Slow Flame (16 Parts Complete) 07/01/2018

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Posted: 7 years ago

#21

Loved it maya!! Plz update bigger part...sorry for being demanding!! Since I am used to read your at least 3 parts, daily and now only one...u spoiled us. Thanks a lot for your wonderful writing and I really appreciate it. Sorry if I hurt you.

Wish you a very happy new year,!

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Posted: 7 years ago

#22

Originally posted by: Parmeen
Loved it & happy new year to you too.
Holidays are busy huh!!😊😊

Im so glad you liked it! Thank you! Oh so very very busy

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Posted: 7 years ago

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Originally posted by: Kanum1

Very cute part😊
Thank you maya,happy new year ⭐️

Im so glad you liked it, no problem! Thank you!

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Posted: 7 years ago

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Originally posted by: Geethanatarajan
Hai maya.
Loved it.
Happy new year dear

Hey, im glad you did! Thank you!

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Posted: 7 years ago

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Originally posted by: Mansi_jg
Loved it maya!! Plz update bigger part...sorry for being demanding!! Since I am used to read your at least 3 parts, daily and now only one...u spoiled us. Thanks a lot for your wonderful writing and I really appreciate it. Sorry if I hurt you.
Wish you a very happy new year,!

Thank you! Im so glad you're enjoying it! I will try my very best to! Dont apologise! I really shouldn't be taking this long! Haha, im sorry!

No problem! Thank you for reading, no you havent hurt me at all!

Thank you!

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Asfiya

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Posted: 7 years ago

#26

Hi maya...how are you??
Read all chapters together! This is cute!
Happy New Year and same wishes to you in the coming year! 😊
Update sooon 😛

Edited by _Asfii_ - 7 years ago

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Posted: 7 years ago

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Originally posted by: _Asfii_
Hi maya...how are you??
Read all chapters together! This is cute!
Happy New Year and same wishes to you in the coming year! 😊
Update sooon 😛

Hey, im good thanks and yourself?

Thank you! Im glad you like it, thank you!

I will update later on today!

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Posted: 7 years ago

#28

Part 5-

Kanak arrived at Uma's aryuvedic clinic
"Hello" Kanak's voice rung out makimg Uma jump

Uma shoved papers over what he was working on, leaning on his desk nonchalantly he smiled

Kanak raised her brow "What are you hiding from me Uma"
Uma smiled "You shall have to wait and see"

Kanak jumped "A surprise, for me, oh my god, show me, show me"
Uma laughed, throwing his head back

Kanak looked up at him, Shiv Ji had really done its work on this one
"What did you just say" asked Uma

No way had Kanak just said that out loud
Kanak smiled widely
"What I meant was"

"That you think im hot"
Kanak's jaw dropped
"Full of yourself arent you"

"Well wouldnt you be if you were me"
Kanak nodded without realising
Stopping she put her head in her hands

"So why are you here Kanak "
"Remember i'm proving myself"

Uma smiled "I have just the perfect task"

Any idea what Uma is hiding or what he will ask her to do?

Sorry its late! Updates will be more frequent soon!

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