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Posted: 17 years ago
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wow awesome part toooooooo tooooooooooo gooooooooooooood arrrrg yeh sujal bi na harrh wakt galat sochta rehta hai continue soooon πŸ‘
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part-10

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dearest readers,

Oh thanks once again for the overwhelming response...i'm truly
touched...weekend has been hectic and cld sqeeze in only a few
minutes in between in which i manged to read a few mails and also
response to them...now i got a couple of hrs so i can aaraam se sit
and first complete writing the part10 and then i shall reply to the
rest of the mails....all the weekend, a part of me is occupied with
the tossing of various ideas as to how sujal is going to teach
kashish a lesson...now i know i've all ur expectations also to live
up to...do u really think sujal shld teach a lesson to kashish?i know
in KTH-1 he shld...IN FACT ITS HIGH TIME...but here dont u think so
sujal is being a little too mean...i guess i'm taking all my revenge
of KTH-1 kashish on the poor kashish of KTH-2...Not fair...right?
that's ok...dont think too much...lets leave the logic behind and
continue with our journey into the romantic world of sujal and
kashish...
............................................................ .....
Recap:sujal again sees kashish with chandru and misunderstands...this
time he gets so angry and jealous that he wants to teach a lesson to
her...
..................................

Kashish is still trying to convince chandru to come and see their
mom...but chandru is not willing to do that...he says that the job
that he is doing demands that he shld not be having any family...and
if his boss knows abt it,it cld prove to be very dangerous for
them...kashish gets worried as to what kind of a job that it cld
be,that it has these strange rules...but chandru is already out of
time and he just leaves kashish there and goes off in a
hurry...kashish is too shocked and worried to even go behind him...

A strong hand on her shoulder got her back crashing into this
world...she is stunned to see sujal there...his eyes r fuming with
anger....for as sec she gets scared a little bit but within no time
she regains her composure and pushes away his hand and looks at him
in a challenging way...this makes sujal even more angry...

sujal:who is that guy?

kashish cant believe that he is asking her that qstn...

she just walked off ignoring him...

sujal went behind her, grabbed her arm and made her stand there...its
like he is not going to leave her unless she tells all abt that
person with whom she was just talking....

sujal:stressing each and every word...WHO IS THAT GUY?

Kashish:giving him a sharp and disgusted look....NONE OF UR
BUSINESS...WHO R U TO ASK ME QSTNS...AND WHY SHLD I ANSWER UR
QSTNS....

sujal:YOUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUUU....he is so angry that he wants to
give her a tight slap....

But thanks to umesh, he saw kashish first and then sujal who is very
angrily saying something to her....so he rushed to where these two
were standing...

umesh:arre kashish...what a pleasent surprise....oh my...how is
everything at home...u dont know how worried i'm....i was abt to send
the driver to ur home in the evening to find out if everything is
ok....

kashish:i'm sorry sir...

sujal:very angrily.....saying sorry is not going to be enough...ye
tumhara baap ka ghar nahi jaha tum jab chaho aa sakti ho,jab chaho
gayab ho sakti ho...dont forget that u r an employee here and u have
some responsibilities....we r not paying u, so that u can have field
time in the parks like this...u have to tell us what u were doing
here,bunking the work...just tell it out...

kashish is holding her tears very hard...umesh is really surprised at
sujal's behaviour and reaction...he thought that he was reacting that
way coz he cares for him too much....

umesh:sujal...that's ok beta...please dont make a scene here...lets
go home and talk...

sujal:no uncle...u dont know these type of girls...ye apne kaam
chalaane ke liye kisi had tak jaa sakte hain...aap bohot bhole
hai...please mujhe bolne dee jiye...

kashish is devastated at the way sujal was talking...for a few days
now, she saw some change in him and she thot may be he really
changed...but now she got to know that he did not change a
zilch...his attitude towards her is still the same...he still has
same cheap opinions abt her....

kashish:with tears in her eyes...sir, u r my boss here...and i think
i'm answerable to only u...but if that is not the case...i'm
resigning from my job right now...i cant work at a place where people
think that i'm a slave or something...where i shld not be having any
personal life of my own....

