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Posted: 8 years ago
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Hey there all the lovely people!!
Direct to discussion today. Because this is getting serious, raising questions that need answers, that need to be pondered on. Things that happen when one makes mistake of falling weak and not going through the process of legal complaints, and then returning back to face the backlash.



Fire is one of the elements that form up the universe. Fire that burns from a single spark, ravages the entire forest. Fire that burns inside is powerful enough to consume one, for fire can be passion and anger... the fire of anger always ends up in destruction, there is no point of return when everything has been burned down to ashes, for not everybody is a Phoenix that can burn itself and rise again. Fire which can cleanse the soul, can tear apart the flesh, and those who play with it end up burning their hands either by accident or intentionally.

Massi intentionally dropped that torch of fire on the edge of Kanak's duppata, Palomi screams - yet to figure out weather that scream was intentional to make Kanak jump up, or she herself got scared. Kanak's duppata is on fire, she is screaming, turning and twisting. Massi is trying to put out the flames by her hands and Kanak is more concerned about Massi getting hurt than getting rid of the enflamed duppata.. Massi gets hurt intentionally and plays the victim herself. She refuses to get treated as she is scared for herself, Kanak can report her and she could go to jail. She insists on Kanak assurance by writing it down on a stamp paper. ---- Kanak has signed on her suicide letter, which she wrote by her own hand and signed it. Even if she is God forbid murdered in that house, set on fire, slip down the stairs, poisoned, the crime would go unpunished as it would be a murder staged as a suicide... everything that a police complaint stands for has just been abused, it all ends up as a joke at which nobody laughs but takes offense. Massi hatched a brilliant plan, putting Kanak at risk, then saving her and playing victim all at the same time, and then asking Kanak's written statement-- what does it all mean that Kanak is going to be physically abused in that house by the creepy ladies, weren't the verbal taunts and emotional drama taxing enough that they had to bring in the violence. -- what if the fire couldn't have been extinguished, what if Kanak had been burned, her hair burned at the ends the possibilities are endless, had Kanak been burned would she still be concerned about Massi burning her hands. Kanak was put at risk, she is not safe in that house. And the plan was executed with such finesse that everyone stood blinded, Uma assured her that Kanak won't file case against her, again and again but Massi has had her way. What would have Uma done if Kanak had been injured. --- all this is turning quite negative and even indicates the consequences of decisions that are taking impulsively, the necessity of getting Uma arrested is still not acknowledged by the toshniwals... Kanak knows that she had a long way to go, she had to win over as she broke the trust, what she doesn't realize is that her betrayal has made her life endangered in that house. -- it's fictional Uma wouldn't let anything happen to her, she would survive but still she needs to assess the enemies for the war has started and she has already lost her right to complaint. Kanak needs to put her mind straight, it's not just Uma that needs attention but everyone taunting her left right and center. Instead of being a guilty lamb, she needs to think and talk.
It had been barely a few hours in that house, Uma and Kanak didn't talk. They are just fluttering here and there. In all this chaos the sweetness of entire shiv Kanak meeting was burned to crisp ashes.



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Posted: 8 years ago
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Nicely written. I thought the whole scene was so unnecessary. I don't know how it will come back later. But I hope it doesn't ..😲
Are you a student of literature or you read a lot?
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Thank you blue! Beautiful analysis as always!
The drama is geared up and TRP is going to shoot up
But the situation is too scary as you said it is a suicide note all the doors for any legal support is closed.
I know kanak is impulsive and sentimental with relationships but she has to be intelligent and she is if she identifies her enemies so my only prayer would be let kanak realise the war staged against her and identify the enemies soon.
Till then there will be scary and teary moments for kanak. And emotional and boiling moments for us
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Bang on as usual Blueflames..
I think Kanak will need one shock kind of stuff to realise the facts.. the evil intentions of FIRELADIES Squad..

i really hope it happens sooner.. till then best of luck Kanak

meanwhile may the ladysquad get a shock of closeness between Uma n Kanak..



