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Posted: 18 years ago
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thx guys for liking it.... 😳


here is PART 3 😛

Recap:
G: kyuki maan nahi hai ya phir kyuki laksh nahi aa vaha hai?
Hmmm….
Kt: (smiles shyly) ma…
G: achha thik hai to tu tere liye aur laksh ke liye kuch bana lena , kyuki ki hamne aaj kuch bhi nahi banaya hai…
Kt: jee…
G: to mai chalti hu… bahar sab mera intzaar kar rahe honge, laksh ko anne mai der hogayegi aur hum bhi der se hi ayenge thik hai na…..
Kt: jee.. ma.. bye…
G: bye….


AT NIGHT

Kt have made full dinner for laksh and herself. She was waiting for laksh in the living room. For like an hour she watched tv but then she got board so she went to her room and was trying to find something that excites her so she can stay awake.

She remembers that she had made a diary, where she collected all her and laksh's aweet moments. ( just like how amrita did for shahid in ishq vishq) she pulls it out and looked at it…. And then she went to her daydreaming… she was dreaming about her and laksh dancing outside in the garden and it was snowing….

At like 12:00pm laksh came back from work and kt was still in the room day dreaming… laksh thought that no one is home and he doesn't feel like eating anything without her jaan so… he thought that he would go and chage and finish his some office work. He enters the room and sees kt and the dairy in her hand.. at first he was surprised.. "what the hell she is doing here"

He went by her and saw the diary and the way she had their cute pics in it.. and soo organized. She never showed him the book. He went behind her and kissed her on her cheek. Kt comes out of her day dreaming and look back and she finds laksh standing there…

Kt: tum..? tum aa gaye…
L: haa… kyu?
Kt: nahi wo… kuch nahi (and she quickly hides the diary behing her)
L: kya hai woo dikhao muje…
Kt: kuch nahi … kuch nahi tum chalo change karlo aur mai khana lagati hu.. theek hai../
L: ok..
(kt feel relax)
Then laksh goes to the bathroom and that time kt quickly opens the closet and hides the diary but she didn't notice that laksh had open the bathroom door cause he forgot his towel…..and now laksh knows where is that dieary….)

Kt goes downstairs and gets the dinner ready… on the table.. then she goes back to her room to see if laksh is changed or not.. and guess what she saw….??????

Ok guys that's the end of part 3 I'll try to put the next part tomorrow…
Hope u like it and guys plzz comment or else I might think that u guys are not interested.. so.. I won't write so plzz do comment if u like it..
Thanks a lot

Love
pari
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Wonderful story Pari, eagerly waiting for next part.
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Posted: 18 years ago
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thx forcommenting and liking guys
here is part 4

Recap: Kt goes downstairs and gets the dinner ready… on the table.. then she goes back to her room to see if laksh is changed or not.. and guess what she saw….??????



She sees that laksh is holding her diary and is about to open it. She runs and grabs the diary away from laksh.

Kt: laksh yeh… yeh… kya kar rahe ho….? (and snatches the diary saying that)
L: arre dekhne dona kya hai? (and stuggle to get the diary)
Kt: nahi.. ye meri hai....
L: arre par tum meri biwi ho aur mai tumhara pati, isme kya chupana (and still stuggle)
Kt: nahi.. nahi….
L: arre plz… jaan dekhne dona, kitni acchi decorate ki hai aaur waise uspe mera aur tumhara nam bhi likha hai…. Plzz… dekhne dona…(stuggle)
Kt: nahi…
L: arre muje dekhna hai ke usme tumhara aur mere bare me hi hoga.
(asks her so sweetly )
Kt: (couldn't say no) achha theek hai par..
L: par..?
Kt: khan eke bad?
L: promise…?
Kt: promise…
Kt: abb chale…?
L: haa chalo…

They goes downstairs, laksh goes to the dinning table while kt places the dishes at the table.

L: kya bannaya hai aaj. ( he opens the first bowl)
L: rajma chawal..?(isn't it's his fav…?)
Kt: haa.. tumhe pasand hai naa…?
L: bahot…
Kt: (serves laksh and sit by the next chair and wait while he eats)
L: arre… tum nahi kha rahi ho?
Kt: pehle tum to khalo...
L: arre aise kese chalega?
Kt: wo tum khalo mai bad mai kha lungi..
L: par bad mai kyu…?
Kt: baa ne hamesha se sikhaya hai ki ek patni tab tak khana nahi khati jab tak uake pati aur bachhe nahi kha lete.. issiliye….
L: ye bahot wrong hai .. chalo abhi cup chap khana kao.. (he offers her the spoone filled with rajma chawal)
Kt: ek min..( and she urns the spoon towards him) pehle tum…
L: tum nahi sudhrogi.. (laksh eats it and he picks up another spoon of rajma chawal and offers it to kt..) abb to khalo…
Kt: smiles and eats the rajma chawal)

They both enjoy the dinner and then kt had to clean up so she goes in the kitche and laksh goes after her…
Kt ties her hair up in a bun… n start washing dishes…aksh cums from behind … holds her by her waist n pulls her over close to his chest n takes the hair tie outta her hair….

L: muhje tumhare baal koole aache lagte hai…
Kt smiles
L: ek ladko wala sawal poochu?
Kt blushes….
L: ladkiya raat ko itni cute nightys (night dress) kyu pehenti hai….?
Kt: turns around and put her hand on his mouth and puts her face by his left side off the face.. (kind a hug) chhe….(eeeww.)
L: (moves her hand from his mouth) kahona…?
Kt: blushes and tries to run away but…….

