Kabhi Dur.... *last part rated:pg 13* - Page 2

recap: we saw eevryone in the sharma family. we saw them getting ready for harshini's mehndi. we no that kripa is doin decorations for the mehndi program. finally we get to see back side of our new character in the story.

episode 2
kripa is goin towards the door. she is really mad at the phool wala for arriving late. at that time we get to see the back side of a guy wearing blue jeans white shirt. he doesnt have phoolonki tokri but he has lugage wid him. kripa opens the door and widout lookin at the guys she starts yelling.

kripa: maine apko kaha thana ke 10baje ajana, to phir itni der kyun lagadi? kya hua ab kuch bolte kyun nahi ho? ek bar sorry bhi nahi bol sakte? ajib admi hai! idiot!"
finally she looks up at him. we see brown shoes, blue jeans, white shirt, muscular body, backpack one hand is carriying his luggage. the we finally see sunglasses covering the real eyes. the camera finally shows us the face. its angad young dashing wonderful looking man standing at the front door of the sharma house.

kripa(thinking to her self): kya india main bekari itni badh gayi hai ke eshe good luking guy ko esha kam karna pad raha hai? par yeh to koi aur admi hai yeh woh nahi hai jishe maine bat kithi.

angad: im sorry mujeh lagta hai ke main galat ghar pe agaya hun. per mujeh to address ishi jagah ka diya tha. shayad mujshe likhne main bhool hui hogi. sorry. bye

he is about to leave jsut then harshini comes to the door.

harshini: kripa kaun hai darwaje pe? itni der she darwajeh pe kya kar rahi ho tum?

harshini sees angad wid luggage in his hands n remembers gayatri talkin about naina's son arriving today to attend the wedding.

kripa answering harshini's question: pata nahi di koi admi hai. par lagta hai who galat ghar pe agaya hai.
kripa now talkin to angad: ap ja rahe the na jaiye. mujeh bhi lagta hi ki ap galat ghar pe aa gaye hain.

harshini: ek minute ruko. apne apna naam nahi bataya.

angad: ji mera naam Angad Khanna hai. main darashal gayatri sharma ka ghar dundh raha tha apko pata hai who kahan rehti hai?

harshini: actually ap sahi jagah pe aye hain. yeh hi gayatri sharma ka ghar hai! par maine apko pehchana nahi apkon hai?

angad: ji main Naina Khanna ka beta hun. woh mama ne gayatri aunty ko pichle hafte bataya tha ki main a raha hun.

harshini: who darashl bat yeh hai ki mami ne sirf mujhe dadi ko aur papa ko hi bataya tha ki tum a rahe ho. kripa ko ish bare main kuch pata nahi hai ishi liye shayad ushe apshe kuch kaha hoga.

kripa: di main ne inshe kuch nahi kaha.

harshini giving kripa an angry look. angad is jsut staring at kripa.

angad(to him self): kripa hmmmmm naam to acha hai. aur dikhti bhi thik thak hai. lagta hai ish ke sath mari bahut banegi.

harshini: angad tum bahar kyun khade ho andar aao na. main mami ko bulakar lati hun.

angad tries to go inside the house but kripa is standing in the middle of the door way. she moves left while angad moves to left to enter the house. then they both move to the right side at the same time. then all of a sudden angad stands still. he grabs hold of kripa to make her stop moving. they are both looking in each others eyes. there is a silence in the enterance for a while. then finally angad breaks the silence.

angad: ek min ap yahan khadi rahiye plz. aur hilna mat. thik hai. Thank You!
and angad very sweetly moves inside the house while our deer kripa is standing at the door ways looking back at angad very passionatly. the phool wala finally comes.

phool wala: madem apke phool. who kya haina ki traffic bahot tha aur aj dukan bhi bz thi to der ho gayi sorry madem.

kripa: 2 min pehle nahi a shakte the? mari sali galiya wast kardi. gadha kahi ka. ab mera muh kya dekh rahe hain ap. plz andar akar sale phool living room main rakh dijiye. main ramukaka ko bejhi hun apke paise dene ke liye. apko pani chahiye?

phool wala: nahi madem.par puchne ke liye sukriya.

our deer angad is listening to all this and he is adored by the caring nature of kripa.

the we see a office wid a lady sitting in the chair of the md.

unknown person: main harshini aur prithvi ki shaddi kisi kimat par nahi hone dungi. harshini tum itni ashani she mere gire ban she chut nahi sakti.

the episode ends right here.

coming up: you will get to see another encounter of kripa n angad. then u will get to see naina n misty and their plan. keep watching i mean reading. we finally get to see harshini's dulha n her ex love aka kartik.
will the mistery person be revieled?

hope u guys like this epic. i thank u for ur kind n positive words toward my fan fic

guys i might be late in continuing my next epic as such my college has started but i will continue writing them as soon as i get time. i wont keep u wiating for long.

kewl. continue soon. i loved it. 

wut a story
just amazin
plz cont fast 😆

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wonderful loved it...ughhh i hope naina is not an evil bhoot like in the show and i hope mishty doesnt act like a buffalo...hmm..could mistery person happen to be damini or naina?? hmmm...dont rly know

interesting

very interesting

deepey loved it.

please continue

wow lovely..... i looves it continueeee

well thank u guys for all the positive posts. so i wont keep u guys waiting n i will post my new episode. here is the recap

phichle episode mai apne dekha: kripa angad se milti hai. aur ek mistery person harshini ki shaddi ruk vana chahti hai.

episode 3

in the sharma house angad get to meet everyone.

suryabhand: kaise ho beta? aur batao kaish chal raha hai sab kuch?

