Mere Jeevan Saathi..(RN)PART 28,31/03/09 Pg-42 - Page 6

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Posted: 16 years ago
#51
intresting
update
too good
superb
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Posted: 16 years ago
#52
Too good!!!Awesome!!!!

Bechara Raj!!!Woh bhi kis kash-m-kash se guzar raha hai!!! 😭

Woh Naina ke bareme soch kar bhi nahi bata paya 😭 !!!!!!

Ab jo itna kuch kho chuka hai....usmein aur kuch khone ki himmat nahi hoti!!!!

Apne pyaar aur akelepan ke haaton majboor ho gaya!!!!! 😭



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Posted: 16 years ago
#53

Originally posted by: Shaina_b

Too good!!!Awesome!!!!

Bechara Raj!!!Woh bhi kis kash-m-kash se guzar raha hai!!! 😭

Woh Naina ke bareme soch kar bhi nahi bata paya 😭 !!!!!!

Ab jo itna kuch kho chuka hai....usmein aur kuch khone ki himmat nahi hoti!!!!

Apne pyaar aur akelepan ke haaton majboor ho gaya!!!!! 😭



tujhe badi sympathy hai Rajveer se!!!
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Posted: 16 years ago
#54
awesome πŸ‘ .plz cont soon........
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Posted: 16 years ago
#55
superb
too good
mindblowing
plz continue soon
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Posted: 16 years ago
#56
Kuch had tak yahi kehna hoga ki raj galat kar raha hai us ko sach batana chahiye aur fir ye Naina par chod dena tha ki vo Raj ko accept karti hai ki nahi.Update soon.
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Posted: 16 years ago
#57
that was a amaaaaaaaazing update di...i m spellbound... πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘thanks di for this outstanding part
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Posted: 16 years ago
#58

Originally posted by: quietrajpri1623

that was a amaaaaaaaazing update di...i m spellbound... πŸ‘ πŸ‘ πŸ‘thanks di for this outstanding part

iska update kal hoga
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Posted: 16 years ago
#59

Naina Mumbai aai..aur yeh aalishaan ghar..yeh business dekh kar..hakki bakki reh gai...

Ranveer ki family ki yeh position hai is Mumbai me!!

aur Ranveer yeh chhod k Banaras gaya tha?

agle din..

Naina subha uthi...paas k table par rakha uske lia note rakha hai..

"fresh joke dinning table pe aao..I am waiting ..have breakfast.."

30 minute baad..Naina niche aai..

Veer baitha hai dinning table pe..

Veer--raat ko neend aai?

Naina--haa..par tum kaha the?

Veer--zaroori files check kar raha tha..

Naina--hmm..achha..dekho..sara din me ghar pe baith kar bore nahi ho sakti..mujhe kuchh kaam karna hai..

Veer--kyaa karna chaahti ho?

Naina--bachcho ko padhana chaahti hoon..

Veer ne Naina ki taraf dekha..

Naina faded jeans aur casual shirt me thi..sindoor nahi lagaya hai usne..

Veer--bachcho ko padhana hai?good..kaha?

Naina--kahi koi nursery yaa cresh to hoga ,,,main jaaoon?

Veer--ok..main pata lagata hoon..tum kisi high school me kyon nahi padhati?

Naina--nahi..baap re..maine dekha hai apne teachers ko..hum log unki haalat bigaad dete the..main nahi chaahti k meri bhi koi bigaad de..please..

Veer hans pada...muddat k baad..Rajveer khul kar hansa..

ek thandi hawa k jhonke usko chhoo lia hai..Naina k roop me..

Veer--ok..as your wish..main pata lagata hoon..aur ab main chalta hoon..office jana hai..

Naina--ek minute thaher jaao..

Veer--kyaa?

Naina--tumhare gaal pe..

Veer --kyaa?

Naina paas aai..aur fir..Rajveer k gaal par kiss kia..

Raj ka dil uske hontho pe atak gaya..yeh kyaa kia Naina ne?

khud ko samhala Raj ne..

Rajveer--kis khushi me?

Naina--tum jab bhi college jate the padhane k lia..yeh to tumhi ne kanoon banaya tha..bhul gaye?I bet..tum businessman ban k zara bhi achhe nahi lag rahe ho..Lecturer hi thik the..

Raj--I know..bye..shaam ko baat karte hai..aur kisi bhi chees ki zaroorat ho to naukar ko bolna..yaa to mujhe mere mobile pe phone karna..ok..mera number hai ..9930545553..

Naina--bye..

Raj--see you in the evening..

 

pura din ...Naina ghar k har jagah ko dekhne lagi...

aise ghar me woh kabhi rahi nahi...

keemti paintings..carpets..furnitures..infact dinning table hi itna bada hai.itna chaudha.k ek side se dusre side me baithne wale ka haath tak nahi pakad sakte..

Naina man hi man muskurane lagi..

fir woh bedroom me gai...

pura kamra dekhne lagi..par man nahi lag raha hai..itne bade ghar me..

