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Fawn1

@Fawn1

Inactive

Posted: 6 years ago

#11

Oh my word !!!!

Was Saturday such a beautiful word ? Love love loved..

Truth or dare part was amazing ..

He had done so much wrong with her, yet she cared about him. She cared about him and he had fallen for her. She would never love him. She cared for him because she cared about everyone. He had fallen in love, just with her.

That realisation shook him, down to his core.'

Aaah ..Awsome !

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@Sakshi_04

Voyager

Posted: 6 years ago

#12

Omg...awesome maja aa gya yrr thanku...confession was so sweet yr...do write more os yrrr please...

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vinlora

@vinlora

Dazzler

+ 4

Posted: 6 years ago

#13

OMG ...what a piece of writing...just loved it...loved the confession...I was imagining KalMa while reading...👏Thank u dear...it made my Saturday 😉

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Black_Angel

@Black_Angel

Inactive

+ 4

Posted: 6 years ago

#14

Uff that was long... was it 😳 i totally lost the track of the time...this was so beautifully penned from the beginning to end keeping the essence of the show yet adding your own unique touch to it.. loved it ❤️

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divan_craze

@divan_craze

Inactive

Posted: 6 years ago

#15

I am literally tearing up with happiness. I had thought I was already was in love with Kalma but you just made me fall in love with them all over again.

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kayinat

@kayinat

Explorer

Posted: 6 years ago

#16

Superb 👏 need more on weekened specially Saturday 😉

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nikki.171

@nikki.171

Rocker

+ 2

Posted: 6 years ago

#17

Been following some of your work and I must say, you write wonderfully and weave the emotions perfectly into the story.

But this story is certainly my favorite of yours that I have read to date. I love how you have taken the events of the show and presented a completely different side of it. We know of most of the things that happened here - yet it was still equally enthralling. I can imagine these to be the exact emotions of Malhar as the events as they transpired. Such a reflection of his character - while staying true to Kalyani as well. Kalyani's confession outburst, totally plausible given her nature too.

With TV, there is a certain limitation to what can be reflected through the visuals - especially the character's detailed thought process. You totally filled that gap here

Also, I love the truth and dare bit. And the fact that you linked it with such a normal routine thing - Saturday! A journey of the day itself. Oh I love the entire thing!

So looking forward to more of your work. Please know that while I may not be able to always comment - you have an avid reader and fan in me.

- Nikki