Kalyani is growing up 18 + Open story game - Dashboard - Page 2

Originally posted by: GAYATHRINAYAR

Titu di idea given just check and tell me ki correct he ya nahi

I am going to bed in next 10 mts

explanation

bhagu - write how kallu fall into the pool . elaborate the situation

gayu -write elaborately how language became a problem and why it is bold . kuch aisa bol diya galti se jiska meaning sunke hal behal ho jata hai ...

KALMA007 (riya i guess) - tera idea vi accha hai bas situation ko AN KE Bahar rakh do and make it long . ideas ko elaborate karo !!

Originally posted by: pyaar2012

explanation

bhagu - write how kallu fall into the pool . elaborate the situation

gayu -write elaborately how language became a problem and why it is bold . kuch aisa bol diya galti se jiska meaning sunke hal behal ho jata hai ...

elaborated it di

abhi itna hi sujh raha hai

bye

Good night

Originally posted by: Bacillusbadius

elaborated it di

abhi itna hi sujh raha hai

bye

Good night

Originally posted by: pyaar2012

KALMA007 (riya i guess) - tera idea vi accha hai bas situation ko AN KE Bahar rakh do and make it long . ideas ko elaborate karo !!

Simple, Malhar should say that he's giving back AN to AS as he won't be able to live there with Kalma's memories everywhere when she's about to marry someone else, sells his old house where he lived with Sampu (don't like the idea of KalMa romancing in the same place he did it many times with that witch) and rents a place for himself and his son... everyone else from the Rane family remains there because they know about his plan and they do it on the basis of being Kaka's and Anu's family and since the latter's health isn't good, AS doesn't protest and celebrates just having ousted Malhar from her house and,soon, Kalyanis life.

Basically, Kalyani will be at Malhars new home everyday and every chance she has with the excuse to see Pillu and KalMa will end up getting romantic in spite of their decisions... and with no one else in the house,it won't be awkward as it'd be if they were in AN, Malhars old house or Trilok's home.

Sorry for the extra long posts.

Originally posted by: Kalma007

Simple, Malhar should say that he's giving back AN to AS as he won't be able to live there with Kalma's memories everywhere when she's about to marry someone else, sells his old house where he lived with Sampu (don't like the idea of KalMa romancing in the same place he did it many times with that witch) and rents a place for himself and his son... everyone else from the Rane family remains there because they know about his plan and they do it on the basis of being Kaka's and Anu's family and since the latter's health isn't good, AS doesn't protest and celebrates just having ousted Malhar from her house and,soon, Kalyanis life.

Basically, Kalyani will be at Malhars new home everyday and every chance she has with the excuse to see Pillu and KalMa will end up getting romantic in spite of their decisions... and with no one else in the house,it won't be awkward as it'd be if they were in AN, Malhars old house or Trilok's home.

Sorry for the extra long posts.

Where are my story writers .

Originally posted by: Kalma007

Simple, Malhar should say that he's giving back AN to AS as he won't be able to live there with Kalma's memories everywhere when she's about to marry someone else, sells his old house where he lived with Sampu (don't like the idea of KalMa romancing in the same place he did it many times with that witch) and rents a place for himself and his son... everyone else from the Rane family remains there because they know about his plan and they do it on the basis of being Kaka's and Anu's family and since the latter's health isn't good, AS doesn't protest and celebrates just having ousted Malhar from her house and,soon, Kalyanis life.

Basically, Kalyani will be at Malhars new home everyday and every chance she has with the excuse to see Pillu and KalMa will end up getting romantic in spite of their decisions... and with no one else in the house,it won't be awkward as it'd be if they were in AN, Malhars old house or Trilok's home.

Sorry for the extra long posts.

Forgot some things: the whole thing with AS arranging Kallu's marriage and the latter's blind anger over the abortion could be used to explore more in depth her insecurities, possible abandonment issues, unresolved fears of losing a loved one after the loss of both parents, the fact that Kalmas marriage happened originally on a sorta contractual basis of him freeing Anu from jail and her taking care of his son but it took him a whole lot of time to get over Sampu for someone who had been betrayed and he certainly did treat her awfully.

The story should give us more insight into Kalyanis feelings and emotions... even better if we see Malhar fake flirting with a woman his own age,bringing out back all of Kalyanis insecurities about physical intimacy and paving the way for the progression in Kalma's relationship.

Originally posted by: Kalma007

Forgot some things: the whole thing with AS arranging Kallu's marriage and the latter's blind anger over the abortion could be used to explore more in depth her insecurities, possible abandonment issues, unresolved fears of losing a loved one after the loss of both parents, the fact that Kalmas marriage happened originally on a sorta contractual basis of him freeing Anu from jail and her taking care of his son but it took him a whole lot of time to get over Sampu for someone who had been betrayed and he certainly did treat her awfully.

The story should give us more insight into Kalyanis feelings and emotions... even better if we see Malhar fake flirting with a woman his own age,bringing out back all of Kalyanis insecurities about physical intimacy and paving the way for the progression in Kalma's relationship.