'Pardesi' (AM) FF: 2 Parts, End, Page 7 - Page 6

Originally posted by: tsamhita

MINDBLOWING 👏 👏 the whole union was amazing... Choot bole kauwa kaate 😆😆 *bows humbly*

reserved for further comments 😉

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Really really like the capter👏👏...to start from the begining, the way you describe practically every movement of Adi is very commendable 👍🏼 love the way his every feeling is expressed and the way he keeps falling back into the abyss of his past😳...how he keeps remembering her. "Abyss of the past..." haila... kya likha hai😉 Meh, I tried... Baaki, Mr. Mehra ki mehrbaani😳

When he steps into maithili's appartment and can sense the fact that she was here just by her scent is😍...even after so many years he hasen't forgotten her. When he opens her book and reads out those lines...😳 Neetu you are such a good poet...and when he completes it...its like he completes her.Oh... lord... 😆 He's quite something na... hosh sambhalo, he's claimed!😃... Poet? Girl, you must be outta your mind... I'm purely a rambler😳

~The both of them...incomplete without each other~ I have a feeling you should've written this post...

And the finale...how can anyone forget that! it was so bloody good!😆 the way she was the only one who had the right to speak to him like that...the way he pressed her against himself and finally her acceptance...very touching...and to end it off...that impish grin on his face😆 true Vikram Aditya Mehra😉 *slowly growing smile*... Sorry, I couldn't help it😆 That trademark smile just had to be there somewhere na?😉 I felt the end was kinda rushed, but glad you enjoyed!😛

Loved your whole story...especially this end part😳 you know, if i don't stop now, i'd probably write a whole page of praises and why i like it so much😆 Actually, I would love to know the extent of your tolerance😆 and of course the pagalpan... 😆😆 Thank you so much for the time and comments hun, I deeply appreciate!

Cheers,

dc

Originally posted by: *angel94*

Amazing, absolutely brilliant!!! Aww.. thank you😳

Loved the description of things and thier reunion was just.... Just...?😆😆 *bows humbly*

Reserved will continue with the comments later.😛😳 Looking forward to them!😊

Cheers,

dc

Originally posted by: sp79

I just caught both the parts now and WOW 👏 The surroundings, adi's feelings just to name a few - amazing.

👏

Shwetha

Originally posted by: koolaries4

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Sexy... amazing.. m sooo glad u finished!!