The Ultimate Price - Pts. 9,10,Epi Pg 28 - Page 14

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Posted: 18 years ago

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Originally posted by: jnawaz

omg...just read all parts...i would have liked to say in one sitting but alsa...no...i started at work...i was half way done with part 2...well almost done...just got to the 'physical incompatibility'😲 😲 😲 ..and some lady shows up for a tour of the hospital cuz her hubby will be admitted tomorrow... 😡 i was about to strangle her... 😡 ...then i had to come home n finish...anywho 😉 😉 ...love it...its really really really good...bechari bani...when will some light shine in her life...and what is up with jai...is he truly stupid or another 'plan'...does he love bani...ok pls update soon...i hope jai dosent get mad and think bani hid the truth from him...
JAZ

Jaz, I am glad you didnt strangle that poor lady. 😕

I am trying to update soon so lets see. JW is plain stupid over here.

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
Sangita

Pointless to say I enjoyed it very much. You very well know that.

But this track is bothering me.

Do you actually mean the this Jai Walia is contended with how life is moving with that dung head. I mean god please shower some senses to him. He has almost forgotten the face of Bani and Ranos childs name. Ok no issues with neha but pia.

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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: pooks

Dear Sangita.

Hi Pooks

I truely admire the Bani in your fanfic. She is so dignified. Even in the face of such difficulties, she has conducted herself really well.

Yes dear, her dignity will always mark her out. But then, she's still a human being susceptible to mistakes.

As for JW, I have never ended up hating him as much as I have in this story. 😡 😡 He seemed so cold when he was thinking the following: "Bani and Rano and Rano's kid(what's his name? he thought) were distant memories to him and in fact he couldn't remember their faces properly too". Talk about Ehsanfaramosh, the fact that she had done so much for him. And how could he even think that she would have told him that she had had his baby, after what he did to her.... 😡 😡 .. 😡

Please dont be angry, he's just a character in this FF. And there are different sorts of people all over. 😕

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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: ovaltine

well written sad but guess it has a higher likely hood of happening in reality, based on what you had written in one of your posts regarding sisters like Pia do exist. I envisage that JW will move to get custody of Krishna. I would like Bani to assimilate the end of any feelings for JW. Maybe in the end perhaps run away to a foreign land rather than giving in to JW, curse her fate and fall into misery of reliving the past. We know she is sort of an emotional fool.

Thanks Oval.

And yes, Bani is an emotional fool. That usually brings her downfall. 😭

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Posted: 18 years ago
Sangita, I just want to request that if JW files for custody (knowing how his mind works) please don't let Bani give in. I know she is an emotional wreck but still, you have potrayed her as a dignified character. Do let her have some strength when it comes to her child. Please, please do not let her give up her child. 😭

Thanks. 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
👏 👏 👏 fab parts sangita liked the way u express each n every emotions 😃

so jai got to know aout ikrishan his and bani's child now wat will his weird mind think .. filling for custody if so then plzz sangita un;like ekta mayyi u plzzzz do make bani stand up for herself and never give her one n only happiness krishna to jai plzzz
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Posted: 18 years ago
Sangs,

Firstly, I am sorry for making assumptions that Jai is doing all this as a pretense, obviously I am wrong! 😭

Now I hate him, I really did think that he was joking about the physical compatibility part!

I am glad he found out about Bani having his child 'Krishna' and am doubly glad she didn't accept any of his filthy money. I am appalled that he didn't remember Varun's name! What a jerk!

Pia has all the material comforts, Jai has a pretty but no brained hostess that warms his bed and has his child. Hope they are both happy with each other. Jai should leave Krishna and Bani alone!! 😡
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Posted: 18 years ago
hi sangita
that was a fabulous ff. JAi... what do i say about him. u have portrayed his dark side very well. he is sucha selfish man. i also thought his behaviour was a pretext. 😕 whats he going to do now? will he ever realize what BAni is for him? oh i know i am day dreaming... some people are born so selfish.... i just hate to see him happy with pia.. i can't help my emotions in that thought.
update fassssst i am eagerly waiting to see what happnes next.
love
kamy
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Posted: 18 years ago

Aww .......Sangs darling,

Just read both the parts, and fabulous as always dear.👏

God sooooo hate Jai😡. I just hope he does not get the custody of Bani's child just because he happened to find out about it by chance.😡😡

Let Bani run away with the child anything but , dont want him to have Krishna's custody, but my heart says he will, as that will be the ultimate price Bani pays😭, her child being snatched from her😭

Cant wait for the next part dear.

Love

Krishna

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