Me and u part - 39 updated (11th march )

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Hai guys, once again i am back with my nonsense. Actually i have started this story before itself, but i didn't complete it. I hope u will enjoy it.
Part- 1


Uma fills sindoor on kanak's forehead, kanak was under the shock. She cannot realise what is happening to her, the people were throws flower on her. Her legs feeling heavy, uma utters these words, from now onwards we are husband and wife, our relationship will not break. Kanak's ears was not ready to accept these words. Her teary eye looks at him. She shouted from her stomach.
I won't accept this forced marriage, she pushed uma.
She ran away from the mandap, uma's men followed kanak. Kanak runs in the street of ladnoo.
Uma's men running behind her, she searches for the help, but she can't see anything here. Finally, her eye foumd a phonebooth.she tried to call ved, but he is not picking the phone.
Kanak shocked to see uma's men by near to the booth. She hide herself inside the booth.
There is no reply from ved. Kanak comes out of the phonebooth and runs to the bus stop. And gets into the bus. She sits in the bus. Then she saw one of the man from the group, kanak closes the window, kanak was praying to god, to save her from his danger.
Kanak keeps on chanting. Finally the bus moves.kanak gets her breathe back.
Uma's men returns
Uma: where is my wife?
One of the men: sorry umasa, we are failed to bring back ur wife.
Uma: what?
Men: she manage to escape from us.
Uma felt disappointed.maasisa comes there.
Maasisa: i always supported ur decision, but today u displeased me, u married a unknown girl, then next second she disappeared.
Uma: i am sorry maasisa
Maasisa: sorry is not enough
Uma: maasisa...
Maasisa: what i am going say, i don't know, u know that our village people are waiting to see ur wife. I don't know how i am going explain to them.
Uma: don't worry maasisa, i will find out my wife. We are meant for each other. I trust on my shivji.
Kanak was on her way. She placed her head on the window. Her tears were falling on her cheeks.
Finally she hears the word pushkar. She get down from the bus.
Kanak walks through the street. Kanak finally reaches her house. She opens the main door and stepped into the house.
Everyone came to the hall. Kanak breaks, and finally landed on the floor. Everybody is shocked to see kanak in bridal dress..
Everybody keep on asking what happened kanak?
Vansh and ved hugged kanak.
What happened, tell me kanak.
Kanak was frozen. The family tried to talk with kanak. And tried to bring back kanak's sense.
But there is no use. Bhabho comes to kanak and looks at kanak.she sits with her.
Kanak , what happened?
Kanak remains the same. Bhabho shakes her whole body. But she didn't give any reaction. Suddenly bhabho slapped kanak. Kanak comes to her sense. Sees bhabho near to her. Kanak hugged bhabho and buried her in her chest.
Tell me what happened, shouted bhabho.
Kanak finally opens her mouth.
A man married me forcefully., bhabho.
Everybody is shocked

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Posted: 7 years ago
#2
Really cute beginning story.!
I've also been waiting for your Uma and kanak visiting his Nani dadi in village story! I love that one. Anxiously awaiting! Please write soon. Sorry I forget names.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: Iceblue

Really cute beginning story.!

I've also been waiting for your Uma and kanak visiting his Nani dadi in village story! I love that one. Anxiously awaiting! Please write soon. Sorry I forget names.

Hai iceblue.
Thank u so much for lovely comments.
Yesterday i updated, uma and the female patient - 18 part.
Today i will update the next part. Thanks for reading and commenting.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Nice Dr update ur nxt part
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Hi dear,
Here kanak succeed to escape from uma, too good👏
That slap from bhabho was so nice😉
Edited by Bhaana - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: Bhaana

Hi dear,
Here kanak succeed to escape from uma, too good👏
That slap from bhabho was so nice😉

