Kalma ts:- journey(chapter:-4 updated 01-08-2021) - Page 6

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Posted: 4 years ago
#51

This is simply beautiful 🤩


Kalma ki sari misunderstanding door ho gayi 🥳



Thank god Kallu yaha par waisi hi hai jaisi 5 saal pehle thi …



Loved it yaar

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Posted: 4 years ago
#52

Originally posted by: Priyapriyu

This is simply beautiful 🤩


Kalma ki sari misunderstanding door ho gayi 🥳



Thank god Kallu yaha par waisi hi hai jaisi 5 saal pehle thi …



Loved it yaar

kallu ko to malhar see bohot pyaar hai bas thoda gusse main usse rooth jati hai

Otherwise hai to heroine hamari achi hi

Agle chapter main kuch surprising hone Wala hai

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Chapter 1 is amazing 😍 Malhar's emotions are perfect ♥️I love him the most because I find him very genuine 😘😘

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: Annaya_gupta

Chapter 1 is amazing 😍 Malhar's emotions are perfect ♥️I love him the most because I find him very genuine 😘😘

thank you annanya for comment 😍😍

Yes I generally found him most genuine character in the show

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Amazing 😍 I also think that malhar suffered the most and in these five years I even can't imagine how he lived you explored his emotions perfectly ♥️

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: Annaya_gupta

Amazing 😍 I also think that malhar suffered the most and in these five years I even can't imagine how he lived you explored his emotions perfectly ♥️

Thank you annanya for liking it I am gald you liked this take😍😍
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Posted: 3 years ago
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Chapter:-4

Malhar feels awkward after listening to kalyani but somewhere he feels happy that she doesn't feel bad or awkward after he claimed her as his wife

Malhar:- kalyani tumhein Sach main bura nahi laga na ki Maine tumhein apni patni kaha aise Matlab ye Saab kahi tumhein galat to nahi laga na he said hesitantly

Kalyani:- galat Kyun lagega malharji mujhein jab hamara rishta yahi hai hum dono ek dusre se pyaar karte hai to phir galti ya bura lagne ka to sawal hi paida nahi hota na

Malhar:- kalyani tum samajh nahi rahi ho ab humara vo rishta nahi hai

Aur tum bhi ye Jo pyaar aur in Saab ki baatein Kar rahi ho vo kuch samay baad bhul jaogi tumhein abhi apni iss baat ka bura lag Raha hai ki tumne mujhse Milne ki koshish nahi ki aur ye sab ho Gaya

Lekin jab kuch time baad tumhara guilt khatam ho jayega to phir

Kalyani cutted him in between

Kalyani:- malharji kya Matlab aapka maana hum legally ab pati patni nahi hai

Lekin unn vachno ka Kaya jinhein humne humare pillu ke saamne liye the unn vadon ka Kya Jo humne ek dusre ko Dil see diye the na ki kiss kaagaz pe

Haan mujhein afsoss hai apni galti ka iska Matlab ye nahi ki main apna rishta tod Doon lekin agar aap ab yahi she choked on her words due to the subbing of her

Malhar immediately hugs her

Malhar:- kalyani I am sorry agar Meri kisi bhi baat ka bura laga tumhein aur ye tum kya keh rahi ho ki main chatha hoo ya nahi kalyani agar mujhein tumhein bhula ke aage hi badhna hota to main inn 5 saalon main kabka aage badh chuka hota

Vo vaqde vo kasmein Maine apne Dil se diye the tumhein koi khel nahi khela tha

Kalyani:- to agr aap aage nahi badhe to main bhi konsa badh gayi Hoon bataiye ha

Malhar:- main abhi kuch nahi samajh paa Raha Hoon kalyani Kya karoon Kya kahoon kaise kahoon

Kuch nahi mujhien ab nahi pata ki aage Kya hoga

Main tumhare pyaar par Shaq nahi Kar raha hoo lekin in saalon itna Saab ho Gaya ki aab kiss bhi Khushi ko dekhkar daar lagta hai

Aisa lagta hai ki kahi ye dol pal ki Khushi Meri Gam me na badal jayein

Kalyani hold his hand and made him sit beside her on the bed with her and lay his head on her chest and starts moving her fingers in his hair

Kalyani (softly):- aapko Meri vajh see Jo pareshani hui ussein na main Kam Kar sakti Hoon aur na unka koi pashyatap hai

