Flowers of the winter - part 7 updated( 1st dec)

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Posted: 7 years ago
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Hai guys, i just want to write about uma's redemption. I thought of some ideas. I don't want them to seperate but apology in a different way.
It will sounds like a nonsense but i hope u will like this.
Before going to the story please accept my apology.


Maasa says to uma, we faced many problems in our live. I failed to protect my children from the evil. I destroyed ur childhood. I'm sorry uma. Can you forgive me?
Uma hold maasa's hand, no maasa i am sorry. You no need to apologize me. I am sorry maasa being as a son, i am unable to protect my own family. I am sorry maasa. I am sorry.
Maasa hugs uma. He cried like a baby in his mother's lap.
Today i am seeing my old uma. This is all happened because of kanak. She is really an angel who protect my family from the evil.
Uma looks at her, maasa cups his face.
What happened uma?
U know maasa, i misunderstood her all along. I have done many things to her, i hurt her physically and mentally this much. I forced her to the divorce also. I behaved badly with kanak. But still she protect my family. I am not a good husband maasa.
Suman comes out informs maasa and uma, kanak bhabhisa packed her items and she is about to leave.
Uma was shocked to hear that. He sees maasa's face, she reminds silence.
Maasa, that means u already know that kanak is about leave the house.
Maasa reminds silence. Tell me maasa, uma cried.
Maasa nodded her head. Uma was speechless.
Uma, kanak suffered a lot here, its time to let her go.
No maasa i won't. Uma runs into the house.
Kanak hugs shiv.
Kanak says, take care shiv, concentrate on your studies.
I love u bhabhisa.
I love u too shiv
Uma comes there
Kanak! Kanak! Where ur going kanak.
Uma hold her hand, kanak's tears rolled on her cheeks.
I am going to pushkar.
Uma holds her hand again. No! You cannot. Ur my wife, u cannot leave me like this. Kanak.
Kanak cried, i used to be your wife but now, i am not.
Why kanak, why not? Ur my wife, you're my wife. I love you. I love you kanak.
Kanak cried, no, i am not your wife. U already taken the rights from me. Now i am not your wife.
Maasa, suman and shiv sees them, they feel sorry.
Kanak says take care of the family. I have to go.
No, you cannot.
Uma stops kanak, uma hugged her from the back.
Kanak, kanak, i know that i have done many bad things to you. I tortured you, physically and mentally. I was stupid for believing someone. I was a blind, deaf, and dumb, not realising the truth. I am sorry kanak. I am sorry.
Kanak cried, uma turned her face,
Please kanak, please forgive me.
Uma please leave me, i don't want to get hurt anymore. Please let me go.
No i won't leave you. Uma cried.
No i have to go.
How could you leave us like this, this family needs you, u no need to stay here for me. But see maasa, shiv and suman. They needs you. Who will take good take of them.
Kanak sees them and cries, then she runs into her room. Uma smiles and hugs maasa. Shiv and suman smiles.
Maasa says how long ur going to lock her here.
I never let her go. Since i have chance, i will not let this chance slip by. I will make her to stay here forever as my beloved wife.
I want u both to be happy forever said maasa.



Tell ur comments guys.



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Iceblue thumbnail
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Cool! Thanks for writing! I think we are all excited and eagerly awaiting for the evil track to subside and umas redemption.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Hi Geetha😊,
Nice ff👏, i like the title❤️.
A short and convincing arguments👍🏼.
Hurray ! Maasa is cured🥳.
" He cried like a baby in his mother's lap." Uma needs a maternal love❤️.
Uma is too moved😭 and Kanak is very attached to the toshniwals❤️, she can't stay away from them.
Good redemption track👏.
Thank you, keep writing😃.

PS: i'm reading your ff " Uma and the female patient" i will comment soon😉.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Hi Geetha,
Can't wait to see masi, palomi, aditya out of uma's house and his life . Uma always crave for true love that he deserve. Masi always misguided him, thake advantage of him but being bholenath devotee ,god send kanak in uma's life to save him from the trouble (sankat) Thanks for wonderful update dear, continue writing, we really enjoyed it.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: Iceblue

Cool! Thanks for writing! I think we are all excited and eagerly awaiting for the evil track to subside and umas redemption.

Hai iceblue.
Thank u so much for reading the story.
I promise i will bring the interesting track in my story.
I hope u will enjoy that..
Thank u so much for the comments.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Originally posted by: Calypso05

Hi Geetha😊,
Nice ff👏, i like the title❤️.
A short and convincing arguments👍🏼.
Hurray ! Maasa is cured🥳.
" He cried like a baby in his mother's lap." Uma needs a maternal love❤️.
Uma is too moved😭 and Kanak is very attached to the toshniwals❤️, she can't stay away from them.
Good redemption track👏.
Thank you, keep writing😃.

PS: i'm reading your ff " Uma and the female patient" i will comment soon😉.

