KalMa TS: Pyaar dosti hai ( Last part on pg 5)

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Dishi

@TunesOfHeart

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Posted: 6 years ago

#41

Originally posted by: Janakivallav
Beautiful story
loved all updates
sply the ending so beautifully done..
Do write more Stories on KalMa..

Thankyou so much!

Glad you enjoyed!

Yes sure!

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dusk2dawn

@dusk2dawn

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Posted: 6 years ago

#42

OMG..Just one word coming out of my mind beautiful .love it just read and made my morning and day too.. awesome. Beautifully conveyed emotions of both. keep on writing the good stuff for readers like us. We get little greedy to read more stuff like this..
Thank you..

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Dishi

@TunesOfHeart

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Posted: 6 years ago

#43

Originally posted by: dusk2dawn
OMG..Just one word coming out of my mind beautiful .love it just read and made my morning and day too.. awesome. Beautifully conveyed emotions of both. keep on writing the good stuff for readers like us. We get little greedy to read more stuff like this..
Thank you..

That's so sweet of you! Glad that it made your day😳 of course yes😊😊 will come up with another story soon

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KrishnaSourav

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Posted: 6 years ago

#44

Originally posted by: TunesOfHeart

Thankyou so much!
Glad you enjoyed!
Yes sure!

Welcome...

Will wait for ur new stories on KalMa...😊

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@Sakshi_04

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Posted: 6 years ago

#45

Wow...so cute yr...please do write more...

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Dishi

@TunesOfHeart

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Posted: 6 years ago

#46

Originally posted by: porankisrilata
Superb...

Thanku😊

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Dishi

@TunesOfHeart

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Posted: 6 years ago

#47

Originally posted by: Sakshi2104
Wow...so cute yr...please do write more...

Thank you! 😳

Will surely write more😊

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Dishi

@TunesOfHeart

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Posted: 6 years ago

#48

Originally posted by: Janakivallav

Welcome...
Will wait for ur new stories on KalMa... 😊

thats so sweet of you🤗

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asmi

@asmitasb

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Posted: 6 years ago

#49

Firstly let me tell you this was in amazingly written story!!

You updated parts so sooner and were very well bounded and put together. I red all the parts together buy let me go chater wise.

In first part, a movie like story unfolding right from the lil Kalyani and Malhar friendship. Liked how you brought up the rakhi sequence coz in every ik indian household, small children be it family friends be it neighbors they are bound to do this rakhi thing

The second part was all about typical Kalyani and Malhar tu tu mai mai. It was crisp and concise. I liked how Kalyani was so natural...You kept it really simple and that was a pleasant thing for me. No drama no nonsense straight away she expressed her feelings. I think that's how things should be.

And my most fav last part as they say, let go the person of its yours then will surely come back! Malhar was right in his own way and kalyani was not fault too. It was circumstances and some reality that came in between. But I liked the happy ending. That was also kept simple Liked the bond between these two.

Overall it was an awesome story to read. Please do write more n more. Cheers!

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Dishi

@TunesOfHeart

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Posted: 6 years ago

#50

Originally posted by: asmitasb
Firstly let me tell you this was in amazingly written story!!
You updated parts so sooner and were very well bounded and put together. I red all the parts together buy let me go chater wise.

In first part, a movie like story unfolding right from the lil Kalyani and Malhar friendship. Liked how you brought up the rakhi sequence coz in every ik indian household, small children be it family friends be it neighbors they are bound to do this rakhi thing

The second part was all about typical Kalyani and Malhar tu tu mai mai. It was crisp and concise. I liked how Kalyani was so natural...You kept it really simple and that was a pleasant thing for me. No drama no nonsense straight away she expressed her feelings. I think that's how things should be.

And my most fav last part as they say, let go the person of its yours then will surely come back! Malhar was right in his own way and kalyani was not fault too. It was circumstances and some reality that came in between. But I liked the happy ending. That was also kept simple Liked the bond between these two.

Overall it was an awesome story to read. Please do write more n more. Cheers!

I dont really like to keep my readers hanging for long as after a certain point of time they don't feel connected towards the story! So i updated within a short period, that is something I believe!

Secondly, I love your chapter wise review! Glad you enjoyed reading it and somehow I don't believe in over the top dramas so you will never find that kind of thing in my stories! I just love it when the patragonists deal with there own problems single handedly without any outside interventions like a vamp to create more drama and all😆

Thirdly I am currently writing an os, will update by today! Hope you will enjoy that as much as you did this one😊