A: bas uncle sab kuch acha chal raha hai. mom ka business bahut achi tarah se chal raha hai. kabhi kabhi main bhi unki help kar deta hun.

G: who to bahut hi achi bat hai beta. tumhari mummy kab arahi hai? aur tum kya padhai kar te ho?

A: aunti who main music main apni padhai karna chahta hun. aur mamma ka to puchi yehi nahi. woh to apne business main itnti bz rehti hai ki kabhi kabhi bahot der se ghar lauti hai. par achi bad yeh hai ki who atleast ghar to ati hai. ab dekhiye na pichle ek mahine se london main hai unki koi business meeting hai usko attend karne gayi hai. par mamma ne mujeh saf kaha hai ki harshini didi ke shadi ke pehle aajayengi woh.

G: chalo acha hai woh ayegi to sahi. kitne mahine ho gaye hai use mile. sach bataun to ushki bahut yaad ati hai mujeh.

H: kripa!!!! kahan ho? kya kar rahi ho yahan aao na baba.

K: di bad do minute main yeh saf karke ati hun.

kripa enters the kitchen where everyone is sitting.

G: angad beta tum thak gaye hoge ja kar fresh ho jao. main tumhare liye tab tak nasta taiyar karti hun or agar tum niche ana chaho to ajana varna main uper bhijva dungi.

A: so sweet of u aunty. Thank You very much.

G: kripa beta apna kamra jara saf kardena. angad ajshe tumhare kamreme rahe ga.

K: mom mera kamra kyun? mom apjantehena ke mujeh kisi aur kamreme nind nahi ati.

G:beta guest room mai shaddi wale mehman rehne wale hai to kuch dino ke liye adjust karlo beta plz. aur phir tum aur Shini (harshini's nick name) room share karlena.

K: par ma!!

S: kripa apni mama se behash mat karo. woh joh keh rahi hai use karo.

K: lekin baba

S: bas kripa ab main age kuch nahi sunna chahta hun. ab ja kar apna kamra saf kardo.

K: ji baba.

A: uncle its ok. main kahin aur so jaunga ishme kripa ka kamra saf karwane ki kya jarurat hai?

K: nahi Mr Khanna.

A: plz call me angad formalities mujeh achi nahi lagti

K: thik hai. nahi angad main apna kamra apkeliye khali kardungi. aur waise bhi main baba ki koi bhi bat kabhi bhi nahi talti hun. ap ka kamra 5 min ke bad taiyar hoga. tab tak main apna jaruri saman le leti hun.

angad jsut looks at kripa. he loves the way she respects her elders and how she is so adorably does what her father asks her to do. he starts liking the way she does her work and the way she talks to others. also the way she dresses so simply but still looks so dashing and beautiful.

angad enters her room. its plain but beautiful. its painted in light blue color. its has nice bed in the middle of the room. on the wall directly across the room there is a picture of radha kishan. on the other side of the room she has hanged the painting she has made in art class. in those painting there is a painting of her dream house.

A(to him self): are yeh to bilkul mere ghar ke jaisha dikhta hai. lagta ish ladki ko mujshe shaddi karne ki bahot jaldi hai. ms kripa sharma apka yeh sapna bahut hi jaldi sach hoga.

angad kinda looks around the room. the dresser in her room is filled wid all kinds of soft toys. angad finally sees a little bed sitting next to kripa's bed. a cute little brown puppy is sleeping in its bed. kripa enters her room when angad bends down to look at the puppy from close.

K: i hope ap kuto se alargic nahi hai. main ushe uth te hi lejaungi. waise yeh katta nahi hai. bahut hi pyaara hai. yeh meri jaan hai jaan.

A(to himself): wah yeh kuta bhi pyaara hai aur kute wali bhi bahut hi pyaari hai. pata nahi yeh mere bare main kya sochti hai? i hope kuch acha sochti hogi.

K: ma ne apko naste ke liye bulaya hai.

kripa is about to leave when angad asks her a question

A: apko kisi chiz ki allergi hai?

K: ji han hai. ladko ki aur who bhi nakchade ghamandi ladkoki.
and she leaves

A(smiling and thinkin to him self): main to inmeshe ek bhi category main phit nahi hota hun yani ki mere chances zyada hain.
and he leaves to have nasta.

preview: harshini's mehndi. the mistery person talkin to someone on the phone. we finally get to see angad and kripa locked up in a room.

THE END

i no u guys wont wiat to see this epic ill try to post it as soon as possible.k guys thats all for today i will continue wid the story later. hope u guys dont mind waiting. as i told u it will b hard for me to update regularly as my college has started but i will try my best to post the coming story.

that was really good
plz cont soon

wow...that was really good...plz continue

~sweta~