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Posted: 11 months ago

Oh my god! It's really emotional. Have never imagined Dev in this situation. The turmoil, the anger, everything is full of emotions, the reader can genuinely feel what the character is going through. Waiting for the next part.

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Posted: 11 months ago

The way turmoil was represented in this write up >>>>

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Posted: 11 months ago

Loved it! Please tag me when u update the next part.❤️ also do u have any suggestions for rewriting a scene from the show? Trying to write more recreation scenes .....

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Posted: 11 months ago

Plz update this one 🙏🏻🙏🏻❤️❤️

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Posted: 11 months ago

Originally posted by: Shinika

Dilon ki dastan; ViDev; TS

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This scene starts where Abhimanyu requests Vidhi to convince dev marry Amba.

Vidhi: main kaise sir.

Abhi: yeh tumhi kar sakte ho vidhi. Bhai ko sirf tum hi convince kar sakte ho. Pls.. hamara pura family bas yehi chate hai our un donon ne age ,status, intelligence sab mein barabar hai. Mere bhai ko Amba ji se acha life partner kahi nahi mil sakta. Main our Chitra ne Amba ji ko apna bhabhi maan bhi chuke hai par dev bhai nahi maan rahe hai. 

Tumhi batao vidhi jo kuch bhi maine kaha vo sab sach hai na.. tho bhai kyon nahi maan rahe hai yeh sab.aajtak hamesha vo Hi hamare liye sab kuch Kia bina kisi expectation ki. Ab ham unko kush dekhna chahte hai. Pls vidhi ek baar try karo . Mujhe pura yakeen hai tum yeh kar sakte ho..

Vidhi got emotional by their love towards his brother and she remembered his dedication towards his family.. 

she said theek hai sir main koshish karti Hu.

Abhi: kal mujhe our Arjun ko Ujjain meeting keliye jana hai. Par main kuch karke dev bhai ko meri jagah jane keliye manaunga. Thum Arjun ko manage karlo our dev bhai ko yeh patha nahi chalna hai ki Arjun ki jagah tum aa rahe ho. Vo bahut smart hai vidhi . Be careful.

She nodded with heavy heart and ready to go to home.

Arjun came to Vidhi with runningly and said Vidhi.. kal dev sir Ujjain meeting keliye ja rahe hai our main soch raha Hu ki mere jagah tum chale jao. Tumhare paas bahut time rahega confess karne keliye. 

Vidhi: dev sir office time pe personal bathe nahi discuss karte hai Arjun our nahi business trips mein.

Arjun: aap log tho gadi mein honge our lamba safar hai.tumhe himmat dikhana hai vidhi. Yeh bahut acha mouka hai vidhi. Kahi tum late na ho jaye .. pls..

Vidhi whispered agar dev sir mujhe reject karega  tho..

Arjun: agar vo maan gaya tho , vo bhi tumse pyar kar rahe ho tho.. socho vidhi.. milapini ma pe bharosa karke dev sir se apni dil ki baat bathado.

Vidhi thanked Arjun and said mein koshish karti hu Arjun and left.

Vidhi tossed for some time unable to sleep by the thoughts of the right thing to do. She thinks about lens of objectivity. Agar vo mujhse pyar karta hai  tho meri shaadi kyo karvana chahenge kisi our ke saath…main dev sir se bahut pyar karthi Hu par main usee pana nahi chathi Hu balki main usse khush dekhna chahti Hu.our unki khushi, parivaar ki khushi mein hai.She know dev sir will do anything for his family and Abhimanyu’s words echoed in her mind. Dev sir keliye yehi sahi hai she thought. jo bhi ho jaye par  usse apna niyat saaf rakhna hai.

Vidhi asked Bimla in the morning 

Ma, pyar bada hai ya tyag. With confusion.

Bim: Vidhu.. pyar ki doosri pehlu hoti hai tyag our subah subah tum yeh sab kyon puch rahi ho.. jaldi nikalna hai na .. dev sir intezar kar rahe honge.

Vidhi in thoughts that how many sacrifices he should have done to maintain the happy relationship with his step siblings.so you have no right to break their relationship, their happy family Vidhi for your selfishness ..her inner self said.

Next day morning dev went to office to pick Arjun he was surprised by seeing Vidhi waiting to accompany him.A whole hearted smile came on to his lips after seeing her innocent, confused face in the early hours of morning.

Beautiful!!! he whispered by lost in her.

Driver stopped the car and dev signalled Vidhi to join. He opened the door for her and she joined him on the back seat. 

Both lost in thoughts. 

Dev: yeh sab jo horaha hai uske peeche abhi ka hath tho nahi hai. Subah bhi vo pray kar raha tha.abhi our Arjun ko jaana tha pehle meeting keliye par ab un donon ki jagah main our vidhi..

Iska matlab kya abhi ko pata chala hai hamare baare mein.

Arjun .. vo kaise…vo khud vidhi se…. he don’t want to think about that.

Vidhi: said dev sir vo.. Arjun ki tabiyat kharab hai . Isiliye main aapke sath aa rahi Hu our maine presentation keliye ache se prepare bhi Kia .