Bas koshish Kar sakti Hoon ki at least ab aapko koi Naya dukh na doon

Malhar peacefully laying his head on her chest

Malhar:- kalyani tumhare aur moksh ke jaane ke baad vese bhi jindagi ne mujhein koi vajah nahi di Khush hone ki saalon baad tumhein jinda dekhke Khushi mili hai

Aur ab tumhein saara Sach pata chala Chuka hai to maan main ek aas si jagi hai ki shayad dobara jindagi mujhein ek aur mauka Dena chathi hai lekin iss baar uss Raha par dobara chalne see daar lag raha hai

Kalyani:- jiss insaan see Maine pyaar kiya tha vo kabhi haar nahi maanta tha to phir aaj aisi baatein kyun

Malhar:- vo insaan 5 saal pehle Mar Gaya tha tumhare aur moksh ke jaane ke baad aur ab ye Jo insaan tumhare saath hai usmein na itni takkat hai ki vo kissise bhi aur Naya dhoka kaha sakein ya lad sakein

Thaak Gaya Hoon main sabse ladte ladte sabke taane sunte sunte ab thoda aaram karna chatha Hoon bas kuch pal Khushi ke bitana chatha Hoon par shayad iss shabdh se Mera vaasta bohot pehle khatam ho Gaya hai he said dejectedly

Kalyani get emotional after listening him she now understand that she is not the one who is suffered in this time but many are there who have suffered because of her

But the most suffered person is her malharji who is now totally broken from inside but now after knowing the truth and her mistakes she will not backout she will correct her mistakes she will make him normal again she will again filled his life with happiness

Kalyani:- aapkein dukh ko Kam nahi Kar skati aur main itna bhi jaanti Hoon ki aap mujhein kuch nahi batayenge ki aapkein saath Kya Kya hua

Malhar get up from there and looks shockingly at her

Kalyani:- aise mat chokiye main jaanti Hoon aap mujhein kuch nahi batayenge apne dukhe ke baarein main par pls itna khudko dukh mat dijiye pls she said pleadingly

Malhar:- Kya dukh de raha Hoon main khudko kuch bhi to nahi he said lowering his eyes

Kalyani laughed painfully and said

Kalyani:- agar aap itne achein actor hote naa to aaj aap police officer nahi hote aapko apne dukh bhi chupana nahi AATA malharji koshish badi achi Kar lete hai lekin mujhsein aapki aankhon ki nami nahi chupti

Malhar:- Kya jaana chathi ho aaj kuch nahi chupaunga Jo jaana chathi ho vo pooch lo ab Meri jindagi vese bhi ek majak hi ban chuki hai abb

Kalyani:- aise mat kahiye maana maine jabse mili Hoon appsein aapko koi vajah nahi di hai ki aapp mujhsein apna koi bhi dukh share Kar sakein lekin aap apne aap ko to mat kosiye

Main sirf itna jaana chathi hoon malharji ajj subah aur pehle aapko Kya hua tha apki tabiyat kaise itni bigad jaati hai kuch problem hai Kya aapko boliye na she asked him worriedly

Malhar after understanding that she is talking about his panick attack decided to tell her truth today

Malhar:- kalyani aaj main tumsein koi baat nahi chupana chatha hoo vese bhi hum dono ne ek dusre Kai baatein chupakar ek dusre ki hi jindagi pehle hi bohot baarbad Kar li hai isliye pls ab Meri baat dhyaan se sunna

Then he started to tell about about the happening which happened with him in 5 years and how his mental state is not stable and how taking benefit of his weakness her grandmother makes him subinspector by using her powers and how she made maai against his husband and how kaaka hates her now because of his daughter death he helds her responsible for that accident

Kalyani after getting know all happening could not able to control and she breakdown in his arms malhar helds her tightly and whispered sweet nothing

Malhar:- shhh.... Kalyani bass pls chup ho jaon tumhien doctor ne Mana kiya Haina stress lene ke liye bass shaant ho ja baccha.....

Kalyani (sobbingly in his chest):- malharji kaise shaant ho jaon main ye jaante huein ki aapki Kya haalat hui hai in 5 saalon main aur aapse aapki jovlb Tak cheen like inn log Saab Meri vajah se hua hai Kaka sahi hai Meri hi galti hai unka muhjse nafrat karna jaayaz hai Sab.. jayaz hai ...

