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Thank you gayu 😀😀
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Originally posted by: Phlo

thank you di🤗🤗

Glad you liked the promo 😍😍

Really it is a normal issue that after a time the couple forgot little things in their realtionship which lead sometime as a failure of it

Will try to update this soon


Take your time...

Hum kahan bhaage jaa rahe hain..

Ek baat bolna chahti hun.. Tumhare aane ke baad, the forum came alive again.. 😍😘😘😘🤗

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Take your time...

Hum kahan bhaage jaa rahe hain..

Ek baat bolna chahti hun.. Tumhare aane ke baad, the forum came alive again.. 😍😘😘😘🤗

aww thank you di 🤗

Maine yahan bhi yahan aakar itne saarien ache friends banaye

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I really liked the plot vanshu…




That’s the reality

Hamare shows me to strawberry duniya dikhate hai..

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Originally posted by: Priyapriyu

I really liked the plot vanshu…




That’s the reality

Hamare shows me to strawberry duniya dikhate hai..

😆😆




thank you priyu 😘😘

Writers are in their delusional world they are From the raabta planet simple insaan ki tarah soch hi nahi saktein

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Originally posted by: Phlo004

thank you priyu 😘😘

Writers are in their delusional world they are From the raabta planet simple insaan ki tarah soch hi nahi saktein

Exactly

Unki duniya k apne hi rules hai..

My raabta my rules

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introduction

Kalyani and malhar both had a arrange marriage with each other and kalyani was in her college at that time the pureness of each other made them fall in love and they both decided to get married malhar was A .C.P. at that time and as kalyani want to pursue her dream as d.m. they both wait for each other for 1year till her college gets complete the time and longing at that time take a new direction in their realtionship and they both gets more comfortable with each other sarthak and anupriya are malhar parents aappa and aausaheb are his grandparents as sarthak and anupriya are good friends of atul and Madhuri they both decided to marry their children to each other the aarange marriage got converted into love and both lives happily after one year they expect their first child moksh as sarthak office in in Aurangabad so they lived there only and Atul and Madhuri too but due to malhar promotion and kalyani job they both shifted to pune, Maharashtra

But from two-three years the couple got too busy in their work life that they both forgot little things in their relationship which makes it prefect

Let's see how is their life going

Chapter:-1


In morning a man in his 30s seems to be ready in a good suit descending down the stairs

Just then a boy of 6 years came runningly calling baba

Boy:- "baaba pls jaldi se Mera breakfast karwa Doo aai kahan hai bolo "

Man:-" moksh tum abhi Tak poori tarah se ready nahi huein tumhare school ka time ho chuka hai jaldi ready ho jao pehle.. itne main shanta kaki see kehkar naashta lagwata hoo jaldi Jao " he said scoldingly

Moksh :- vo Saab thik hai lekin aaj aai kyun nahi aai mujhein uthane ke liye aaaj to.. just then he covered his mouth with his hands

Man:- aaj Kya moksh jaldi joo beta aur tumhari aai Kal late ho gayi thi sone main iss liye abhi Tak nahi uthi jaldi jao ready hone

Moksh left hurriedly from there before getting more scolding From his father and revealed his suprise

Just then the man received a phone

Man:- bolo pathak Kya kaam hai kyunki subah see tumhara doosri baar call AA Raha hai

The man seems to be irritated and the other side pathak gets scared after seeing his boss irritated voice and stutteringly says

Pathak:- sir.. vo .. aaj.. a.apki meeting haina important bhi hai isliye aapko yaad rahein aur aap late na ho jayein isliye phone Kiya sorry sir .

Man:- pathak tumhein Kya main chota baacha lagta Hoon Jo haar baat ko mujhein yaad dilana padega commissioner Hoon iss shehar ka

Aur vese bhi" Malhar Rane apni jimmendariyon se piche nahi hatta" main time par pooch jaunga

With this he cutted call and asked shanta kaki to make breakfast for all of them

Malhar pov

Aaj subah see iss Pathak ne irritate karke rakha hai uparse koi cheez bhi nahi mil rahi thi kaha tha kalyani see Kal ki jaldi so Jana varna sir main dard ho jayega ye meeting uskein liye bhi important hai aur vo abhi Tak so rahi hai agr main kuch kahoonga to hamesha ki tarah main hi boora ban jaunga...

