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Posted: 7 years ago
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Hey thanks for the note, I love it no issues if no masa shiv and Suman. I don't remember them much in your other stories too 😆 hahahaha just kidding. Adi is good that's nice he is having wife interesting. Actually the pic I got in my when I read he sends gifts to her family it was no where connected tonrathi family I thought some moderately doing big village family. So it's going to be Uma Kanak as we always wants. Good she is innocent for short time even I don't like innocent village girl rich city boy plot I'm allergic to those types 😆


I'm waiting for the updates of other stories too.
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Posted: 7 years ago
#12
Hai maya
Beautiful dear
I loved it

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Thanks Rehana!
Although Uma and Aditya are going to a party the day after their mom died?
And Aditya doesn't live with Uma? Curious to know if Aditya is good or evil here. And who is his wife?
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Posted: 7 years ago
#14

Originally posted by: Iceblue

Thanks Rehana!

Although Uma and Aditya are going to a party the day after their mom died?
And Aditya doesn't live with Uma? Curious to know if Aditya is good or evil here. And who is his wife?

Adi is good.kanak will be fully dressed up in saree my doubt is weather they go to party or not 😉
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Part 3-
~Strength grows in those moments you think you cant carry on, but you do~

Kanak looked over at Uma in the car, they had been parked for about ten minutes, yet he had made no effort to exit the car. "Uma, are you okay"
He looked over to her and nodded "Got to do this dont I" he laughed sadly
Kanak rested her hand upon his "No, you dont, not if you dont want to, you dont have to rush straight back into work and all that comes with it, your mother passed away, they will understand"

Uma shook his head "The people I work with arent like that, if I dont come back, if I dont attend this party I will lose a deal and my whole job will fail"
Kanak sighed "Okay, if thats what you want"
Uma got out of the car and Kanak followed suit
A tall woman stood turned away from them, as they stepped foot on the gravel the woman turned around
"Kanak " she squealed, hugging her

She stood back clearing her throat and nodded at Uma
"You look beautiful, its so good to see you" muttered Palomi
Aditya walked out and put an arm around Palomi's waist, "there's my beautiful wife"
He leaned down, kissing her cheek and she blushed
Kanak looked over at Uma, she couldnt help but hope that one day they would be just like that; happy and in love.

Uma looked in the building and excused himself
Palomi rolled her eyes and nudged Kanak
"Thats Meera Mitali"
"Whos that" Kanak asked, not missing how Meera leaned just that bit closer to Uma
"A business partner, she wants Uma"
"Palomi" Aditya admonished
"What, she needs to know, she needs to catch his eye if she wants this marriage to work"
Aditya huffed "Shes fine as she is"
Palomi nodded "Of course, shes great but she needs Uma to realise that and if he doesnt then I will" she went to grab her sandal then stopped
Laughing awkwardly she put her hands together in apology

"Dont worry I wont hurt my jeth ji"
Aditya shook his head and excused himself to speak to a client
"Kanak, he is your husband, if youre uncomfortable with what he is doing, youre fully within your rights to say so"
Kanak shrugged uncomfortably
"He doesn't really see me as a wife, he only brought me back because of saasuma"
Palomi scowled then shook her head "I have a plan, do you still sing"

"Sometimes but"
Palomi clapped her hands "Then, you must come to my academy, I bet you would do great, im looking for new musician's, anyway, we need you to find a purpose outside of Uma"
Kanak shook her head "I couldnt"
"Why not" Palomi asked, confused
"Because im not here for that"
"Then what are you here for, him"? "Because as you can clearly see he doesnt care for you right now"

Kanak huffed, stopping the waiter, she grabbed the glass on it and downed it making Palomi's eyes pop open
"Now thats what im talking about"
Passing the glass to Palomi she wandered over to Uma
"Excuse me, I need to get my husband back"
Aditya raised a brow at Palomi who shrugged
Kanak rested her hand on Uma's shoulder
He turned back slowly and excused himself