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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: desigal2017

Nicely written. I thought the whole scene was so unnecessary. I don't know how it will come back later. But I hope it doesn't ..😲

Are you a student of literature or you read a lot?



Hey there
Thank you for reading and commenting.
The scene was necessary or not, but it was executed in a way that Kanak felt damn guilty about pressing charges against Uma. She wanted to assure Massi that it won't happen but Massi covered her base by making a scene of it, making Kanak guilty and preparing her arsenal by having her write the statement.

Ps - post grad in literature and definitely read a lot 😉
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: nocry

Thank you blue! Beautiful analysis as always!

The drama is geared up and TRP is going to shoot up
But the situation is too scary as you said it is a suicide note all the doors for any legal support is closed.
I know kanak is impulsive and sentimental with relationships but she has to be intelligent and she is if she identifies her enemies so my only prayer would be let kanak realise the war staged against her and identify the enemies soon.
Till then there will be scary and teary moments for kanak. And emotional and boiling moments for us



Hey there
Thank you for reading and commenting.
Yes indeed the saas bahu angle has escalated that too in the kitchen with a fire involved, trps are going to rise.
For me it was indeed a scary situation, a lot of if and would have could have hang in the air.

Kanak is impulsive and believes in relationships but she needs to smarten up. All of Bhabho gyan shouldn't be used only on Uma, but on his surroundings too.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: varsha79

Bang on as usual Blueflames..

I think Kanak will need one shock kind of stuff to realise the facts.. the evil intentions of FIRELADIES Squad..

i really hope it happens sooner.. till then best of luck Kanak

meanwhile may the ladysquad get a shock of closeness between Uma n Kanak..





Hey there Varsha.
Thank you.
Kanak was jolted by the whole incident, but she was more concerned about Massi rather than removing her duppata made me facepalm myself.
Kanak needs to be wary of the evil squad, because Massi is not in her right mind is actually playing with Fire, instigating and stoking Palomi all the same.

And yeah Uma and Kanak getting cozy would make the squad uneasy. 🥱
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Posted: 8 years ago
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this is getting very serious now..massisa has turned into a criminal now..and whats wrong with kanak..why so much guilt now..she has freed uma frm any legal prblms..what more is there for..losing family members trust?..did they loved her enough at all ?..even the slightest love she got was because of all the odd tests she had to pass for proving her worth as a wife..even if she did break tgeir heart she did do her redemption..and whats wrong with uma..instead of explaining what happened in police station he is letting things go as it goes .yes.ofcourse..massisa has made kasam..what kind of ninsense is this...letting a crime like forced marriage go free in itself is a huge turndown..and now its.attempted murder..and only a stupid person can sign such a paper...before reforming uma kanak needs some.counselling regarding law and human behaviour...this is too much of stupidity from her..
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Nice analysis Blue. But don't you think with this act of playing scarred crow, maasisa carved a path for Kanak to win some brownies in other members of the family other than her and palomi? Even Suman was shocked when Kanak readily agreed to sign the promissory note. PayPal was shocked to death with the way maasisa got the letter and might tone down her activity a bit as she feels scared now with turn of events.
Sara's was too stunned that her Bhabhi had to write and sign a letter claiming for any eventuality befall on her at her sasural, none should be blamed for that. But didn't she knew that Kanak signing such letter immediately on return will pose questions about the sanctity of such letter? Won't uma doubt about such incidents as Kanak had not faced such situation earlier and she was reckless but not stupid or senseless to repeatedly to be the victim of casualties?
I think Nanda with her over wittyness, allowed people to think about the necessity of such letter and will stay alert to save Kanak.
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Posted: 8 years ago
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Originally posted by: blueflames



Hey there
Thank you for reading and commenting.
The scene was necessary or not, but it was executed in a way that Kanak felt damn guilty about pressing charges against Uma. She wanted to assure Massi that it won't happen but Massi covered her base by making a scene of it, making Kanak guilty and preparing her arsenal by having her write the statement.

Ps - post grad in literature and definitely read a lot 😉

Me too! ;)


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