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Posted: 3 years ago

Finally they reached the place where his soldiers were waiting...

Not wanting anything to happen to her, he offered her fruits..

And then the war raged...

Atharv the traitor chopped the righteous soldiers of the land..😡

Malhar fought him... Was having the upper hand until Kalyani pierced him with a sword from behind...🥺

Then another sword from Atharv pierced his stomach...

And Atharv even said he would send Moksh to be with him...

Kallu then knew Moksh is his son... But no use..

Malhar had breathed his last.😭😭

Kalyani ka muh jitna chalta hai dimaag utna hi kam chalta hai....


Why did she kill him..? Itni berehem thi..😡


Malhar and his patriotism to his motherland are the stars of this story in both the eras....other than that the innocent Moksh..


They are the characters who shine..


Ab kya present me Kallu apna galti dohrayegi... Atharv ki madad karegi Malhar ko maarne me? After all she blindly loves Atharv though he has wronged her and their child..

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: rekha_crm

Oh... Kalyani has been kidnapped..

But he still hoped that Kallu's father would come to save her instead of jyat being bothered about money..

But she tried to kick him and escape.. Even snatched the dagger, only that it turned out to be fake...

Then he brought the real one out..

Kalyani Jahan hoti hai Bhashan hi sunati hai..

Her rants about her self righteous father, Malhar being a criminal and not deserving to have a child..


Exactly, when did Malhar use her.. 🤦‍♀️ Kalyani and her sermons..


Offered him her jewels... Which he threw into the sea...

And irked by her talk, threw her also in...

But didn't let her go down..

Malhar's conscience doesn't allow him to punish an innocent.. However wrong her father may have been.


Kalyani doesn't want to think any other person can also be right. She thinks everyone is after her father's money. It's really difficult for he to understand she is not always in the right.

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: Autumn09


Kalyani doesn't want to think any other person can also be right. She thinks everyone is after her father's money. It's really difficult for he to understand she is not always in the right.


Hmmm... That's the flaw in her..

She can never understand that there can be another perspective to a situation..

That another person might think differently and they may be right too..

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Posted: 3 years ago

Finally the big day had come. All the big drug dealers of Asia had arrived in the club for the big deal. In spite of himself, Malhar was feeling nervous. The dealers had been in the illegal drug business since years and were involved in every heinous crime one could think of from murder to torture. Fooling them was not going to be easy. Maybe he shouldn't have involved Kalyani in all this. No, she was necessary for the plan to succeed.

"Malhar Rane," he said to his reflection in the mirror, "Today's your last day as Malhar Malhotra. Kal se saara drama khatam aur vaapis se teri seedhi saadi life shuru." Malhar exhaled.

Kalyani was also there wearing a shimmering black dress. Malhar was starstruck when he saw her. He got closer to Kalyani.

"What are you doing?" Kalyani said. She was trying hard to not blush, "I've already told you I'm not interested in your flirting."

Malhar reached for her neck and latched a diamond necklace around it. Kalyani wanted to get closer and embrace him but she was pretending to be stern. Malhar adjusted the necklace.

"I told you na," Kalyani said, "I want to get closer to you."

Malhar stopped and raised his eyebrow.

"I m...mean," Kalyani corrected herself, "I mean I wanted to say I don't want you to get closer to me. You are such an insufferable Casanova."

Malhar kept his fingers on Kalyani's lips, saying, "Shhh!!!!"

And then adjusting the necklace again, he leaned closer to Kalyani and whispered in her ears, "There's a hidden camera in your necklace. So when you meet Atharv, stand in a way that he is captured in it. Aur, itni bhi sundar nahi ho tum Kalyani ki din-raat main tumse flirt karne ke baare me hi sochta rahoon. Aur agar aaj tumhare dil me fir Atharv ke liye dabaa hua pyaar jaag gaya, to I swear tumhe to main 15 saal tak jail ki chakki piswaye bina jaane nahi doonga." Then Malhar gave Kalyani a big smile and left.

Kalyani couldn't say anything. She was visibly shook.

Soon Atharv also arrived in the club but Kalyani stopped his path.

"You?" Atharv was shocked, "Since when you started clubbing and all?"

