Rishto ki Mahabharat, Neivika ff( part 4 update on page 5) - Page 2

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Posted: 1 years ago
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Originally posted by: A_for_Arpita

Oh ho Neil has his Dwarka in this FF

😂😂😂yea

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Posted: 1 years ago
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Originally posted by: RainOfDew

Loved this part

Yuvika slapped Kartik I wanna see it in show😈 Finally she realised she love him

Who r these Sareen's? Ig the deal wont be easy at all like DB said.


Sareen's are ..........

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Posted: 1 years ago
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Interesting 😊

I would love to read more.... please update soon

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Originally posted by: luvzindagi

Interesting 😊

I would love to read more.... please update soon

Updating today

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Posted: 1 years ago
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Yuvika is hushing to go to meeting where she gets a call from Arjun..


Arjun - dii..plzzz danto mat

Yuvi - kyo? Ab kya kiya?

Arjun - Actually I took your car to my swimming class and my coach has extended the practice til noon..Sorry di

Yuvi- Arjun tum... seriously?? I have a meeting at 11 am at Oberoi's and you are saying me you have my car

Arjun - i am soo sorry di..di we are mahajans we have soo many cars, u can anyway take any of them

Yuvi - thanks but no thanks...I will hire a cab..bye


( Just then she hears a horn, & she finds Neil )


Neil - Do you need some help miss Mahajan

Yuvi- how you always know I am in some trouble

Neil- may be dil ka connection

Yuvi - tum kuch zyada nahi bol rahe ho ( with a shy smile)

Neil - should I drop u somewhere

Yuvi - haaaa....I am getting late, drop me to Oberoi hotel..

( She quickly sits in car and they are on the way)

Yuvi - tum kuch bolo

Neil - kyo..if i say something u will say I am speak zyada

Yuvi - btw do you know abt Sareen's

Neil- zyada nahi , but they are one of richest families of india..They are popular builders and they prefer to be low key unlike mahajans who keeps flaunting

Yuvi - was the last line soo important to make a point?

Neil - ( laughing) sorry baba..btw why r u interested in them..

Yuvi - woh meeting ( yuvi think for a while and smiled ) kya hai na Neil...as I am single now, I am thinking to be Sareen's bahu...what say?

Neil- kyaa? When his eye browns went up

Yuvi - haa...u have any problem?

Neil- why will I ? Mahajans - Sareen's would be good ( in irritated voice)

Yuvi - looks like someone is jeleous..

Neil - Not at all...btw you were joking na

Yuvi - laughing...dekha ..u were jeleous .. ofcourse buddu..


(In Sareen Mansion)


Devi sareen- What ? U have named the hospital Agastya?

Shaurya Sareen - yes...mom ..this is our dream project so we decided to name with someone who is most precious to all of us..

Vasu sareen- this project is to save lives..so no one lose their dear ones..


( Devi moves towards a huge photo on the wall of a boy somewhat aged 2-3yrs)..

Devi - (wiping her tears ) mera agastya kaha hoga ? Is he ok? How he may look now ? Would he be tall ? Does he still like mango ice cream?


Vasu - devi...how helpless we are...we have everything but this house doesn't has his chirag, world think I am Vasu sareen but i am just a helpless father waiting for his lost son from last 22yrs.

Shaurya -- dad ...mom..not again, we arnt getting emotional today..plzz..I know you all love chote little more than me but he would be little less handsome then me..

Devi -- badmash...get ready for ur meeting now... arnt u getting late ?

Vasu -- yes yes... we are getting late and we need this plot at any cost..we can't lose this..

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Posted: 1 years ago
#17

So Neil is Agasthya? Nice build up to the story....

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Posted: 1 years ago
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So miss Mahajan is definitely gonna be Mrs. Sareen then 😁

Mrs. Agastya Sareen or Mrs. Neil Bharadwaj

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Posted: 1 years ago
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Posted: 1 years ago
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How come I saw this now only? Such a lovely and interesting storysmiley42


You know they can show something like this is in show too cause Neil is definitely richer than these Mahajanssmiley36

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