Kalma ff :- tu Dena saath Mera (chapter:-8 updated 04-09-2021) - Page 9

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Posted: 4 years ago
#81

Take a bow.. 👏👏👏

This was how Shera track should have been. With timely comedy, the action and flow of story.

CVs ke mandhbudhi ke uska kabada bana diya.. Warna Sehban would have carried it very well. He's too good in timely comedy.

Ab mai iss update me se kisi bhi ek cheez ko single out karke appreciate nahi kar sakti. It has to be appreciated on the whole.

Thank you for writing Shera track the way it should have been. Lots of love. ❤️❤️❤️

This is my favorite.. 😘😘

My request.. Shera aur Tommy ke scenes add karo. I loved their chemistry.

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Posted: 4 years ago
#82

Originally posted by: rekha_crm

Take a bow.. 👏👏👏

This was how Shera track should have been. With timely comedy, the action and flow of story.

CVs ke mandhbudhi ke uska kabada bana diya.. Warna Sehban would have carried it very well. He's too good in timely comedy.

Ab mai iss update me se kisi bhi ek cheez ko single out karke appreciate nahi kar sakti. It has to be appreciated on the whole.

Thank you for writing Shera track the way it should have been. Lots of love. ❤️❤️❤️

This is my favorite.. 😘😘

My request.. Shera aur Tommy ke scenes add karo. I loved their chemistry.

thank you di for this reply 🤗🤗❤️

Glad you liked whole update ☺️☺️

I will surely add shera Tommy scenes they are really good at their brother chemistry👍🏼😭

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Posted: 4 years ago
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alfiya will try to update soon..having so many ffs with me that's why not able to do this
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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: Phlo004

alfiya will try to update soon..having so many ffs with me that's why not able to do this

Yaar please update soon I'm excited 🙈

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: Kalmalover

Yaar please update soon I'm excited 🙈

sorry for making you wait alfu but will try to update soon 😃😃
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Posted: 3 years ago
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vanshuu.... pls update nxt part soon
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Posted: 3 years ago
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Chapter :-6

After the drama all moved inside their rooms angrily

Shera:-" to batao mahre ko madmaji kaisi lagi thare ko shera ki acting...haii ..."

Kalyani:: angrily: "issein tum acting kehte ho are Kya baar baar beech beech main ye haryanvi bolne lag jaate ho ...areee acha khaasa sab chal raha tha pata nahi beech main tumhara vo dost Kahan see aagaya ...aur Saab kharab ho Gaya kaise aaya vo yahan.."

Shera:: "are thee mahre pe kyun gussa ho rahi so ..mahra Tommy to sirf mahre se milne aaya tha aab kisiko to mahari chinta hogi na ..uss bechaare ko kee pata ki yahn acting challo see..bolo"

Kalyani::" tumsien to baat hi karni bekaar hai ..ab pata nhi vo log Kya karenge issko jaane ke baad ..."

Shera::" ye sab chodo mahre ko mahra kamara dikha do ...bass kitni kamar dukh ree see mahri inn Saab ke baad hayye main to thak Gaya.." by stretching his arms

Kalyani rolled her eyes at his acting and taking sleeping moksh from sofa she started to move towards the room malhar smillingly moves behind her ...kalyani enters in the room and gets emotional remembering their memories together but keeping a check on herself she puts the moksh on bed and covered him properly with the blanket ... malhar too gets emotional seeing his child and wife seeing like this he so wanted to go near them and by hugging he want to soothe their pain but stopping himself he starts to flirt with kalyani

Shera:: "are waaah madamji Kya kamara se thara bada sunadr lage see ...mahra to Dil khush ho gaya issein dekhkar main .."

Kalyani rolled her eyes at his drama and stands up from there to drink the water , malhar used this chance to irritate her he held her closely to him while pulling her towards his chest ... kalyani gets shocked sensing his sudden action ..

Kalyani ::" ye Kya badtameezi hai ......haan mujhein aise Kyun kichaa....." She said angrily

Shera by slightly brushing his fingers on her waist as she is wearing saree so it's easy for him to moves his fingers on her waist easily ....lost in his fingers touch she for a second forgot him being shera not her husband , closing her eyes she feels pleasure by his moved...Malhar smirked seeing her reaction as he very well his presence is affecting her a lot now...

Malhar :: " kyun kalyani Meri inn saason ko nahi pechan paa rahi ho Kya ....iss ehsaas ko bolo...." He whispered huskily in her ears

Kalyani jerked from her state and shockingly sees him

Kalyani::" ma....lharji....app..lekin tum to shera hona...phir ye mere malharji ki aawz kaise...."