Dev: thinks …kya main vidhi ko sab kuch bata du.. mere feelings, mere  py…. Par this age gap

Vidhi:thinks about the words of Arjun, Bimla and Abhimanyu.

Car got bounced by the speed breaker and Vidhi about to fell on his lap and dev carefully catches her and both lost in eye lock. 

Vidhi realised soon and broke eye lock and sat little far from him.

Dev was still lost in her… realised her discomfort by the distance and it pained him so much.
Driver plays the song and both looked each other

Vidhi don’t know how to talk infront of driver.

Dev :asked the driver to reduce sound and turned to Vidhi. 

Vo ms Vidhi tum USs din kuch important bath kahane ki koshish kar rahi thi na..kya tha vo.. bolo..

Vidhi : dev sir  vo.. vo.. she hesitated while seeing the driver and bent her head.

Dev asked the driver to stop for chai .

Vidhi: said hame late ho jayega dev sir....

Dev: mujhe chai peene ka bahut man kar raha hai vidhi .. said and both went out.

Romantic Song playing background..they sat on a bench leaving a little space between them. He orders chai. Vidhi’s hair locks are spreading on her face because of the flow of wind. Dev who adoring her shamelessly got disturbed by the hair which is hiding his vision . So thought to tuck the hair locks.

Before he reaches Vidhi tucks herself and realised dev sir  tried to tuck the hairs. It gave her confidence  and a small smile crept to her face.

Vidhi: dev sir..

Dev: ha bolo na he said desperately.

Vidhi: USs din aap milapini ma ka ashirvad  le rahe the na tho ma ne pucha kahi aap shadi ke bare mein tho soch nahi rahe hai.

Dev thinks tum kya soch rahi ho mujhe vo janna hai vidhi..

Ms vidhi…Main pray kar lia iska bathlab vo shadi ke bath hi hona hai.. main bas darshan kar rahe the vidhi. 
Vidhi thinks app kya soch rahe the darshan ke vakt mujhe vo janna hai sir..

Driver: sir bahut traffic hai ham chale..

Dev got disappointed and asked driver to leave and he will manage.

Dev asked Vidhi while driving 

Ms Vidhi…Arjun ke baare mein tumhara opinion kya hai..

She looked with confusion.

I mean about his work and his behaviour.  he corrected his question.

Vidhi: Arjun bahut acha ladka hai sir.. mujhe bahut support karta hai…our mera bahut madad bhi Kia ghar ki demolish vale din . He did a big favour on me sir… she said sincerely…

Unable to hear her praise Arjun..   a utterly jealous dev stopped the car with sudden brake and said to the confused Vidhi…

Ms Vidhi…dhaba me kuch khake jaayenge Ujjain pahunchne mein bahut time lagega and got down without hearing her.

He walked faster without waiting for her by blinded by jealousy and tried to sat but it’s difficult to hide his emotion from her he thought. 

Vidhi literally ran after him and smiled little by seeing his hesitation to sit .She showed him how to sit and both settled on cots.

Dev orders the food but Vidhi stopped him and said bahar ka khana jyada mat khayiye sir…vo aapko nahi suit karega and showed the food sent by her mother. 

They ordered some snacks and started to eat food.

Dev said to Vidhi that Tripathi ji will be accompany them on return .. indirectly pushing her to confess what she want to say..

Vidhi whispered lanka lag gayi vidhi… he smiled slightly by seeing her antics.

Dev took a bite and said hmmm.. the curry is too good.. full of swad…. Hmm..

Hai na sir.... Arjun ko bhi bahut pasand hai sir said an  excited Vidhi..

Dev coughed hard by listening that and Vidhi helped him with water.

They talk about priya and abhi’s love and dev cleared that their marriage is love cum arranged marriage and they talked for some time.

Finally dev gave in and asked her ms Vidhi.. what you want to say him that much important on demolition day…

Vidhi looked here and there..

They finished the food and went for hand wash. 

Dev agin asked ms Vidhi what you wanted to say that much important to me ? with desperation while helping her wash her hands.

Vidhi says I want to say that you should get married.

He got shocked and asked what?

She went to wipe her hands .. Dev asks her confused whom I shall marry?  and blindly following her.

Vidhi wipes her hands harshly and said sir..

AAP Amba maam se shadi kar lijiye…

Dev got shocked and with anger he shouted 

ms Vidhi..do you even know what you are blabbering?

Every body is waiting for your approval. Abhi sir, Chitra mam They will be very happy by this. AAP Amba mam se shadi kar lijiye sir..pls.. she said and tried to ignore him.

He fisted his hands with anger and hurt when he hear her say … say that again .  And realised his unwashed hands asked her to help him in washing.

