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Posted: 16 years ago
#31
well beside Dil ka Rishta these are the true colours of Ekta serials as dying, coma and loss of memory frequently occurs in every serial even most of the other characters also have to pass through. well i loved this track. And by the way at one point when frieda is telling yug about the accident u used Bharti instead of Vrinda well that made me very happy that how we are longing to see Rb and Bharti together so that YuVi can get united.......
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Posted: 16 years ago
#32
i love it i really love it😃 i'm soooo happy that Vrinda has amnesia now we could see some romantic scenes between YuVi thank you Raveena thank you sooo much cant wait for the next update so please update soon ok😃
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Posted: 16 years ago
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To sadaf.12: Thanks so much for commenting! Yes Vrinda losing her memoring is very much like the movie- but yes this story will also take some interesting twists and turns a little different from the movie as well- just for yuvi! So yes it will be like the film, and also a little different fromt the film! haha confusing I know! Keep reading!

To pking: Thanks so much for commenting! Yes very well said and I totally agree with you! Vrinda's love in the show is shown to be weak, which started vanishing very fast. 6 months she promised to RB but she realized RB's "unconditional love" in just 1 month or so (thats why she ditches Yug right after Pooja's marriage). How I hate her character there. And Yug- he stayed true even after 5 years- when he himself has a wife and knows Vrinda loves rb. THIS is love, and I promise I will not show yuvi love weak from Vrinda's side in my fan fic. Here, both yug and vrinda will show what the meaning of eternal love is. Keep reading!

To Neetu2825: Thanks so much for commenting and I am glad you are loving the track! Wow you felt sorry for Bharti?! Actually that's a little point I was trying to get at. I am trying to make Bharti's character appear a little better here so maybe we would not despise her so much for lectures she gave Yug earlier.
Yes I had to make Vrinda forget them (I am happy as well she forgot DB and all the other family as they truly did not care for her happiness to get her married to RB in the first place). As for Yug...nice idea yaar I am still thinking what to do along those lines but of course I will not make her completely forget Yug. Love should stay true. Well Keep reading for more twists and turns!

To sweetouch_98: Thanks so much for commenting and totally right! Dil Ka Rishta is mixed with Ekta's style here because we all know how much she likes death, coma and memory loss to create confusions. Yes I am trying to improve the character of Bharti a bit because they ruined her in the show and of course working for yuvi- there are more friendly twists for our couple yug-vrinda! Keep reading!

To Binky: Thanks so much for commenting! I am glad you love the story- yes I can promise you some romantic yuvi scenes here, but this time they will be shown with a twist (a nice twist), but of course I can't reveal it yet! haha! Keep reading!

TO EVERYONE!: Thanks all for your lovely comments! I can't tell you how much I enjoyed reading them and how happy I am to know you all are enjoying the story! I will be working on the next scenes today and will try to get the next update by tonight or tomorrow as I am also a little busy today. Thanks again everyone!
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Posted: 16 years ago
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wow hun, i finally got the time, and i just read all the parts together now. and i must say, WOT A TREAT !!!!1
you are a sheer genious. you truely are.
i have fallen in love with this track, coz i can actually imagine it happening in a drama. i can visialise yug and vrinda being like this in the serial.
i love the way you have kept vrinda true. although she chose rb, her heart still belongs to yug !.
and thank goodness rb is out of the pictuire now, god knows when that will happen in the show. and as for bharti, well yes, i too feel sorry for her (just a bit) but she is keeping to her place, and that is of a secretary.
this is an awsome plot hun. and i am sooo happy vrinda has forgotton all her family. i bet she has forgotton everyone exept yug ! that would be great !
all im thinking now, is how will be bharti be removed from this equation now. but i know this track is ion safe hands.
so hun, another FF i have truely fallen in love with. you know for the first 10 minutes after i completed reading all of it, i was actually speechless. i was like what can i write that will show her how fantastic this is. when i read the first part, i really didnt expect this to happen.
i know people say this when comenting in FF's, but i really do wish, the creatives had chosen this storyline for the show, it would have been superb !
you have given true meaning to the title. this is "sacha pyar"
plz do update soon, coz it is absolutly amazing, and im dying to read the next part.
❤️🤗
Edited by shab83 - 16 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Originally posted by: shab83

wow hun, i finally got the time, and i just read all the parts together now. and i must say, WOT A TREAT !!!!1

