Ff1. - Kanak is pregnant

This is Krutika, new joinee in this forum.. I always read all coment and posts from here but have never posted anything.. This is my first try, please do read and give feedback..

Scn1:

Its rakshabandhan..kanak and maasa are packing sweets and gifts for her maayka..she smiles reminiscing last year where vansh had come to meet her dressed up as a woman.. Uma comes and says we need to leave asap..saras is waiting for him..kanak says 5 mins and gets up to get ready..she walks 2 steps but then feels dizzy and is about to fall..Uma holds her..Maasa shiv and suman gets tensed and ask Uma to check..Uma checks kanak's pulse and then smiles.. Maasa tensely asks what happened to my bindni, Uma looks at her and smiles..Maasa understand's Uma's expression..she gets happy and hugs kanak..and says you made me the world's happiest woman today, and then hugs Uma.. Kanak shiv and suman look at each other confused.. Kanak says whats happening tell me aslo, I m sick and you both are happy and smiling..Uma and maasa laugh..Maasa says kanak you are still behaving like a child whereas you are going to become mother of a child in few months..Kanak is surprised and stands still.. Maasa shakes her and asks did you understand now, you are pregnant.. Kanak is extremely happy she laughs and cries at the same time and says she is so excited does not know what to say..she is so happy and wonders how did she not know it before.. She hugs maasa.. Entire toshniwal family hugs each other...

Scn 2:

Kanak is getting ready..Uma comes and hugs kanak..he kisses her forehead and thanks her for giving him his life's biggest happiness..kanak says why are you thanking me we should infact thank bholenath for giving blessing us with a child..she says I m seeing such smile in your face after so many days..ever since you got to know maasi's truth you had forgotten how to smile..

Scn 3:

At pushkar, all are eagerly waiting for Uma and kanak.. Saras says only 15 mins is left for muhrat but dadosa is still not here.. Kanak says she's here and enters with Uma..Bhabho scold them is this time to come, you are so late, she says I know kanak would have been the reason for delay..Uma says sorry bhabho but this time it was not kanak but my fault.. Vansh says whatever it was we will speak later and lets get rakhi done first..everyone agree. Kanak ties rakhi to ved and vansh, and saras and payal to Uma.. After rituals everyone are happily chatting and having lunch..Bhabho asks Kanum why they bought so much extra sweets and gifts I feel there is a special reason..Uma says you are right bhabho, reason is very very special and happy one..he looks at kanak and asks her to say as she was so excited about telling it to bhabho while coming and now is silent after reaching here.. Kanak hugs bhabho and tells her that she is pregnant.. All get happy and excited hearing the good news and congratulates kanum.. Bhabho takes them to puja house and gets emotional seeing sandhya and suraj's photo..she smiles and says see suraj sandhya you are going to become grandparents and me pardadi.. She prays God to bless kanak and gives prasad to kanum..

It's a cute sequence of Kanum's life we are waiting for. Thanks for giving it to us in advance. And welcome to our forum 🤗

I loved how you did such a good job of imagery!

Welcome to the forum dear.

Ff was fantastic, uma and kanak blessed with baby.

Waiting for ur beautiful writings

Loved the starting of ff, so pleasant to read👏

waiting eagerly for your next parts...