , anyways it was Awesome just Excellent its such a great start , I liked how Sheetal made her point to
Sarthak but more than that her POV was strong ,
Abhi speaking to a stranger but does not know why he is in love yet cannot marry and bringing Jaintin into it makes me think that again
one had to sacrifice his love for his mother

Take your time to read...no problems...

Sheetal, Sarthak will share as much space in this fiction like Abhi Ria and also this stranger Sowmya about whom I haven't disclosed much except that Jatin and she are in love.

Thank you for your encouraging comment.

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Lisa

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Posted: 11 years ago

#17

Nice update Shanti, I liked how you gave what was happening at both places, and I am glad Sheetal showed her disgust to her husband.. he took some time to give reply on love so he had me wondering, if he too gave up his love for his mother but I am glad you will give more on them as well as I think there is alot between them to be learnt. And about the mystery girl, Jatin's love, waiting to see how this goes and what direction you take

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Monica

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Posted: 11 years ago

#18

Very nice Start Di . Loved first part . And how Sheetal put her point . Update soon.

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kmfan_2

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Posted: 11 years ago

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Originally posted by: trinilisa
Nice update Shanti, I liked how you gave what was happening at both places, and I am glad Sheetal showed her disgust to her husband.. he took some time to give reply on love so he had me wondering, if he too gave up his love for his mother but I am glad you will give more on them as well as I think there is alot between them to be learnt. And about the mystery girl, Jatin's love, waiting to see how this goes and what direction you take

Thank you so much Lisa😊