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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: Phlo004

Baby take a ease ..tu itni jaldi jaldi updates deti haina that's why you are feeling like this ...aaram sein likh kar kahi bhage nahi jaa rahien hum naa tu ...hum bhi iss FF ko phir aaram sein enjoy kar payenge aur tu bhi stress feel nahi karengi ...we write these things to entertain ourselves and our friends not to stress ourselves ..samjhi 😊


Haan yaar Vanshu. Ek baat bata tu Kdramas ya Netflix series dekhti h kya? Koi sahi ho to ek do suggest kar dekhne k liye

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: Autumn09


Haan yaar Vanshu. Ek baat bata tu Kdramas ya Netflix series dekhti h kya? Koi sahi ho to ek do suggest kar dekhne k liye

nahi to galat insaan sein pooch rahi hoo..🤣🤣.iss mamalein tujhein gayu help kar sakti hai 👍🏼
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Posted: 3 years ago

All thanks to Vanshu Rani for idea for this chapter. Love you my Jaan 💖💖💖💖💖💖


Chapter 13

Moksh got down the bus and looked around nervously. It was a new locality for him but when he saw Anupriya waving at him, he ran towards Anupriya.

"Are Pillu sambhalke," Agni felt a fear when she saw a speeding car in front of Moksh but Moksh, being the smart boy he was, crossed the road safely.

"Anupriya aaji!" Moksh came and hugged Anupriya. Agni felt a bittersweet emotion on seeing Anupriya and Moksh bonding so well, but she couldn't be part of it. Agni wiped a tear from her eye with the back of her hand.

"Agni aunty, aap ro kyon rahi ho?" Moksh asked innocently.

"Nahi, vo bas..." Agni's voice was hoarse, "Vo bas aankh me kucch chala gaya tha."

"Liar! Liar! Your tongue is on fire," Moksh sang, "Pata hai Agni aunty main bahut accha detective hoon. Jhat se pata laga leta hoon kaun sach bol raha hai aur kaun jhooth."

"Accha?" Agni said.

"Baba bhi har roz kehte hain ki unki aankhon me kucch chala gaya," Moksh said wistfully, "Magar jab aas paas aaji, aajoba ya Ahir kaka nahi hote na, to vo bhi almirah se ek neeli saari nikaalkar rote hain."

Neeli saari? Kalyani didn't wear saari so often and Agni couldn't remember a blue saari. Was that saari Sampada's? Agni remembered the last words Atharv had told her before he stabbed her. That Malhar knew everything and he was silent on their plan because he wanted to get back with Sampada. Even after hating Malhar intensely for these five years, Agni never believed it. Even in the fiery sea of hate, Agni never doubted Malhar's fidelity the way he had doubted Kalyani despite being her husband.

"Neeli sari? Kiski?" Agni never meant to ask this but it escaped from her lips.

"Vahi sari jo Baba Aai ke liye laaye the," Moksh whispered, "Jis din vo hame chhorr ke gande uncle ke saath bhaag gayi thi."

"Moksh!" Anupriya said sharply.

Moksh had started crying now, "Asawari Aaji kehti hain ki main bad boy hoon isliye meri maa mujhe paida karte hi chhorr gayi aur meri Aai bhi mujhe chhor gayi. Aur Anupriya aaji, aapke saath vo jo bad Aau Saheb rehti hai na, vo kehti hai ki Baba to mujhe paida hote hi orphanage chhorrna chahte the. Magar logon ke dar ke kaaran aisa nahi kar paye. Aau Saheb kehti hain ki Baba bas ek mauke ki talash me hain ki jab main gehri neend me hounga to mujhe apni jeep me jungle chhorr ayenge. Pata hai Agni aunty. Isi vajah se main theek se sota tak nahi hoon ki Baba kahin mujhe jungle me naa chhorr ayen."

"Nahin Moksh," Agni hugged Moksh, "Tere Baba tujhe sapne me bhi khud se door karne ki nahi soch sakte. Duniya me sabse zyada pyaar vo tujhse karte hain Pillu. Vo khud kitni bhi museebat seh lenge magar tujh par ek aanch bhi nahi aane denge."

"Promise?" Moksh said his eyes full of tears.

"Pakka promise," Agni said wiping Moksh's tears from his face, "Ab bilkul rona nahi...samjhe. Is duniya me rehne ka hai to rone ka nahi rulane ka..." Saying that Agni tickled Moksh and Moksh doubled down laughing.