Malhar slowly untangled her from him and made har lay down on the bed so that she doesn't feel tired

Malhar:- chupp.. kuch bhi mat bolo tumhein kuch nahi pata tha samjhi tumhein to ye bhi nahi pata tha ki maai pregnant hai to inn sabmain tumhari Kya galti haan kalyani tum to khud itne time coma main rahi .. he choked on his words getting emotional

Kya . Galti hai tumhari bolo

Kalyani:- malharji in sabkein jaane ke baad main to aapsein maafi bhi nahi maang sakti issein acha to yahi hoga ki aap mujhein bhul jayein .. she said siding her head on other side as she is not even able to meet his eyes

Aap pls chalien jaiye yahan see kyunki agar mere pass thodi Der aur rukein to pata nahi...

She couldn't able to complete her sentence as she listen some broking sound ans turned her face to see malhar holding a broken glass and blood is flowing from his hand

Malhar (angrily):- Chala jaoon haa. Kalyani bhul Jaaon tumhein ek baat baatao har cheez main tumhari hi kyun marzi chalti hai ye jaante hue bhi ki main tumhare Bina kitna tadpa Hoon in 5 saalon tum mujhien Jane ke liye bol rhi hoo bolo

Kalyani tried to get up from the bed but couldn't able to that due to her weakness she meekily said

Kalyani:- malharji pls ye glass chodiye dekhiye kitna khoon beh Raha hai appka

I am sorry main pakka aapsein aage se aisa kuch nahi kahoongi dekhiye jaldi aaiye yahan Varna mujhein NAA chathe hue bhi bed se uthna padega

Malhar angrily sits beside her so that she don't get up from the bed and kalyani takes the medical box which is kept on the stool beside her she gently treated his hand with moist eyes

Kalyani:- kyun karte hai aap aisa boliye hamesha meri galti ki saza aap khudko dete hai

Malhar:- kalyani ek baat Meri kaan kholke sun lo jabtak tum theek nahi ho jaati tab Tak to main tunhein akela chodke kahi nahi jaoonga samjhi tum to aage se aisi phaltu baat mat karna mujhse

Kalyani:- main to uskein baad bhi aapko kavi chodke nahi jaana chathi hoo malharji

By taking his hand in her hand she softly said

Kalyani:- ek baat kahoon aapsein manti hoo Meri maafi aapka dard nahi Kam karengi lekin Kya aap mere saath dobara apni jindagi nahi shuru Kar sakte kya hum dobara vo jindagi nahi jee sakte

Malhar cools down after listening her but a hesitation comes in his mind

Malhar:- kalyani main nahi jaanta ki abb main koi bhi Khushi tumehin de paoonga ya nahi ya tumhein vi saarein sukh mere saath mil bhi payenge Jo tumhein ek acha pati de sakta hai

Naa ab Meri aaukat tunbare baarabar hai aur naa mere andar itni himmat hai ki main tumehin dobara kho sakoon

Kalyani:- aap ye huemsha kya aauakt aur inn cheezon ki baatein Kar rahe hai aap abhi bhi mere vo hi malharji hai Jo 5 saal pehle the jinse mujhein pyaar hua tha mujhien malhar Rane ki acchai aur vo jaise the ussein pyaar hua tha naa ki unkein paise ya standard se ...malharji main jaanti hoo main chahkar bhi aapka dukh Kam nahi Kar sakti lekin Kam se Kam aapko abb nayi khushiyan to de sakti hoo ...haan baana chahthi hoo selfish thoda sa ...vo selfish insaan bankein apne pati ke saath apni aagein ki jindagi jina chathi hoo Kya thodi bhi Khushi nahi deserve karte hum dono ....jabsein hum dono milein hai yaa to dusro ki pareshaniyan solve karte rehte hai yaa kiski sulaha apne aap ko apne rishte ko to koi time hi nahi de payein ..."

Malhar ::" Kya tum sachmain humare rishte ko ek chance Dena chathi hoo..." He asked hopefully

Kalyani::" main apne rishte ko apne app ko ek mauka Dena chathi hoo malharji ...aapkein saath kuch pal abb sirf Khushi ke bitane hai bass agr aap chathe hai to...kyunki naa to main ek acchi insaan hoo aur Naa hi ek achi patni..she said cryingly

Malhar just hold her closed to his heart and gently Patt her hairs

Malhar ::" kyun nahi hoo tum ek acchi insaan bolo ,kyun apne aapko itna underestimate Kar rahi hoo tum to Meri strong kalyani phir bhi..."

