A knot in time - Page 10

Originally posted by: rekha_crm

Ok... Malhar wapas flirting and irritating Kallu..

He was called bhai sahab or master ji in college.. 🤣🤣

He saved Kallu on the road...

He definitely feels a lot for her..

Uh oh his subordinate almost gave him away and he had to make up stories to escape Kalyani's questioning..

So they are finding some clues about the drug mafia..

Pawar and Malhar convo.. 🤣🤣

Side business shuru kar lo tum aur Sharma apna: Shaadi.Com- Bharosa Dilli Police Ka. Agar apki shaadi kisi bhi vajah se tooti to doolhe ki taangein todne ki zimmedari hamari. Rakho phone aur baaki information collect karo," Malhar scolded Pawar.

This was absolutely what Malhar would say. It really made me remember all Malhar and Pawar scenes in PS.. 😆

Nice update.. 👍🏼

Will read the rest too soon..

Thanks a lot Rekha 💖💖💖💖

Pragya read both the updates.

Kalyani got to know about malhar in both the timelines, waiting for her reaction.

Malhaer's toh hero hai, choro ko acchi deal di hai, lekin kalyani ke saamne aagaya ki woh ACP hai.

Malhar can't see moksh crying. He loves his son so much. Lekin majboor hai woh, issliye usse dusre janam mein apna baccha mil gaya.

Kalyani bhi malhar se pyaar karti hai, lekin woh dar gayi malhar ko aise dekh ke.

Waiting for next update.

Loved this chapter... 💕

Kalyani's thoughts about Malhar and feeling that he is not a Casanova but pretending to be one..

The parallels of how in the past Malhar was the one who couldn't go to his child or live him though being so near..

How he knew Moksh was not hungry but feeling sleepy.. Moksh ka asli Baba.. 😭 it was emotional.. 😭

And now in the present its Kalyani who is at that point.. 😭Malhar understands her pain and gives her opportunities of being with her child.

And here Malhar has nicknamed Moksh as Baba.. 😆 mere baba ka baba..

And in came the robbers..

Unke wajah se Malhar the ACP had to unmask himself in front of Kalyani..

ACP Malhar Rane..

Awesome Pragya

Read the latest one too..

The past is painful for Malhar.. As he has to keep mum about Moksh being his child..

But he trusts Kalyani to care for Moksh better than and his parents..

In the past too he's a warrior sworn to his motherland..

In the present too he's a protector of law for his motherland..

In the past Kalyani has raabta with Moksh, in the present Malhar has raabta with Moksh..

These three are meant to be together..

Now Malhar is revealed to Kalyani on both past and present

These parallels were good to read.

Very well written Pragya..

Ye teenon hi mere favorites hai..

Along with Pawar

This is amazing again pragya...... Tremendous writing 👏👏👏👍🏻👍🏻

Keep it up baby...... Or stories tu likhegi or kisi ko pasand na aye ho hi nhi skta.....

Malhar showed some love to moksh😍😍😍🙃🙃❤️❤️

Kalmaksh ka happy family time😘😘😘😉😉😉

Robber girl or malhar ka action👍🏻👍🏻👍🏻👏👏❤️❤️

Finally kallu ko truth pta chal gya.....

Superb praggu... Don't have words....

Ye previous ke liye reply tha abhi new wala pdhne ja rhi hu😁😁

Wow pragu....read the new one tooo..... Kya hi tarref kru teri tu hi bta😘😘😘😘😘😘😘

Timelined stories....❤️❤️❤️❤️

Malhar trusting kalyani for his little one😍😍

Them are destined to be forever...... Pure raabta☺️☺️☺️💓💓💓

Malhar ka sach saamne aa gya kallu ke....past m bhi present m bhi.....🙃🙃

She confronted him for his behaviour for BABA

Sach m pragu..... This was really awesome.....

Each word has its own emotions.... I can literally imagine these scenes......

And if u are in mood to end this ff.... Which I don't want but it has to so

Promise me you'll come back with another amazing work

Originally posted by: sathwi_99

Pragya read both the updates.

Kalyani got to know about malhar in both the timelines, waiting for her reaction.

Malhaer's toh hero hai, choro ko acchi deal di hai, lekin kalyani ke saamne aagaya ki woh ACP hai.

Malhar can't see moksh crying. He loves his son so much. Lekin majboor hai woh, issliye usse dusre janam mein apna baccha mil gaya.

Kalyani bhi malhar se pyaar karti hai, lekin woh dar gayi malhar ko aise dekh ke.

Waiting for next update.

Thank you so much Swathi.

Originally posted by: rekha_crm

Loved this chapter... 💕

Kalyani's thoughts about Malhar and feeling that he is not a Casanova but pretending to be one..

The parallels of how in the past Malhar was the one who couldn't go to his child or live him though being so near..

How he knew Moksh was not hungry but feeling sleepy.. Moksh ka asli Baba.. 😭 it was emotional.. 😭

And now in the present its Kalyani who is at that point.. 😭Malhar understands her pain and gives her opportunities of being with her child.

And here Malhar has nicknamed Moksh as Baba.. 😆 mere baba ka baba..

And in came the robbers..

Unke wajah se Malhar the ACP had to unmask himself in front of Kalyani..

ACP Malhar Rane..

Awesome Pragya

Thank you so so much Rekha 💖💖💖💖

Originally posted by: rekha_crm

Read the latest one too..

The past is painful for Malhar.. As he has to keep mum about Moksh being his child..

But he trusts Kalyani to care for Moksh better than and his parents..

In the past too he's a warrior sworn to his motherland..

In the present too he's a protector of law for his motherland..

In the past Kalyani has raabta with Moksh, in the present Malhar has raabta with Moksh..

These three are meant to be together..

Now Malhar is revealed to Kalyani on both past and present

These parallels were good to read.

Very well written Pragya..

Ye teenon hi mere favorites hai..

Along with Pawar

Thanks a lot Rekha. Parallelism and role reversal are my favorite techniques in a story that's why I thought of applying them here.

Originally posted by: PRAKRITI_12

Wow pragu....read the new one tooo..... Kya hi tarref kru teri tu hi bta😘😘😘😘😘😘😘

Timelined stories....❤️❤️❤️❤️

Malhar trusting kalyani for his little one😍😍

Them are destined to be forever...... Pure raabta☺️☺️☺️💓💓💓

Malhar ka sach saamne aa gya kallu ke....past m bhi present m bhi.....🙃🙃

She confronted him for his behaviour for BABA

Sach m pragu..... This was really awesome.....

Each word has its own emotions.... I can literally imagine these scenes......

And if u are in mood to end this ff.... Which I don't want but it has to so

Promise me you'll come back with another amazing work

Sure Praku. As soon as an idea hits me, and I don't share it with this forum, it can never happen. Btw, today itself I started a new FF. Batana kaisa laga.