she waits for a second for umesh's response...

umesh is too shocked to say anything...

kashish:crying very bitterly...alright sir...i got it...i will send
my resignation thru post and ha...thanks a lot for whatever u have
done to me and my family....good bye sir...

now its sujal's turn to be stunned....he did not expect this thing to
turn like this....last thing he wanted was kashish out of his sight...

sujal:u cant get away so easily...whatever u want to do...u cant deal
with things thru post...come home tomorw and do whatever u want to
do...

kashish:gives the most disgusted and hurt look that she can manage to
sujal and leaves from there....

That's when umesh wakes up and realizes what has happened....he gets
angry with sujal...

umesh:sujal ye khya ho gaya tha tumhe...kyo itna over react kar raha
tha...

sujal:already cursing himself for such stupid outburst....walks off
from there without saying a word...

....................................................

umesh knows kashish is not going to come...but still somewhere, at
some corner of his heart he has a feeling that she is going to
come....

he lifts his head at he sound of the foot steps and gets happy that
it must be kashish....but sigh! its sujal....

umesh:oh sujal...thank God u came...i was thinking that u got angry
y'day with me for saying all that...but later on i understood that
its ur concern for me that made u speak like that....

sujal:that's ok uncle...in fact i shldnt have said all that...who am
i to talk anyway...

umesh:come on sujal..u know what is ur position in my heart...so dont
ever say things like this...

sujal:thanks uncle for giving me so much love...

sujal looks around searching for something....

umesh:nahi beta kashish nahi aayi...in these few months i understood
her very well...she is very swabhimani...i wonder if she will ever
come here...

sujal feels a little bit sorry for her,but he cant forget her close
moving with that other guy...so he thinks this serves her right...but
he did not think that she wld quit...he is feeling guilty for that....

while he is contemplating back and forth of various things that
cld've been and wld've been, shruti and anjali come down like a
toofan...

"oh sujal...sorry for the late...chale"

umesh:kaha jaane ki programme hai...

shruti:papa aaj sujal ne hame shopping le jaane ki promise kiya hai...

sujal:ok uncle we shall make a move now...ok girls..chale?

umesh keeps looking at the three of them who were leaving and thinks
to himself..."sujal when u refused to marry shruti and shruti was
also not too inclided towards marrying u..i thot may be it is not in
my kismat to have u as my son-in law...after i knew that kashish is
my daughter...my hopes again got awakened...but now what is all
this..."

Actually an year ago umesh wanted sujal to marry sruti...but both of
them refuse that proposal...shruti thot that sujal is not her type
and sujal is not willing to marry any rich girl...so that's how that
matter closed...

............................................................ ....

sujal,anjali and shruti just finished a part of their
shopping...sujal is already damn bored and he wants wrap it off and
leave...since he promised them,he is being patient with
them....shruti remembers that her papa asked her to get the medicines
for him...so she tells sujal abt it...they go into the nearest
medical shop...

as they entered they hear a very familiar voice...sujal is the first
one to recognise the voice...."kashiiish"he says to
himself,ofcourse....

kashish is on a hurry and she looked very worried....she is asking
that guy to make it fast...she did not even notice these people
entering and all that....
"please will u pack the injections fast....i need to take them to the
patient right away...dont u understand?"

sujal is surprised to see her in the first place and now looking at
her urgency and worry,he gets concerned...he wished that shruti and
anjali were not there with him...

shruti:arre kashish tum...khya baat hai?itna pareshaan khyo lag rahi
ho...

kashish doesnt even have time to get surprised seeing these guys
there...

kashish:hi shruti...bas kuch nahi...i'm in a hurry...sorry i will
talk to u later...
she takes the medicines and rushes out from there...just for a split
second she looks at sujal....

sujal is very concerned now and want to help her....

anjali is least bothered abt this whole thing...shruti also not too
much...

anjali;;;shruti chale?

shruti:yaa..lets go...suuuuuujal?what happened to u?lets go....

sujal:ha..yeah...girls....i just got a call from the office...they
need me urgenlty for something....if u dont mind, i think i shld
attend to that...ur shopping is also almost done....i will leave the
car and the driver and i will take a taxi and go...is that okay with
u?

shruti and anjali:ok...not a bad idea...

sujal rushes from there....