"Agni aunty!"

"Hmm..."

"Ek baat poonchoon?"

"Poocho? Jitni Marzi aaye utni baatein poocho..."

"Ye Pillu kaun hai? Aur aap mujhe Pillu kyon bulati ho?"

"Pillu...mera matlab Moksh, tumne vo spies movie dekhi hain jinme Hero ko sab secret code se bulaate hain like Alpha one."

"Haan...haan...jinme Hero villains ki khoob pitaai karta hai..."

"To tum bhi kisi hero se kam ho kya? Isliye Main tumhe secret code se bulaati hoon- Pillu," Kalyani said, whispering, "Jisse koi mere undercover supercop ki identity na Jaan paaye. Aur ek baat ye secret code kisi se kehna mat."

"Baba se bhi nahi?"

"Nahi Baba se bhi nahi. Ye Pillu aur uski a...mera matlab hamare beech ka secret hai...Apna promise mujhe do?"

"Promise..."

That day after returning from Picnic with Agni and Anupriya, Moksh decided that he wanted Agni as his mother. His Baba never laughed or smiled. Agni was so strong. She orders once and everyone starts doing what she said. Moksh will ask her to order his Baba to always smile and laugh and never cry again. His Baba was stubborn but Agni was even more stubborn. At the same time Moksh stopped himself. Wasn't he betraying his Aai when he dreamed of Agni being his mother? Moksh knew whatever everyone said, his Aai would've never left him. Wouldn't she be feeling sad in heaven seeing that Moksh replaced her with someone.


Inside A Enterprises


Agni was walking towards her cabin when she saw a cubicle lit.

"Mr. Rane!"

Malhar raised his head from his work at laptop and said, "Yes ma'am."

"Aap itne late kyon ruke huye hain? Aapka ek beta tha na, vo Ghar par akela nahi hoga?"

"Madam akela kahaan. Vahaan mere Baba, aai hain to."

"Hmm," Kalyani said non-chalantly, "Haan aapke loving parents to uska acche se khayal rakhte hi honge? Dada dadi ke pyaar ke beech kahaan use aapki yaad aati hogi?"

Malhar remembered Asawari who always looked at Moksh with disgust. Madhav though had a soft spot for Moksh being of his bloodline, but to expect him at this age to handle a curious child like Moksh between his music practice would be too much.

"Ji Madam," Malhar said and picked up his bag and went down the escalator. Suddenly a loud thunder of clouds peeled the evening. Out of nowhere, it started raining heavily.


Malhar went out with his office bag over his head but even after waiting for an hour he got no auto rickshaw to get home and due to drainage overflow, he could not use his motorcycle.


Disappointed he returned to office.


"Agar ghar jaa hi nahi paa raha hoon, to isse better kaam hi nibta loon," thinking that he went back to his cubicle and started working. He could see Agni inside her cabin from where he was sitting. She was too absorbed in work. Malhar admired her work ethic. She was so driven and career-oriented. There was a gravitas when she moved, spoke or even when she was silent. And she was so beautiful...just like his Kalyani. Though she hadn't a bit of Kalyani's innocence and bubbly nature, still Malhar...stop it Malhar. Don't go towards that path.

Agni was deep in her work when she smiled to herself as if she remembered something. That smile! It was Kalyani's smile that Agni was wearing. No one could smile like that except Kalyani...No she was not Kalyani. She was not. She couldn't be...


Suddenly Agni stood up to fetch a file but fainted on the floor.


Malhar ran towards her. After lifting her up in his arms, he made her lie on the sofa at lounge. Agni was half-conscious...


Malhar opened the Video conference with a doctor who he looked up on Internet.


"Mr. Rane, relax," The doctor said, "It's just due to burnout. Overworking and health par dhyaan na dene se ye issues hote hain. Agni ji din raat kaam karti hain. No human can survive with only three hours sleep. Just relax and jaisa main kehti hoon vaisa karte jaiye."


The doctor instructed Malhar to prepare tea for Agni as the sugar levels have dropped too low in her body. Malhar looked at the green tea packets and remembered that tea incident when Agni threw hot tea over him but seeing Agni so vulnerable, he told himself, "Bhaad me jaaye meri punishment." And prepared masala chai for Agni. Malhar was surprised at his own language. He never spoke like that.


