Kanak Uma SS : Kuch Ranjishein!! Final part updt pg 33 - Page 17

Originally posted by: Sahana93

Thanks firstly for the midweek update and also for writing it so well . So it's gonna be 15 days of kanum together 😉 . Does our hero own the chopper or did he hire it ? . With Uma like the jalebis like that I could only see him as a little child deprived of care and affection . Both r very cautiously treading upon each other's territory . I love how the story is shaping up neither slow nor fast but steadily developing a bond between once strangers now somewhere on the friendship road . Thank you blue I could as every other time visualise your words esp the biscuit scene . The part is Fanta fabulous . Write more and of course sooner and whenever you get time like for eg can be everyday too 😛 😆 😉 ( that's your greedy fan talking ) . But do write when ever your creative muscles pester you to . Love and regards.

Hey there Sahana
Thank you for such a wonderful comment. I really appreciate the effort you make to write it.
Uma is a doctor, he doesn't need chopper for one meeting to another like a business man, so he hires it - Main point he is Rich 😉
I glad you are liking the pace of the story. At one point I thought of giving up, as it was too slow. I mean I was stuck at the point of keeping it real. How do strangers interact etc etc.

Biscuit scene was a surprise for myself too. It just came out of nowhere, they are bound by the sweetness of the jalebi and now the biscuits.

Greedy fan I love you for Bering all encouraging 🤗
Will try to update soon. 😉

@Sahana - are you a journalist by any chance. I feel like giving BTS segments while replying back to your comments.😆 😆

Hi blue,

Originally posted by: opaline

Hi,thank you for the midweek update.Whenever u update i become more curious for ur next one.Nice SS.That too not more dialogues is always ur style and thats wat i am liking ur writings always.

Hey there
Thank you for reading and commenting. Much appreciated 😊

Originally posted by: Gayathri93

Hi blue😊

Read all the parts together. Its a unique story and i am loving it😊.Why Uma hate women?I believe there must be some strong reason behind this.I really felt sorry for kanak.There is no one for her.I m loving the pace of this story.I think within this 15 days gap kanum relation will improve.Eagerly waiting to see what will happen in this 15 days.

Hey there
Thank you for reading and commenting.
That must have been a tough job reading all the parts together...
yes Uma has a history, which would be revealed someday.
Well Kanak is alone, that's sad but the way she carries herself, her attitude towards life is not negative, she takes on things head first. And I think it's what makes her stronger.

Originally posted by: Mansi_jg

Awesome , mindblowing, beautiful mid week update blue thanks!! I love the way you describe jilebi and now I feel like having it and I have to make it😉

I like uma started to talk with kanak and kanak's reaction when uma came back in the night. It's getting really interesting .

Plz update soon. Thanks blue the best writer I know.

Hey there Mansi
Thank you for a lovely comment 😊
Apologies for getting you to crave jalebis - just a quick question "did you eat them after reading or still waiting for a mahurat 😉
Uma is controlling himself, he even tried disappearing so that he could avoid interacting but he is unable to avoid her.

Thank you so much for the kind words

Had lost track after part 6 or 7.. so read all parts together now..

Originally posted by: varsha79

Had lost track after part 6 or 7.. so read all parts together now..

its like reading a novel.. how beautifully you have portrayed the characters.. the way u describe .. it is like watching in front of eyes..

U r fantabulous..⭐️⭐️..

Hey there Varsha
I just dug out the thread from an abyss of pages.
Read your comment ... thank you so much for reading and being honest. That you lost track and had to re read the whole thing.
I am thinking once it would be complete I would put all parts on page 1.
Then everyone could read easily.
Thank you for appreciating.

Originally posted by: blueflames

Hey there Mansi
Thank you for a lovely comment 😊
Apologies for getting you to crave jalebis - just a quick question "did you eat them after reading or still waiting for a mahurat 😉
Uma is controlling himself, he even tried disappearing so that he could avoid interacting but he is unable to avoid her.

Thank you so much for the kind words

hey blue I try not eat but like uma...I can't avoid 😉😉

Hey blue. Great update. Loved how Uma couldn't resist the garma garam jalebis and also spoke his mind out to Kanak abt how he loved them and described them.