............................................................ ..

kashish is very restlessly waiting for the bus....already 2 buses
came and left but there is no place for another soul in them...

she senses somebody coming and standing next to her...yes again u
guessed it right...its sujal...

she just turns her head towards the other side....

sujal:why r u looking so worried...for whom are u taking these
medicines? (with full authority and concern in his voice)

no response...

sujal:did u not hear...i'm asking u something....

kashish:very rudely...did u not understand i'm not interested in
talking to u only...forget abt answering ur qstns...just leave me
alone...

sujal:i know u were angry abt y'day but do u understand that u 've
only urself to blame...

kashish:will u please stop it...i'm not at all interested in another
dual with u....please i'm already so worried and dont bother me...

sujal:please tell me kashish...khya hua...tum khyo itna pareshaan lag
rahi ho...ghar me sab thik to hai naa?

kashish:aap se matlab...

sujal:kashish i really want to know and help u...

she senses the sincerety in his eyes...

kashish:i dont need any help from u...anyways ...my mamma is not
well...we joined her in st.john's hospital a few days ago,but today
her condition deteriorated...doctor asked for these injections
urgently...saying this she starts again looking for the bus...

sujal calls a taxi and asks kashish to get in...

kashish doesnt want to get in...but sujal just grabs her arm and
almost drags her into the taxi...taxi wala is a little inquisitive
guy...he looks at them very strangely...thinking why this guy is
dragging her into the car like that...

sujal understands his looks and wants to answer him in the right
way...he also sits next to kashish in the taxi and asks that guy to
take them to so and so hospital...

taxi wala:saab, mem saab bohot tension me hai...sab thik tho hai
naa...kuch acha sa gaana daaldoo?mood ek dam first class ho jaata
hai...

kashish is least bothered abt what's going on...now that she is
anyway forced to sit in the taxi...she is more interested in reacing
there fast....

sujal:just gives him a serious look...

taxi wala:now he wants to make sujal a little happy...saab aapki jodi
bohot khubsurat hai...ek them made for eachother couple lag rahe
ho...lag raha hai aapko apni biwi ki bohot parwa hai...
(whatever...nazia see what u r putting me thru...u wanted me to write
dialogues in hindi right...as u can see..i'm trying...)

sujal is very happy with this remark...of course he doesnt show it
out as usual and sits very composed...but after a second cant help
giving a side glance to kashish, to see what her expressions r...

surprisingly there r no feelings...he wondered if she is in this
world at all...

now the taxi wala is seeing back at them again and again and also
thru the mirror...he is looking at them very doubtfully as to why
they were sitting so far away...

sujal sees this and understands....so he goes close to kashish and
puts his hands around her....

kashish almost jumps out of the seat at this.....sujal whispers to
her...'please...we have to act..otherwise we will become a laughing
stock in front of this guy'

now some unknows currents are passing thru sujal...its very difficult
to hold such a beautiful girl so close and not do anything...he is
having a hard time controlling himself...

kashish on the other hand is very uncomfortable at his touch...she
wants to run away from him at that minute...she is scared that she
will give away....but this is only for a minute...she remembers her
mamma again and gets lost...she is all worried abt her...she is lost
in her thots...

sujal is really getting turned on now....he is holding her very
gently like a million bucks....

meanwhile they reached the hospital...they get out of the taxi and
pay that guy ....and yes our man did it...he cld not control himself
anymore and just when they reached the footsteps of the hospital he
held her face and planted a sweet and gentle kiss on her
cheeks....kashish tried to resist but in vain...

she cld not believe what he did just now....she gets totally worked
up and raises her hand to give him a tight slap...but sujal stops her
on the way and says what happened...

kashish:u r asking me?arent u ashamed of what u did?

sujal:what did i do?whether u agree or not...hai tho tum meri biwi hi
na..tho phir maine khya galat kiya tha....

kashish:not able to understand what he is trying to say(actually she
is fully aware that this is not the time and place to handle him...so
she postpones it to someother time...right now she wants to rush to
her mom)she just gave him a look and says 'i will take care of u
later' and rushes....

sujal also runs behind her....