When Malhar brought a cup of tea for Agni, he saw Agni's arms closely peeking from her sleeves. There were scars on them. Malhar wondered how were there so many scars on her arms, near her neck? What had happened with her? As a cop, Malhar knew these were not accidental injuries. Someone had brutalized Agni. And after realising it, he couldn't help feeling an unexplained rage. It felt like someone had hurt a person very dear to him. As if someone had hurt the person he loved. Malhar told himself to get a grip. But even Agni was no one to him, still it made her angry how can one brutalize a woman like that? What kind of beast would do that? Was that why Agni was the way she was?


Malhar didn't realize when his hand had begun caressing Agni's scars.


"Mr. Rane!" Malhar got out of his thoughts at Agni's voice, "Don't you dare touch me."


"S...sorry ma'am," Malhar said, "Ma'am ye chot aapko kaise????"


"Ye aap pooch rahe hain Mr. Rane?" Malhar couldn't understand the accusation in Agni's voice, "Aap jaise mardon ka to kaam hi hota hai aurton ko chot dena...kabhi sharir par to kabhi dil par."


"Ma'am?" Malhar said.


"Anyways, thanks for your help," Agni said, getting up with difficulty, and signing a cheque, "Ye lijiye."


Malhar felt insulted. "I can't take this ma'am."


"What you can and can't do, leave that for me to decide," Agni smirked, "Mujhe apne oopar koi karz rakhna pasand nahi h chahe accha ho ya bura."


Malhar scolded himself in mind, "Tune soch bhi kaise liya ye teri Kalyani hai Malhar? Insaaniyat ko paise se tolne vaali Agni hogi duniya ki fourth richest businesswoman, magar iske Dil ki daulat Kalyaani ke saamne ek percent bhi nahi h. Sirf chehra ek hone se kucch nahi hota."


Tabhi Malhar's phone rang.


"Baba Agni aunty thik h na?" Malhar couldn't understand why Moksh was so worried when he told him his boss was having health issues.


"Haan, ab theek hain vo. Sorry beta Aaj main tumhare saath dinner nahi kar saka."


"Baba don't worry. Is duniya me rone ka nahi, rulaane ka," Moksh said.


Malhar was shocked beyond words. It was the same takiya kalaam Kalyani used to say. His voice was trembling when he asked, "M...Moksh k...ki...kisne sikhaya tujhe ye bolna?"


"Agni aunty," Moksh said, leaving Malhar stunned.


https://youtu.be/v5rlq7anee8

Edited by Autumn09 - 3 years ago
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Posted: 3 years ago

Ohhhh praghu baby loved you for this update ...🤗🤗such a excellent update baby ,😍😍

Agni feeling pain seeing moksh bonded with Anupriya well but not with her aww that motherly pain😭

But glad to see their bond they are comforting with each other slowly and this aswari such a horrible lady 😡😡how sharply she filled moksh little with this much negativity poor child how scared he is 😭

Glad kalyani teaches him some life important facts 👍🏼

Office scene agni kein taunts ohh how much I liked this 😆

Malhar ki care awwww my baby but aaj mujhein mallu pein bada pyaar aaya jo kalyani kein liye saree bhi laya tha

Usne agni kein liye chai bhi banayi he is such a cutie in this update , his anger seeing her burn marks and injuries hope he gets to know soon about what horrible things happen with her and how he lost his child even in that 😭😭

Chalo abb moksh ko takiya kalam hamarein agni aur Malhar ko milane jaa raha hai ...😳

Ohh pragyu ek request thi pls make Malhar sassy after this ..in dono ki tashan dekhne main mazza aata hai 😳

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: Phlo004

Ohhhh praghu baby loved you for this update ...🤗🤗such a excellent update baby ,😍😍

Agni feeling pain seeing moksh bonded with Anupriya well but not with her aww that motherly pain😭

But glad to see their bond they are comforting with each other slowly and this aswari such a horrible lady 😡😡how sharply she filled moksh little with this much negativity poor child how scared he is 😭

Glad kalyani teaches him some life important facts 👍🏼

Office scene agni kein taunts ohh how much I liked this 😆

Malhar ki care awwww my baby but aaj mujhein mallu pein bada pyaar aaya jo kalyani kein liye saree bhi laya tha

