Sochta hoon ki vo kitne maasoom the - Page 11

Chapter-11

When Agni returned from the hospital after Malhar was discharged, she hadn't expected what she found in her house.

Sampada chirpily said to Agni who still couldn't believe her eyes, "Ma'am. Inse miliye ye hain Maai Anupriya Deshmukh. Aaj kya h na meri tabiyat kharab hai? To aaj ke din aapki exclusive naukar ye."

Agni clenched her fists, and growled, "Mere saamne paison ke liye tum aur tumhara vo boyfriend gidgidaya tha...to mere naukar bhi tum hi dono rahoge. Kisi aur ko involve karne ki koi zaroorat nahi hai."

"Maai," Sampada said, "Ye Agni madam ka chehra aapko kahin dekha dekha nahi lag raha? Zara yaaddasht par zor dijiye apni."

Anupriya adjusted her spectacles and said, "Us Kalyani ki shakal thi inke jaisi. Par ham uski baat lekar kyon baith gaye? Naak katwa di thi us ladki ne meri...aaj bhi kiraane vala mujh par taane maarta hai ki teri beti vahi thi na Anupriya jo Pallavi ke saath us ghatiya hotel me thi...main hi bewakoof thi jo ye bhool gayi ki ganda khoon ganda ho hota hai."

"Y...y...ye kya keh rahi h aap Maai?" Sampada was stunned. She had planned to bring Agni face to face with Anupriya so that she could expose that Agni was no one else but Kalyani. But what had possessed Anupriya?

"Tum Kalyani se unki kya tulna kar rahi ho Sampada?" Anupriya continued, "Siwaay nautanki ke kisi kaam me man nahi lagta tha us ladki ka. Tum khud hi socho ki kya uske andar thi itni kabiliyat ki itni oochaiyon tak pahunch sake. Bas usse itna hi ho sakta tha ki Rane parivaar ke ghar me bina pagaar ki aaya bani padi rahe."

Agni couldn't believe what she was hearing. She had thought even after she had lost everything, even after everything had changed, even herself, she would always have her Aai. But why was she behaving like this? She said, "Magar A..."

Anupriya slipped, colliding with Sampada whose cellphone fell on the floor in this chaos. In her phone, video recording was open. Agni looked at it and then at Anupriya who signalled her to see it. "Meri Aai smart ho gayi hai!" Agni proudly thought to herself.

"Bahut ho gaya," Sampada said with exasperation, "Chaliye yahaan se Maai."

"Magar tumhari to tabiyat kharaab thi na Sampada," Anupriya innocently asked.

"Ab theek ho gayi hai," Sampada said and took Anupriya with her. Anupriya looked back for a second with tear filled eyes at Agni. Agni who never broke down in these five years finally was helpless.

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Agni was going in the town for some work. She got down her car and with a big bag, she said loudly, "Haan mujhe pata hai das crore rupai hain is bag mein ye par why are you so overreacting? Itne paise to main har mahine charity me donate kar deti hoon. Just Chill. Haan jaa rahi hoon bank me deposit karne use but usse pehle mujhe tumse milna hai. Kahaan? Wahi parking lot par."

Agni was fully aware she was being followed by Ahir, who was standing there in the corner, eve-teasing at the girls who were passing by. Agni knew when he would hear the hefty amount of Rs. 10 crore he wouldn't be able to stop himself. And add to it the money was with a girl. It would make Ahir overconfident that he would be able to intimidate the girl and snatch her money.

Agni, wearing white silk shirt with a beige cotton blazer and crop beige pants. Her sunglasses made her like a stylish diva on the road. Ahir was following her to a deserted parking lot. As soon as Ahir tried to put a chloroform drenched handkerchief on Agni's mouth, Agni casually took out her sunglasses and pushed the temple tip of her glasses which was actually a sharp knife in disguise. Ahir wasn't expecting that. Then kicking right into his belly, Agni held him by neck.

