Heart wrenching! Beautifully expressed. Thank you for this. I hope there will be a similar scene in the show. But I don't like sad endings! So I want them to meet again...
Heart wrenching! Beautifully expressed. Thank you for this. I hope there will be a similar scene in the show. But I don't like sad endings! So I want them to meet again...
Originally posted by: Artemis7
The pain, THE PAIN! The heart shattering, gut wrenching pain GAHHHHH! You nailed it!!!
I love reading realisations rather than confessions because well to me they are more emotinal, and greater the emotional potent, the more it sucks me in (call me a sadist but seeing a show's characters in pain is always a great way to understand how deep the water runs )
You may or may not continue working on this one Anusha ji, but in my opinion it is as good as it gets
Thank you, for the comment and for taking time to read the OS. I am in the same boat! I love bittersweet endings, to be honest.
I wanted to capture the feeling of both realizing their love for each other only for the happiness to be wrenched away from them the next second. It's like a beautiful bud about to bloom, only to wither away before it does.
Jhanak and Ani are both Inherently Kind and good souls. They would never do something that can harm so many people. At least not Jhanak. For Ani, I wanted him to feel a little bit of remorse for his actions in leading to Arshi's suicide attempt whether they both deem it true or not. He did indirectly cause the domino effect that led to where they are today.
And so, this is my attempt to capture and convey those feelings.
Heart wrenching! Beautifully expressed. Thank you for this. I hope there will be a similar scene in the show. But I don't like sad endings! So I want them to meet again...
Atleast I feel this is more logical than what they showed today. I just want Jhanak to flow away from that cage now....
Maybe, if a lot of people want, I can think of a sweet and short epilogue.
Are you planned to continue this OS? If possible plz give one more part...
Maybe a sweet and short epilogue!
It was amazing. It’s so amazing that I decided to try and add to the FF I am writing tonight…such amazing and inspiring work. Do you have any other full length stories or novels? I would like to read your work.
Thankyou so much Anusha for the special mention ,you made my day🥰💕
I loved how you wrote the entire story .
Could very well visualise it in the Bose house .
I so wished that theu show for once how Anirudh tells he knows all her suffering rather than from his eyes .
Also Jhanak telling hil all the story .
You penned it so well ,what they wanted to know ...
The love Anirudh have for Jhanak.
Please write more stories , i loved them and the picture and song made it really good .
You are really blessed with writing skills 🧿
Originally posted by: Paulaonohi
It was amazing. It’s so amazing that I decided to try and add to the FF I am writing tonight…such amazing and inspiring work. Do you have any other full length stories or novels? I would like to read your work.
There should be some on my wall. But I am planning to open up a Wattpad account and add all the stories there too.
Oh, did the song help set the mood btw? not sure if you listened to it while reading!
I have not written any novels as I tend to stick to short stories mostly. Hence no FF on RuNak yet
Originally posted by: Fruitbae
Thankyou so much Anusha for the special mention ,you made my day🥰💕
I loved how you wrote the entire story .
Could very well visualise it in the Bose house .
I so wished that theu show for once how Anirudh tells he knows all her suffering rather than from his eyes .
Also Jhanak telling hil all the story .
You penned it so well ,what they wanted to know ...
The love Anirudh have for Jhanak.
Please write more stories , i loved them and the picture and song made it really good .
You are really blessed with writing skills 🧿
Thank you so much for reading and commenting! Glad to know I was able to provide some reprieve for people in the form of my stories!
Lollolika ji, Somehow missed to tay you, so here
Originally posted by: Fruitbae
Thankyou so much Anusha for the special mention ,you made my day🥰💕
I loved how you wrote the entire story .
Could very well visualise it in the Bose house .
I so wished that theu show for once how Anirudh tells he knows all her suffering rather than from his eyes .
Also Jhanak telling hil all the story .
You penned it so well ,what they wanted to know ...
The love Anirudh have for Jhanak.
Please write more stories , i loved them and the picture and song made it really good .
You are really blessed with writing skills 🧿
This started with your request to have a scene between Chotton and Ani regarding his unhappiness after the announcement party fiasco and quickly devolved into this lol!
Honestly wanted to finish it in 1000 words, ended up being 4700 in the end
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