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Posted: 7 years ago
#41

Originally posted by: Kanak-123

With every part the story grows more interesting...

Hai kanak.
Thanks for the reading the story.
Thanks for the lovely comments
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: VividDiamond

Amazing story Geetha !! 😊

Read in a go and enjoyed reading it. Thank you !! ⭐️

Hai vivi...
Thanks for reading the story,
thanks for the lovely comments.
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Posted: 7 years ago
#43

Originally posted by: Calypso05

Hi Geetha😊,
Great ff👏, you wrote it nicely⭐️.
"It is for uma, he won't mind the food, when there is more patients. So he will skip his diet. So i am appling extra ghee on the parata, it will give him some energy."❤️ Little attention makes beautiful relationship❤️❤️.
In the show, i hope Suman and Shiv will try to save Kanum's relationship too, finger crossed!
Waiting for the fourth part.
Thank you😃.

Hai calypso..
Thanks for reading the story. I am really happy that you guys are enjoying the story.
Thanks for the comments. Soon i will update the next part.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: Sachgirl2000

Wow Geetha! Awesome dear!! Your plot is more interesting than the actual show..sorry to say this..but you are using the characters more wisely...please comtinue..

Hai sachgirl..
Thanks for so much for the comments.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Hai guys...
Part- 4


Uma still in maasa's room. He carrying kanak in his arms. Kanak was sleeping like a baby in his arms. Maasa looks at him. He gave smile to maasa. Then he leaves the room. He enter into his room. He makes kanak sleep on the bed. Then he goes to another side bed. He moves closer to kanak and make her to sleep on his arms. And he adjust her hair on the forehead.
In the morning kanak knows that she will be in uma's arms, then she release herself from his hold, and goes to the bathroom.
Uma opens his eye he sees kanak applying sindoor on her forehead. Uma smiles, kanak wearing a long skit with sleeveless top, and a shawl. Without looking at uma, kanak moves from there.
In the forenoon, Uma comes out of the clinic, he notice kanak hands over medicine of maasa to suman. And says something to her, uma was not able hear, what they are talking about.
Kanak has a hand bag also with her. Then kanak moves from there. Uma runs towards kanak. Suddenly appears before her.
Kanak: you startled me.
Uma: where you r going?
Kanak reminds silence, she is not looking at him.
Uma: kanak, i am asking you something.
Kanak is not replying.
Uma: kanak, look at me. Tell me where r u going?
Kanak: i have a business.
Uma: don't u know that this house's ladies is not suppose to go out.
Kanak: but, i am not belong to this house.
Uma: kanak! U belong to this house, and most importantly you're my wife.
Kanak: wife!!
Kanak laughs.
Uma: yes, you're my wife. I have all rights.
Kanak: u can easily take away the rights from me and u can easily claims the rights on me
Uma: where u r going?
Kanak: hospital.
Uma: what?
Kanak: mmh..
Uma: hospital, why? What happen? Tell me. R u sick.
Uma touches her forehand , kanak removes his hand.
Kanak: i am not sick,
Uma: then y u r going to the hospital.come with me, i will check u.
Uma holds kanak's hand. Dragged her towards his clinic.
Kanak: uma, leave hand my hand. I am going to the hospital for some other purpose.
Uma looks at her.
Uma and kanak arrives at the hospital.
Uma: so u r here to donate the blood.
Kanak nodded her head.
Uma and kanak goes, kanak informs the nurse that she is here to donate the blood.
Nurse: yes mam, wait here, i will go and get the form for u.
Kanak nodded her head.
Then nurse came back with a form. She sits next to kanak asked about her details.
Nurse: could please, tell me ur name
Kanak : kanak rathi.
Uma looks at kanak.
Nurse: ur age?
Kanak: 20
Nurse: ur father's name.
Uma: why ur asking for the father's name?
Nurse: usually we use to ask for the father's name or the husband's name. Since, She is unmarried, so i asked for the father's name, sir!
Uma: who said, she is unmarried, i am here, her husband, uma shankar.
Nurse looks at kanak, and noticed her mangalsutra inside the shawl.
Nurse: i am sorry sir, i didn't notice her mangalsutra. She looks so young, so i thought she is unmarried.
Kanak: sister, there is no need for sorry and all. U pls carry on.
Nurse: when is the last time u donated ur blood,
Kanak: 7 months ago.
Nurse: in which hospital.
Kanak: sanjeev hospital, kerela.
Uma looks at kanak. Nurse hands over the form to kanak and ask her to sign on the form. Kanak signed the form.
Nurse: wait here, a sister will come and get the blood samples for the testing. Uma and kanak waits there. And Kanak gives the blood samples. After sometimes, a nurse came and ask kanak to come along with her. Uma and kanak followed her. On their way, a wardboy dropped a bottle of solution of the floor. Kanak was about to step on the glass piece, uma calls kanak But, out of nowhere, a doctor came and picked kanak in his arm. Uma was totally shocked. Kanak was under the shock too. Kanak looks at the doctor. The doctor was quite handsome.
Doctor: r u alright?
Kanak nodded her head. Uma was angry. And walk towards the doctor, forcelly picks kanak from his arms.
Uma: r u alright kanak.
Kanak looks at uma. Uma looks at the doctor with a angry face.
Uma: how dare u, touch my wife.
Doctor with a cool voice,
Doctor: i didn't mean to touch ur wife, but she is about to step on the glass pieces. So i saved her.
Uma: but u touched my wife.
Doctor: see, it is a duty of a doctor to save the person's life. I don't see the gender, but i see them as a humans. It is a important duty of a doctor to save the life of person. Whether the person is male or female.
Kanak: sorry doctor, and thank u so much for saving me.
Doctor: that's ok, i understand his love. And he is too possesive also. Have a nice day Mr...
Kanak: uma shankar.
Doctor: have a nice day, Mr. Uma shankar.
Doctor left the place. Kanak donates the blood. Uma looks at kanak.
Uma: when u started to donate the blood.
Kanak looks at him
Kanak: after i turned 18 i started to donate the blood. For me, my blood can save some person's life. My mom always saved the person's life, so i want to help the people in some way. Uma looks at her.


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Mansi_jg thumbnail
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Posted: 7 years ago
#46
Beautiful story Geetha!! Love the possessive uma and adamant kanak. Thanks a lot update soon.
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Posted: 7 years ago
#47
just now read all parts together.superb
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Posted: 7 years ago
#48
Blood donation wow...nice thought...

Ur writing skills are growing day by day ...loved iy
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Hi Geetha😊,
Good chapter👏 you wrote it well⭐️
"Uma: yes, you're my wife. I have all rights.
Kanak: u can easily take away the rights from me and u can easily claims the rights on me"❤️ you are absolutely right👍🏼.
Uma is possesive, he can't help himself😆😆.
"my blood can save some person's life"❤️❤️ you explained well the importance of blood donation👏.
Update soon, thank you.
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Posted: 7 years ago
#50

Originally posted by: Mansi_jg

Beautiful story Geetha!! Love the possessive uma and adamant kanak. Thanks a lot update soon.

Hai mansi,
Thank u so much for the comments

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