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Posted: 3 years ago
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The full moon looked like a lamp caught in the mouth of a dark horse. The scent of imminent rain was strong in the breeze. A girl was gazing towards the horizon, deep in thought, humming a folk song in Raga Megh Malhar. Dark clouds were thundering like elephants charging in the battleground.


Professor Kalyani Rane sighed after a long day of work. She was still not sure if she had done the right thing by allowing Nikita to write her thesis on a folklore. Nikita has done Masters in Social History and was writing a thesis on the impact of folklore in shaping modern civilization. Most professors, Kalyani knew, scoffed at the idea of researching folklore as a history student as they believed folklore is nothing but fiction. But Kalyani understood the importance of forgotten stories. Nikita was a good student but Kalyani felt she was going overboard with the descriptions. Nikita was a history student for heaven's sake, not an English language graduate.


Kalyani looked at her watch. It was 7 pm. If her mother was there, she'd have given her an earful for being the last person leaving the university campus. But that disgusting cancer! It snatched everything from Kalyani.


It was pitch dark outside and inky clouds were rumbling like a fallen warrior. Outside the campus, there was a line of people waiting for an entry at the most posh nightclub of New Delhi. Kalyani never understood what was the point of building a nightclub just outside the university campus.


"Are these spoilt rich brats rain-resistant?" Kalyani muttered annoyingly.


"Behenji, do you need a lift?" A gang of boys catcalled.


Kalyani made her steps quicker.


"Don't call her behen, guys!" Another guy sneered.


Kalyani's breath stuck in her throat when she saw their bikes coming towards her. She clutched her bag tightly.


Suddenly a red open-roofed car stopped with a screech between the bikes and Kalyani.


The car windows rolled down and a man looked at Kalyani above the dark glasses he wore even though it was evening, "Oh! There you are, sweetheart!"


"What the hell are you saying?" Kalyani was incredulous, trying to remember whose face she had first seen in the morning to have such a bad day.


"I know you're angry from me, babes, when I came here instead of spending time with you, but I know you too want to get out of here as early as possible," the man threw a meaningful glance at the boys on bike.


Kalyani then understood what he meant, and got into the car.


"What are you doing here this late?" The man asked adjusting the rear mirror in which Kalyani's reflection was sulking. He was wearing a dark blue jacket and black jeans, "You don't seem the likes who visit nightclub. By the way, I am Malhar Malhotra, by the way." He said stretching his right hand backward.


"Just drop me at the nearest bus stop," Kalyani grumbled, "I have no interest in who you are and what's your name. You must be a spoilt, good for nothing brat who waste their parents' money on pubs and parties."


Malhar chuckled, "You should absolutely be interested in who I am. All the girls are. Hey, there's a water bottle in your seat. Drink some water and calm down."


Kalyani gulped half of the bottle in one go.


After wiping her face, she said, "Stop the car. I'll get down here " There was bus stop there and Kalyani went towards it.


"At least, you should say thank you," Malhar called out to her. He took the bottle from the backseat with the help of a handkerchief.


"Bad manners, Ms. Kalyani Deshmukh," he whispered and dialled a phone no.


"ACP Malhar Rane here," He said on the phone, "I got her fingerprints."


So I'm writing after a long long time and I'm not sure if this is any good. So please give me your honest feedback and please tell me whether I should continue or not.

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Pragyaaa i really missed your stories.

They carry the complete different essence, I truly love how you describe the things. It's beautiful.

Plss do continue this.

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: sathwi_99

Pragyaaa i really missed your stories.

They carry the complete different essence, I truly love how you describe the things. It's beautiful.

Plss do continue this.


Thank you so much Swathi. I too missed the forum and you all. But all this moving out to a new city was too stressful. That's why I couldn't visit.

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Hey Pragya


Good to see you back with your stories…👍🏼


You know how much I love them..as they always take us to another world of kalma…


Loved it..


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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: Priyapriyu

Hey Pragya


Good to see you back with your stories…👍🏼


You know how much I love them..as they always take us to another world of kalma…


Loved it..



Thank you so much Priyu ❤️😊❤️

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Plz continue and update soon awesome story

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Yeeeee Meri pragyu nein new story update ki yeee 🥳🥳🥳vo bhi kitni awesome mazza aagaya yeeeee leeeei bohot saarein hugs tere liyein ...🤗🤗🤗aur sweet bhi hai 🍩🍪🍭🍭🍬🍪🍩🍨🍦🍯🍨🍩🍬🍭aaram sein khaana 😋😋😋😋


And coming to update behen Kahan sein laati hai tu itne achein ideas Matlab Kahan sein Kya baat reee kya baat 😳😳😳...kalyani is a professor here ohho professor sahiba kaafi gussein wali mizaaz ki lagtati hai history main interest hai parbacchi pein bharosha nahi 😆😆..

