Originally posted by: Anusha16
Lollolika ji, Somehow missed to tay you, so here
No problem dear
this is so emotional and heartbreaking 
Always a fan of your writing 
please continue with their reunion in another OS
Originally posted by: Anusha16
This started with your request to have a scene between Chotton and Ani regarding his unhappiness after the announcement party fiasco and quickly devolved into this lol!
Honestly wanted to finish it in 1000 words, ended up being 4700 in the end
Oh is it ... I remember you telling will think of writing about it .
Now if possible please write on Ani and Jhanak sharing their mind after the reversal rasam ..
His eyes spoke volumes ...
I wanted them to show sucha convo between them , they gave us today but this usual arguing. And Jhanak not intersted at all on discussing it .
Hope you dont mind me asking for more stories .
Thank you for this Anu! I skimmed through the start and can tell already this is going to be bloody brilliant!
I'll read through later today and let you know what I thought!
Originally posted by: Fruitbae
Oh is it ... I remember you telling will think of writing about it .
Now if possible please write on Ani and Jhanak sharing their mind after the reversal rasam ..
His eyes spoke volumes ...
I wanted them to show sucha convo between them , they gave us today but this usual arguing. And Jhanak not intersted at all on discussing it .
Hope you dont mind me asking for more stories .
The way I structured this story is the night after the accursed Rasam took place, right before yesterday's episode. There are small mentions of that. Also, I don't think Jhanak will ever open up to this extent unless she knows she is leaving and won't have to explain her words to Ani.
I can try and see if I can write something on what you asked!
I don't mind you asking for more stories 
Thank you for this Anu! I skimmed through the start and can tell already this is going to be bloody brilliant!
I'll read through later today and let you know what I thought!
No problem, take your time. I know it's quite lengthy to read. I never knew I could write a OS this long man 
Originally posted by: Lollolika
No problem dear
Will try Ji! Thank you for reading!
FINALLY read this!😁
Girl, I Just came off writing a long ass report for work, so if this sounds like some analysis - that's to be blamed!
Love realisations are tricky to write by itself, because you need them to strike a chord with readers, and angst is harder to write - you combined both! Take a bow for that first!
I loved how you set up the whole scene, and how everything flowed - nothing looked forced or sudden, and I believe that plays a major part in writing because a well orchestrated scene makes the reader imagine it playing out, and that ups the effect!
From Chotton's understanding smile right down to Ani's anger at Jhanak leaving - I could imagine everything!
Your descriptions of the scenes and set up, the character's emotions were all bang on!!
Finally, a Jhanak who is not a bish to Ani - she's nice to him and understanding here - thank you for that!! 😁😁
I LOVE angst. And you NAILED it! Well done, and thank you for writing this! 
Obviously I would love to read if you want to follow this up with one epilogue of sorts, but I think this, as it is, is brilliant and hits the right spot!
FINALLY read this!😁
Girl, I Just came off writing a long ass report for work, so if this sounds like some analysis - that's to be blamed!
Love realisations are tricky to write by itself, because you need them to strike a chord with readers, and angst is harder to write - you combined both! Take a bow for that first!
I loved how you set up the whole scene, and how everything flowed - nothing looked forced or sudden, and I believe that plays a major part in writing because a well orchestrated scene makes the reader imagine it playing out, and that ups the effect!
From Chotton's understanding smile right down to Ani's anger at Jhanak leaving - I could imagine everything!
Your descriptions of the scenes and set up, the character's emotions were all bang on!!
Finally, a Jhanak who is not a bish to Ani - she's nice to him and understanding here - thank you for that!! 😁😁
I LOVE angst. And you NAILED it! Well done, and thank you for writing this!
Obviously I would love to read if you want to follow this up with one epilogue of sorts, but I think this, as it is, is brilliant and hits the right spot!
Thank you for the analytical post. I needed this, I was very doubtful if I was able to make the readers feel what I felt imagining Jhanak and Ani in the situation I described. Your insight means a lot to me!
I have an idea for an epilogue, but let's see how I feel about it a few days later before writing!
If you can spare some time for the other OS I wrote about the photoshoot- I would love to know the analysis/feedback for that too. IF and when possible! I think you and Anu ji provide good isnights which will help me in the writing process! 
My next one is more fluffy/smutty since I don't want to cry and be sad while writing again lol!
Originally posted by: Anusha16
Thank you for the analytical post. I needed this, I was very doubtful if I was able to make the readers feel what I felt imagining Jhanak and Ani in the situation I described. Your insight means a lot to me!
I have an idea for an epilogue, but let's see how I feel about it a few days later before writing!
If you can spare some time for the other OS I wrote about the photoshoot- I would love to know the analysis/feedback for that too. IF and when possible!
My next one is more fluffy/smutty since I don't want to cry and be sad while writing again lol!
I'm going to read the other one now! 😁 😁
Yeah, I tend to do that too - if I write a sad os/scene for my stories, I want to balance it out in the next one!
And you should absolutely write fluff because you're brilliant with that too! :)
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