KalMa FF - My Heart Is Not Mine Anymore Note pg 19 - Page 15

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Posted: 2 years ago

Originally posted by: Jara567

Atul ko isliye bura laga ki varun along with the office have always thought Kallu to be unmarried. And mj on the other hand is soo happy to be addressed as her husband. It itself is such an expressive scene.

Bechara Malhar ek aise kashmakash mein hain ki mujhe bura lag raha hain, he is finding it really difficult to actually see how Kalyani has actually changed.

Atharva’s character here is soo nice and polite. Mujhe to sampu ki yaad aarahi hain(soo unbelievable to say for the show😅) but I already love samtharva here.

Di the flashback was full on point!!! Bilkul movie jaisa lag raha tha. I almost imagined it as a south movie ka scene!

Aur srivastav to ekdam 100% South Indian villain vibes de raha hain di. 10/10 to you for him!!!

Kalyani ka gussa bhi jayaz tha. Wo thak chuki thi actually. Malhar ke siva uska dard jo angaar banke bahar aaraha tha, wo koyi nehi sehta. Kalyani vent every frustration on him because she didn’t love him. Ab uski kadhwahat bhi haar maan gayi par Malhar haar nehi maana❤️❤️❤️


Thank you Jara🤗

Glad that you girls liked the flash back..

I tried to keep it as logical as possible..

And I was wondering jyada filmy toh nahi ho gaya..😆

South Indian villain...🤣🤣🤣 Mai south Indian hun na...toh ho gaya mujhse ye kaand...🤣🤣🤣

But 80s aur 90s ke saare villains aise hi the🤣.whether its south or north..


I hope Aage ki story aap logon ke expectations ko meet kare...


Can I have ideas from you both too...for some Kalma scenes suiting this story.. Jo mujhe flow me Aaye I'll use it..

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Posted: 2 years ago

You are most welcome ❤️❤️

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Posted: 2 years ago

Chalo Dil khush ho gaya hai toh ab jaldi jaldi isika update de do😝😝

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Posted: 2 years ago

Don't worry south hai ya north jo bhi hai best hai.... 😁😁

And kya suggestions dein humlog aapko aapse kuch seekhne ko mile usi ka wait karte hain.

Waise aapko ab story mein Kalyani aur Malhar ke beech ek full heart to heart conversation dikhana chahiye kyunki I feel jab se dono ek dusre ko mile hain ek proper conversation toh hua hi nahi hai jismein dono ek dusre ko apne apne thoughts batayen because I feel sabkuch itna jaldi jaldi ho gaya ki dono ko baat karne ka mauka hi nahi mila ek dusre se shayad issiliye Kalyani Malhar ko hate karke apne man ko shant karne ka try karti thi aur Malhar Kalyani ko time deke but they should atleast have a proper conversation regarding there marriage, feelings, past, present, future, relationship, etc. everything so that atleast they can surpass the awkward present in there relation. And now since Atul is also going and Malhar also has sometime left before joining his duty so Kalyani should start this conversation as now she wants to mend everything. Because I believe in every relationship the understanding and conversation between a couple is very important and now a days these two things are only missing in a relationship.

So this is my suggestion I hope you will like it.😊😊

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Posted: 2 years ago

Originally posted by: shrutiberlia

Don't worry south hai ya north jo bhi hai best hai.... 😁😁

And kya suggestions dein humlog aapko aapse kuch seekhne ko mile usi ka wait karte hain.

Waise aapko ab story mein Kalyani aur Malhar ke beech ek full heart to heart conversation dikhana chahiye kyunki I feel jab se dono ek dusre ko mile hain ek proper conversation toh hua hi nahi hai jismein dono ek dusre ko apne apne thoughts batayen because I feel sabkuch itna jaldi jaldi ho gaya ki dono ko baat karne ka mauka hi nahi mila ek dusre se shayad issiliye Kalyani Malhar ko hate karke apne man ko shant karne ka try karti thi aur Malhar Kalyani ko time deke but they should atleast have a proper conversation regarding there marriage, feelings, past, present, future, relationship, etc. everything so that atleast they can surpass the awkward present in there relation. And now since Atul is also going and Malhar also has sometime left before joining his duty so Kalyani should start this conversation as now she wants to mend everything. Because I believe in every relationship the understanding and conversation between a couple is very important and now a days these two things are only missing in a relationship.

So this is my suggestion I hope you will like it.😊😊


Ofcourse I love your suggestion and totally agree with your view.

Even I'm of the same opinion that a good conversation and discussion does solve a lot of things..

Companionship is an important part of the relationship.

Definitely KalMa is going to have that discussion.. now or later ye mujhe bhi pata nahi.. but there will be..

Aaj kal husband wife Kya even parent child talks are becoming strained.

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Posted: 2 years ago

Absolutely correct.... Ajkal koi baat karna hi nahi chahta. Log na conversation avoid karte hain aur fir bolte hain ki pehle jaisa kuch nahi raha humlog ka vibe match nahi karta bacche humari sunte nahi are agar aaplog unko bacha samajh se jab tak kuch samjhao ge nahi toh woh log kaise samjhenege. Parents expect karte hain hi bache ek certain age ke baad sab kuch samajh jaate hain lekin humlog ko bhi zaroorat hota hai ki kabhi kabhi woh log humare pass baithen aur humlog se puche aur humara point of view samjhe. But nahi kabhi kabhi toh lagta hai bache hi theek the kisi cheez ka koi tension nahi. Aajkal toh friendships bhi aese hi hain khud chahe kisi ke pass ek minute bhi nahi ho nikalne ke liye apne friends ke liye lekin expect karenge hi woh time nikale samjhe. Kabhi kabhi lagta hai ki kaash real life bhi ekdum fiction ke jaesa hota.

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Posted: 2 years ago

I sooo agree with the parents wala thing. Addition to that is ki ek timd baad baccho ko bhi akele pan ki aadat ho jaati hain. They might have lots of other people in their life but parents ke saath ki kami reh jaati hain kyunki parents emotionally available nehi hote. As they get used to it, the damage becomes permanent. Baccho ko parents se isiliye lagav kam ho jaata hain…

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Posted: 2 years ago

Correct.... Issiliye bache woh kushi social media, studies aur other kisi activities mein busy hoke dhoondhne lagte hain.

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Posted: 2 years ago

Aap jaisa bhi likhengi, khoobsurat hi hoga di. Aapki kitni stories kitni favourite hain di. You know how much I love mafs and glimmer. But this one brings out the most of your writing skills and talent. Iski execution is top notch always.
ab iss story mein twist kya laana hain that’s upto you but iss phase Mein KalMa needs to communicate. Kalyani ko Malhar ko batana hain ki wo kis daur se guzar chuki hain Because of sampu’s death, her marriage drama and how she herself was too traumatised to understand how unfair she did to mj. “Jab koyi humpe taras nehi khata to hum bhi patthar dil ban jaate hain” type situation.
Aur Kalyani ko bas batana nehi balki jatana hain, she has to prove herself jo obviously ekdin mein nehi hoga.
it all might be too much for mj to digest all of a sudden. But he will obviously have a reaction first after seeing love in kallu’s eyes. Wo aap acche se dikhana. Baaki it will be a process of their relationship’s growth.

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Posted: 2 years ago

Malhar doesn't hold any grudge against her..woh Bina bataye hi samajh chuka hai that she's been struggling with so many things.


Phir bhi they will have a meaningful conversation.

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Not a fanfic

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