Aagayi typical bhartiya mahila vahin night club sein dushmani aur iss baar to ye college kein saamne hai wahhh 🤣🤣..ye ladkein chatni banni chahiye thi inki ..kaise ladkiyon ko praeshan karte phirte hai ye log..😡😡 malhar Malhotra..flirty laga banda jaan naa pehchan lekin kalyani ko babes aur naa jaanein Kya Kya keh daala pehli hi mulaqat main..Teri story padhkein main khudko rok nahi paayi aur Meri imagination itni wild ho gayi ki mujehin laga ye issein yahin kiss bhi Kar dega ohh God my dirty mind 🙈🙈🙈☺️☺️..I have to stop there only

Ohh bandein ne kalyani kein fingerprints churanein kein liye bottle di seems suspicious 🧐🧐🧐🤔🤔🤨🤨 aur uska naam pehle sein jaanta hoo ohhho par jiss tarah see usne Kahan naa ...

Ek thanks Bhi nahi bola so bad ..Ms. kalyani deshmukh .."

Haayein main bandein pein flat ho gayi bandein main charm nazar aaraha hai 😳..dekhte hai Kya hota hai

Guess karoon mujhein lagata hai ki prints lene kien liye hi malhar ne gundei. Bheje the if I am right. . 🤔🤔


Waiting for more baby 🤗

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Originally posted by: Phlo

Yeeeee Meri pragyu nein new story update ki yeee 🥳🥳🥳vo bhi kitni awesome mazza aagaya yeeeee leeeei bohot saarein hugs tere liyein ...🤗🤗🤗aur sweet bhi hai 🍩🍪🍭🍭🍬🍪🍩🍨🍦🍯🍨🍩🍬🍭aaram sein khaana 😋😋😋😋


And coming to update behen Kahan sein laati hai tu itne achein ideas Matlab Kahan sein Kya baat reee kya baat 😳😳😳...kalyani is a professor here ohho professor sahiba kaafi gussein wali mizaaz ki lagtati hai history main interest hai parbacchi pein bharosha nahi 😆😆..

Aagayi typical bhartiya mahila vahin night club sein dushmani aur iss baar to ye college kein saamne hai wahhh 🤣🤣..ye ladkein chatni banni chahiye thi inki ..kaise ladkiyon ko praeshan karte phirte hai ye log..😡😡 malhar Malhotra..flirty laga banda jaan naa pehchan lekin kalyani ko babes aur naa jaanein Kya Kya keh daala pehli hi mulaqat main..Teri story padhkein main khudko rok nahi paayi aur Meri imagination itni wild ho gayi ki mujehin laga ye issein yahin kiss bhi Kar dega ohh God my dirty mind 🙈🙈🙈☺️☺️..I have to stop there only

Ohh bandein ne kalyani kein fingerprints churanein kein liye bottle di seems suspicious 🧐🧐🧐🤔🤔🤨🤨 aur uska naam pehle sein jaanta hoo ohhho par jiss tarah see usne Kahan naa ...

Ek thanks Bhi nahi bola so bad ..Ms. kalyani deshmukh .."

Haayein main bandein pein flat ho gayi bandein main charm nazar aaraha hai 😳..dekhte hai Kya hota hai

Guess karoon mujhein lagata hai ki prints lene kien liye hi malhar ne gundei. Bheje the if I am right. . 🤔🤔


Waiting for more baby 🤗


Behen teri comments padhkar sach mein dil khush ho jata hai. Tere sweets sach mein bade sweet hain 💖💖💖💖💖Dual timeline story hai iss baar and THR ki trademark mystery and detectivegiri bhi.

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Too good pragguuuu❤️❤️❤️❤️

Missed your stories

Obviously u shoul continue....

Par ye last m kyu hua mujhe samjh nhi aya...🤔🤔🤔

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Posted: 3 years ago
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I loved it Pragya..

And I really missed your hatke wale stories..

We got to see KalMa is different shades and era through your stories. Its not everyone who can handle those themes.

Thank you for writing again.. ❤️❤️

Oh.. So Kalyani is a professor..

Malhar is a cop..

Another shade of Kalma..

Loved it..

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