you are a sheer genious. you truely are.
i have fallen in love with this track, coz i can actually imagine it happening in a drama. i can visialise yug and vrinda being like this in the serial.
i love the way you have kept vrinda true. although she chose rb, her heart still belongs to yug !.
and thank goodness rb is out of the pictuire now, god knows when that will happen in the show. and as for bharti, well yes, i too feel sorry for her (just a bit) but she is keeping to her place, and that is of a secretary.
this is an awsome plot hun. and i am sooo happy vrinda has forgotton all her family. i bet she has forgotton everyone exept yug ! that would be great !
all im thinking now, is how will be bharti be removed from this equation now. but i know this track is ion safe hands.
so hun, another FF i have truely fallen in love with. you know for the first 10 minutes after i completed reading all of it, i was actually speechless. i was like what can i write that will show her how fantastic this is. when i read the first part, i really didnt expect this to happen.
i know people say this when comenting in FF's, but i really do wish, the creatives had chosen this storyline for the show, it would have been superb !
you have given true meaning to the title. this is "sacha pyar"
plz do update soon, coz it is absolutly amazing, and im dying to read the next part.
❤️🤗



Wow Wow First of all THANKS SO MUCH for the lovely long comment! I am so glad you like my FF.

haha and I am not a genius- it's just that despite all the heart breaking tracks this show has given us, I thought they were going to take some positive turn with the leap- so much money has been invested. I was not able to digest how after the leap the show got worse with rb-vrinda's yuck 🤢 romantic scenes (the only good thing was yug). what was killing me most of all was the joke they made of yuvi's lovestory like nothing had been special between the two. I figured out despite all the ruins the creatives have done to the show till the leap, the story line can be improved by following this track.
thats just what got me writing.

yes I had to majorly bring back the good character of Vrinda as the way they have shown her now she seems like a heartless woman- always scolding yug.

yes first of all I had to get rb out otherwise vrinda's character would never have been able to get away from the marriage. as for bharti...there's till time as we know yug is not going to be fooled by her lectures. I am working to improve her character a bit as well and all I can say now there will be other twists with her 😊 but don't worry- i will not let any harm murder yuvi's lovestory again like ekta did. that I can promise! 😊

yes I am happy by making vrinda forget her family because truly they were very heartless to force her into marriage like that- especially DB! yes don't worry true love doesn't vanish away from memory loss. there are going to be some friendly twists and turns for yuvi lovers like me! 😊

Yes I am still working on the next part (actually going a bit busy these days) but I will try to put up the next part as soon as I can. Thanks again for taking the time to read and comment Shab! I am really happy you like it and keep reading for more exciting turns!

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Posted: 16 years ago
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Hi All!
First of all so sorry for the late update! I have given a long one to make up for my delay! I hope you like it and leave comments! Thanks again for your lovely comments last time! I loved reading them! Enjoy!

Scene 12 (continued)

Teji's hands start to shiver. What was happening?!

Teji: Vrinda yeh tu kaise baat kar rahi hai? I am your brother Vrinda.

Vrinda: (getting scared) No, I- you're my brother? No I don't remember anything, please go away!

Teji still cannot believe it and starts telling Vrinda about how they grew up together, however, she cannot concentrate. Vrinda starts panicking, seeing so many people around her, and Yug realizing her condition is getting out of control, runs for the doctor. A minute later the doctor steps in with a nurse and tells everyone to go out while they give Vrinda and injection. Everyone is in total shock by the sudden turn of events and slowly walk out the door while Frieda takes care of Teji.

Frieda: Teji get control of yourself, everything will be ok.

Teji: (crying) How can it be when my own sister refuses to recognize me!

Yug seeing Teji's tears feels even more guilty. It's all his fault! Why did he have to drive drunk that night! Suddenly the doctor steps outside, full of worry.

Doctor: I have given the patient a sleeping injection so she will be calm when she wakes up again. It seems as if Vrinda has suffered from memory loss. During the accident, Vrinda got her forehead hit by a heavy metal object and that shock has ruptured some nerves in her brain. Unfortunately the rupture of those nerves have taken back her memories. She no longer remembers anything.

Teji: But doctor how can this be possible? Will Vrinda never remember us again? We did talk to her during coma.

