*~Hamare Pyaar Ki Nishani(LKff) part4 p:3

Hey guys here is my laksh and kt fan fiction

i just felt like writing as it's my fav jodi...😛

hope u enjoy reading it...

Part 1: page 1

Part 2: page 2

Part 3: page 2

Part 4: page 3

love

pari😛

Edited by pari213 - 17 years ago

Part 1

here it goes...

(This story takes place after laksh and kt were married. It has been a week since they married…)

 

It was early morning, everybody was downstairs 4 breakfast.

Kt, Ganga, Tanya, were in the kitchen getting the breakfast ready.. and Damini were setting the table..

Kt had made a kheer for the first time after she married laksh… she offers it to Ganga to taste it…

G: arre wah…. Ye to bilkul vaise hi hai jaise pehle ma(tulsi) banaya karti thi… aur vaise bhi  kyu nahi hoga akhir tum ma ki hi to parchayi ho….

KT: maa.. aap ne ye te keh diya ki mai baa ki parchayi hu par kya mai apni maa ki tarah nahi hu..? kya mai aap ki parchayi nahi hu?

G: tu meri parchayi nahi mera aayna hai….

Kt (smiles so cutely)

T: Kya baate chal rahi hai saas bahu mai, zara mai bhi to sunu…

G: kuch nahi, tu ye chakh.. (offers her the kheer) meri beti ne banayi hai...

T: (eats the first spoon and her eyes goes wide) arre waa kt.. kya baat hai….

(kt and ganga smiles awwetly)

G: achhi hai na..?

T: tu puch rahi hai aur vo bhi muje..?

G: (laughs) then she takes off the chain with heart shaped pendal and gives it to kt)

Kt: maa. Ye..?

T: rakhle beta.. ye ek maa ka pyaar hai apni beti ke liye…

Kt: (takes the chain and touches ganga's feet)

T: abhi chale? Sab log ready hai breakfast ke liye…

They goes out for the breakfast…

Everybody was at the breakfast table and ganga asks kt to serve the kheer to everyone…

(pari was sitting on the right side of laksh and the left side was empty)

Kt serves the kheer to everyone and is standing there looking for a seat, then pari says: babhi kya soch rahi hai… abhi beth jao na.. itna bhi mat sharmao bhaiya ke baju mai bethne sai ( don't be shy by sitting next to ur husband)

Kt feels shy and just goes by laksh and sits down while everyone was eating laksh was keep touching kt's hand and kt hitting his hand telling him and telling him to stop.. while this romance was going on, they didn't notice that pari was watching all this and is gigaling…

Anyways it was almost time for the man of viani's to go tto office…

Laksh always goes to meet kt before he goes to office in his room, I mean their room…

Kt was in the room, was making the bed while laksh slowly enters the room and hold kt from her waist

Kt: ahhhhhh…

Then laksh puts his chin on her shoulder.

L: kya hua…? (mak her turn around to face him)

KT: blushes and looks down

L: umm.. bataogi nahi?

Kt: wo..

L: wo..?

Kt: aaj ma ne muje kuch diya…

L: kya diya?

Kt shows the chain…

L: arre wah… kitni achhi hai na…

Kt: wo…(looks worried)

L: kya hua..? tumhe pasand nahi ayi..?

Kt: nahi nahi… asi baat nahi hai..

L: to kya baat hai..?

Kt: wo maine le kar theek to kiya na..? itni mehgi(expensive), achha nahi lagta…

L: pagal ye to ek ma ka pyaar hai apne bet eke bahu ke liye…

Kt: wo to hai… (and smiles)

That's it for today...

I will continue the next part on Friday…

Do comment plzzzz and tell me how can I improve it

And ya ur ideas too…

Hope u like it..

Love

pari😳

 

Edited by pari213 - 17 years ago

aww its really good!continue sn!

thx a lot but i guess no body else liked it soo it's no point of continuing it..
love
pari

its great! 👏 👏 please cont.

