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Posted: 7 years ago
#51

Originally posted by: krithi12

just now read all parts together.superb

Hai krithi.
Thank u so much for reading the story.
Thanks for commentings
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Posted: 7 years ago
#52

Originally posted by: Kanak-123

Blood donation wow...nice thought...

Ur writing skills are growing day by day ...loved iy

Hai kanak..
Thank u so much for reading the story, i just want to bring some new ideas btw kanak and uma, so that they can understand themselves better than this.
Thank u so much for the comments.
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Posted: 7 years ago
#53

Originally posted by: Calypso05

Hi Geetha😊,
Good chapter👏 you wrote it well⭐️
"Uma: yes, you're my wife. I have all rights.
Kanak: u can easily take away the rights from me and u can easily claims the rights on me"❤️ you are absolutely right👍🏼.
Uma is possesive, he can't help himself😆😆.
"my blood can save some person's life"❤️❤️ you explained well the importance of blood donation👏.
Update soon, thank you.

Hai calypso...
Thank u so much for reading the story. I want to change some ideas of uma, and make himself to think, that some good quality aslo still alive in the society.
In the next part, i will bring some changes.
Thank u so much for the comments.
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Posted: 7 years ago
#54
Geetha I love your imagination. So cute were the kanum scenes! And donating blood so noble! And I love that Massa is there to appreciate the two!
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: Iceblue

Geetha I love your imagination. So cute were the kanum scenes! And donating blood so noble! And I love that Massa is there to appreciate the two!

Hai iceblue..
Thank u so much for the lovely comments.
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Posted: 7 years ago
#56
Geeta update nxt part ya its sunday today
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Posted: 7 years ago
#57
Sry guys, for late update i was little busy with my work.
Part -5



Uma and kanak were still in the hospital. Kanak was giving the blood. She just closed her eyes, and a pressing ball which was in her hand. Uma was sitting besides to her. Mean time kanak opens her eye and sees uma, they exchange their looks at each other without words.
Uma slowing moves his hand toward kanak's hand, he hold her hand, then kanak looks at uma, but kanak downed her eye and slowly release her hand from his hold.
Uma looks at her, she looks extra sad and pathetic, in the end of her eye a single drop of tears was there.
Then after donating blood, kanak sits in the bed, the nurse hand over a glass of juice to her, uma takes the juice from her hand,
Uma: i will feed u.
Kanak just gave a look, and says no need. And takes it from uma's hand and she drank juice, and gives the empty glass to the nurse.
Nurse : Mrs. Kanak, take care of ur health.
Kanak thanked the nurse and comes out the hospital. Uma and kanak reaches to the car. Kanak was about to open the car door,
But uma opens the door before that and having a smile on his face, kanak just gave a look.
Kanak : thanks.
Kanak sits in the car. Then uma starts the car.
Kanak was silently sitting in the car, uma was looking at kanak again and again, he was waiting for a chance to speak with kanak. But kanak was just sightseeing, ultimately she doesn't want speak with uma, suddenly the car was stopped,
Kanak: what happened?
Uma: i don't know, i have to take a look.
Uma goes to the front of the car, kanak was sitting in the car, uma was trying to the fix the car. Kanak comes out of the car, and sees the surrounding it looks like a inhabitant place. Uma comes to kanak.
Uma: kanak, i think i cannot fix the car, so we have to leave the car here itself.
Kanak: what is the problem?
Uma: i could not able to find out it
Kanak goes to the banner uma follows her, kanak bends and looks
Uma: do u know about the car repairing?
Kanak was not giving any responses and she goes to the back of the car. She opens the trunk and takes the tools box. And comes to the front, uma was simply standing and he cannot able understand what she is doing, kanak places the tools box in the floor and takes sellotape and scissors.
Kanak: r u having any thick cloth in the car.
Uma just blinking at kanak.
Kanak: i am asking you, do u have any thick cloth in the car.
Uma nods his head.
Uma: yes, i will bring it.
Uma goes and brings a cloth. And gives the cloth to kanak.kanak gets the cloth from him.
Uma: kanak, explain me what ur doing,
Kanak bends and places the cloth on the engine, and says we should not fix the car with bare hands because it will be too hot, so we have to wait, untill it reduce, so i asked for the cloth. So that we can cover the parts by this cloth, so it will not hurt us. The car was repair, because of the broken cables. Uma nods his head like a child.
Kanak joins the cable, and takes the cloth and goes to the steering, starts the car, the car was started, uma was shocked, kanak ask uma to close the banner, uma was surprised by kanak's action. Uma comes to kanak,
Uma: i will drive,
Kanak: its okay, i will drive.
Uma: but...
Kanak: don't worry, i have a license.
Uma goes to the passagers's seat and sits with a shock. Kanak looks at uma.
Kanak: pls wear ur seat belt,
Uma was under the shock, he was not responding atall. Kanak moves towards uma and takes the seat belt. Uma and kanak were so close, uma looks at kanak's eye and then she takes her eye away from him and puts the seat belt. Kanak's hair was touching uma, chandan fragrance were pulling him.
Then kanak drives the car, uma's gaze was fixed on kanak. when she changes the gear, she accidently touches his hand, uma looks at the ring in her hand.


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Edited by Geethanatarajan - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
#58

Originally posted by: DivyaBujji

Geeta update nxt part ya its sunday today

Hai divya,
Sry for my late update, i am little busy my work.
Thank u so much for remaining for me.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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No problem Dr really very nice plzzz update nxt part soon 👏
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Part- 6
Kanak driving the car, uma was looking at her. When kanak changes the gear, her hand accidently touches uma's hand, uma looks at the ring in her hand, and remembers the hotel indicent, and smiles, kanak smoothly drives the car.
Uma: kanak...
Kanak didn't turn towards uma but she response " mmm"
Uma: when did u get ur license?
Kanak: 2 years back.
Uma: after u turned 18, u have started many works, right?
Kanak looks at uma for a sec, then focus the road and keeps on driving,
Kanak says to herself, yes, after i turned 18, i wished to do many things, ( aside)
Uma waits for the answer, but kanak didn't give any reply.
Kanak stops the car after seeing red signal, there was a traffic problem, she notice a women traffic police in the middle traffic, and she clears traffic. Kanak sees the traffic police, then remains about sandhya. The way, traffic police clears the traffic, kanak imagines sandhya in the place of the traffic police.
Kanak suddenly utters this word
Kanak: momma.
Uma was shocked to hear that kanak saying momma.
Uma: kanak...kanak.
Kanak was back from her imagine,
Uma: kanak, r u alright?
Kanak looks at uma, and realised ,
Kanak: nothing, i am alright.
Traffic police clears the traffics on the other side and signals the direction of kanak's side. Kanak starts the car and drives, when she pass the traffic police kanak salutes her, uma notice kanak's actions.
On their way kanak keep on smiling, and uma can realise kanak's behaviour.
Uma: r u thinking about ur mother?
Kanak: not like that.
Uma: i know that ur thinking about ur mother. And u also miss her.
Kanak was focusing on the road.
Uma: i know that my words are true, but ur annoyed with me. U don't want me to console u. Right.
Kanak: right, ur annoying person. Don't try console me because i am not that weak.
Uma: yes, i know ur a strong person, but...
Kanak: no need for ur sympathy. I can take care of myself.
Uma: u don't want me to console u?
Kanak: yes, i don't want my heart to be weaker any more.
Uma: i know i was wrong, i didn't trust u, and i gave many pains to u. But...
Kanak stops the car. They reached the house. Kanak removes the seat belt and gets out the car.
Uma says to himself, i am sorry kanak.


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