Vidhi pouring the water on his hands and said sir.. Amba mam aapke liye bahut perfect hai. Aapka status ka hai , aapki tarah badi business woman hai, aapki tarah bahut educated bhi hai.. our aapki family ka pasandida aurat hai..isiliye aap bas shaadi keliye ha kah dijiye..
dev gave a fierce look and she dropped the water jug on him with fear…

Dev: he enraged and said  Marriage, status yeh sab kya ? ms vidhi yeh sab kya hai? Our tumhe yeh kyon lagta hai ki log bas status ki hisaab se shadi karte hai. Pehle yeh batao ki  tum kyon yeh marriage consultant banke fir rahe ho ..our kis liye..?.

Vidhi: aap aap aisa gussa karegi tho kya main dar jaagungi aapse?

Dev: ms vidhi..tumhe lagta hai tum mujhse ha bulva sakti ho.our kisne .. kisne yeh sab kuch bakwas tumhare dimag mein dala hai.. koun tumhe pressure kar raha hai batao vidhi.. he shouted with frustration of being hurt and angered.

She got teary eyed by seeing his anger said with pain.. aapko kuch samajh mein nahi aata  hai... kisi ki feelings .. ya kisi ki struggle .  Kuch bhi nahi…Aap ko bas apne dil ke Charon taraf deewar khada karna aata hai.
dev got confused by her outburst…..

Aap koshish  karne keliye tayyar hi nahi hai.. Abhimanyu sir ne koshish Kia na .. aap bhi kariye  na kya pata koshish karne se…

Dev: ms Vidhi… shouted ab main samajh gaya Hu.. tumhe lagta hai tum abhi manyu ko manalia tho mujhe bhi mana lenge vo bhi Amba ke bare mein. .. nahi .. kabhi nahi.. I don’t want to burst your bubble but you are wrong miss Vidhi.. you are damn  wrong..

Vidhi: kahi baar aapko halat ko samajhne keliye kisi tisare ka bath Sunani pada thi hai dev sir..

Dev: ms tisare insaan ..no thanks.. mujhe ithna akal hai ki main khud apna decision le sakta Hu..

Vidhi: got tired by asking him again and again. She also shouted angrily ..tho decision le lijiye .. Amba mam se shadi keliye ha kah dijiye.. sab bahut khush honge..

Dev: ms vidhi.. iss se aage ek our shabd nahi.. main iss shadi keliye kabhi ha nahi kahunga.. kabhi bhi nahi..mujhe mat ukaso… said an enraged dev with big eyes.

Vidhi: aapko kya lagta hai aap aisa mujhe gusse se apni badi badi ankh dikha ke dara the tho Mai dar javungi..Har baar aap aisa hi karte hai. Aapki aisi badi badi ankhe dikhake mujhe darane ki koshish karte hai . Our main jo bolna chahta Hu dar ke mare bol hi nahi pata…

Dev: tum bol nahi pata .. ha tum.. bas 15 minut se sirf tum hi patar patar ki boli ja rahe ho.. boli ja rahe ho.. tum bol nahi pata.. tum mujhse darte ho…

Vidhi: ha aap sahi hai .. aaj bilkul bhi aisa nahi hoga.. main aapse nahi darne vali  Hu..

Dev : miss Vidhi..shouted being in a fear that he could say some thing to her for which he will regret  it later..

Vidhi: chillayi ye mat our yeh batayiye aap kyon iss shadi keliye inkaar kar rahe hai?

Kyon? Batayiye.. aap Amba mam se shadi kyon nahi karna chahte hai?? balki vo aapko bahut chathi hai…she asked in her high voice..

Dev: kyonki main bhi tumse pyar karne laga Hu.. yes!! I am falling in love with you every minute….he shouted with frustration being failed her to stop talking this nonsense about to set him with other woman who is utterly obsessed with him.

Vidhi got rooted still and her body is shivering and her eyes and heart shedding happy tears with the truth of being claimed by her love.

His confession soothed her bleeding heart all this while.

He realised his slip.. he closed his eyes to hide his embarrassment but he felt light hearted rather than embarrassed and happy tears are making their way.he opened his hopeful eyes and lost in thoughts that he confessed but what next? He is afraid to think about future .

Dev and Vidhi both lost in the time like they never want to move further.

Just when Abhimanyu’s message popped up and slapped by harsh reality Vidhi broke her eye lock turned back wiped her tears and said 

Par ..Ab  main aapse pyar nahi karti Hu.. completed it with a heavy heart and dry throat.

Dev is not at all shocked by her reaction because he know how stubborn Vidhi is and now she can do anything to make him agree to marry Amba.but kyon? Why she is adamant to marry him with Amba.. He cursed Amba for all this mess being the root cause…
Dev: Agar reject karne ka man bana hi Lia tho muh pe karo na. Tum kyon apna muh chupa rahi ho. Agar tum sach kaha rahe hai tho See into my eyes and say ms vidhi.. that you never loved me…

Vidhi: she shivered by the tender ness of his pleading voice but controlled herself and turned to face him.