"Kanak, is everything"
She put a finger on his lips and his eyes widened
"Kanak, are you drunk"
Kanak tugged at his tie and pulled him to the middle of the dance floor
Uma looked down at Kanak's hand on his tie "What are you doing" he spoke, his teeth gritted
Kanak turned around and rested her back against his chest and wrapped his arms around her waist
"Dancing with you"
Uma went to pull away but Kanak turned to face him, wrapping her arms around his neck

Pouting "Sway with me" she whined
Uma heaved a heavy sigh, she was merely a distracting presence in his life, but he couldnt surpass how good it was to have her so close
He wasnt sure what he was doing when he dipped her, then brought her back up and span her around, swaying with her to the music
His fingers felt hot on her neck as he swiped her hair away and pressed a kiss to her shoulder making shivers run up and down her spine

Palomi whistled loudly and Aditya smiled at Uma and Kanak, happy his brother was finally getting close to Kanak
Uma stroked his fingers down her arms and held her hands
Lifting her up slowly he span them both around then put her down and turned her around, his voice husky as he whispered "Lets go home"
Kanak's cheeks flushed as she nodded
She peered over his shoulder and stuck her tounge out at Meera who glared back at her

Kanak sat in the car next to Uma, she winked at him and he chuckled
"Remind me to let you drink again"
Kanak blushed under his intense gaze and shook her head
Pinching her chin he made her look up "Still nervous" he asked and she nodded
"You werent nervous in there"
Kanak frowned when she recalled Meera
"I dont like Meera having her hands all over what is mine"
Uma tilted his head "What is yours"?
Kanak nodded "Yes, she had her hands all over you, like this"

In her drunken state, she leaned closer, rubbing her hands over his chest, then lifted her hand and rested it on his cheek
"Then she got really close, like this"
She leaned closer, until her face was directly infront of his
"Im yours, am I" Uma asked, he had no idea why he was going along with this, but the sense of belonging he felt with Kanak filled him with a strange sensation of comfort
She looked astonished "Of course, you are mine and I am yours"

Kanak pulled back and sighed loudly "But am I your one and only"
"What does that mean"
"Like am I the only one that is yours, or do you have other women"
Uma shook his head "Youre my one and only"
The smile that took over Kanak's face took Uma's breath away
Uma had to look away and start the car to regain some focus again


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Posted: 7 years ago
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Part 4-
~You can tell a lot about a woman by her hands, for instance if they're around your throat she is probably slightly upset~

"Kanak, please, get out of the car" Uma begged for the fifth time
Kanak shook her head and looked away
Uma leant in and picked her up, throwing her over his shoulder
"Ow, you hit my head" she shouted, thumping his back
"Oi, you over there help me, hes kidnapping me"
Uma walked in faster, slamming the door he put her down and Kanak tried to talk

Uma put his hand over her mouth
"Not another word" he ordered
Kanak smiled, poking her tounge out she licked his hand and he moved it away quickly, wiping it on his trousers
She giggled as he looked back over and then stopped as his gaze hardened
"Im sorry, im sorry" she said grabbing her ears
Then scrunching up her nose she let go
"Did you know you cant feel your ears unless you hold them" she looked so proud of herself and Uma almost wanted to laugh but didnt

"Go to your room now"
Kanak crossed her arms, looking more like a stern teacher ready to berate him
"You cant tell me what to do, you're not my boss"
"No, but I am your husband "
Kanak rested a hand on her hip and pointed her index finger toward him, shaking it "Youre only my husband for convenience isnt that what you said, only when we are outdoors not in here"
Uma frowned as her eyes pooled with tears
"Sometimes youre really mean, you forget that I left all I know for you"

"Im sorry, I'm an idiot sometimes" he said, wiping away her tears with the pad of his thumb
"Its okay, ill forgive you"
She smiled and walked over to Uma's room
"Cant I stay with you tonight"
"Why cant you sleep in your own room" he asked
"I can, but ill forgive you if you let me sleep with you"
Uma nodded and waited for Kanak to go and change

Uma looked up when he heard a bang
"Are you okay" he asked, banging on the door
"Yeah I just may have accidentaly broke something"
Uma rolled his eyes as she pulled open the door and then jumped on his bed
"Its soft"
She waited for Uma to change in the bathroom then patted the space next to her
"No, its okay ill sleep on the sofa"
Kanak shook her head "That wasnt part of the deal"