"Ye kya kar rahi ho?" Ahir screamed in pain, "Main to bas yahaan apne dost se milne aaya tha."

"Are Ahir...in paanch saalon me to tum apni Vahini se baat karne ka tareeka bhi bhool gaye...aap se seedhe tum. Chalo aaj main tumhe tameez hi sikhati hoon." Saying that Agni pressed a nerve in his neck which made him immobile.

In some minutes, Agni brought a kerosene container and poured it over Ahir.

"Vahini nahi, chhor do mujhe," Ahir pleaded, "Main Dada aur police ko sab bataa doonga. Arey dewar hoon main tera."

"Dewar hai tu mera," Agni said, "Tabhi to. Jab Tera bhateeja mar gaya, teri Vahini bhi mar hi gayi thi, tere Dada ki Naukri chali gayi to tu kaise khush rahega? Family ki feelings ka bhi to dhyaan rakho..."

"Vahini please," Ahir had snot all over his face.

"Chalo ek game khelte hain tere saath," Agni said, "Vaise mere bacche ko bedardi se maarne se pehle tum logon ne mujhe koi choice nahi di thi. Par chal itna to main kar hi sakti hoon. Zinda jal kar marna ya ye belt ki maar khaana, bol kya hai teri choice?"

Finally after some hours, when Malhar phoned Agni that he wouldn't be able to come to work tomorrow as they found his brother brutally wounded in a deserted parking lot and doctors had declared him to be 95% paralysed, Agni said to him, "I'm so sorry for your brother, Mr. Rane." But there was an enigmatic smile playing on her lips.

Meanwhile in hospital, a tall man with sunglasses entered.

"Kaka aap?" Malhar said.

"Ab main aa gaya hoon," Sarthak said, "Ahir ke saath jisne bhi ye darindgi ki hai use khoon ke aansoo na pila diye to mera naam Sarthak Rane nahi."

Originally posted by: sathwi_99

Read both the updates pragyaa.

I really loved it completely.

You explained each other povs perfectly and even kalyani got to know malhar was also suffering.

The pure bond between a child and mother is showcased greatly and each found their solace in one other.

Malhar helping anupriya in studies even having hatred for deshmukh people, shows his character and his virtue.

I loved the update.

I really hate sampu as a mother, she may not care for her child but having him loss his life for property is so disgusting

Waiting for agni punishing both sampu and atharv in her own style.

I really loved this ff. Thank you for this.

Thanks a lot Swathi. What a coincidence, when the notification for your comment came, I had just finished updating the next chapter.

Wooowww sone sein pehle itni achi update mazza aagaya ...sacchi kya mast mazza chakaya anupriya ne sampada ko aur kalyani nein ahir ko baby love you for this and I am telling you...you will rock this for sure 🤗🤗

Anupriya samjahdar ho gayi hai aww the emotional moment between mother and daughter ...charge huein bhi ussein mil nahi paayi kalyani achien sein par sampada ka acha popat hua 🤣

Udhar ahir ki kya band bajayi kalyani ne ahha kya shaanti mili ye sab padhkein maan ko sahi kiya agni nein kalyani maf kar bhi deti thi par agni kabhi maaf nahi karegi 😈

Ohho so Sarthak rane ne entry le li hai chalo abb ye bhi lapete main aayega ...iska bhi patta kaat isne bhi bada tang kiya hai season 2 main I hate him to the core in season 2 ..😡

Woww.. Really loved this anupriya. Who she outsmarted sampu. It's too good.

Kalyani punishing ahir is also good.

Loved this update. Waiting to know what kaka is going to do.

Liked this smart Anu who outwitted Sampada. 😆

Sampada is a moron..

Agni knows what can make Ahir fall in her trap.. 😆Chalo Ahir ko saza mili.. 👍🏼

Sarthak had entered.. Hope he's not negative..

Chapter 12

"Bas kar Asawari," Madhav said, "Tumhare Rone se Ahir theek nahi ho jayega."

