Ff1. - Kanak is pregnant - Page 2

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Posted: 7 years ago
#11
Hi all..
Posting the continuation of yesterday's ff:
Scn4:
Bhabho says jamaisa this time I won't allow you to go like this..you both have to stay back for few days..Uma says bhabho I can't stay as I have organised a medical camp in nearby village and have to go.. But he assures that he won't ask kanak to come with him, and asks kanak to stayback.. Kanak says no maasa will be alone there, he says suman will take care she's a big girl now, you don't worry about it.. Kanak gets thinking, rani says why are you thinking much Uma sa has said he will manage, please stay back atleast till my godbharai function which will happen after 4 days.. Kanak agrees..Saras says dadusa I know you have medical camp but you can wait for today atleast and go tomorrow morning, she says please dadusa its rakhi and don't make your sister sad today..Uma agrees to stay back..everyone get happy..
Scn5:
Its night. Payal comes to ved and says today bhabho was so happy after hearing kanak is pregnant..even rani is pregnant says we also have to make bhabho happy..But you are always busy in duty, ved laughs and says you mean you want a baby just to make bhabho happy, payal says you are not understanding I wanted to be first afterall we were married before kanak and Umasaa got married..ved gets irritated and says payal to stop and says life is not a race to come first, we will have our share of happiess when time comes but stop this comparison with other's..
Scn 6:
Saras comes to her room..she tells vansh that she just spoke to maasa, she was so happy, afterall it will be the first baby in our house, even she is excited she will become bua..vansh says how come I will be mama and kid will call you mami..Saras says not at all you will be fufaji as I m sister to my dadusa first.. He says I m also brother to my sister first..saras says still bua is final vansh says no mami is final..they continue arguing..
Scn 7:
Kanak is reading a book in her room..Uma comes with glass containing medicine and asks kanak to drink it, and says its for pregnancy..she drinks a sip but does not like the taste of the medicine..she starts drama that she's not feeling good, she will vomit and acts as running towards washroom..Uma stops her and says this medicine is specially to deal with this kind of sickness in pregnant women, you won't vomit after drinking this so stop acting and drink this..kanak thinks her idea didn't work..Uma makes her sit, she pushes uma and starts running around the bed..Uma tries to stop her and asks kanak not to run in this condition..she says I won't drink this..he tells kanak to stop and says you have to drink this, and gives his promise..kanak stops and says what's the need to give kasam for such a small thing now she will have to drink this bitter medicine and makes faces..Uma laughs and adds few drops of honey in it and asks kanak to drink it now..kanak drinks..Uma sits beside her, puts arms around her and explains that now she has to take care of herself and their child and take all medicines regularly..he says he himself will prepare it for her..kanak looks at him and says I know that I can't get rid of my strict vaidji and laughs..Uma also smiles and hugs kanak..
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Posted: 7 years ago
#12
Welcomed to the forum krutika🤗
Read both the parts, awesome FF
Loved every colours kanum happiness, Rani godhbarai news n ved handling payal.Saransh Mami n Bua argument was cute
Waiting for the next update
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Posted: 7 years ago
#13
Welcome to our forum krutika...
Lovely ff 🤗
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Posted: 7 years ago
#14
Thank you Krutika
U brought only smiles n smiles from line 1..,

Plz continue.. N update soon
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Posted: 7 years ago
#15
Wowww wat a happy story and kanak s really funny
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Posted: 7 years ago
#16

Hi Krutikak😊,

Welcome to our forum🤗.

Great ff👏, i like the way you organized your story, you divided it into several scenes, the structure of your ff looks a lot like a play, great idea👏.

I am very happy that Kanak is pregnant, Uma is very attentive to his wife, i'm so happy to see Kanum like that❤️.

The conservation of PaVed and SarAnsh was good⭐️.

Update soon, thank you😃.

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Posted: 7 years ago
#17
Superb part krutika,
Enjoyed reading it,beautifully described the nature & situation of our three pairs👏👏
Thanks for this parts,update soon,eagerly waiting😊
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Posted: 7 years ago
#18
Scn 9:
Suman is in auto and tells the driver to go fast..she thinks I m super late to college, lecture must have started..she reaches and runs towards her class and on the way collides with a boy and both fall down..suman gets irritated and shouts can't you see..the boy says you were running and didn't see properly..suman says all boys are same they come to college only to flirt with girls, I know for sure you did this purposefully..the boy starts saying something but suman says shut up, for you college may be a place for time pass but for me it's a vidyamandir and don't ever try to flirt with me again or else I will complain..suman leaves..the boy starts chanting hanuman chalisa and prays to hanumanji saying this is the reason I don't like girls.. Hanumanji pls help your bhakt, I don't want to see this girl's face again..
Scn 10:
Uma is treating a patient in his medical camp..he tells his wife there is injury, but he will be fine don't worry..he asks her how did he get hurt so badly..she tells it's all bcoz of me, we did love marriage and my family is against..they are trying to kill him, we escaped somehow god helped us reach this camp.. Really if you were not there we don't know what would have happened to my husband..Uma says nothing like that I have just done my duty.. Just then a gang comes in search of the couple in the camp..one of the man sees her and says here she is..they enter in..the lady shouts they are the one who tried to kill my husband, please save me.. Uma stops the gang and says this is my place you can't come in like this, there are patients all around..the gang says we don't care and we will kill this man..Uma fights with them, the villagers also come and fight with the gang..A goon comes and beats Uma from back, he falls down and his head hits a rock, uma starts bleeding and becomes unconscious..Everyone stop and gather around Uma..one of them shouts you people ruthlessly killed our Dr.Umashakar..
...to be continued 😲
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Posted: 7 years ago
#19
Update soon Kruthika! Thanks .
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Posted: 7 years ago
#20
Really very ncy update nxt part soon

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