Uma sat down next to her and Kanak smiled, she lifted his hand and pushed her hand against his
"You have big hands"
"Maybe you just have small hands" he suggested
Kanak smiled and nodded
Uma's phone buzzed as Meera called
Kanak eyed his phone and wrapped her hands around his throat
"If you pick up, ill kill you" she threatened
Uma raised his hands
"Im not answering dont worry"

Kanak sighed in relief and led back, pulling Uma with her, she snuggled up to his arm and closed her eyes
"Night Uma"
"Night Kanak" he whispered back, he led stiff, not used to being in such an intimate position with someone
Kanak sighed and turned over, her hair fell onto her face
Uma lifted his hand and moved it away slowly
Then he relaxed and closed his eyes

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Kanak woke up, her head hurt, she sat up slowly and the nights happenings returned to her
With a pained groan she stood up and grabbed her phone
'Call me when you wake up'
Kanak sighed and called Palomi after getting dressed and cleaning her teeth
"Hello Palomi"
"Girl" she squealed and Kanak sighed
"Please, my head is spinning"
"You were great last night, bet you got my jeth ji wrapped around your little finger"

Kanak rested her head in her hands "I am so embarassed, I think he went to work so its okay for now, he is going to hate me"
"He wont, youve got his attention, im telling you he enjoyed last night just as much as you, if not more"
Kanak heard the door open and stilled "I gotta go, I think hes home bye"
Kanak stood up as Uma walked in the room

"Hows your head"
Kanak looked down "Yeah its okay, sorry about last night"
When Kanak heard no reply she looked up to see Uma looking at her profoundly
"Kanak, do you remember what happened last night"
"Uh yeah"
Uma shook his head "And youre apologising"
Kanak frowned "Well I embarassed you at a work party"

Uma stood closer and rested his hands on her shoulders
"Last night we" he waited for her to get it and her eyes widened
"Youre lying"
Uma shook his head
She gasped and stepped back
"Oh I, I" she looked down then looked back up
"Im so sorry"
Uma laughed "Im pulling your leg, dont look so disgusted, it hurts my ego"

Kanak stammered then blinked fast
"Oh, okay" she wondered why he was so cheerful
"Why are you so cheerful"
Uma smiled "Youre great company Kanak, you really cheered me up"
"Oh, thats great"
Kanak couldnt believe Palomi was right, maybe she should listen to her more often, she had of course managed to charm Aditya who was formerly just like Uma
She wanted to test her theory and had the perfect plan

Hello! Sorry this is super duper late, I have had some personal issues so havent been able to update!
Thanks for baring with me, also The Jewel Of The Black Sea has been updated!

Also yes Meera is in this, but its just because I want Uma to shut her down and pick Kanak
Because the show isnt making me happy right now
Anyway, love and miss you all!
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: TSMSPfan

Hey thanks for the note, I love it no issues if no masa shiv and Suman. I don't remember them much in your other stories too 😆 hahahaha just kidding. Adi is good that's nice he is having wife interesting. Actually the pic I got in my when I read he sends gifts to her family it was no where connected tonrathi family I thought some moderately doing big village family. So it's going to be Uma Kanak as we always wants. Good she is innocent for short time even I don't like innocent village girl rich city boy plot I'm allergic to those types 😆


I'm waiting for the updates of other stories too.

Hello lovely, thats true, they are not!
Yeah I didnt really think they suited either!
Yes, finally!
Oh me neither, drives me crazy!
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: Geethanatarajan

Hai maya

Beautiful dear
I loved it

Hi Geetha, thank you so much!
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: Iceblue

Thanks Rehana!

Although Uma and Aditya are going to a party the day after their mom died?
And Aditya doesn't live with Uma? Curious to know if Aditya is good or evil here. And who is his wife?

No problem!
Yes, work is everything to Uma! Its been more like 2-3 days although I didnt make that clear, no, he lives with his wife! Its all revealed in the next chapter
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Posted: 7 years ago
#20
Thank you lovely!

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