Asawari said crying, "Are kya bigada tha mere bete ne kisika? Hamesha sabki madad hi to karta tha dekho fir bhi..."

Madhav said, "Main to pehle hi kehta tha ki jin lafangon ke saath iski dosti hai, vo sahi nahi hain."

"Par Baba ye un lafangon ka kaam nahi lagta," Malhar said, "Jis cruelty se Ahir ke saath aisa kiya hai use dekhkar lagta hai ki koi Ahir se bahut nafrat karta tha."

Sarthak said, "Malhar sahi keh raha hai Dada. Ye kisi chhote mote Badmash ka kaam nahi h. Dada main abhi koi clue khojkar aata hoon."

Tabhi ek nurse Malhar ki taraf aai aur boli, "Sir. Hospital ki remaining fees aap kab deposit karenge?"

"Abhi to main fee reception par dekar aaya hoon," Malhar said, "Ab kon si fees?"

"Mr. Rane vo doctor ke visiting charges the," the nurse said, "Aapke bhai ke hospitalization ka bhi to cost recover karna h hame."

"Par mere paas jitne paise the, main already deposit kar chuka hoon," Malhar said.

"Sister Mr. Rane hamare hi organization ke employee hain," Agni arrived, "He'll get 50% on his dear brother's treatment."

"Tum fir yahaan aa gayi Kalyani?" Madhav said, "Peecha kyon nahi chhorti hamare parivaar ka?"

"Ab apne hi khareede huye hospital me aane ke liye mujhe apne ek mamooli employee ki family se permission leni hogi?" Agni smirked, "Aurangabad me kucch zyada hi weird rules nahi hain?"

"Aapka Hospital?" Malhar said, "Par aapne kabhi bataya nahi."

"You can't expect me to share everything I'm doing with you," Agni exhaled, "Vaise bhi kya lagte ho tum mere? Sirf ek mamooli employee. To better hoga tum apni had kabhi bhoolo nahi."

"Sorry mam," Malhar said sheepishly.

The nurse was still persistent, "Sir baaki ki 50% fees abhi deposit kariye."

Asawari said to Madhav, "Are kucch boliye na Agni ko? Hospital ki maalkin h vo. Kahiye usse ki fees ke baaki ke 50 percent hame de de."

"Tum chahti ho main is badtameez ladki se paison ki bheekh maangu?" Madhav was incredulous, "Vo bhi us ladki se jo Kalyani ki hamshakal hai."

"Are apni ye badi badi baatein baad me kar lijiyega," Asawari said, impatiently, "Hamare bete ki jaan ka sawaal h."

"Kalyani Beta," Madhav cleared his throat but Agni didn't hear him. He called three four times but there was no response.

Finally when Madhav said, "Agni ma'am." Agni turned towards him.

"Vo Malhar ke paise already kharch ho gaye hain, to..."

"Hmm...," Agni smirked, "To hospital fees ki 50 percent fee ke liye aapko paise chahiye."

Madhav nodded.

Agni continued, crossing her hands in front of her chest, "Actually aapke parivaar ke financial status ko dekhkar main aapko ye paise pehle hi offer karne vali thi. Fir maine socha," Agni's voice was really quiet as a whisper now, "Ki ek ladki se help lene se aapka ego kahin itna hurt na ho jaye ki is hospital me admit hone ka agla number aapka ho. Btw, apki hospital fee ka payment maine kar diya h. Malhar, can you please take me to Ahir."

"Sure ma'am," Malhar said.

Ahir was lying helplessly on hospital bad.

"Tch...tch...tch," Agni said, lifting Ahir's hand in air and then letting it fall with a thud on the bed which made Ahir want to squirm in pain but he couldn't do so, "Kitni berehmi se maara hai ise. Aapka bhai kisi criminal gang me involve tha kya?"

Malhar said, "Nahi to."