I'll put up the next part by Monday… guys..
Do comment if u liked it….

Love
pari
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Posted: 18 years ago
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No comments.... 😭 😭 😭
anyways
here is Part 5

Recap:
L: muhje tumhare baal koole aache lagte hai…
Kt smiles
L: ek ladko wala sawal poochu?
Kt blushes….
L: ladkiya raat ko itni cute nightys (night dress) kyu pehenti hai….?
Kt: turns around and put her hand on his mouth and puts her face by his left side off the face.. (kind a hug) chhe….(eeeww.)
L: (moves her hand from his mouth) kahona…?
Kt: blushes and tries to run away but…….

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Kt: chodo muje.....
L: kyu...? (kisses her ear and neck)
Kt: muje abhi sara kan bhi khatam karna hai aur phir tum muje aise tung karoge to phir kaise khatam hoga.
L: to..?
Kt: (try moves his hand from her waist) to kya.. chodona...
L: theek hai baba ye lo chod diya....
Kt: (fells relieved and get back to her dishes)( and laksh stands by her and keep staring at her)

When she is done with everything.. laksh comes close to her and picks her up in his arms...
Kt: laksh....... ye kya kar rahe.... ho....? chodo.... ( and strugle in his arms)
L: (doesn't listen to her ans carry her directly in their room and slowly puts her down on their bed..then he turns off all the lights and kt gets scare then he comes back to kt and the position is laksh on top of kt)
Kt: Laksh...?( in a scary ton)
L: (cober her mouth) shhhh.....
Kt: (heart beat start getting higher and her)
L: (goeas near her face and tries to kiss her on her lips but kt shyly look away)
Kt: kya kar rahe hoo...?(blushes)
L: kyu.. apni biwi se pyaar bhi nahi kar sakta? ( whisper in her ear)
Kt: Koi dekh lega... to.....? (shyly)
L: (pulls her up from her chin) koi ghaar me hoga to dekhega na....

He kisses her on her cheek , her forehead, her nose, and then her lips,..... then the scene shift to the morning.....

IN THE MORNING

Kt gets ready and sees laksh sleeping soo peacefully so thought that she will wake him up later as it's just 5:00am...
she goes downstair in the kitchen and sees ganga and tulsi talking to eachother and look like they are worried about something

Kt goes towards them : baa... ma.... (and take their ashrwaad)
T: jeeti reh.. sada suhagan reh...
G: jeeti reh beta .... sada suhagan rehna...
Kt: aap log kuch preshan lag rahe hai kya baat hai..?
G: wo kuch nahi...
T: ganga mai keh rahi hu wo mana nahi karegi...
Kt: kya baat hai baa.. kon mana nahi krega.?
T: tum...
Kt: jeee..?
T: wo kya haina ki haridwaar mai ghar saaf karne jaana hai kyuki guruji the na wo, wo waha rehna chate hai issiliye abb problem hai kon jayega...?
Kt: haan to isme konsi badi baat hai mai chali jaugi.. waise bhi soni rajji ja hi rahe hai apne mama papa se milne....
G: problem ye hai beta ki hum chahte the ki laksh bhi jaye tumhare saath par...?
Kt: par...?
G: wo kya hai na ki wo naya project sahil ne ready kiya hai uspe laksh hi kaam kar raha hai to usko ye khatam kiye bina sahil usse jane nahi dega aur phir agar laksh ne suna ki tum usse door ja rahi ho to wo tumhe bhi nahi jane dega aur yaha par hum sab busy hai.. issiliye...
Kt: (gets a bit sad about hearing that laksh is not going with her and now they will be saperated 4 some days..) koi baat nahi maa laksh ko mai samja dungi aap chinta mat kijiye bataye kab jana hai?
T: dekha maine kaha than na ye kabhi mana nahi karegi...
G: abhi....
Kt: abhi...?
G: haa guruji parso aa rahe hai.. waha pe...
Kt: theek hai to phir mai tayar ho ke ati hu...
G: achha theek hai beta...

(Kt is really sad.. and thinking how she will tell laksh about this)( she is really sad and going up the stairs)
Kt: abb mai laksh ko kaise batau...? ( she reach their room and she goes in)

(Kt is really sad.. and thinking how she will tell laksh about this)( she is really sad and going up the stairs)
Kt: abb mai laksh ko kaise batau...? ( she reach their room and she goes in)

she sees laksh sleeping soo peacfully... she goes near him and sit by him... she was gonna wake him up but then she thought that: agar maine inhe uthaya to phir ye muje jane nahi denge..ya to phir mere saath ane ki zidd karenge.. nahi...

she goes away and she gets ready..... she takes out laksh's suit and towel... she placed it on the other side of the bed.... then she opened her closet to find a showl for her because a it's going to be a bit cold in the mornin morning.... when she was finding it in her closet she sees her diary that laksh wanted to see last night.... she smiled and brings that diary and put it on top of laksh's clothes and towel so that he can see it... she also write a letter to him.... and she placed it where she have placed the his clothes and stuff...

hope u like it and plzz comments

love
pari
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Posted: 18 years ago
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ooooooo plz plz cont. soon pari 😳 😳 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
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aww...gr8 ff! luved it! plz continue soon!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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plz continue soon. I love it.

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