Ha sir Maine bahut baar khud se kaha main aapse bahut pyar karti Hu.. par aisa mujhe lagtha tha.. ha main apni crush ko apna pyar samajh Lia. Ha Aaj bhi aap meri mentor hai, meri professor hai, meri boss hai , meri dost hai our meri jindagi ka sab se special insaan bhi hai par meri jeewan saathi ..nahi hai.. our yeh kabhi nahi hoga.. kyonki main jo aap keliye feel karti Hu na vo kya tha main samajh Lia. Vo pyar nahi hai..( vo in sab se bahut upar hai sir .. bahut upar…she thought in mind)

Dev: He got surprised by her guts to say this being firm and looking straight in to his eyes. He laughed with tears and said aisa mat bolo ms Vidhi .ham donon ko pata hai shayad tum thik kaha rahe ho par yeh pura sach nahi hai. Our mujhe pura sach janna hai jo maine tumhare ankhon mein bahut pehle dekh chuka hu..ms Vidhi ab  tumhe khud vo sach mere ankhon mein aankhe daalke bolna padega.

Vidhi: feared by his argument she know he will convince her at any cost but now she don’t want to.. tumhe unhe pana nahi hai vidhi. Tumhe usse khush dekhna hai.. tyag pyar ka dusri pehlu hota hai ..tired by all this inner conflict…

sir pls zidd chodiye… maan jayiye.. pls ..aap mere sath aisa nahi kar sakte hai  pls.. she pleaded with her eyes.

Dev: lowered his eyes unable to take her pleading  and thought no.. Vidhi main tumhare saath yeh na- insafi hone nahi dunga, mujh par agar kisi ka haq hai tho vo sirf tum ho. Main yeh kisi our ko nahi de sakta.

Vidhi: she don’t want to leave this opportunity.. she have to push the wrong buttons to convince him she thought . She squeeze her eyes hard and said tho Sun lijiye dev sir .. aaj main apna pura sach bathaunga aapko.

Jab tak meri jindagi mein vo nahi aaya na tab tak mujhe bhi laga ki aap mera pyar bhi hai sirf crush or respect hi nahi.par jab main unke sath time bitane shuru Kia na tab mujhe sab crystal clear hogaya ki aap mera crush hai our main respect ko pyar samajh Lia . Our mera sacha pyar mujhe finally mil hi gaya…

Dev: choked but managed to whisper  koun?  .. and lowered his face...he couldn’t see her take other man’s name as her love…. 

vidhi: aap bhi usse ache se jaante hai…Arj…

Dev: eyes become blood shot red and his mind clouded with jealousy he shouted 

don’t … don’t dare to say that name infront of me..

(He don’t want to listen that name.. no .. not even in pretence…)

He couldn’t breathe … he .. he..rushed from there and punched the cement pole making that to uncountable pieces unable to control his jumbled up jealousy, pain, frustration ,defeat.

Vidhi packing the box and gasped by hearing the sound and ran to him.  

By the time he sat in the car and controlling his anger, hurt, frustration on his helpless situation.

She ran to him with heavy breath and tried to held his hand.

He shoved his hand away by not allowing to touch her and put on the seat belt with other hand. 

She saw the blood on his knuckles and immediately tore her dupatta and held his wrist stubbornly to know him that she won’t leave him without bandaging.

She held his palm gently with silent tears while blowing into his knuckles she applied medicine from first aid box and bandaged with her dupatta Cloth.

She looked fiercely into his eyes by accusing him with hurt like what an earth he is doing ? and get back to the passenger seat .

Killing silence spreaded there for some time. 

She couldn’t bear the silence and said.. aapko yaad hai na..hame meeting keliye jana hai..

He dailed Tripathi number and said that he won’t make it and they will plan again at the earliest.

She don’t know how to convince him. Here she is breaking inch by inch inside and find it hard to control for more time. She came back from the thoughts by the call. She checked and this time it was Arjun. 

By seeing his name dev enraged and starts the car with a jerk and driving in a mad speed.

Luckily it was a highway and nothing to fear of the chances of crash.

Vidhi: she held the side handle hard to control her to balance and finally she couldn’t balance and her head hitted to the dash board.

Dev : coming back to senses by this he stopped the car and said 

sorry ..sorry… Vidhi and caresses her wound and jerked back by remembering her lie.

Vidhi got confused by his care and anger at same time.

Dev: if it’s true even a bit you won’t be here in the place of him  whispered….

Vidhi: Amba mam is the perfect life partner for you… pls understand.

Dev: he didn’t even give a head to her plea ..he don’t know he will accept vidhi or not . Still he has his doubts about their age gap and concerned about her happy life.

But he can’t take this rejection he thought…

He don’t know how she survived when he silently rejected her..yet she bounced back with smile.he shut his eyes with unbearable pain.

Dev: said after a long pause .. asked softly kyon …. Kyon.. 

vidhi: shut her eyes to let out the tears and said I just wanted you to convince to marry Amba mam but not intended to hurt you….

Dev: hurt… hmmm .. and unable to speak with jumbled emotions.

Vidhi: I want you to know ki your family will be so happy if you agree… the family which you delicately yet beautifully built with so many sacrifices all along your life and now with in a blink you can’t afford to broke brutally that tenderly weaven nest.
Our mein.. mein aapko apne parivaar se hi ladte huye nahi dekh sakta..aapka parivaar apka vajud hai sir…

Dev: dev got tounge tied by the truth and bites his lips to control his helpless scream inside him trying to not to shake her with fear.

