Kalma ts:- journey(chapter:-4 updated 01-08-2021) - Page 5

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Posted: 4 years ago
#41

Wow.. It was beautiful..

Malhar's breakdown...

Kalyani consoling him..

Malhar telling her the truth of Avni and Ahir..

And finally Malhar got the answers for 5 years too.

Doc se jealous ho gaye Malharji.. 😆


Lovely update Vanshu..


Basically this is what the CVs lacked.. No proper explanations, no proper communication between the couple..


Glad you wrote it so beautifully..

Now they will overcome their pain together..

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: rekha_crm

Wow.. It was beautiful..

Malhar's breakdown...

Kalyani consoling him..

Malhar telling her the truth of Avni and Ahir..

And finally Malhar got the answers for 5 years too.

Doc se jealous ho gaye Malharji.. 😆


Lovely update Vanshu..


Basically this is what the CVs lacked.. No proper explanations, no proper communication between the couple..


Glad you wrote it so beautifully..

Now they will overcome their pain together..

thank you di for this beautiful reply ❣️❣️😊😊

I am glad you liked it

Cvs se humne ummed bohot pehle hi chod di thi ve to mujhein bas kalma ke moment de dein vo hi bohot hai

Malhar cute hai hamara 🐱🐱

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Posted: 4 years ago
#43

So beautiful and contemporary...


KalMa actually talked about their issues and communicated their feelings. It was so realistic. Vanshu madam! Aap screenwriter ban jaiye and agle serial me KalMa ko hi cast karna. Ham forum members aapko bhar bhar ke TRP denge...

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: Autumn09

So beautiful and contemporary...


KalMa actually talked about their issues and communicated their feelings. It was so realistic. Vanshu madam! Aap screenwriter ban jaiye and agle serial me KalMa ko hi cast karna. Ham forum members aapko bhar bhar ke TRP denge...

thank you pragyu 😻😻


Khaash hum saab hote writers pragyu trp sach main iss serial kuch aur hi hoti iss jodi ki chemistry sach main waste kar rahe hai cvs

I hope ye jodi kisi aur serial main vapas aayein

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Posted: 4 years ago
#45

Originally posted by: Phlo004

thank you pragyu 😻😻


Khaash hum saab hote writers pragyu trp sach main iss serial kuch aur hi hoti iss jodi ki chemistry sach main waste kar rahe hai cvs

I hope ye jodi kisi aur serial main vapas aayein

On a serious note, you should try to do screenwriting course part-time. I mean, you have the talent. And you know, the episodics like Yeh Hai Aashiqui, Pyaar Tune Kya Kiya, MTV Webbed used to invite newbie writers to submit stories. You should try and with OTT, there's always need of a writer who can provide fresh stories.

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: Autumn09

On a serious note, you should try to do screenwriting course part-time. I mean, you have the talent. And you know, the episodics like Yeh Hai Aashiqui, Pyaar Tune Kya Kiya, MTV Webbed used to invite newbie writers to submit stories. You should try and with OTT, there's always need of a writer who can provide fresh stories.

aww this is a really big compliment 😘😘🤩🤩 I am just about to faint after reading that

I am not a writer pragya it's just this couple really make a place in my heart so writing something for us

Right now tooo I am so much busy in my work that I have no time for this but ya if something like this happen I will surely try to participate in that

Thank you pragyu again 💗💗❣️❣️

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Aww this was so amazing

Malharji ki jealousy 😂😁

Malharji ki patni hayee this was beautiful😌😍

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: sehreemstory

Aww this was so amazing

Malharji ki jealousy 😂😁

Malharji ki patni hayee this was beautiful😌😍

thank you arwa 🐱😍

I am glad you liked it 💗😊

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Posted: 4 years ago
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This is the type of writing badly needed for our KalMa!!!! Thoroughly enjoyed this FF so far! Keep up the good work !

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Posted: 4 years ago
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Originally posted by: Kalma92

This is the type of writing badly needed for our KalMa!!!! Thoroughly enjoyed this FF so far! Keep up the good work !

thank you riya 😍😍

Pls give your reviews like this I am unable to tag you as in my stories

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