"I've changed Atharv," Kalyani said confidentially, "I'm no more the old Kalyani. This new Kalyani wants to party hard, hook up with bad boys, and just want money." Kalyani traced his finger on Atharv's face.

"Kitni overacting kar rahi hai," Malhar muttered to himself, "Atharv ke itne paas jaane ki zaroorat kya hai? Door se bhi to keh sakti hai na vo ye sab."

"Kalyani, Kalyani!" Atharv came towards her, "Agar tumne apna ye andaaz mujhe pehle hi dikhaya hota to main tumhe chhorta hi kyon. Khair, what do you want now?"

Kalyani got closer to Atharv, and standing on her toes, whispered in his ears, "Ailmony of Rs. 20 crore. I know you deal in drugs and sell them at exorbitant prices to your masters. I just have to tell your masters about your double crossing..."

"And why would they believe that?" Atharv said, shook from the changed personality of Kalyani, clutching his mobile phone tightly, "I've been working with them since seven years."All the drug dealers' secrets I've stored in a secret place. I just have to anonymously tip the police."

"Why are you clutching your phone like a child?" Kalyani taunted, "Is your girlfriend going to call you?" Saying this, she put her high heels on Atharv's foot.


"Atharv cried in pain and his phone dropped from his hands. A policeman in plain clothes picked up the cellphone and placed a similar looking phone instead. Atharv could not see all this.

Just then Malhar came and said to Atharv, "Buddy! Just give me the stuff and I'll transfer you money."

Atharv went with him towards the car parking. Atharv stood their waiting for someone to fetch drugs from his car to Malhar's.

Malhar said, "Are we going to stand doing nothing all night?"

Atharv asked, "Where are your men to lift the stuff?"

Malhar said, waving his hand, "Nah! I don't trust anyone to bring along. Whatever lifting is there you've to do."

"Me?" There was too much stuff.

"You can't," Malhar said patting his shoulder, "Cool! I'll ask another dealer..."

"Wait! I'm doing it."

And Atharv was drenched in sweat due to lifting heavy boxes after an hour.

"I don't think this one is original stuff," Malhar said pointing towards a box.

"This is hundred percent original," Atharv said, indignantly, and showed a sample from each box to Malhar, vouching for its originality.

"Cool!" Malhar said, "So you've sold me all this original drugs."

"Yes," Atharv said proudly. Malhar took out his phone and after a minute said, "I've transferred the money to your account." As soon as he said, Atharv's mobile beeped. He looked at the phone. The SMS alert said that his a/c was credited with the promised amount. Atharv shook his hands with Malhar and they both left in different directions.


Atharv met the dealers in the club and said, "Deal done."


"Where's our money?" A scary-looking Mongolian drug lord asked.

"Wait a sec," Atharv said, "I'm transferring it."


"Done!" He said. The drug lords asked their Minions to check their respective accounts but they were told no money was credited.

"L...let me check," Atharv said. He remembered about a drug dealer who stole just five lakhs from a drugdealer and his armless, legless corpse was found in a ditch.


The transaction was displayed as failed due to insufficient balance.


"This can't be possible," Atharv checked his mobile balance. It was in negative figures.


"You tried to double cross us," the drug dealers were moving towards him in a circle.

"N...no," Atharv said, "I've been loyal to you."


Just then a video started displaying on a large screen with Atharv saying, "All the drug dealers' secrets I've stored in a secret place. I just have to anonymously tip the police."


All the drug dealers started looking at the video and Atharv had no other option than to dial 100 on his phone.


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Malhar was promoted to Joint Commissioner Narcotics after nabbing all the major big fish in Asian drug market. With Moksh in his one arm, and buying vegetables from his free hand, a girl came towards him and said, "Mr. Rane would you like to drink a cup of coffee with me?"

Malhar looked at the girl. She was wearing a short olive colour dress with curly hair.

"Are waah! Moksh ki aai!" Malhar said, "Aaj to mizaaj hi badle huye hain aapke. Check kar loon, Sooraj paschim se to nahi nikla na?"

"Ab aap apne purane dharre par aa gaye," Kalyani said, "To yeh flirting, charming hone ki zimmedari to mujhe hi sambhaalni hogi na."

"Coffee magar kahaan?" Malhar asked.

"Usi club ke baahar," Kalyani said.