Finally he gave in and started the car .this time carefully he drives and they are about reach Vidhi said aap yaha gadi rok dijiye..yaha se aap apna rasta our main apna.our kabhi milne ki gunjaish hi nahi hai.she whispered the last line to herself.

Dev: Kuch der our ham aise sath rahane se kuch ho nahi jaayega..

vidhi: khamakhah takleef ho jayegi sir..main aapko our pareshan nahi karna chahti Hu..

Par Aapko yaha se khud chalna hoga dev sir… our chinta mat kijiye… main khud apna rasta bana lungi. Kuch bhi meri jindagi se chale jaaye par app se seekha  hua yeh atmavishwas meri akhri dam tak mera sath rahega.

He just want to stop her this ….. nonsense by kissing her fiercely until she claims Back her love on him.but if she comes back what he will do .. will he accept her ? Will he allow him to see her to daily pain herself by stepping into the thorns of their path.

He lost in these thoughts and she get down from car and started to leave.

He came to senses and ran to her and called her 

ms Vidhi… she turned and signed him what?

Did she really want to do what she is doing? 

She stood like puzzled and thought she really wished to have a chance to choosed by him . But unfortunately she don’t have that .

Aapko mujhe rokne ka haq hai dev sir.. par mujhe aapke our aapke khushiyon ko beech mein aane ka haq nahi hai..

Seeing her silent he asked 

Did she really want to punish him? 

She gave a dry laugh .

After seeing that he got mad and asked with hurt tumhari dil ki baat sunke bhi un suna karne keliye tum mujhe punish karna chahti ho na ?

batao  vidhi…

She pitied on her self.

Kaash vo jaj batein un suna hi rahate…

Kash aap ithna acha nahi hote ..

Kash Main aapke laayak hote…

Kash app mere liye khud se lad pate..

Kash aap mujhe bhi uthna hi chahte jithna main aapko chahti Hu…

Kash…. Kash….. aap meri bhagya mein hotein…she whishpered  and left from there leaving a vulnearable dev on the middle of the road….

Vidhi…. He screamed and sat on the road being drained out even to take breath.


DIL JUDE BINA HI TUT GAYE…


Dil jude bina hi tut gaye
Hatth mile bina hi chhut gaye
Ki likhe ne lekh kismet ne……


to be continued..,

SHINIKA.

Beautifully written shinika, hat's off. This was a beautiful phase in videv love story and your words have captured it's essense even more than the show itself.I liked the twist you added to it.😉

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Posted: 11 months ago

Wow!! A completely different take on the situation. Please continue when you get a chance. 

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Dilon ki Dastaan: ViDev;TS

Part 2:
Dev sat there lean on to his car with out bothering about the world. All the recent happenings are revolving around him. He felt like he can’t bare that pain and the anxiety hits him he couldn’t breathe and he is taking deep breaths to control . Tears are threatening to flow effortlessly  and at the same time one car passes him .

Koushik the business man and the friend of dev saw all this and he couldn’t believe to see dev like that.he immediately asked the driver to stop the car and went to dev with a water bottle.

He went near dev and called him but not receiving any response he just shakes dev and said  

Dev mujhe pata hai tumhe mera awaak sunai de raha hai. Pls dev hosh me aao. Khud ko sambhalo.kuch nahi hua hai dev lambi saans lelo. Dev pls yaar koshish tho karo saans lo. 

Sab kuch theek hoga dev. Tum aise haar nahi maan sakthe ho. Dev… 

He just wiped Dev’s face with water and forwarded the bottle to him. Dev drank the water but shivering badly still in the dilusion. 

Koushik lifted dev and hugged him . He signed the driver to get Dev’s car and took dev along with him to his car. He helped dev to sit in  the car and drove to his home.He never ever thought that One-Day he will see dev like this devastated and fighting for breath.

They reached koushik’s farm house and by the time dev got a bit better and silently he left to the guest room and closed the door.He just paced for some time by thinking what to do next .more thoughts are clouded in his mind and he couldn’t think straight .he finally gave up and sat there on a chair and closed his eyes to think silently what he wants exactly in his life. He remembered entire happenings of the day and a small smile appeared on his lips. He sighed and thought finally!!! Finally !!! He confessed. If it was not happened like this will he ever dare to propose Vidhi he questioned himself.

Aajtak jab bhi vidhi ko dil ki baath batane ko soch Lia na bahut dar our confusion sa lagta tha har baar kuch na kuch soch ke khud ko mushkil se rokta tha Par ab confesss karne ke baad man bahut halka hogaya tha our ab bhi yakeen nahi ho raha hai ki vidhi se dil ki bath bol dia bas aise hi our ab vo  jo dar our confusion kuch bhi nahi hai. Dev is lost in that happiness and the door opened suddenly and koushik entered the room with fast steps

Koushik: dev, dev yeh kya ho raha hai yaar.. tumhe iske baare mein pata hain ? 