Hai calypso
Thank u so much for reading the story.
Yes, uma needs a maternal love.
I will update soon.
Thank u so much for the comments.
Geethanatarajan thumbnail
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Hi Geetha,
Can't wait to see masi, palomi, aditya out of uma's house and his life . Uma always crave for true love that he deserve. Masi always misguided him, thake advantage of him but being bholenath devotee ,god send kanak in uma's life to save him from the trouble (sankat) Thanks for wonderful update dear, continue writing, we really enjoyed it.
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Hai mansi...
Uma is going to get true mothers' love.
Uma and kanak's love story is going blossom in a different way.
Thank u so much for the comments.


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Posted: 7 years ago
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Hello geetha ...such beautiful writing,enjoyed every part of it.keep on writing such beautiful stories dear and as far as Uma's redemption,eagerly waiting for that track.
Edited by Ritchie888 - 7 years ago
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Great👏👏👏 but I really want kanak to be tuff for uma...he sud understand dat how it feels to hurt the one who loves u so selflessly... hopefully cv's give us dat.
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Posted: 7 years ago
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Hai guys, i am back with my nonsense.
Part 2

Kanak runs to her room and falls on the bed and burried her face on the pillow, her tears were like a rain.
Kanak: why? Why?
Again she started crying. Uma comes to the doorstep, he sees kanak like that. He could not able to see her pain.
Uma: what the hell have i done?
Uma hits his hand on the wall.
Suman and shiv were sitting in the hall.
Shiv: suman jiji, will kanak bhabhisa forgive dhadhusa.
Suman: yes, surely she will.
In the night, kanak prepares the dinner, and she arrange the dishes on the dinning table. Everybody, waits for uma, but he didn't turn up. Then maasa asked everyone to have food. Kanak feeds food to maasa. After everybody done with eating, kanak takes maasa to the room.
After some time later, uma comes to the house, suman sees uma.
Suman: why dhadhusa, why u r late.
Uma: i was held up with a work.
Suman: come and have ur dinner.
Uma sits on the chair.
Uma: did everybody had their dinner,
Suman: yes dhadhusa.
Uma: kanak!
Suman: no dhadhusa...
Why, what happened?
No, nothing happened, she said she will have milk afterward, as her stomach was not well.
Uma looks at suman,
Suman informs kanak bhabhisa is in maasa's room and giving medicines to her.
Uma starts eating
Kanak gives medicine to maasa, maasa looks at her.
Maasa : i know that u r hurt. Everything will be alright soon.
Kanak makes maasa to lied on the bed, and says yes, everything will be alright soon.
Kanak goes to her room and changes her dress. And then goes to the kitchen, she drinks a glass of milk, and arrange the things on the kitchen. She switch off the lights. Goes to suman's room, there she was sleeping, kanak goes near to her, takes the book from her chest and placed in the table. Then she Switch off the light, and closes the door. And then she goes to shiv's room and covers the bed sheet to him, and leaves the room.
Uma searches for kanak, but he could not find her anywhere. Uma was worried. He checks every room.
Kanak was sitting near the shivji's idol. She just looks at the idol.
Uma comes back to his room, but kanak is not there. When he was about to move from there. He sees kanak near the shiv ling. Uma comes near to kanak. Kanak placed her head on the shiv ling's idol, actually, she was hugging shiv ling. Uma looks at kanak, and then he looks at shivji. Uma hold his hands and sees shivji. Then he goes near to kanak, and he carried her in his arms. He goes backs to the bedroom and placed her on the bed and cover the bed sheet. Uma wrapped her in his arms. He holded her through out the night. In the morning, kanak wakes up, and she realized that she was on uma's arms, and she slowly release herself from his hold. Then goes to the bathroom.when she comes out of the bathroom, uma was still sleeping, after getting ready, she started the household.
Uma wakes up, and he touches the bed, but the bed was empty. Then he goes to the bathroom. Then he goes to the morning pray, he saw the flowers for the pooja was already kept there. Then he started the pooja. Uma was done with his morning routine. But uma didn't see kanak still now.
Everybody were gathered on the dinning table. Kanak comes with maasa. And makes her sit on the chair. Uma looks at kanak. Kanak started serving the food. Uma was only looking at kanak, but kanak never gave a glance. When she came near to uma , she silently the serves the food. Then she sits with maasa and she feeds the porridge to her. Suman and shiv looks at uma, he was searching for kanak's glance. But she never responses. After maasa done with eating kanak takes her to the room. Then kanak comes to the dinning table,and takes the left over plate, after completing that. Kanak sits on the table. She barely eats the food. Uma watches her from the distance. Kanak looks lifeless. After eating like a bird, kanak goes to the kitchen again
Uma comes to his clinic, he says himself, i made her like this... On hearing of a word, food itself, she will get excited but today, she is not taking anything,
shivji please help me, i want my kanak back...


Tell ur comments guys.



Edited by Geethanatarajan - 7 years ago

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