............................................................

kashish gave the injections to the doctor...the doctor asks her if
there is any male person to whom he can talk to ....(sorry girls i
know this is too mean...why?we can also handle these doctors...why
these men are needed...but i need them here in my story...so forgive
me...)

kashish doesnt know what to do...shyamlal is also not in town...he
went out on a pilgrimage....

sujal appears there and says yes doctor i'm there....

doctor:oh good...but how r u realted to the patient....

sujal:i'm kashish's friend...

kashish is totally spell bound...

doctor:ok...sir...this is what u need to do now....and explains him
the procedures and stuff...

sujal listens and gets into work immediately...he totally forgets abt
kashish...and gers focussed...

kashish cant believe that the same sujal was behaving like a teenager
just a few minutes ago...

sujal arranges for all the things that the doctor had asked for and
everything is going on like a clock work...he calls another doctor
who is his good friend and requests him to attend this case...that
doctor is only happy to oblige him....so everything is done and
kashish's mom is out of danger...

kashish heaves a sigh of relief and feels happy that her mom is okay
now...

doctor:sujal...u r just in time...good job buddy...

sujal:hey...i 've to thank u...for taking care of the
patient...really..

doctor leaves saying bye to kashish and sujal....

sujal also is abt to leave without saying a word to kashish...

kashish:ek minute....u thot that all this drama will make me think
good abt u?no way...may be somebody else will be fooled by all these
naatak but not me...cos i know behind all this acha hine ki nakaab
there is a cruel heartless person...

sujal:why do u think that i want to make u think good abt me?

kashish:That's exactly what i want to ask u...

sujal:oh...(again his natkat self is out)...may be cos u r my
wife...i want to make good impression on u...tell me am i
successfull...

kashish:mujhe aapke soch par hasi aati hai...u think of urself as a
smart person...dont forget that u r dealing with me...kashish...

sujal:arre nahi..kabhi nahi...if i forgot that how will i be here...u
think i've opened one charity center or what...i'm here cos u r
here...(suddenly he becomes serious)...achi tarah se ye baat samaj lo
aur jaan bhi lo....

he leaves right away...

kashish is confused at his behaviour...she doesnt understand why he
is reminding her again and again that they r married and all that
when they know very well that they r never going to come together...
......................................................

so that's the end of part10...

Is it upto ur expectations?hope so...but do let me know abt it....


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Posted: 17 years ago
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hey cool part. cont soon. jaldi spice dalo.
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dear saranya where the 11 part pl, send it soon as i cant wait formore longer.it is going upto my expectations.really very very interesting.pl continue soon.
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part-11
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Recap: Sujal helps kashish in the hospital in taking care of her
mamma...she tells him that he doesnt have to do these things to
impress her,he is never going to be impressed by these outward show
off...he says may be he will do these things cos he likes to impress
his wife....Kashish is totally confused with sujal's behaviour....
...........................................................

Savita wakes up and finds herself in the hospital...she wants to get
up but kashish comes running to her to find out if she needs
something...but savita doesnt want to talk to her...so kashish calls
her maamiji to take care of savita and she leaves from there to come
to cook some food and get....
...................................................

At home....

Kashish came home very tired...she wants to lie down for a while but
she knows that she will have to take food for her mom...so she goes
to take bath...she took head bath nicely and came out a little
relaxed...she wore her trade mark cotton salwaar kameez(short salwaar
white in color and red bandini dupatta) and left her hair loose to
dry (she has medium length, thick,straight beautiful
hair....)....she is busy in the kitchen and somebody knocks the
door...she wonders who that cld be at that point of time, and as she
is already in a rush, she gets a little bit irritated also...with
this irritated look she opens the door(yes i'm inspired by nargis's
opening the door for rajkapoor in in..i think its shree420).she opens
the door and gets surprised....ITS SUJAL THERE....