Shera just left her and pretends as he knew nothing about what happened just few minutes ago...

Shera ::" pagal ....vagal sooo Kya madamji kuch bhi bolein jaa rahi Soo...areee main shera Chaudhary Soo shera Chaudhary Kya baar baar ye malhar malhar karkien maahra sirr khaane lag jao bolo ..."

Kalyani confusingly tries to cool her mind and malhar somehow feel guilty also to left her in this condition that's why in middle sometimes he tries to makes her illusion true to being him malhar only so in her dazzy state only but she can live some happy moments with her husband

Shera ::" vaise agr itne hi apne pati ki yaad aarahi sein to bataa Doo mahre ko.."by rubbing his hand on her uncovered shoulder .."main karddonga unki kami poori aakhirkar ek patni ki jaaroorat ka khaayal to pati hi rakhei se na aur main too thara pati hooo..."

Kalyani angrily jerked his hands from her and loudly says

Kalyani ::" ye badtameezi band Karo....samjhein koi haq nahi hai tumhara mujhpein samjhein koi bhi nahi ...."

Moksh gets up suddenly from his sleep by her loud voice as he is having a mild fever so the constable had given him a sedative which helps him in sleeping but now the effect of that gets low and he started to get up ....kalyani after sensing his movements go near and taking him in her arms she stroke his back so he can woke up easily ....malhar gets emotional seeing his son like this and turns his back to wipes his tears...

Moksh after rubbing his eyes sees a man silhouette like his father and jumping from his mother's arms he goes near him , kalyani tries to stop him but before that he catch his jacket and tries to turn him to his side ...

Malhar after gaining his composure turns his back and normally sees a child in his shera form ..but internally he is craving to takes his son in his arms ...moksh gets happy as his dream came true ... on the marriages day he sees his father only taking his mother somehow in his arms he tries to call him but hitting that car window but he goes from there after thay he tries to tell the same about this to his mother but before that she faints there but now seeing his dream coming true he jumps in joy and Happily hugs his father legs ...kalyani emotionally tries to stop his son who is thinking some other man to be his mother she knows his innocent heart will not be able to register this things but before he gets too forward in this drama she tries to stop him

Moksh tries to say something to him but not able to tell he hugs his tightly as potraying his emotions in that hug ....malhar after difficulty compose himself from all the situation but his little son's emotions really weaks him alot but after lot of fighting intetnally he slightly pushed his son and give him to his mother

Shera ::" ye looo....apna baaalak madamji kaise chipakaa jaaa raha see mahre see...aree mahre ko ye baalak vaalak naa pasand see ....issein kahoo..ki main isska koi baap vaap naa Soo...haat.hatt mahre see door...."

Kalyani angrily stare him and softly takes her son in her arms ...moksh gets shocked seeing his father's behaviour , he didn't expect this from him and seeing him justs confused him more...he tries to ask his father on sign language that why he is behaving strangely

Kalyani ::" pillu baccha ye malharji nahi hai ..ye tere baba nahi hai ....ye shera hai ye Tere baba ke jaisa dikhata hai par hai nahi ....pls tu samjhane ki koshish Kar...ye Tere baba ho hi nahi sakta...."

Moksh gets sad listening her , after such time he gets hope of meeting his father again ....he stress on his throat to speak something but getting fail in his attempt he glommily jump from there and turns his face in irritation ....

For malhar every second is getting difficult there seeing his son face like this ...but he is also bounded by his some commintments ...so he stops himself

Kalyani sit on her knees to manofy his son

Kalyani ::" pillu ....baccha I am sorry main issien tere Baba ki jagah lekein aayi par baccha mere pass sachmain koi aur raasta nahi tha... tujhien mujhsein vo Saab milkein door Kar dete agr main issein Tere baba baanakein nahi leke aati to...main tujhsien promise karti hoo ke baar main tujhien apne pass legally rakh loo...phir uskein badd sacchi main issein vapas bhej doongi tu pls aise gussa Mat hoo....aai sachmain bohot sorry hai..."

Moksh after understanding hai mother , turns to her and wipes her tears and nodded his head in affirmation...goda knocks the door and comes inside as kalyani has told her plan to her on phone in the way to home she understands that ....she gets good after seeing how they spoils malhar's sister life who took care of them like her own In those 5 years and she now truly wants to help her sister to gain back his son custody as she has seen how they are planning to send moksh hostel away from. ..she tries to stop her grandmother also but like a admamt person she only sushed her ...