Dev opened his eyes and signed what? 

Koushik switched on the tv and a channel telecasting a breaking news about the merger of Mehta group and Raichand group and they are stating that is that merger will stay for only business or any personal angle also attached to it because they found Amba Mehta and Abhimanyu raichand and Chitra raichand together in raichand mansion. The channel is promising  the viewers that they will telecast tomorrow’s press conference about merger live.

He changed the channel and they are hyping the news with that headlines 

is this the hidden sign of getting out in public the relationship between Amba Mehta and devvrat Raichand?

Dev got angry and said what nonsense they are talking?

Koushik: dev pls calm down .. and think is this done by really your family or any  business rival?

Dev: unfortunately it’s done by Abhi because I know ab Tak Vidhi Abhi ko yeh bata chuka hoga ki main iss shaadi keliye taiyar Hu  and he laughed with pain. 

Mera phone.. phone kaha hai koushik?

Koushik: shayad tumhare gaadi me honge. Main driver ko bolta Hu dhoondhne keliye…

Dev: nahi … main khud leke aata Hu.. 

he went to car and searching for phone . He found his phone near the gear rod and his vision got blocked by a shining object. He bent down and took that slightly under the seat and noticed it as vidhi’s ear ring. Surprised by seeing the earring he went inside room. He clutched it in his hand and tried to call Vidhi.

Koushik: dev .. mil gaya phone?

Dev showed the phone by signing towards it .

Koushik: ok .. ok.. carry on.. I will come in some time  he winked at dev with laugh and went from there.

Upon getting the switched off message dev knows she informed Abhi and switched off the phone immediately to avoid talking with him.he knows her well now she won’t give any chance to meet /talk with him willingly.

He saw the ear ring in his hand and recalled their car encounter and felt the chances of falling out the ear ring at the time of hit and felt guilty to hurt her by clouded with jealousy.

He dailed Hari Prasad ji’s number and asked him

Vidhi .. Vidhi theek tho haina hari prasad ji.. usko kuch nahi hua na.. vo ache se ghar panch gayi na…

Hp: dev sahab… yeh kya kaha rahe hai aap.. aap kyon pareshan ho raha hai.. kuch hua hai kya Ujjain mein..

Dev: clicked his tounge and said

Nahi nahi hari prasad ji .. kuch nahi hua hai.. bas vo theek se pahunchi hai ya nahi yeh jaan na tha mujhe vo shayad uski phone silent pe hoga isiliye vo utha nahi rahi hai tho socha apse puch lunga.

Bimla: Ha dev ji .. kuch nahi hua hai vidhi ko .. vo bas thag gayi hogi lamba safar hai na tho so rahi hai.. chinta ki koi baat nahi hai…

Hp: so rahi hai… iss vakt .. vidhi  kaise sosakti hai iss vakt yeh kabhi nahi hua hai …

Bimla: shayad bahut thak gayi hogi tho so rahi hai . Roj thodi na ithni door jaathi hai vo..

Hp: ha dev sahab bas so rahi hai.. agar aapko urgent hai tho bata dijiye main uthalungi vidhi ko..

Dev: nahi nahi Hariprasad ji koi urgent nahi hai.. main kuch der baad dur se call karunga . Aap bas vidhi ka khayal rakhiye. Bye..

He switched off the phone immediately.

He took a deep breadth  after the call and looking the ear ring intensely.

Koushik: dev.. dev… called dev to bring from the thinking…

Pehlo yeh strong coffee lo bhai. Iski sab se jaroorat tumhe hai.. sochne keliye poori zindagi padi hai… said handing over the cup to him.

Dev noticed his sarcasm but kept quite and took the coffee by surprising Koushik..

Koushik got stunned and thought where is that dev who will give it back nicely to others taunts and that his swag… who is this new dev he got confused…

After some  pin drop silent moments koushik can’t take that said..dev…

Ab kuch bologe bhi ya bas aise khade rahkar Devdas ki tarah vo ear ring dekhte rahoge…

Dev:agar tumhare taane khatam hogaya tho main bolunga na.. said sarcastically..

Koushik: bolo .. bolo.. I am all ears…

Dev: I proposed a girl and she straight away refused me on my face… said with annoyance.. sun liya na.. ab khush…

Koushik opened his mouth with shock and said the great matured devvrat Raichand ko reject Kia …

Dev: throwed the pillow on him and said oye monkey jyada noutanki mat kar ek baar yaad karo London mein kitne saare ladkiyaan tumhe reject kar chuke hai.. mujhe sab yaad hai…

Koushik: par vo tho different hai .. jaha tak maine observe Kia hai uske haalat bhi tumse different nahi hai.. bilkul tumhare jaisa totally broken… yeh kaise ho sakta hai?

Dev: kyonki vo bhi mujhse pyar karte hai par ab maan ne ko taiyar nahi hai..

Koushik: are you sure … she also loves you..

Dev: usne mujhe pehle bata chuki hai not directly but I know..