Usne agni kein liye chai bhi banayi he is such a cutie in this update , his anger seeing her burn marks and injuries hope he gets to know soon about what horrible things happen with her and how he lost his child even in that 😭😭

Chalo abb moksh ko takiya kalam hamarein agni aur Malhar ko milane jaa raha hai ...😳

Ohh pragyu ek request thi pls make Malhar sassy after this ..in dono ki tashan dekhne main mazza aata hai 😳


Thank you Vanshu 💖💖💖💖💖 Sab tere idea ka kamaal h. Agle episode se pakka Malhar ke trademark one liners. Btw, I'm thinking dheere dheere Malhar starts feeling something fishy then to make Agni admit she's Kalyani, to uske vahi mast dialogues fir dono ke beech full tashan. Bata kaisa rahega? Agni to make Malhar realize his mistakes and Malhar to make Agni realize how much he loves her.

Edited by Autumn09 - 3 years ago
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Posted: 3 years ago

And one more thing that song in last I really like this ...mujhein ye movie bohot pasand hai talaash in this till the end of movie I cannot expect end of it ....the couple also lost their son and that supernatural powers in reality this movie is a masterpiece😳

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: Phlo004

And one more thing that song in last I really like this ...mujhein ye movie bohot pasand hai talaash in this till the end of movie I cannot expect end of it ....the couple also lost their son and that supernatural powers in reality this movie is a masterpiece😳


Kareena's character in it was 🤩🤩🤩🤩

Par na mujhe end tak samajh nahi aaya ki vo badla kis baat ka le rahi thi. I mean it was just an accident na and vo log dar gaye the that's why they couldn't take her to hospital. I mean murder kiya hota to samajh aata

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Posted: 3 years ago

It's fantastic pragya..... Loved it baby!!! You are rocking it as always kudiye......


Moksh Or agni ki bonding kitni achi dikhayi hai tune..... ❤❤❤

Agni stopping herself to be kalyani in front of moksh🙁🙁🙁🙁

Achi tip di hai agni ne pillu ko..... RONE KE NAHI RULANE KA🥰🥰☺☺.... This has its own words

Malhar can't help to stop assuming that she is his kalyani❤❤❤.... Par situation use esa krne nhi de rhi....

Malhar ki care for her..... But she rudely behaved with him..... Or uski prediction ko or bhi strong kr diya agni ne....

Anyways.... Thanks for this one babes.... And tere or vanshu ke suggestion ache hai.... Dono ka rashan.. Maza aayega dekhne m ❤❤❤

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Originally posted by: PRAKRITI_12

It's fantastic pragya..... Loved it baby!!! You are rocking it as always kudiye......


Moksh Or agni ki bonding kitni achi dikhayi hai tune..... ❤❤❤

Agni stopping herself to be kalyani in front of moksh🙁🙁🙁🙁

Achi tip di hai agni ne pillu ko..... RONE KE NAHI RULANE KA🥰🥰☺☺.... This has its own words

Malhar can't help to stop assuming that she is his kalyani❤❤❤.... Par situation use esa krne nhi de rhi....

Malhar ki care for her..... But she rudely behaved with him..... Or uski prediction ko or bhi strong kr diya agni ne....

Anyways.... Thanks for this one babes.... And tere or vanshu ke suggestion ache hai.... Dono ka rashan.. Maza aayega dekhne m ❤❤❤


Thank you so much Praku 💜💖💖💖

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Posted: 3 years ago

It was awesome Pragya..

Moksh and Anu's Bonding...

Aasawari and Aao Saheb are fit to be thrown under a train for talking nonsense to a child.

Agni and Pillu's conversation... "Rone ka nahi Rulane ka..." was just 👌👌👌👌

Aur Moksh ne bataya neeli saadi ke baare me.. And about his dad's tears..

Ohh.. The office scene..

Agni faint ho gayi due to lack of proper slerp and Malhar was there to help her..

He was shocked to see her scars... When he knows the truth, he might not be able to handle it...

But she gave him a check for his services to show him his place.. 😢😢

Him remembering Kalyani 😭

Aur phir Moksh repeated the dialogue to Malhar over the phone which was Kalyani’s trademark...

Ab Malhar babu thoda investigate karenge toh acha hoga..

Would be nice to read..

Malhar realising what his moments of doubt did to Kalyani

And Agni realising Malhar's love for Kalyani...

Revenge donon milke len baaki paapiyon se..


Thanks for the update

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