Hai bhaana.
Thank u so much for reading and commenting
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Part -2
Kanak shouts, A man married me forcefully.. Bhabho.
Kanak keeps on crying.
Bhabho : what?
Everybody was shocked by kanak's word.
Ved: what u r saying kanak?
Kanak looks at ved with teary eye.
Vansh : how dares he is... Tell me kanak, who he is.
Kanak keeps on crying.
Bhabho lifts kanak,
Bhabho: tell me kanak, what happened.
Babasa: beta, you went to college, then how you land up in the marriage.
Kanak looks at bhabho, bhabho searching for the answers from kanak's eye.
Tell me kanak, bhabho takes kanak's hand and puts on her head.
Bhabho: now, tell me what happen?
Kanak sees her hand on bhabho's head. Shivers from fear. Kanak opens her mouth.
Kanak : bhabho, i came to know about that our kmb was taken away by someone. Bhabho was shocked
Bhabho : what?
Kanak: yes, bhabho our shop was taken away by someone, so i decided to go to ladnoo to find that man. Save our shop. I know that, shop means lot to u. So i went there.
Then kanak tells all the things to her family..
Kanak : after the marriage, i pushed him and ran away from there.
Kanak buried her head on bhabho's lap and keeps on crying.
Bhabho was speechless.
Bhabho : this is all my fault. How could i so cruel to my child. You did many things to make me happy, but i failed acknowledge that. You went there because of me.
Bhabho lifts kanak's face wipes her tears,
Bhabho: no beta... I am sorry...
Bhabho signals meena, meena comes near to bhabho,
Bhabho : take kanak to her room.
Meena and rani takes kanak to her room. Bhabho looks ved and vansh.
Vansh starts the car, ved seated in the front and bhabho seated in the back. Vikram and babasa follows them by another car.
In ladnoo, uma's house was decorated by flowers and lights.
Maasisa comes to uma, keeps her hand on his shoulder
Maasisa: uma! What u r going to do?
Uma looks at maasisa
Uma: i still have hope. She will come to me. Shivji made us to meet, that easily we won't be seperatad.
Maasisa taps his shoulder.
On the way to ladnoo, vansh drives the car.
Vansh: i won't leave him.
Bhabho: vansh control urself.
Vansh: no bhabho, i won't leave that umashankar.
Bhabho: vansh...
By that time, they reached ladnoo, vansh stopped the car.
Ved gets out of the car and asked for uma's address from the one of the shopkeeper in the ladnoo bazaar. After getting the address ved directs vansh. They reaches uma's house. Uma and maasisa standing near the shivji idol. Both the cars comes parked infront of uma's house. Uma and maasisa looks at the cars. They gets out of the car.Vansh, bhabho and ved comes inside the house. Vansh rushes into house.
Vansh: who is umashankar.



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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: Geethanatarajan

Part -2

Kanak shouts, A man married me forcefully.. Bhabho.
Kanak keeps on crying.
Bhabho : what?
Everybody was shocked by kanak's word.
Ved: what u r saying kanak?
Kanak looks at ved with teary eye.
Vansh : how dares he is... Tell me kanak, who he is.
Kanak keeps on crying.
Bhabho lifts kanak,
Bhabho: tell me kanak, what happened.
Babasa: beta, you went to college, then how you land up in the marriage.
Kanak looks at bhabho, bhabho searching for the answers from kanak's eye.
Tell me kanak, bhabho takes kanak's hand and puts on her head.
Bhabho: now, tell me what happen?
Kanak sees her hand on bhabho's head. Shivers from fear. Kanak opens her mouth.
Kanak : bhabho, i came to know about that our kmb was taken away by someone. Bhabho was shocked
Bhabho : what?
Kanak: yes, bhabho our shop was taken away by someone, so i decided to go to ladnoo to find that man. Save our shop. I know that, shop means lot to u. So i went there.
Then kanak tells all the things to her family..
Kanak : after the marriage, i pushed him and ran away from there.
Kanak buried her head on bhabho's lap and keeps on crying.
Bhabho was speechless.
Bhabho : this is all my fault. How could i so cruel to my child. You did many things to make me happy, but i failed acknowledge that. You went there because of me.
Bhabho lifts kanak's face wipes her tears,
Bhabho: no beta... I am sorry...
Bhabho signals meena, meena comes near to bhabho,
Bhabho : take kanak to her room.
Meena and rani takes kanak to her room. Bhabho looks ved and vansh.
Vansh starts the car, ved seated in the front and bhabho seated in the back. Vikram and babasa follows them by another car.
In ladnoo, uma's house was decorated by flowers and lights.
Maasisa comes to uma, keeps her hand on his shoulder
Maasisa: uma! What u r going to do?
Uma looks at maasisa
Uma: i still have hope. She will come to me. Shivji made us to meet, that easily we won't be seperatad.
Maasisa taps his shoulder.
On the way to ladnoo, vansh drives the car.
Vansh: i won't leave him.
Bhabho: vansh control urself.
Vansh: no bhabho, i won't leave that umashankar.
Bhabho: vansh...
By that time, they reached ladnoo, vansh stopped the car.
Ved gets out of the car and asked for uma's address from the one of the shopkeeper in the ladnoo bazaar. After getting the address ved directs vansh. They reaches uma's house. Uma and maasisa standing near the shivji idol. Both the cars comes parked infront of uma's house. Uma and maasisa looks at the cars. They gets out of the car.Vansh, bhabho and ved comes inside the house. Vansh rushes into house.
Vansh: who is umashankar.



Tell ur comments guys





Gud please continue.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Now this is what would have happened in the real world not what kanak did by sticking around to steal the papers! Well done! So what's next jail time and arrest by Ved for Uma?
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Thanks for the update
So realistic...👍🏼
Now, how will uma convince kanak family
Update soon dear
Edited by Bhaana - 7 years ago

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