She is just dumb founded....She is not able to guess what this guy is
upto...why is he here?

Kashish:you.....here?

sujal is totally taken over by her beauty...he is staring at her
without saying a word...he just loved her simplicity...

kashish:yes...u want to say something?

sujal:hi...is this how u generally treat the people who come to ur
home?

kashish:no this is not how i treat the people who i hate...i treat
them even worse...anyways tell me what do u want?

sujal:two things....first i want to come in...cos i dont want to u to
get into any trouble...

kashish:very reluctantly gives way to him to come in....

sujal comes in and looks around....he sees a big laminated picture of
her and chandru hanging on the wall...he gets very irritated but this
time he decides to ask her in a cool way who that was...

kashish:u came here to find that out?

sujal:no i came here to find out how ur mom is doing...actually i was
passing this way an hour back and saw u un locking the door and
coming in....i just finished my work and while going back i want to
see if u r still there and if neccessary i want to help u....

kashish:no thank you....i dont need any help....and for heaven's sake
atleast not from u....and now please if u leave, i have a lot of work
to do....and in our household we dont entertain any ajnabhee men at
home when we r all alone...so please leave........

sujal:arre wah...i like that principle...but i'm not ajnabhee...come
on u know me....dont worry if somebody comes in i will tell them the
truth only...

Kashish:very irritated...storms into the kitchen very helplessly....

sujal did not want to irritate kashish too much so he tells her that
he is going to wait outside in the car and once she is done with her
work, he will take her to the hospital....

kashish is relieved that atleast he is out of there for the time
being...

But by then the damage is already done....the neighbour already saw
him coming in and talking to her...(remember ravi's granny).....

she looks at sujal who is sitting in the car,very
suspiciously....sujal oblivious of these things turns on the music in
the car and starts waiting for kashish.....

kashish very quickly finished the cooking, packing the food and
everything, got ready and rushed out of the house,not wanting anybody
to see her with sujal....

sujal seeing her, starts his car and opens the front door for
her...but she just walks past the car very fast....

sujal gets so angry but controls it...

he drives the car till the end of the road and waits there...kashish
comes there and without even looking at him opens the front door and
sits very quitely....

sujal doesnt understand this...he looks at her for explanation....

kashish:i did not want anybody gossiping abt me...if they see me
sitting in ur car, that too when no one's home, i cant even imagine
what cld be the consequence....

sujal realizes that for the first time kashish spoke to him very
softly....he cant help smiling...

They sit quitely without talking much....sujal looks at her a couple
of times but kashish is lost in the thots of her mom...she is worried
abt her...she is feeling bad that her mom is doubting her as to where
she got all that money from, for her treatment.....

Sujal:kashish are u ok? very softly he asks, without a lot of concern
in his voice....

kashish:looks at him...yeah i'm fine...

just when they were abt to get to the hospital kashish sees chandru
walking on the footpath there....she waves at him and asks sujal to
stop the car...sujal doesnt understand her sudden excitement...he
stops the car and looks at kashish...but she is not even
bothered...she picks up her stuff, gets down and runs to
chandru ...not even saying thanks or bye to sujal...now sujal is
totally pissed off....he wants to punch that guy black and blue,but
before he thinks of anything they disappear into a small restaurant
there....again whatever self talk sujal did that he is not going to
be nasty to kashish,all went into drain...