Just then moksh come and both the father son duo after breakfast left for there respective places

After sometime

Kalyani comes runningly in the hall last night due to extra work pressure she has to sleep late which caused her a sevre headache and she could not able to wake up on the time and now when she is feeling fine she is late already

Kalyani:- shanta kaki moksh aur malharji kahan hai chale Gaye Kya

Kaaki:- haan vo to chle gayein beta aur malhar kehke Gaya hai ki tum naashta karke hi office jana vo late ho raha tha isliye Chala Gaya

Kalyani ( sadly says):- chalein Gaye chaliye theek hai aap Mera breakfast de dijiye main bhi karke chali jaati hoo vese bhi pehle hi bohot late ho chili hoo

Kalyani pov

Aaj phir hum breakfast saath nahi Kar payein work load itna hi ki time hi nahi milta malharji bhi jaldi nikal gayien mere saath hi chalte vese bhi meeting to dono ko saath main hi attend karni thi aur agr unse kuch kahoongi to yahi lagega ki main kuch samjhti nahi Hoon pillu ko bhi nahi utha payi bichara Mera baccha aise hi Chala Gaya

Kalyani also after doing her breakfast left for the office

In office

Meeting

Kalyani:- so I guess aap log samajh gye honge ye election main kiski Kya duty hai aur Jo security hai vo Mr. Rane khud handle Kar rahe hai so if anyone of you have any problem you can ask them

All nodded their head and after some more discussion they left the cabin and only kalma left there

Both are busy in their file reading and nobody even bothered to check their messages which are flashing on their mobiles

Their concentration get Broke due to peon who came to give them their coffee or tea

Malhar:- abb kaisa hai tumhara dard

Kalyani:- better hai aap subah AA gayein aise jaldi

Malhar:- hmm .. pathak ke calls aa rahe the isliye aana pada tum so rahi thi to socha disturb na karron isliye tumehin jagaya nahi aur moksh bhi reday ho Gaya tha soo..

Kalyani:- aaj ussein lene chalte hai saath main

Malhar:- kalyani aaj nahi aaj Meri shaam Tak meetings lined up hai aur ye election ne work load aur badha Diya hai phir kissi din chalnege

Kalyani though gets sad but nod in a understanding manner

These few talks coverse between them and after that malhar leaves for his headquarters

Kalyani pov

Vaqt hi to nahi haina hamare pass na kaal tha aur na hi aaj...

In night

Both came home looking tired as kalyani had some work in the headquarters so they both come home together

Kalyani:- ye lights kyun off hai aur itna andhera kyun hai yahan after seeing whole house in a silence with darkness as after moksh birth she doesn't have. a habit to see house this much silent

Malhar:- pata nahi Chalo dekhte hai

With this suddenly all lights came and people present there shouted happily

"Happy anniversary both of you"

The couple gets shocked with the surprise and seeing their family and friends present And there and their little son came happily and hugged them

Moksh:- happy anniversary aai baba kaisa laga hamara surprise

They both get too busy in their life that they totally forget that today they have completed seven years of togetherness and the whole day they didn't even wish each other they both looked each other shockingly

But not too show any type of problem In their relationship they both greeted their parents and take the blessings from aapa and aausaheb and greet their friends with warm smile and hugged their son affectionately

Sarthak:- acha chalo Chalo tum dono jaakein ready ho jayo

Atul:- haaa bhai jinka function unhein to sabse sundar dikhna chahiye

Madhuri:- vese to hum jaante hai ki tum dono ko ek dusre se itna sa bhi door rehne ki aadat nahi hi lekin aaj tumhein dono Ko alag alag ready hona padega.. she said in a teasing manner

Anupriya:- kharas bolte Madhuri Chalo agr tum dono ko saath bhej Diya na to party khatam hi jayegi Chalo kalyani upar ke room main ready ho jayegi aur malhar tum neechein ke room

Aausaheb:- Chalo bhai humein bhi program aage badhana hamare parpote ne itni mehnat ki hai isskein liye kyun commissioner sahab aur dm sahiba

They all are enjoying in teasing them but malhar and kalyani both are feeling guilty of not remembering their precious day though both get agrred and left for getting ready