Goda takes moksh to her room to make him eat something , moksh while going with her stare shera in a suspicious manner somewhere his heart believe this man to be his father only...seeing his suspicious stares ...malhar smiles brightly to hide his nrevousness behind it ...

After his departure kalyani closed the door while checking if someone is keeping eye on her not

On other side

In sarthak room

Aausaheb ::. " Are hum keh rahe Hain ye malhar ho hi nahi sakta ....aree jiss insaan ki assthiyan tum khud parhavahit karkein aayein do hafte pehle vo insaan kaise jinda ho sakta hai ....ye pakka koi kalyani behrupaiya hi leke aayi hai ....ye malhar nahi hai bass..."

Avni::" aausaheb sahi keh rahi hai sarthak....kalyani pakka koi chaal chal rahi hai Varna ek dum sein malhar kaha sein aagaya are agr vo jinda hota to pehle hi apne parivaar ke pass nahi aaajta aur jab vo Mara tha ussein pehle vo kalyani se kitni nafrat karta tha ek dum sei ussein usspein itna pyaar kaise aagya ...boliye..."

Sarthak ::" jaanta hoo main ki kalyani koi behrupiya hi leke aayi hai aur ye baat bhi bohot achein sein jaanta hoo ki vo ye kyun leke aayi hai kyunki ussien moksh ki custody legally chahiye Jo ussein sirf jabhi mil sakti hai jab malhar uskein favour main hoo..par aausaheb aap itna kyun saath de rahi hai Mera aur avni ka main to Meri beti ki maut ka badla le raha hoo kalyani aur anupriya see aur avni ahir ka lekin aap kyun....kahi aap ye to nahi soch rahi haina ki agr aap Mera saath dengi to main aapkein uss bete vivek ki bail kara doonga to bohot galat soch hai aapki kyunki main aisa kuch nahi karoonga...

Kal anupriya ka case hai Main uski tayyari karne jaa rhaa hoo ho , kyuki agr uss kalyani ne Kal malhar saabit Kar Diya uss behrupiyein ko to ussien choothe main 2 min nahi lagnege...to aap dono kissi bhi haalat main aaj ke aaj uss behrupiyein ka pardaphash karne ka plan kijiyein kyunki planning aur plotting main aap dono see acha koi nahi ho skata..."

He left from there aausaheb tries to say something but avni nodded her hard like she will handle the situation and get vivek bailed by him ...

Aausaheb pov

Agr Kal vo anupriya vapas aagayi jail se to hamara vivek kabhi aagein nahi choot payega...nahi huemin uss behrupiyein ka pardaphash karna hoga ..bass

Avni pov

Are mujhein Kya Matlab iss anupriya ko bail mile ya na milein vaise acha hi rahega ki ussien Kal bail mil jaayein kitna udti thi naa MAA beti...beti iss behrupiyein ko laakein baach gayi ...lekin usski haklati maa Kya laad paayegi mujhsein aur vo kalyani apnein pillu aur us behrupiyein ko bachane main lagi rahegi ....mazza aayega uss anupriya ko mere galien ka mangalsutra dikhane main aur vo bhi uskein pati issh ex pati ke naam ka ....

Avni smirked on her thoughts while aausaheb makes plans to outen the truth today only by any means

In

Kalma room

Kalyani ::" suno Meri baat dhyaan se suno bass theekein ..." But malhar choose this to tease her he pulled her toward him

Shera::" Kya baat see madamji maine naa pata tha ki the itni utawali ho rahi Soo mahre pass aneko ...Chalo jee taane maan bana hi liya hai to main bhi koi kami naa chodoonga thari iss khuwaish ko poora karne ..." He said while playing with her hairs

Though his touch always leaves her to craves for more but pushing him angrily

Kalyani ::" Maine kahana ye badtameezi band karoo ...aur kaan kholkein sunlo main kisi aur ki patni hoo tum mere malharji nahi hoo main unki patni hoo samjhein mere pati jabtak nahi mil jaate aur mere bete ki custody main jabtak nahi le leti tab tak tumhein bass Mera pati bankein rehna hai par in char diwaroo ke Bahar ye kamre hum kya hai Kya nahi voo humein dono ko pata hai samjhein.."

