The Ultimate Price - Pts. 9,10,Epi Pg 28 - Page 25

Dear Sangita

I had figured that this story would also have a sad ending like most of your other stories. There are people out there in the world who are extremely cold and deviod of emotions, just the way Jai Walia has been depicted here. Couldn't help but end up hating him so much for pushing Bani to her end. 😡 😭. Am extremely happy that Jai's son Krishna has turned out to be a trouble maker, going to the red light areas and taking drugs. The downfall of his son in front of his eyes would be a breaking point for him. 👏 👏

The way you have portrayed Rano and Varun made me feel extremely proud of them. And Varun coming to work in WT would surely mean the downfall of Jai Walia. I truely hope that Jai Walia gets to know how lonliness, poverty and heartbreak are towards his last days. That should probably make him realize as to what he had done to Bani.

Dear Sangita

I had figured that this story would also have a sad ending like most of your other stories. There are people out there in the world who are extremely cold and deviod of emotions, just the way Jai Walia has been depicted here. Couldn't help but end up hating him so much for pushing Bani to her end. 😡 😭. Am extremely happy that Jai's son Krishna has turned out to be a trouble maker, going to the red light areas and taking drugs. The downfall of his son in front of his eyes would be a breaking point for him. 👏 👏

The way you have portrayed Rano and Varun made me feel extremely proud of them. And Varun coming to work in WT would surely mean the downfall of Jai Walia. I truely hope that Jai Walia gets to know what lonliness, poverty and heartbreak are towards his last days. That should probably make him realize as to what he had done to Bani.

a really amazing FF!!

i was expecting a sad ending but 😭 😭 😭 it nearly made me cry...

i really hated this JW with a passion!

but the last line was 👏

Sangs,

You have made a faluda of my poor Munna. 😭 😭 😭 But dont worry I will settle the scores. 😉

I will write a FF where Bani has every thing a mortal desires- wealth, power, social status, a seven star sainthood, kids (JW's of course) while poor Munna will have nothing- childless, penniless, homeless (almost) and alone (not exactly 😉 ). And he wont leave behind anyone to take revenge on his behalf.

And yet you will wonder whether you would like to be in Bani's shoes or Munna's when the stumps are drawn.

Rgds,

Pri

Originally posted by: majumdar

Sangs,

You have made a faluda of my poor Munna. 😭 😭 😭 But dont worry I will settle the scores. 😉

I will write a FF where Bani has every thing a mortal desires- wealth, power, social status, a seven star sainthood, kids (JW's of course) while poor Munna will have nothing- childless, penniless, homeless (almost) and alone (not exactly 😉 ). And he wont leave behind anyone to take revenge on his behalf.

And yet you will wonder whether you would like to be in Bani's shoes or Munna's when the stumps are drawn.

Rgds,

Pri

Pri this is just a story nothing else.

Do you really think I view Munna like this? Nope not at all.

As for your FF you are free to write anything I guess. But I never imagined that you would actually say that cos I wrote this.

Dont worry, this is my last FF over here. As it is, I write very less, so dont worry. Best of luck to you all.

Regards

Sangita

Sangs,

Don't worry, my FF will always have a happy ending, Munna-Munni together.

Rgds,

Pri

Sangeeta,

Wondeful FF.. !
REaly felt proud for Varun and Rano... 👏 👏

Well the hero of the story sure was the villian of heroic proportions. Pity B died heartbroken.....thought she was made of sterner stuff.

Can't say I was happy reading about this JW and the bitterness,pathos....but must commend u on a story well written.

Thanks

sorry eta pm e pathate cheychilam kintu amaar machine e kichu problem hoyeche tai pm er writing area ta load hoche na se jonyo ekhane likchi.....

tomar ff ta pode shesh korlam. sheshe giye ami to ekebaare speechless!!!! ekdom unexpected kintu perfect ending. sudhu ending ki, right from the beginning golpote emon bhabei egiyeche je proti muhurte mone hoyeche ebar ki habe???? eki hote pare??? na bole parchi na, ebarey aro natunatter dikey tene niye gecho.
tomar chintadhara, durodarshita aar kalpana shakti khoob prakhar. naiba holo premikder bhalobashar golpo(jemonta anekei cheychilo aar sotti bolte ki prothom prothom amio tai cheychilam), jibone anekbaar emonta ghote thake jekhane pawar kichui thake na athocho haranor kono shesh thake na. tomay dhanyabaad janai manush er ei bibhinno charitrer sange porichoy karanor jonyo.

aaj ekhanei rakhi kintu......

tomar lekhar moddhe diye ebhabei amader mon joy korte theko ei subhokamona(asole amaar nijer swarthai bolte paro) roilo.

iti
reeshita.