sure dearSure take your time. Would really love to hear your comment.
The next chapter tag line has me in flutters. Now for the current chapter, will read and let you know. Hope this Ani is clearer than the one we see these days.
So well written .
Could imagine all of them in thay pagal asylum.
And dialogues were.much netter than the episode itself .
thanks Anusha.. will wait for your commentOriginally posted by: Anusha16
The next chapter tag line has me in flutters. Now for the current chapter, will read and let you know. Hope this Ani is clearer than the one we see these days.
thanks Maya . Hope the progress is going in better pace..Originally posted by: MayaFruitbae
So well written .
Could imagine all of them in thay pagal asylum.
And dialogues were.much netter than the episode itself .
thanks Maya . Hope the progress is going in better pace..
Yes and here the characters are also more clear with what they are doing .
Chapter 6
Fascinating and so Amazing Chapter
I'm glad that finally Ani had told Arshi that he is married
though Arshi is hurt but her ego and status at the moment is not allowing that
pain to seep within her.
and of course Ani cannot tell Arshi that Jhanak is his wife as she herself is rejecting the idea
of them been husband and wife
but I truly hope Ani can win over Jhanak
Appu Di seems amazing and she admires Jhanak while it also seems like Bado Ma admires
Jhanak
on the other hand I feel Jhanak does not want to force Ani in a unwanted marriage
but he respects the vows he has taken
Amazing, Well written, Read all the chapters 1 after the other
Originally posted by: Anusha16
The next chapter tag line has me in flutters. Now for the current chapter, will read and let you know. Hope this Ani is clearer than the one we see these days.
Finally read the Chapter....
So it's Ani's truth vs Arshi's Classism huh?? Good on Ani for putting his foot down.
Waise Good on you for Capturing TMW's dynamics and inner thoughts much more strongly than the show. Loved how she was exactly like I predicted her to be.
Interesting that the Shyam Da here shares a much different equation with Ani than in the show. Wonder what you are planning to do with him?
I also really hope Jhanak's obstinance is cured soon and she accpets her marriage. I don't want to see another Tyaag ka murthi please!
Please do some Ani and his parents convo yaar. Sorely missing from the show rn.
Nice Chapter.
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