Malhar pov

Bass Kalyani yahin ummed tootne maat Dena main jaldi iss mission ko poora karoonga tumhari ISS ummed ko tootne nahi doonga tumhara pati aur moksh ka baap jaldi aayega tum dono ke pass ye Mera wada hai

Kalyani :: abb suno Kal Meri aai ka case hai Maine jaisa tumhein aate waqt bataya tha unpein malharji ko maarne ka jhoota ilazam laga hua hai main jaanti hoo Meri aai mere pati ko kabhi nahi marengei. Mujhe asli mujrim Tak poochana hai Kal tumhein ye gawahi Deni ahi court main ki tumhein matlab malharji ko unhone chakoo nahi maara tha ....kaka pakka kuch na kuch jaaroor karnge isliye aaj raat main tumhein sab Bata doongi malharji ke baarie main jissei Kal kuch dikkat naa hoo...aur haaa suno tumehin Kal main mere bank account main Jo paise hai unehin pehli kisht ki tarah de doongi to kuch naatk mat karna ...

Shera dramatically nooded his head and they all go outside as dinner time has occurred

In hall

Avni is coming smirkingly thinking if anupriya will come tomorrow then how she will torture in this house but suddenly some hot curry fell on her leg and she shouted in pain ... aausaheb sees her

Avni ::" ye kaya goada...mere upar hi saari sabzi ger di...dimaag kharab ho gaaya hai Kya ..."

Goada::" ismein Meri Kya galti avni tum vahan Pata nahi kinn khaayaloom main aarahi thi gir gayi sabzi...Maine tumhein kitni baar bulaya bhi par tum nahi hatti Mera balance bigad Gaya aur gir gayi ...

Avni moans in pain aausaheb scolded her to shout on goda unnecessarily as she is at fault ...kalyani rolled her eyes at their drama and served herself and shera and moksh plate and start eating while feeding moksh who is giggling seeing avni jumping here and there like a monkey ... suddenly sarthak has came , avni tells him to drop her till the room but sarthak denied the offer and sit on the table for eating...avni bitch him internally and sit on the table to cool down her leg by washing it with cold water while aausaheb called gived her some medicine to apply on it rolling her face

Malhar give a victory look to goda as they have planned to do this deliberately to punish her , as goada also frustrated with this avni she agree for his plan and they both shared a victory look

Kalyani :: " ye tum aur goda Kya looks looks khel rhe hoo kucg gardbad hai Kya..."

Malhar nodded his head in negation and suddenly sarthak grabbed their attention

Sarthak ::" Kal anupriya ka case hai kalyani yaad haina tumhare iss behrupiyein ka Kal pardaphash hoga court main dekhana tum Kal main isskein saath aur tumhare saath Kya karta hoo..."

Kalyani though feel scared after listening him but not to show him she confidently says

Kalyani ::" Kal mere malharji Meri aai ke baachav main hi gavhai denge samjehin aap aur kitni baar baatao aapko mr.sartak Rane ki ye mere pati hai samajh nahi aaraha hai aapko ek baar main..."

Malhar ::"vaise Kaka aap apni patni ki sewa kijiye Matlab doosri behrupiyein bhaasha main kahoo to kakka Chachi ko sambhal lo mari jaa rahi see bechari sambhal hai ussien ...kalyani rolled her eyes

And sarthak left from there angrily ...moksh goes with goda after eating

Aausaheb::" vaise Kalyani tumhare liye aaj kuch bohot khaas Kiya Humne dekhna nahi chahogi Kya Kiya hai humne.."

Kalyani ::" Kya Matlab hai aapka ..."

Avni::" are Kya aausaheb Kya itna suspene create Kar rahi hai saaf saaf bata kyun nahi deti ki aapne inn dono ki suhagraat plan ki hai Inka kamra sajvkar Meri kamar toot gayi ussien sajaate saajte aur abb pair bhi....aah...."

Kalyani gets numb listening her

And......

Chapter ends!!!

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Posted: 3 years ago
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The update is good vanshu

I really enjoyed shera teasing kalyani.

Pls keep posting this ff, at least once a week

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: sathwi_99

The update is good vanshu

I really enjoyed shera teasing kalyani.

Pls keep posting this ff, at least once a week

thank you sathwi 😽🥰🥰

Glad to know you love it 💕😘💕

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Aye Haye Vanshu! Aakhir tune meri khwahish poori kar hi di. Khoob bhalo! Tumhare liye das rasgulle meri taraf se 💖💖💖💖💖


Loved the scene with Moksh. And Malharji Shera banke Kallu ki saari shikaaytein door kar rahe hain bas Kallu unhe pehchaan nahin paa rahi. Vanshu aisa ek scene rakhna possible ho sakta hai when Kallu asked MJ to do something but MJ being a seedha saada person didn't agree but Shera Kallu ki vo khwahish poori kar de.

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