Koushik: tho mujhe lagta hai aaj ki situation ke peeche bhi tumhare hi haath to nahi hai and raised his brow…

Dev: sighed and said vo to hai par poora mera galti nahi hai.. iss sab ka jimmedar abhi hai and narrated  everything to him.

Koushik: tho yeh ladki vahi haina USs din tumhare saath deal keliye mere office aayi thi.

Dev: ha , Vidhi..

Kaushik: agar vo tumse pyar karti hai tho aisa kyon kar rahi thi?

Dev: koushik.. vo vidhi hai .. khud ki khushi se pehle dusron ki khushi dekhti hai vo…. Iss shadi ka prastav Amba ne jaan buch ke kiya hai kyonki chitra uski bhanji ki biwi hai tho automatically main na nahi kah paunga chitra ki khushi keliye.. our vidhi ko Amba ke baare mein ache se pata hai ki vo yeh gussa chitra pe nikalegi .. isiliye vidhi mujhe samajhane ki koshish kar rahi hai ki parivaar ki khushi keliye mujhe Amba se shadi karna chahiye..and he drowned the thoughts of their discussion when she left him.he remembered her concern she can not see him fighting with his family and… he remembered her last whishperes…

Kaash vo jaj batein un suna hi rahate…

Kash aap ithna acha nahi hote ..

Kash Main aapke laayak hote…

Kash app mere liye khud se lad pate..

Kash aap mujhe bhi uthna hi chahte jithna main aapko chahti Hu…

Kash…. Kash….. aap meri bhagya mein hotein…

 He understood her dilemma and felt proud for taking stand for her self in that situation also…

Koushik: while observing Dev’s expressions asked kya hua dev… kyon ruk gaye tum bolo kuch .. he is afraid that again he will become panic.. dev kuch to bolo he pleaded..

Dev: don’t worry koushik main theek ku… mujhe sirf mere galti pata chala nahi vidhi ne dikha dia mere galti kya hai…

Koushik: dev … tum kya bol rahe ho.. kuch samajh nahi aaraha hai…

Dev: vo… maine confess tho Kar dia apni dil ki baat vo bhi situation ki dabaav mein aakar par main kabhi taiyar hi nahi the iss rishte ko apanane ko… hamare beech ka age gap mujhe har baar peeche kheench leta hai koushik…

Aaj tak main sochta raha ki iss samaj yeh log hamara rishte ko nahi accept kar payenge our issi dou ran vidhi ko bahut mushkilon ka saamna karna padta hai. Our main vo hone nahi de sakta. Bas iss dar se main khud ko rokta tha .. par vidhi ne yeh mera dar ache se mehsoos Kia hai. Uska asli problem mera parivaar nahi hai mera yeh galat soch hai..jo bhi vo kaha na sab sach hai.. aaj tak main vidhi ki bath ko lekar khud se nahi lad patha Hu.. jitna bhi himmat kare bas mera yeh dar mujhe nahi chodte the.. 

our usne yeh bhi kaha …Kash aap mujhe bhi uthna hi chahte jithna main aapko chahti Hu…

Aajtak main sochta hai ki main usse pyar karta Hu yeh kafi hai par kabhi yeh nahi socha ki kuch bhi hojaye usse apna banana hai..ha… mere dar ke saamne haar kar  main usse ithna nahi chaha jithna vo mujhe chahti hai.

Maine kabhi himmat hi nahi kar paya koushik…aise soch ne keliye…

Aajtak main sochta tha ki main mature Hu… par nahi .. itni si choti Umar mein vo mujhse bahut mature hai… mere har problem ka solution hota tha uske pass dekha aaj iss problem ka solution bhi usne dikhaya..

Ab mujhe koi dar nahi hai koushik.. ha .. hamare iss rishte mein bahut problem aayenge .. log hamare raste mein bahut kante bichake rakhe hai .. par ham saath hai tho yeh bhi aasan ho jayega.. main usko dard mein nahi dekh sakta par uska dard share tho Kar sakta Hu na…

Sach mein koushik usse mera dil ki baat batane ke baad mujhe pehle jaisa kuch ajeeb nahi lag raha hai.. sab kuch acha lag raha hai..our ab main uske bina nahi raha sakta Hu… I just couldn’t bear the pain when she gone away from me…. Again I can’t….

Main samajh gaya Hu.. mujhe kya karna hai …

He determined with a strong plan.

Koushik: dev kuch bhi karne se pehle ek baar socho kyonki…

 he showed a video Amba , Abhi, Chitra are waiting for dev to come home for celebration .

Our Abhi  , Amba ne tumhe reach karne keliye bahut koshish kar rahe hai. Abhi ka call mujhe bhi aaya tha par maine unhe jhoot bol dia.

Dev fisted his hands by thinking about Amba’s move of control him by controlling Chitra…

Koushik: dev agar tum chahe tho aaj raat yehi ruk sakte ho … news vale … tv vaale sab ki nazar tum par hai.. 

