Kalyani is growing up 18 + Open story game - Dashboard - Page 3

Rekha , savira, Destiny , Riya . Koi vi ek Story #Kalyani is growing up start karo likhna. I will continue . Kon si idea le rahe ho Dashboard mein mention kar do.

Guyz keep posting ur ideaz . Our two story writers Rekha and Vermilion are ready .They soon will hit the floor with new open story . Ur feedback will b appreciated . Keep posting . Keep showering love .

Malharji should confront Kalyani why she came behind him....

Malharji should ask her when she don’t trust a person and have no relations than why she is wasting her time... He should say Kalyani you have your family your aai... I have only moksh so see I can’t let you take my son... plz stay away from us it is good for you and us also... my only hope of living is my son so please.... go back your home and start a new life...

I know you love my son and he loves you... tumne hamare liye Bahut kuch kiya hai... par ab nhi ab samay aa gya hai Kalyani tum apni life k bare me socho.... waise bhi ab koi rishta nhi hai hamare beech to plz tum yaha se chali jao...aur ye bachpana chhod do... ye zidd chhod do.... tumhe moksh ki wajah se hamare sath rehne ki koi jarurat nhi hai....

Kalyani says I cant live without pillu than he should say you were ready to leave moksh when sampada asked you... I don’t want that in future any circumstances make you to leave him.... so plz it would be better that moksh get used to live without you....

In whole conversation he don’t mention himself...

And Kalyani gets hurt that he is not saying about himself... and thinks about him only....

Di log please consider my idea for next part please see the idea page

I really want that to happen

But I can't write it creatively

Please see it

It perfectly can be sinked with priyu dis idea above some writer

Koi toh mere wish poora Karo

Giyz ap log bohot umda likh rahe ho . But the problem is instead of making her Mature we are making him cute and sweet. Frankly malhar itna mitha nhi hai . He had a salt and chilly attitude in the show. Dont make him too sweet . Uska anger , hotness kam mat karo . Kalyani ko todha mature kaise banaye jaye hum yaha 9-00 baje discuss kar sakte hai kya? Lockdown hai so no going out ....I am going to terrace for an 1 hr walk . Can we discuss it first in dashboard or idea section before writing it. I hope i have not hurt anyone . Agar kisi ko bura laga ho toh i am very sorry . Pls dont mind . I again am saying u guyz writes amazingly . But we just need to discuss .

Originally posted by: Priyapriyu

Malharji should confront Kalyani why she came behind him....

Malharji should ask her when she don’t trust a person and have no relations than why she is wasting her time... He should say Kalyani you have your family your aai... I have only moksh so see I can’t let you take my son... plz stay away from us it is good for you and us also... my only hope of living is my son so please.... go back your home and start a new life...

I know you love my son and he loves you... tumne hamare liye Bahut kuch kiya hai... par ab nhi ab samay aa gya hai Kalyani tum apni life k bare me socho.... waise bhi ab koi rishta nhi hai hamare beech to plz tum yaha se chali jao...aur ye bachpana chhod do... ye zidd chhod do.... tumhe moksh ki wajah se hamare sath rehne ki koi jarurat nhi hai....

Kalyani says I cant live without pillu than he should say you were ready to leave moksh when sampada asked you... I don’t want that in future any circumstances make you to leave him.... so plz it would be better that moksh get used to live without you....

In whole conversation he don’t mention himself...

And Kalyani gets hurt that he is not saying about himself... and thinks about him only....

Mein part 14 and 15 likh rahi hoon ok !

Originally posted by: pyaar2012

Mein part 14 and 15 likh rahi hoon ok !

ok di

13 and 14 na?

Ha ha sorry 13 and 14 .