Kalyani ::" malharji Main aisena boloon to Kya bolo ...pehle apne bete ko kho Diya ...phir apne pati ki saari jindagi baarbad kardi apni maa Tak ki saari khushiyan cheenli ...Meri galti nahi hai to Kya hai boliyein...naa main ek achi maa ban payi naa patni aur naa hi beti .. vese aai aai karti rehti thi..aur unhi ki jindagi main jab itni badi Khushi aayi to vo bhi Meri vajah se cheen gayi..." she said sobbingly in his chest

Malhar's heart broke seeing her vulnerable condition and he just Patt her back to make her feel somehow better

Malhar::" tum ek bohot achi maa bhi hoo ...ek achi patni bhi hoo aur ek achi beti bhi ....samjhi Main tumhein pehle bhi keh chuka hoo naa hi tumhari koi galti thi jiski jindagi main Jo kuch bhi hua hai usmein unki bhi galtiyan thi ...aur hum sab bhi koi chote bacche nahi the Jo apni jindagi ki mushkeilon ka ilzam tum par daalein ...."

Kalyani ::" aap wada kijiye abb app kahi nahi jayenge mujhein chodkar bass...main aur akeli nahi reh sakti pehle hi uss andehre see uss sunsan jagahoon see Mera dum ghutne laga hai agr abb main uss pal main vapas gayi naa to sachmain Mar jaoongi main malharji....

Malhar just put his hand on her mouth

Malhar ::" kitni baar Kahan hai tumsein ki Marne varne ki baatein maat kiya karoo main nahi reh paunga abb tumhare Bina ...bass aur tum itni jiddi hona ki tumhari har baat maani hi padti hai naahi jaunga tumein abb kahin bhi chodkar bass...."

Kalyani ::" smilingly": ye hui naa mere malharji Vali baat to agr aap jaana bhi chahenge na tabbhi main aapko kahin nhi jaane doongi ...aur nahi to Kya aapka Kya vese bhi Kya pata chale kisi aur ke saath aap chalein gayien to kaya abhi ISS avni se chutkara Mila hai pata Chala ek aur nayi aagayi naa baba naa mujehin koi risk nahi Lena hai ...Mai apni jagah kisi ko nahi dene Veli samjhein aap ..."

Malhar ::" laughed on her ::" acha baba theek hai Jo karna hai vo Kar Lena abbhi pls aaram karo kitni Der se bolein jaa rahi hoo chup chap lete ho abb chalo Soo jao abb ..."

Malhar made her lay down on bed there and covered her properly with blanket after making her lay down he goes outside to takes her medicines ....

Chapter ends!!!

Edited by Phlo - 3 years ago
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Posted: 3 years ago
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super yaar

i loved the convo

i wanted this in serial par nahi they didnt give anything

u are just superb yaar

the sequence was very emotional

both kept their heart infront of the other '

i am falling short of words to praise u yaar

tum apne sare ffs continue rakho

and forum ke shaan badathe raho

❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️

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Posted: 3 years ago
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Originally posted by: GAYATHRINAYAR

super yaar

i loved the convo

i wanted this in serial par nahi they didnt give anything

u are just superb yaar

the sequence was very emotional

both kept their heart infront of the other '

i am falling short of words to praise u yaar

tum apne sare ffs continue rakho

and forum ke shaan badathe raho

❤️❤️❤️❤️❤️

awww thank you gayu for this beautiful reply ❣️❣️

Surely I will continue all my stories 🤗🤗

Serial ko abb bhool jana hi sahi hai agr unpein rahein to jo humein achein moments milein hai vo bhi enjoy nahi kar payenge unhein jitna kharab karna tha show ko vo kar chukein abb Sahi rahega ki hum apni ffs enjoy karien 😊😊

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Posted: 3 years ago
#60

Vanshu it was beautiful..

Donon ne apne dard baant liye..

I loved their conversation. ❤️❤️❤️❤️


Paanch saalon ko hamare CVs ne mazaak bana diya tha..

Edited by rekha_crm - 3 years ago

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