After sometime malhar came out wearing a blue tuxedo looking handsome as always and kalyani wears a beautiful baby pink color looking pretty like a doll both gets mesmerised after seeing each other

All starting enjoying the party after sometime their friends demand for their couple dance they tried to deny them but getting forced they got agrred and move towards the centre

The light gets dim and in back ground a beautiful romantic song is playing

Malhar takes kalyani left hand in his hands and place his right hand on her wasit kalyani also keeps her right hand on his back and swing to the music beats

Dekha haazaron daffa aapko

Phir bekarari kaisi hai

Sambhale sambhlta nahi ye Dil

Kuch pyaar main baat aisi hai...

Kalyani:- sorry vo kaam main busy rehkar yaad hi nahi raha ki aaj hamari anniversary hai

Malhar:- tumhari akele ki thodi na galti hai main bhi bhool gaya ki aaj itna special day tha

Both stare each other with guiltness in the eye

Lyrics get change

And malhar made her rotate and she leans on him in this time after a long a warmness fills their heart

Lekar ijjajt ab aap se

Saansien ye aati jaati hai

Dhoondhe se milte nahi hai hum

Bas aap hi aap baaki hai...

the closeness between them and the lyrics created a new roma between a heat get inked between them and both drown into that

Malhar gently started to careess her waist which cause kalyani in closing in her eyes they both are lost in their moment

But suddenly the music gets stopped and due to all hooting they come in their sense and they left each other hand

After the celebration all congratulated the couple and left for their home

Aausaheb:- Chalo aab huemin bhi chalna chahiye hum to bass tum logo ko badhai dene aye thein vese bhi Kal sarthak ki ek important meeting hai

Appa:- sahi keh rahi hai ahilya abb humein chalna chahiye vese bhi tum dono thake hue lag rahe ho

Atul :- haan malhar kalyani hum bhi chalte hai tum dono ko congratulate karna tha isliye aagaye the aur hamare laadle sahab ne sabko order Diya tha

Aai baba ki anniversary hai Kal aap log time par aajana by pulling moksh cheeks

All laughed at him

Kalyani:- lekin aap log abhi kyu Jaa rahe hai aur aappa aausaheb aap kyu. Abhi jaa rahe hai pehle hi itne thak Gaye honge suufar karke

Malhar:- haan aap log aaj raat ruk jaiye na yahi pls aise thakne ka Kya faayada

Though all wanted to some time with each other but to their work they could not stay with them and after making the couple understand they all left for their respected houses

Moksh:- aai baba kaisa laga Mera surprise aapko

Kalyani:- both acha by taking him in her arms and kissed his cheek malhar also carresed hai face and ruffling his hair he also kissed him

Malhar:- waah moksh tu to bohot ache surprises plan karne laga hai acha ab Chalo tumhein Kal school jana hai Chalo jaakein so jao

Kalyani takes him with her and made him change in nightwears and makes him sleep

In kalma room

After changing in her nightwears kalyani came out from the washroom

Kalyani:- vo.. party achi thi na pillu ne acha surprise plan kiya tha

Malhar:- haan kaafi achi thi vo . Actually happy anniversary nichein wish nahi Kar paya isliye

Kalyani:- happy anniversary to you too ....

Both feels awkward as nowadays their talks get this much limited that sometimes they feels shoratge of words in their conversation

Kalyani:- so jatein Kal vese bhi bohot kaam hai

Malhar hummed in response and retired to bed

Both started tossing and turning on bed and remember their first anniversary

Flashback

The whole family arrange a grand party for them they both enjoyed a lot in each other company

But after that malhar takes her in their by covering her eyes with his hand

Kalyani:- malharji yahan to bohot andhera hai main kuch nahi dekh paa rahi Hoon

Malhar:- ek second ruko by opening the lights

Kalyani gets happy after seeing the room decorated with her favorite flowers and with dim lights as she liked

Kalyani:- wow.. ye kitna pyaara lag raha hai thank you so much malharji mujhein sachmain bohot acha laga by hugging him happily

Malhar:- Chalo phir Mera surprise to mil gya aur tumhein aacha bhi laga lekin iss raat ko thoda aur enjoy kartein haina

Kalyani:- kaise...