Raj ko phone kia usne..

Raj ka mobile baja..ghar se hai..Naina ne kia hai..

Raj--hello..

Naina--I love you..

Raj nervous ho gaya...uska gala sukh gaya..

Raj--ok..

Naina--ok ka matlab kyaa?chalo jawab do...

Raj--is baat ka kyaa jawab ho sakta hai?

Naina--tum bhi bolo.."Naina..I love you too.."... jaldi bolo..

Raj--main zaroori meeting me hoon..ghar akar baat karta hoon..ok..abhi please..phone rakho..please..

Naina--ok..

Raj ne phone par kiss ki awaz suni..Naina ne kiss bheja hai usko..

Raj ne ghabra kar phone rakh dia..

par sara din Naina k khayalon me khoya raha...

Secretary--Sir..are you alright?

Raj--well..I am fine..but..ok ..lobby me sab ko bulaiye..

lobby me sab jama hue..

Raj--I have to do an important announcement ...I am getting married next month..so I announce bonus for everyone..and you all have to attend my marriege reception..

sab ne clap kia..

Raj ne apne vakil ko phone kia...

Advocate Mishra--yes..sir..kahiye..

Raj--meri shadi ka notice dijiye...infact..aap..mere aur Naina Agnihotri k naam ki notice dijiye..

Advocate Mishra--ok..


shaam ko Raj wapas aya..

apne kamre me gaya..uske apne kamre me...jo usne lock kar k rakha tha..

change kia..aur fir gaya..Naina k paas..

Naina dikhi nahi..

achanak Raj ko pichhe se ake pakda Naina ne...

Raj k pith pe kiss karne lagi...

Raj chauk gaya...

Raj k seene me haath ghuma rahi hai Naina..

Raj ne bahut mushkil se control me kia khud ko..

Naina ki taraf muda..

Naina Raj ko kiss karne hi wali thi..

Raj hat gaya..

Naina--hua kyaa hai tumko?

Raj--kuchh nahi..

Naina--nahi Veer batao..

Raj--mere dad bahut upset the..k maine kanooni shadi nahi kia..aur uske bina hi tumhare sath reh raha tha ek ghar me ek kamre me..ab dad to nahi rahe..par main chaahta hoon..k unki ichha puri kar loon..maine notice dia hai..mere vakil ko bol dia hai..1 maheene k andar humari legal shadi ho jayegi..I think humen tabhi..you know what I mean..

Naina--to fir Banaras me..

Raj--dekho..Banaras ki baat  alag thi..aur ghar dad ka hai..is ghar k kone kone me dad ki yaadein hai..main  koi hichkichahat k sath jeena nahi chaahta..I hope you understand..jab tak hum kanooni tarike se husband nahi ban jate..tab tak..humara ek dusre se door rahena hi behtar hai..aur Banaras ki baat yeha par koi nahi janta..shadi ki baat bhi nahi..main chaahta hoon..court marriege k baad grand  party ho..aur tab tak tum bhi yeha k life style k sath adjust karna sikh jaaogi..

Naina--haa..yeh bhi sahi hai..are bhai zindagi bhar ka saath hai..ek maheene me kaun si aafat ayegi..aur haa..tumhare dad ki baat thik bhi hai...

Raj--tab tak..isi ghar me hum do dosto ki tarha rahe..to thik hai na?

Naina--yaa ..sure..to..friends?

Raj--yaa friends..

Naina--to shuru se shuru karte hai..Hii..I am Naina Mal..Sorry..Miss Naina Agnihotri..from Dehradun

Raj--hi..I am..Raj.. Ranveer Malhotra.... from Mumbai..

Naina--nice meeting you..

Raj--same here..

Naina--aap gana bahut achha gaate hai..

Raj--thanks..

Naina--mere lia ek gana gane ka kasht karenge?

Raj--kyon nahi?

"humen aur jeene ki chaahat na hoti..agar tum na hote..agar tum na hote.. humen jo tumhara sahara na milta..bhanwar me hi rahte..kinara na milta.. kinare pe bhi to laher aa dooboti..agar tum na hote..agr tum na hote.."

Naina ne gana shuru kia,"har ek ghum tumhara sahenge khushi se..karenge na shikwa kabhi bhi kisi se..jaha mujhpe hansta..khushi mujhpe roti..agar tum na hote..agar tum na hote.."

Raj ki awaz me bhi wahi jadoo hai..jo Ranveer k awaz me thi..Raj ne  kai baar college functions pe bhi gaya hai..par kabhi seriously nahi socha usne.. Music k bare me.....

Naina uski awaz me kho si gai hai..


Raj ne pahli baar Naina ka gana suna..

itni surili awaz..aur yeh gehraai..awaz me..kyaa baat hai...Ranveer ne kabhi nahi bataya..iske bare me..

 


 

Edited by yakkudimag - 15 years ago
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Posted: 16 years ago
#60
wooooow...kya kamaal ka update tha di....love this beautiful part...thanks di for this oooouuuuuutstanding update...