👏omg!...it's awesum!👏.👏👏.👏👏.👏pls continue sooon,pari....the scenes with kt and laksh are so so cute.....😛...and ur a reallly gud writer...don't get discouraged...it takes time..im sure u'll get lots of comments and pls do continue....i wanna read more....

luv,

nishaat😊

ok guys i will surely continue the story soon but right now i have requests in my signature shop soooo once i get over with them i will surely continue for u guys and thx a lot 4 commanting it feel much better to know u liked it..... 😳

love
pari

i'm sorry guys that i took sooooooo long to continue but i had exams soo here is my next part

Recape:
L: to kya baat hai..?
Kt: wo maine le kar theek to kiya na..? itni mehgi(expensive), achha nahi lagta…
L: pagal ye to ek ma ka pyaar hai apne bet eke bahu ke liye…
Kt: wo to hai… (and smiles)


Then she suddenly remembers what the hell he is doing here, doesn't he have to go to office…?

Kt( pushes laksh away)
L: arre… ye kya trika hai, apne pati ko dhakka deti ho..?
Kt: laksh tum yaha kya kar rahe ho..? tumhe late nahi ho raha hai?
L: kiske liye..?
Kt: office nahi jana kya..?
L: arre haa… mai to bhol hi gaya.. chalo abhi jaldi se ek kiss dedo muje late ho raha hai…
Kt: nai….tum jao… tumhe late ho raha hai na…
L: (makes cute face) plz….
Kt; laksh….
L: Kt……
Kt: plz…
L; plzzzz…..
Kt: pushes him towards the door to go to office…
L: kt… kt… ek min meri baat to suno…
Kt: kya hai….?
L: (he turns around to face her…) plz…….
Kt: laksh… jao…. And pushes him out of their bed room…
L ( comes back at the door and says plzzzzz…..)
Kt; puts her hands on her hips and stare at him…
L: theek hai theek hai ja raha hu…. Wo mera beg dena zara…
Kt: picks up his bag and goes to hand it to him…. And then.. again he hold her by her waist and says… mai jao… ?
Kt: jao naa….
L: shayam ko jaldi aao…?
Kt: (nods as a yes… ) and smiles shyly..
L: laksh kiss her on her forehead and then quickly on her cheek and leaves..
Kt: pagal…. And smiles…

IN THE EVENING

When kt goes downstairs in the kitchen, she doesn't find anyone but it was time to make the dinner.
She goes to ganga's room and she finds her there…. (lucky)

Kt: ma..
G: haa bol..
Kt: koi neeche kyu nahi hai.. kitchen mai? Khana nahi pakana kya?
G: nahi..
Kt: par..?
G: dekh hum subhi bahar ja rahe hai dinner ke liye sivai…
Kt: sivai?
G: laksh ke..
Kt: kyu?
G: usne kaha ki uski zaroori meeting hai issiliye nahi aa sakta par kaha ki tumhe saath legaye.. to ja jaldi tayaar hoja.
Kt: nahi maa… (makes a sad face)
G: kyu?
Kt: mai nahi anna chahti..
G: par kyu..?
KT: yuhi mera maan nahi hai ….
G: kyuki maan nahi hai ya phir kyuki laksh nahi aa vaha hai?
    Hmmm….
Kt: (smiles shyly) ma…
G: achha thik hai to tu tere liye aur laksh ke liye kuch bana lena , kyuki ki hamne aaj kuch bhi nahi banaya hai…
Kt: jee…
G: to mai chalti hu… bahar sab mera intzaar kar rahe honge, laksh ko anne mai der hogayegi aur hum bhi der se hi ayenge thik hai na…..
Kt: jee.. ma.. bye…
G: bye….


That's for part 2 guys I'll put the next part up later
DO COMMENT IT GIVES ME COURAGE…. TO WRITE MORE…
Love
pari

Do continue with next part. I cant wait. Kt is so nice. 👏

aww such a nice part
do cont soon