Malhar asked for her hand and with soft music playing in a background they dance according to the rhythm and enjoy their intimacy

After dancing malhar takes out a bag from his cupboard and gives to Kalyani

Kalyani:- ye Kya hai...

Malhar:- kholke Dekho Mera gift baaki hai abhi vo hi samajhlo..

Kalyani open the giftpack and got happy after seeing cute silver pendant of heart shape

Kalyani:- kitna pyaara hai Malharji ye thank you for this gift.. I love you

Malhar:- I love you too kalyani....mujhein acha laga ki tumhein ye pasand aya

Kalyani:- vese mere pass bhi aapkein liye kuch hai par pehle aankhein band kijiye

Malhar:- kalyani do na vese bhi tumne subah see mujhein excited Kar rakha hai aapne gift ke liye ab de bhi Doo

Kalyani:- doongi na lekin apni aankhein band kijiye to hi milega

Malhar closed his eyes and kalyani softly takes his hand and keeps on her belly

Kalyani:-ab kholiye apni aankhein she whispered in her eyes kuch mehsoos hua aap baba baane wale hoo ..

Malhar gets too happy with this news he lifted kalyani in his arms

Malhar:- Kya kaha phirse bolo main baba banne Wala hoo .. sachamin kalyani

Kalyani happily nooded her head and both their eyes got teary in happiness

Malhar after making her sit on the bed and kneels down to her tummy level softly kissed her belly

Malhar:- sachmain kalyani ye aajtak ka sabse best gift hai Jo mujhein tumne Diya hai .. thank you for this priceless gift vese tumhein pata kab chala ur mujhein kyun nahi bataya

Kalyani:- aree mujehin pata nahi thode din se ajeeb si feeling ho rahi thi to Kal doctor ke pass checkup ke liye gayi thi jabhi pata Chala

Phir socha ki aaj appko surprise deti hoo

Malhar:- lekin aaj hum sab ne tumhein itna dance karwaya itna thakya agr tumhari tabiyat bigad jati to he lightly scold her

Kalyani:- aree malharji Maine sachmain din main bohot saara rest Kar liya tha aur phir maine koi kaam bhi nhi Kiya abb aap pls gussa mat hoiye

She cuty manofy him and both rejoice this new feeling with each other they both feels excited to enjoy their first Parenthood

Present

Malhar and kalyani both gets emotional after reminscing their beautiful memories

Kalyani pov

Kitne Khush the hum pillu ki aane ki khabar aapne to mujhein uss vaqt kuch kaam bhi nhi karne Diya tha bas poora time Mera dhyaan rakhne main nikaal dete the

Kahan gayein hamare vo pyaar bharein jinmien aakien humien aise chup nahi rehna padta tha ek dusre ke saath ye rukhi sukhi life kaise ho gai hamari

Malhar pov

Kitna Khush tha main ye jaankaar ki kalyani maa baane wali hai hum dono ne kitna acha vaqt bitaya tha uss samay moksh ke aane de jindagi main ek nayi bahar si AA gayi thi

Pata nhi kaha chup gaya vo vaqt jismein hum dono alag hokar bhi ek the aau aaj saath hokar bhi alag

Malhar pov got broke as kalyani turns to his side

Malhar:- Kya hua kalyani abhi Tak soyi nahi kuch dikkat ho rahi hai Kya

Kalyani:- nahi malharji bass nind nHi AA rhi thi isiye ...

Malhar:- acha neend to mujhein bhi nahi AA rhi hai lekin humein Soo Jana chaiye vese bhi kal raat tum late soyi thi to tumhein sirdard ho raha tha raat bhar ..

Ankhien band Karo aur so jao

Kalyani hummed in response and both their eyes got heavy with tiredness and they sleeped

So how was the first chapter guys tell me in comments

Should I continue this??

Edited by Phlo - 4 years ago
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This was amazing kalma ka bich duriya but the story was too beautiful and plzz continue😍😍❤

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yes, please do continue the storyline is really superb. I loved the update
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I loved this so much Vanshu. I love all your FFs but this one is my favourite because you so beautifully portrayed the real struggles of modern marriages. Also both KalMa are acting according to their prestigious posts.

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