"Hmm..." Agni said thoughtfully, "Fir koi iskaa ye haal kyon karega? Are you sure Mr. Rane ki Ahir ne kabhi kisi innocent ki life barbaad nahi ki?"

These words made Malhar think harder how much he didn't know about his family.

At Agni's home

Agni was just finishing with her work when the doorbell rang. Opening the door, Agni hugged Anupriya tightly and broke into tears.

Anupriya closed the door behind her, and said, "Kalyani! Kaisi ho tum? Aur Ahir ke saath jo hua, vo tumne..."

"Apna sab kucch khone ke baad koi kaise ho sakta hai, Aai" Agni said, "Kalyani to 5 saal pehle hi mar chuki hai. Ab jo aapke saamne khadi h vo insaan nahi sirf aag hai jo sirf jalaa sakti h. Ahir ko to maine kaafi saste me chhor diya, baaki sabke saath tu dekhna..."

"Kalyani magar in sab me kahin tujhe..."

"Mujhe kucch nahi hoga aai," Agni said, "Jab tak mere ek ek gunehgaar ko main unke anjaam tak nahi pahuncha degi tab tak mujhe kucch nahi hoga."

Anupriya said, "Chal bahut ho gayi badle ki baatein. Tere liye ek surprise h..."

"Surprise?"

Then Agni heard the horn of a school bus. Looking outside the window, she whispered, "Pillu?"

"Taiyyar ho jao Kalyani," Anupriya said, "Aaj maa beti aur naati picnic par jayenge."

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Whose scenes would you like to see more of in the further chapters? Feeling a bit of writing block

Is all this revenge drama becoming too over the top and monotonous?

Originally posted by: Phlo004

Wooowww sone sein pehle itni achi update mazza aagaya ...sacchi kya mast mazza chakaya anupriya ne sampada ko aur kalyani nein ahir ko baby love you for this and I am telling you...you will rock this for sure 🤗🤗

Anupriya samjahdar ho gayi hai aww the emotional moment between mother and daughter ...charge huein bhi ussein mil nahi paayi kalyani achien sein par sampada ka acha popat hua 🤣

Udhar ahir ki kya band bajayi kalyani ne ahha kya shaanti mili ye sab padhkein maan ko sahi kiya agni nein kalyani maf kar bhi deti thi par agni kabhi maaf nahi karegi 😈

Ohho so Sarthak rane ne entry le li hai chalo abb ye bhi lapete main aayega ...iska bhi patta kaat isne bhi bada tang kiya hai season 2 main I hate him to the core in season 2 ..😡

Thank you Vanshu meri jaan 💜💖💖💖💖💖

Originally posted by: sathwi_99

Woww.. Really loved this anupriya. Who she outsmarted sampu. It's too good.

Kalyani punishing ahir is also good.

Loved this update. Waiting to know what kaka is going to do.

Thanks a lot Swathi.

Originally posted by: rekha_crm

Liked this smart Anu who outwitted Sampada. 😆

Sampada is a moron..

Agni knows what can make Ahir fall in her trap.. 😆Chalo Ahir ko saza mili.. 👍🏼

Sarthak had entered.. Hope he's not negative..

Thank you Rekha💖💖💖💖

Praggu.... Loved both the parts..... And no revenge bohot acha chal rha hai..... Bohot acha lag rha hai sach m...... The ranes deserve this for being too cruel with her.....

Sampada ki chaalaki😂😂😂... Bechari nakaam ho gyi..... But anuyani ka milan ho gya..,.. This was so emotional.. Atleast koi to use yha samjhta hai😊😊😊

Ahir se bhi acha badla liya 😶😶😶😶.,,,.... I wish ki thoda sa revenge or hota.... But ye itna fantastic tha ki main kya btau....

Hospital scene m to kalyani rocked everyone shocked😂😂😂.....

Kalyani gave mj some hint....jisse vo figure out kr ske about shirts condition

And aage ke chapter m Tu jo chahe rakh.... U always choose wonderful plots.....