..................................................

chandru:kashish sorry for that day...i just had to leave cos i saw
somebody observing us(he means sujal)...and today i find u with the
same person....dont mind me asking but who is he?

kashish:i've recently known him...he is a family friend of my boss...

chanru:acha...that's all is it.....(ounds very disappointed)

kashish:that's all means what else u expect....

chandru:kashish i want to see u settilled...i know i'm younger than
u...but i've always felt very responsible for ur future and always
found my happiness in urs....

kashish:smiles and says...i know that....its the same with me also
chandru....that's why i'm so worried for u...tell me what r u
upto...just leave everything and come back to home...now also its not
too late...

chandru:no kashish...it is already late...now i'm too involved....now
even if i come back its not only dangerous for me,but its dangerous
for u'll also...so now its only onwards journey for me...no looking
back....

and he suddenly goes off from there saying bye to her in a hurry....

kashish is thinking, how she can get her brother out of that
dangerous thing that he is involved in....
.......................................................

chandru:his cell rings...hello

hi chandru...

chandru:hi is that sam...

sam:yes

chandru:yeah tell me sam

Sam:u need to go and deliver the product todaay evening only .....

chandru:but u said its tomorw evening right...

sam:no now we changed the plans...somehow the police go to know abt
tomorw...so we r doing it a day earlier....now listen to me carefully
and everything is as per the original plan,except the code word...bla
bla bla...some code word he says....

chadru:ok done...but remember the deal right....if something happens
to me dont forget to deposit that money in the account number that i
gave u....i trust u sam...

sam:dont worry chandru u will be fine....

...........................................

Kashish after a long time goes to umesh's house...umesh is very happy
to have her there....

kashish:hello sir...

umesh:hi kashish how r u?how is ur mamma?

kashish:fine sir...sorry sir i cld not come all these days...i wanted
to come much earlier to give my resignation...

umesh:so u still did not forget what happened that day...please
forget all that kashish...i need here....i really do....

kshish:sir but...

umesh:please kashish i dont know why sujal behaved like that,that
day...i ask for fogiveness on behalf of him...( i know its very
strange to hear these words from a boss,but from a father i think
these words are very natural, that too for his long lost daughter)

kashish:no sir please dont make me feel ashamed...

umesh:but i'ms till surprised at his outburst....if u dont mind
kashish...who was with u that day?

kashish:my brother sir...i told u everything abt him....now i hardly
get to meet him...that day he told me that he was coming to that
park..that;s why i came there to meet him(she tells him the whole
thing that happened)

umesh:very disappointed...arre kashish i told u to introduce ur
brother to me no?

kashish:sir i did not know that u were there only...

umesh:that's ok...but he is fine right...

kashish breaks up hearing somebody talking to her softly...all her
composure is gone with the wind....in between she says that she just
manages to say that nothing is going on ok now...her mom is not doing
good and also her brother's safety is a big point of worry for her....


umesh tries to console her taking her into his arms....

shruti comes that way and gets very jealous...she thinks that her dad
never took her only into his arms...she wants to somehow throw
kashish out of her house....one more reason for that is, that
everybody at home including sujal is giving her more
importance.....and she cld not bear that....

Here umesh manaofies kashish to take back her resignation...
........................................................

end of part 11...



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Posted: 17 years ago
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darling u made my day.i ve no words to express my love and feeling for such a cute story.jis tarah se sujal kashish ke kareeb aa raha hai aur kashish with her stubboruness like nahi chahte huye bhi uske kareeb aarahee hai and the jealousy of sujal 4r kashish is mindblowing.u r toooo good.pl continue soon.waiting eagerly.thanks alot,i was waiting madly for this part.
luv bye sullu.
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Posted: 17 years ago
#37
darling u made my day.i ve no words to express my love and feeling for such a cute story.jis tarah se sujal kashish ke kareeb aa raha hai aur kashish with her stubboruness like nahi chahte huye bhi uske kareeb aarahee hai and the jealousy of sujal 4r kashish is mindblowing.u r toooo good.pl continue soon.waiting eagerly.thanks alot,i was waiting madly for this part.
luv bye sullu.
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Posted: 17 years ago
#38
sorry it came two times as it waas clicked twice by mistake.
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Posted: 17 years ago
#39
hey saranya dear awesme part loved it it was great continue sooooon πŸ‘ can't wait more πŸ‘
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Posted: 17 years ago
#40
thank u honii and sulatana thank u so much
i really loved ur comments a lot
thank u thank u