Doctor: Nothing is certain in coma my friend. When you were speaking to her she might have been sleeping. It is very difficult to analyze a person's brain movements during coma. Concerning her memory loss, some patients do remember their life in a few months or years time, while some patients never get those memories in their life time. It's uncertain. You can let her know a little bit by gently telling Vrinda her name and explaining a little about her immediate family members. But do remember, she has suffered a deadly accident and her brain is already weak so don't tell her something which may give her shock. In this delicate situation a simple shock can even be fatal.

With that the doctor left, leaving everyone speechless. Teji turns his angry look to Yug. As soon as he heard from the police Yug maybe responsible for the accident, he felt a big hatred towards the guy.

Teji: Kyun Yug are you happy now? First Rajbeer jeeja jee's death and now Vrinda! My poor sister doesn't even know her own name and it's just because of you!

Yug lowered his head down while Frieda tried to control Teji. Before anyone could say another word, DB and VA's family come running towards the corridor. Teji runs to DB, crying heavily.

DB: Kya hua Teji? How are Rajbeer and Vrinda? Also where is Rajbeer's family? I thought they lived closer to Lucknow so they would get here faster.

VA: Tu bolta kyun nahi hai Teji?! Where are the two?

Teji: (crying) DB, Rajbeer's jee jaa ji's family is crying over his dead body in that room, and over here Vrinda has forgotten everything.

All the families are stunned. DB and VA are left standing on their tracks. DB holds his heart in pain, and VA quickly makes him sit down. Parminder starts panicking.

Parminder: What bakwaas are you saying Teji?! Are you saying my daughter has become a widow?! How can damaadgee die like this! And what she has forgotten everything? Are you even in your senses Teji.

Radhika and Kuldeep try to calm down Parminder, crying heavily themselves, however, the mother holds not force against her emotions.

VA: Yug please clearly tell what happened.

Yug: (controlling himself from tears) Daadu in the accident Rajbeer lost is life and Vrinda her memory. Even though Vrinda is alive, she has forgotten everything- even her name.

Parminder: (falls down to the ground in tears) My daughter- my poor daughter. I have always given her pain no matter what. I have never held her to my heart in years and today when I want to comfort her, she does not even remember me! How could she!

VA and his family try to comfort DB and his family while Teji and Frieda go sit by the bench. None of them are being able to handle the big mishap. Bharti cries seeing Yug in such pain but she knows she has no right to go comfort her own husband. Meanwhile Bindiya sees the heavy bandage on her son's forehead and runs over to him.

Bindiya: Yug beta tujhe kyaa hua? What is this bandage and all? Did you have an accident?

Suddenly everyone looks over to Yug and realize he has also been hurt.

VA: My Yug I am sorry I forgot to notice how hurt you are. Kaise hua yeh sab beta?

Teji gets up angrily to speak up how Yug got hurt in the accident with Rajbeer's car, but Bharti interrupts him.

Bharti: Um..actually Yug was driving a little fast last night to be on time for the meeting. Suddenly his car got a little out of control from the speed and tumbled in a forest.

VA: (crying angrily) Yug how many times have I told you to not put your life at risk for work. No office, no money, no power or reputation is greater than you my son. See, just a little carelessness has gotten you such pain. And this pain is hurting me.

Bharti tries to handle the situation by saying Yug is much better now. In the meanwhile Parminder and DB are still crying heavily. Just then the doctor enters.

Doctor: (to Yug) Are these all of Vrinda's family?

Yug: Actually doctor half of them are my family and other half are Vrinda's.

Doctor: I see. (seeing how much Parminder and DB are crying). Please do not worry yourself like this. I know your Vrinda has lost her memory but at least she has a life to get all those memories back again. I have already told Mr. Yug and Mr. Teji that after Vrinda is awake, you can explain to her about her immediate family a little, but please don't' tell her anything which will bring pain and shock.

The doctor leaves to tend to other patients while DB tried to control himself.

DB: I know I am weak myself, but I please want all of you to be strong. Our Vrinda will be ok in no time. Doctor did say we can let her know of our relations to her after she is awake. Slowly she will remember everything. But for now I have a request from all of you.

Kushal: What is it DB?

DB: I want no one to remind Vrinda of Rajbeer and her marriage. Doctor said anything of pain or shock is not healthy for her and I can't bear to lose her forever.

Parminder: But DB, Rajbeer is her husband and she'

DB: (interrupting her) I am not saying we will keep Vrinda ignorant of this news for all her life time. All I am saying is until she gets better, no one will mention anything about Rajbeer or marriage. Please.

With that DB takes a quick look out the window at Vrinda, who is sleeping peacefully.

