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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: Phlo004

Wahhh ji waah kya updates thi pragyu maazza aagya sorry bohot din sein jyaada online nahi aaparahi hoon actually meri timing bohot odd ho gayi hai kaam ki wajah sein jiss time main aati hoon uss time tum mein sein koi bhi nahi hota yaahan isliye phir main message drop karkein chali jaati hoo hope ye kaam jaldi khatam hoon aur main aapaon vapas apne schedule pein 😒😒...

Aur ji aur kya baat hai malharji vaise kitna bhi chidein rahien kalyani sein in past ..but now he started to feel a attachment with her awww 🤗..how a sad feeling that Malhar could not even hold his son properly in his arms for few minutes ..he cannot even express his fatherly emotions properly due to his duty commitments ..😭😭...bechara kitna dhuki tha he even ask only one thing from God that pls give him this chance again to spend some beautiful moments with his son and his kalyani again and he can live a proper life maybe in next birth..aur ye wish uski abb present main pakka poori hogi haina pragyu..isaki ending achi milegi naa humein...acha ji Malhar ne kalyani ko thank you bolne kein liye ussein itni pyaari jaagah bulaya hmm ...kuch garbad hai matlab Malhar kalyani ko uthakein le gaya just to fullfill his duty commitments 🥺🥺🥺 ..ohh poor girl thinks that he loves him that's why he planned a special surprise for her aww that forhead kiss 😘😘 ....

To kalyani ji ko pata chal gaya ki Malhar ek police officer hai and she even slapped him for that ...I just hate that one thing in whole chapter ...😡😡how dare she to slap a officer like in front of all his colleagues..loved to see how Malhar give her a piece of mind which she needed for sure from a long time...matlab she can trust atharv after what he had done to her and her son but she feels betrayed that Malhar lied to her ...hmm usne to phirbhi sabki bhalai kein liye jhooth bola lekin usmein ladlein Atharva nein to ussein har time jhooth bola and in present also he only insults her after that also she loved him and didn't filed any complaint against him is not love ..it's pure stupidity ohh god I just feel like banging her head in some wall so she can use her some brain to understand to whom she can trust and to whom she cannot ...bechara moksh kaise maa baap milein hai ussien ek nein paida hone ka intezar bhi nahi kiya uska aur chod diya aur doosrein ne paida hote hi ussein apne sein door bhej diya ...😡

Good that Malhar is not doing any lenanacy with her ..and he asked her something in return but she thinks him like her husband and offered her some money is she really lost her mind in that atharv love so much that now she is not even using her little brain 🧠🧠🧠...santre wali toffee aww mera shera baadda acha laga 🤣🤣...chalo finally for moksh only she decided to help him acha hai atleast uskien liye hi sahi kam sein kam kuch help to karegi malhar ki varna sirf uski problems badhati baithkein aur kuch nahi ..🤪🤪

Ohh I think Malhar ko iss pagaal kalyani ko arrest kar lena chahiye tha acha rehta issien arrest karta to ..

Saari update bohot achi thi pragyu aur mera favourite character sirf Malhar hai present main bhi aur past main bhi in both eras only he is using his brains properly aaur kisski to baat bhi nahi karni mujehin


Thanks a lot Vanshu. Chal tere workload light hone ka wait karenge ham sab. Maine ek aur FF bhi start kiya hai batana kaisa laga?

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: GAYATHRINAYAR

Great now malhar has kept a deal

And I am sure ye mutual cooperation ke chalthe chalthe vo logon ka jodi bhi ban jaayengi and athu ka band bhi bajenge

Waiting to see the two in action

And mera pillu he will also help his aayi baba na pragyu


Chinta mat karo Gayu. They'll come closer very soon :)

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Posted: 3 years ago

"Wh...what are you doing?" Kalyani still thought it was a nightmare, "You are joking, right? And where did you find this dagger? You must've definitely got it from Pitaji's things. Come on, give it to me. This is not a kid's toy. Give it to me, na. You know how much I'm afraid of swords and blood."