"Vahaan to chai-coffee chhorkar sab milta hai," Malhar asked, "Chalo paas me chai ki ek gumti hai. Mast chai banate hain dada vahaan. Vahin chalte hain."

Then leaning against Malhar, Kalyani with him and Moksh went towards the tea shop.


So this was the end of FF. Please let me know of your feedback.

Edited by Autumn09 - 3 years ago
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Posted: 3 years ago

Wow beautiful story Malhar kalyani ka necklace ma hidden camera chupa raha hai or kalyani chati hai ki wo uska kareeb aye but no

Kalma na athrav ko mil ga bawakuf banaya

Last one was amazing

Plzz update another part soon

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: sehreemstory

Wow beautiful story Malhar kalyani ka necklace ma hidden camera chupa raha hai or kalyani chati hai ki wo uska kareeb aye but no

Kalma na athrav ko mil ga bawakuf banaya

Last one was amazing

Plzz update another part soon


Thanks a lot Arwa💖💖💖💖. This was the end of the FF

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Posted: 3 years ago

I loved this ff pragyaa.

Malhar and kalyani both fooled atharv, they made himself call the cops, it's too good.

Malhar fixing kalyani necklace, she wants to his proximity and it's affecting her too much.

The ending is absolutely superb, loved it.

Thank you for this ff.

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: sathwi_99

I loved this ff pragyaa.

Malhar and kalyani both fooled atharv, they made himself call the cops, it's too good.

Malhar fixing kalyani necklace, she wants to his proximity and it's affecting her too much.

The ending is absolutely superb, loved it.

Thank you for this ff.


Thanks a lot Swathi 💞💞💞💞💞

I'm really glad that you liked this FF

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Posted: 3 years ago

This was just freaking amazing.. 🤩🤩🤩🤩

Loved Malhar the cop... 👏👏

So Kalyani was affected by Malhar's closeness 😆 only was trying to mask her feelings 😆

And him putting the necklace on her was suck-in-the-breath moment for her.. 😁😁



Aur agar aaj tumhare dil me fir Atharv ke liye dabaa hua pyaar jaag gaya, to I swear tumhe to main 15 saal tak jail ki chakki piswaye bina jaane nahi doonga."


Yeh wala dialogue bohot pasand aaya mujhe.. 🤣


Finally Kalyani stood up to Atharv and helped ACP sahab to collect video evidence.. 👍🏼


Atharv jail me sadega...


Malhar is promoted.. 🥳


And Moksh ki Aai is trying to do the flirting because Malhar Rane has returned back to his normal demeanour from being the flirty Malhar Malhotra..😆


The ending was really good..


Malhar Rane the awesome cop.. ♥️♥️♥️

Atleast in the present, Kallu didn't betray him.. 👏

Moksh-Baba ko Baba aur Aai donon mil gaye..

Awesome Pragya..

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Posted: 3 years ago

Originally posted by: rekha_crm

This was just freaking amazing.. 🤩🤩🤩🤩

Loved Malhar the cop... 👏👏

So Kalyani was affected by Malhar's closeness 😆 only was trying to mask her feelings 😆

And him putting the necklace on her was suck-in-the-breath moment for her.. 😁😁



Aur agar aaj tumhare dil me fir Atharv ke liye dabaa hua pyaar jaag gaya, to I swear tumhe to main 15 saal tak jail ki chakki piswaye bina jaane nahi doonga."


Yeh wala dialogue bohot pasand aaya mujhe.. 🤣


Finally Kalyani stood up to Atharv and helped ACP sahab to collect video evidence.. 👍🏼


Atharv jail me sadega...


Malhar is promoted.. 🥳


And Moksh ki Aai is trying to do the flirting because Malhar Rane has returned back to his normal demeanour from being the flirty Malhar Malhotra..😆


The ending was really good..


Malhar Rane the awesome cop.. ♥️♥️♥️

Atleast in the present, Kallu didn't betray him.. 👏

Moksh-Baba ko Baba aur Aai donon mil gaye..

Awesome Pragya..

Thank you so much Rekha 💖💖💖💖

Picchle 3-4 days se mujhe lag raha ki I would not be able to wrap up this FF nicely kyonki ideas me continuity nahi ban rahi thi but I'm glad aapko ye pasand aaya

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