DB: While Vrinda is sleeping, let's go meet Rajbeer's family and try to comfort them in such a time. We have only lost Vrinda's memories, but they have lost their son in total.

Teji, please take us to Rajbeer's room.

With that, the families take a last glance at Vrinda from the doorway before they head over to Rajbeer's room. Teji quickly goes up to Yug.

Teji: Yug I am quiet right now because everyone is in shock. But don't think of this as my weakness. After things get in a little control, I will tell everyone you are the reason for what we are facing today! You!

Before Yug could say anything, Teji leaves in tears to show the family Rajbeer's room. Bharti realizes this is not the time to bother Yug, so she leaves with Bindiya to see Rajbeer. Yug, alone in the corridor, next to Vrinda's room, is left clueless. He wants to hit his hands- those hands which got out of control on the car and caused this accident. He wants choke his throat- that throat which had drunk so much alcohol last night and made him lose sense. But most of all he wants to curse and hit his fate, which has never allowed him to give Vrinda happiness after her marriage. He really did spoil the girl's life. She was never interested in him in the first place, but Yug forcefully entered her house to stop Gitika's marriage, and slowly began to force himself in her heart. Despite all the enmity between the villages, Yug forced Vrinda to believe in love. If Yug had controlled his heart and never gone to Vrinda in the first place, none of this would have happened. Yug decides that now is the time to make the changes. He will leave Vrinda's life forever. He will go so far, that his fate will not ruin the life of his loved one any further. Yug decides to leave for London that very night. Even though the police suspects him as the cause of the accident, being a big businessman, he will be able to get away by paying them big money and promising never to return to India again. But before he leaves, he must say sorry to Vrinda. Hesitantly, he takes a few steps towards her room.

Scene 13 (Vrinda's room)

While sleeping, Vrinda can only conjure one image in her mind. An image of a person, who she thought of as her angel. "Mein tumhara wishvaash nahi tootne doongaa. Agar mein tumhare liye Hindi seekh sakta hoon, to tume mere liye English nahi seekh sakti? Vrinda yeh dil tumhara ho chukka hai. Kyaa maine yehi galti kee- tumhe haasaane kee koshish? Vrinda tumhe meri jaan ki parwa hai, aur mujhe meri zindagi kee- jo tum ho."

Yug walks over to the side of her bed, and sees her sleeping peacefully. His heart melts when he sees that beautiful and serene face- he gets that passion back again, but this time controls himself tightly.

Yug: (crying and leaning over to Vrinda) Vrinda I am sorry.- for everything. Yes, I am sorry for making your life so miserable. I am sorry for causing you pain. From now on Vrinda I will never interfere into you life again- in fact my presence will not be there to interfere. Yes Vrinda I am leaving to London forever; I will pay the price for my mistake. I will never step in the way of your happiness.

With that, Yug takes the last look at his Vrinda and begins to leave. As soon as he starts to walk away from the bed, Vrinda gets up, eyes closed, and wraps her arms around his waist.

Vrinda: Please never leave me Yug'please never leave me.


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Posted: 16 years ago
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YES YES YES!!!!😃

I'm sooooooooooooooooooo glad Vrinda remembered Yug! I wanted that...I'm glad u fulfilled my wish😊

For a minute there I was worried that Yug going to leave for London😔, but so glad you turned it around.👍🏼 Now we can watch while Vrinda falls in love with him all over again.😊 How I wish the actual show was heading in the direction that your FF is taking...great update.
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Posted: 16 years ago
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Good... atleast she remembers Yug... thats great she can fall in love with him again.. hope Teji's anger cools down...! plz update soon... cant wait...

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Posted: 16 years ago
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I loved it hun i really did it was awesome specially all the old memoerise that Vrinda remembered about Yug i loved that part everything that Yug said was too good yaar i miss those day in the show those were the days
Vrinda telling Yug not to leave her was gr8 just love thet fact that Vrinda said it 😃
please hun update soon cant wait to read the next part😃
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Posted: 16 years ago
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mashaAllah.
outstanding. if this was a real drama, you would be winning awards.
and ur TRPS would be sky high.
absolutly great hun. thankyou for making vrinda reme4ber yug.
now hopefully both families will have to tread on eggshells around vrinda, and have to play along that yug is her love.
im loving this hun, correction, i am in love with this.
big big 🤗 fromme to u hun. thankyou for writing this.

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