Malhar just kept quiet. Better to keep his mouth shut, and get over with it. Anyway, he only had to listen to Kalyani's blabbering till Maanchand agrees to give up the map of royal palace. Maanchand must've already noticed Kalyani's absence, and must have made his servants search for her. He wished Maanchand didn't overlook the letter he left in Kalyani's room. A father's love for his daughter was what he was counting on to reach their goal. Maanchand would give the map, thinking this Malhar tried to lift his mood, however shrewd and opportunistic Maanchand may be, at least he'll do this much for his daughter. Apne desh ka sagaa to kabhi hua nahi Maanchand, Malhar was praying that ki at least paise ke laalach ne uske andar ke pita ko bhi na maar dala ho.

Kalyani bit Malhar's hand with all her might and kicking with her knee at the bottom of his chin, she snatched the dagger from him. And then she slashed his throat with it. A little blood dripped out of Malhar's lip due to Kalyani kicking on his chin but surprisingly, no blood oozed outvof his throat..

"Khilona hi thi ye kataar," Malhar said with a smirk, "If it were real, do you think I would've let you snatch it so easily."

Then producing the real dagger from his knee, Malhar traced Kalyani's lips with his dagger and just where blood was dripping on his face, he cut Kalyani's skin there just a bit and said darkly, "And from now on, each drop of blood I'll lose because of you, I'll make sure you experience twice the pain due to it."

"W...why are you doing it?" Kalyani was really afraid now, and taking out all her jewels she said, "Take these. And I'll ask Pitaji to give you more. You're doing all this for money, right? I'll give you that much money you and your gang couldn't even dream of."

Malhar took all her jewels and after inspecting them for a while, he threw them all into the river.

"Are you mad?" Kalyani shouted.

"Yes, everyone like me will be mad in you and your father's eyes who think everything can be bought and sold, be it someone's honesty, life, honour and even their own country. How could you think I could even want the jewels your father bought for you from the money he got by acting a slave to that Darius."

"Pitaji earns his living due to his hard work and talent," Kalyani growled, "He's not a criminal like you who use a girl to just make money and rob people."

"When did I use you?" Malhar was incredulous, "Before today, I haven't even touched you. And even today, I kissed you on the forehead because I got carried away after seeing you caring for Moksh."

"Don't take the name of Moksh from your dirty tongue, Malhar," Kalyani warned, "Oh! Now I understand why you hate children. Because God will never give an animal like you the joy of being a parent. You don't even have a heart, and I'm sure you must have killed your own child when he was born because a monster like you can't bear the innocence of a child."

Malhar lifted Kalyani and pushed her into the raging river. Kalyani was just about to go into the bottom of the river but Malhar held her hand.

"Pull me up," Kalyani said with her teeth chattering, "The water is too cold."

"Just give the water one of your sermons about honesty, hardwork and parenthood," Malhar said drawling, "I'm sure it's temperature will also rise on hearing how great you and your father was."

Kalyani kept on holding Malhar's hands for some minutes and then looking around her, when she found there was only expanse of water, she said, "Pull me up, please! I'll freeze to death. I promise I'll keep quiet till we reach the shore."

Malhar pulled her up. Kalyani was shivering with cold. So Malhar took a blanket hidden inside the boat and wrapped it over Kalyani. He also lighted up some diyas in the boat to warm up.

"Thank you," Kalyani unwillingly said.

"One can mistake you for a sensible girl at times like this when you are not acting like an obnoxious, self-righteous brat who is not willing to listen to others."

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Posted: 3 years ago

Read both the updates pragya. These are really practical like how one reacts when they got to know that the person they thought to be is not them.

Kalyani slapped malhar across his face right in front of his subordinates without caring him to be an ACP. malhar ne accha bola, personal matter hai.

Malhar monologue is too good, good kalyani agreed to the deal, I hope they get closer now.

In past timeline, kalyani's innocence and her brave move both are good. Malhar pushed her into water, don't know what happens next.

Waiting for your update.

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: sathwi_99

Read both the updates pragya. These are really practical like how one reacts when they got to know that the person they thought to be is not them.

Kalyani slapped malhar across his face right in front of his subordinates without caring him to be an ACP. malhar ne accha bola, personal matter hai.

Malhar monologue is too good, good kalyani agreed to the deal, I hope they get closer now.

In past timeline, kalyani's innocence and her brave move both are good. Malhar pushed her into water, don't know what happens next.

