Rishto ki Mahabharat, Neivika ff( part 4 update on page 5)

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Posted: 9 months ago
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We all know Neil character is inspired by Krishna and Krishna had 2 families..one where he grew up and other where he was born. So i have a imaginary twist in this ff..



Prologue


Yuvika in mind


Kitni badi bevkuf thi mein, Even Isha understood Neil loves me but i couldn't see his love..How could I ignore those eyes which was always filled with love and care for me..But do I love him.. Obviously i like him, he is my best friend..He always stood up to me like a rock and made me believe in myself, guided me throughout but LOVE ? My heart isn't ready for it yet after what Karthik did to me...What shall I do?


Just then dada Babu enters..


Db- yuvika beti 

Yuvi- ji dada Babu 

Db- beta do u remember, we have to go for a meeting today..The meeting is very very important, we want the contract at any case..

Yuvi - ofcourse dada Babu we will

Db- beta..this isn't as easy as every time..This time we have Sareen 's as our competition

Yuvi - Sareen ? Who are they Dada Babu 

Db- Beta they are Kolkata based Builders..Infact they are India's one of top 3 Builders right now..This contract is very important for Mahajans and we need to fight for this..

Yuvi- Don't worry dada Babu we definitely will


Niel pov 

I may sound like a heartless person but i was really happy when Yuvi slapped Karthik and broke the engagement, yes she was heartbroken and broken from inside but still I was happy...Bachpan se i lost everything whome i loved, my parents abonded me as a child thankfully Papa adopted me and gave me a life, I know his life is indebted to mahajans but he is the only one who I have in this world and now yuvi ...she came to my world and she is the one for me...how could I lose her? 


Sareen Mansion 


A man in 50s is getting ready for his meeting, screamed Deviii...Can u Plz get me my lucky tie..


A beautiful woman in saree, smiled at him saying..Kabhi toh apni cheeze sahi jagah par rakho Mr. Vasu Sareen.


Devi - Vasu ..u have made soo many deals in life but still you don't forget your lucky tie while going to important meeting..


Vasu- Nahi devi Aaj ka meeting kuch zyada hi important hai...I need this land for our charity hospital..this hospital isn't just a dream this has many lives involved..


Devi - i know.


(""Just then Shaurya the elder son of Vasu and Devi sareen came up knocking the door"")


Shaurya - Btw mom do u know what's is the name of our hospital


Devi- kya?


Shaurya with a smile said " AGHASTYA" 


Hearing the name Devi Sareen had a tear drop and looked at a huge photo frame with a 3yr old boy on the wall..


So guys , Plz say me should i continue with this concept or not..

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Posted: 9 months ago
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Nice FF nad new characters as well 🙂 nice....so Neil is- wow nice twist , do continue this fanfic...

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Posted: 9 months ago
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Nice concept! I am curious about how Neil got separated from his parents 🤔


Please continue this FF! ❤️

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Posted: 9 months ago
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Please update next part soon 

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Posted: 9 months ago
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Oh ho Neil has his Dwarka in this FF 

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Posted: 9 months ago
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Loved this part

Yuvika slapped Kartik I wanna see it in show😈 Finally she realised she love him

Who r these Sareen's? Ig the deal wont be easy at all like DB said.

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Posted: 9 months ago
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Originally posted by: RainOfDew

Loved this part

Yuvika slapped Kartik I wanna see it in show😈 Finally she realised she love him

Who r these Sareen's? Ig the deal wont be easy at all like DB said.

Sareens are- 

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Posted: 9 months ago
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Originally posted by: Pete15rogmourey

Nice FF nad new characters as well 🙂 nice....so Neil is- wow nice twist , do continue this fanfic...


Thank you...more to come 👀

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Posted: 9 months ago
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Originally posted by: Syon_Anya41

Nice concept! I am curious about how Neil got separated from his parents 🤔


Please continue this FF! ❤️

Thank you.. comming soon♥️

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Posted: 9 months ago
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Originally posted by: J124

Please update next part soon 


Yess...very very soon