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Shwetha
Originally posted by: tsamhita
MINDBLOWING π π the whole union was amazing... Choot bole kauwa kaate ππ *bows humbly*
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Really really like the capterππ...to start from the begining, the way you describe practically every movement of Adi is very commendable ππΌ love the way his every feeling is expressed and the way he keeps falling back into the abyss of his pastπ³...how he keeps remembering her. "Abyss of the past..." haila... kya likha haiπ Meh, I tried... Baaki, Mr. Mehra ki mehrbaaniπ³
When he steps into maithili's appartment and can sense the fact that she was here just by her scent isπ...even after so many years he hasen't forgotten her. When he opens her book and reads out those lines...π³ Neetu you are such a good poet...and when he completes it...its like he completes her.Oh... lord... π He's quite something na... hosh sambhalo, he's claimed!π... Poet? Girl, you must be outta your mind... I'm purely a ramblerπ³
~The both of them...incomplete without each other~ I have a feeling you should've written this post...
And the finale...how can anyone forget that! it was so bloody good!π the way she was the only one who had the right to speak to him like that...the way he pressed her against himself and finally her acceptance...very touching...and to end it off...that impish grin on his faceπ true Vikram Aditya Mehraπ *slowly growing smile*... Sorry, I couldn't help itπ That trademark smile just had to be there somewhere na?π I felt the end was kinda rushed, but glad you enjoyed!π
Loved your whole story...especially this end partπ³ you know, if i don't stop now, i'd probably write a whole page of praises and why i like it so muchπ Actually, I would love to know the extent of your toleranceπ and of course the pagalpan... ππ Thank you so much for the time and comments hun, I deeply appreciate!
Cheers,
dc
Originally posted by: *angel94*
Amazing, absolutely brilliant!!! Aww.. thank youπ³
Loved the description of things and thier reunion was just.... Just...?ππ *bows humbly*
Reserved will continue with the comments later.ππ³ Looking forward to them!π
Cheers,
dc
I just caught both the parts now and WOW π The surroundings, adi's feelings just to name a few - amazing.
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Shwetha
Originally posted by: koolaries4
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Sexy... amazing.. m sooo glad u finished!!
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