Waiting for your update.


Thank you Swathi 💞💞💞

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Posted: 3 years ago

It's good update pragyu here Malhar is just perfoming his duty but in this he have to hurt kalyani so his father can agreed to his condition atul is a greedy man who betrayed his country ..I doubt will he betrayed his daughter too...poor kalyani she loved her father alot ..and cannot able to see his true colours ...😭here I don't know whom to support or not ..both are right on their places and have their own good reason for it ..👍🏼

But I feel sad how she misunderstood him and say bad things to him...I feel really sad on that 😞😞 bechara he is so much suffering in his life and after listening these bitter types of taunts ..it's gets unbearable sometimes and he said till now he never take her advantage ..how can she say he used her for his own benefits. ..😐😐

Waiting for next pragyu darling ..🤗

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: Phlo004

It's good update pragyu here Malhar is just perfoming his duty but in this he have to hurt kalyani so his father can agreed to his condition atul is a greedy man who betrayed his country ..I doubt will he betrayed his daughter too...poor kalyani she loved her father alot ..and cannot able to see his true colours ...😭here I don't know whom to support or not ..both are right on their places and have their own good reason for it ..👍🏼

But I feel sad how she misunderstood him and say bad things to him...I feel really sad on that 😞😞 bechara he is so much suffering in his life and after listening these bitter types of taunts ..it's gets unbearable sometimes and he said till now he never take her advantage ..how can she say he used her for his own benefits. ..😐😐

Waiting for next pragyu darling ..🤗


Thank you Vanshu💜💜💜💜

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Posted: 3 years ago

Omg.......this chapted has many shades.....


Abhi bhi kallu ke saamne pura sach nhi aaya😦😦😦

Kallu mallu ka confrontation 👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻

Kallu tried to harm him ad in return malhar did the same with her😅😅😅😅

He still saved kalyani from drowning ❤️❤️❤️❤️

Kalyani will help him to reach his mission 👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻

But this scene....where she misunderstands him is kind of emotional🙃🙃......this wasnot the intention of him but her reaction is justified the way malhar presented himself in front of her..... So no one is at fault acc. To me

Continue soon baby..... Will be waiting ❤️

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: PRAKRITI_12

Omg.......this chapted has many shades.....


Abhi bhi kallu ke saamne pura sach nhi aaya😦😦😦

Kallu mallu ka confrontation 👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻

Kallu tried to harm him ad in return malhar did the same with her😅😅😅😅

He still saved kalyani from drowning ❤️❤️❤️❤️

Kalyani will help him to reach his mission 👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻

But this scene....where she misunderstands him is kind of emotional🙃🙃......this wasnot the intention of him but her reaction is justified the way malhar presented himself in front of her..... So no one is at fault acc. To me

Continue soon baby..... Will be waiting ❤️


Thank you so much Praku 💜💜💜💜

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Posted: 3 years ago

Finally they reached the shore where other soldiers in exile were waiting. Malhar gave Kalyani some wild fruit to eat but Kalyani shook her head.

"Eat it," Malhar said sternly, "I don't want you to die of hunger before your father comes with the map."

Unwillingly Kalyani ate the fruit. They were sitting without saying anything.

Suddenly they heard voices coming towards them.

"My father has come," Kalyani said triumphantly, "Now each of you will die. Just begin counting your breaths."

It was Darius' soldiers disguised as villagers who attacked Malhar and the fleet. Most of the soldiers came from Darius' land but a few of them belonged to Sindhu Pradesh who had forsaken their truthful king to get favours from Darius. One of such commanders was Atharv. He was chopping bodies of Malhar's soldiers like one chops vegetables.

Malhar engaged him in a duel and gradually Atharv's strength was waning. Just when Atharv's sword was going to drop from his hand, a sword pierced Malhar's heart from behind. Malhar turned behind. Kalyani was standing there with a sword drenched in his blood.

"You? But why?" He could only say.

Just then Atharv turned him facing him and pushed his sword through Malhar's belly.

"Now you should thank me," Atharv whispered, "I'm going to send your son Moksh to you soon. See, I'm such a good person with a soft heart."

Kalyani's sword dropped hearing this.

"Moksh is your son?" She asked but by then Malhar had already breathed his last.

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