He smiled at koushik and said thank you yaar agar tum nahi ho to aaj kya hota mera…aise halat mein mujhe kisi reporter ne dekha tho bahut bada scandal ho jate  our Vidhi.. uske liye bahut mushkil hota kyonki uski papa ko yeh sab abhi pata nahi chalna chahiye…

Koushik: ek baat batao .. bahut pyar karte ho vidhi se yeh sahi hai.. par pehle kisne yeh shuru kia.. tum ya vo vidhi… kyonki maine USs din office mein uski pagalpan dekh ke hi samajh gaya ki she fell for you .. tho usne pehle pyar Kia na tumse.. hai na….. to lighten dev mood.

Dev blushed and said no .. you are wrong …

pehle maine hi usse pasand Kia par ….

Koushik: hamesha ki tarah late latif banke late realise Kia hoga haina…… teased koushik…

Dev: late Latif main… Har baat mein main first Hu yaar…

Koushik: acha tho batao studies our business ke alava kis cheej mein tum first ho… ha batao ab Shadi our  pyar  mein bhi late latif ban gaye ho bada aye first Hu.. bolne vaala…

And both laughed and dev hugged him and said thank you … ab nahi bolunga kyonki kal tumse bahut badi kaam hai.. taiyar rahna .. ab main ja raha Hu.. don’t worry I will handle everything….and waved him bye..

Raichand mansion: 

Abhi: ma, bhaiya kaha hai abhi pata nahi chala hai. Vo vidhi bhi bas message Kia bhaiya ne ha kah dia our uska phone bhi switch off aaraha hai.. bhiya ka phone bhi switch off aaraha hai . Mujhe kuch samajh nahi aa raha hai ..

Amba: dev kaha ho tum jaldi aa jao .. main kab se tumhara intezar kar raha Hu said seeing into his pic on wall.

Chitra heard Dev’s car sound and went to welcome him.. all joined dev and Chitra and Priya took Amba to dev.. 

dev got angered by seeing Amba but controlled himself and said guys bahut thak gaya Hu .. our bahut late bhi ho chuka hai… ham kal baath kar lenge iss baare mein  our vidhi ne bataya na pehle..

Amba noticed dev … his tensed face and his injured hand and thought… wow!!! Bahut kuch hogaya hai in donon ke beech our dev bhi vidhi se gussa hai our dev ko chot bhi aaya iska matlab vo ladki kya kaha hoga… kuch bhi kahe par dev apni family ke against kabhi nahi jaayega.. vo vidhi roya hoga jhagda Kia hoga unki pyar ke baare mein bolke .. iss beech mein shayad jhagda hua hoga isiliye dev ko chot aaya par dev bhi vidhi ko like karta hai na.. kya hua hoga ..dev ki shakal dekh ke lagta hai bahut roya hai..par  kis liye.. vidhi keliye….. tho bhi mujhe kya.. dev USs Vidhi keliye jithna rona hai na … uthna ro na bas aaj raat keliye … kyonki kal se tum meri ho … sirf iss Amba ki ho… jab tak yeh Chitra meri haat mein hongi tab tak tum mujhe apanane ke alava kuch nahi kar paayenge….

Dev smirked by sensing Amba thoughts.. but made a poker face and said sorry Amba to disappoint you but pls shall we meet tomorrow pls… said with sugar coated voice.

Amba beemed with happiness and said bye and left the house..,

Abhi our Chitra ran to dev.. 

dev: guys pls let me freshen up and we will talk after dinner already bahut late ho chuke hai..

He left to his room and removed his shirt and wore the vidhi’s gifted shirt and felt peace at his racing heart. 

After freshen up he went to them and said ma,

Satya: dev kya hua , batao dev tum sach mein yeh shadi karna chahte ho…

Chitra: ha bhaiya sach mein Amy mousy meri bhabhi banegi..

Abhi: bhaiya kuch tho boliye ham kab se aapka intezar kar rahe hai .. vidhi ne mujhe msg kia par ham aapse sunna chahte hai .. boliye bhaiya…

Dev: ma, main vidhi se pyar karta Hu… ha ma, I love Vidhi….

Priya:bhaisaab, aap kya bol rahe hai… vidhi… our aap….

Dev: ha ma, mujhe hamara beech ka age gap ka bhi ehsaas hai… par fir bhi main vidhi ke bina jee nahi paunga ma…

 Chitra: bhaiya… vidhi… vo ladki… meri babhi banegi… par Amy mousi…

Dev: ma, Maine aaj Vidhi ko bhi mere dil ki baat bol dia…

Satya: cupped her mouth and said par vidhi ne abhi ko kaha hai ki tum Amba se shaadi keliye taiyar hai…

Dev just laughed and said that is vidhi ma…vo nahi chahti hai ki main apne hi parivaar se jhagda kare… isiliye mujhe manane ki bahut koshish Kia hai unhone our issi baaton ke beech maine accidentally apna pyar ke baare mein boldia… pyar ke izhaar nahi Kia par bas nikal gaya mere moh se…

Satya: kaise bhi ho par tumne bataya na, vidhi ne kya jawab dia…

Dev: vidhi ne saaf mana kardia ma.. par mujhe pata hai vo bhi mujhse pyar karti hai…

Satya: agar vo pyar karti hai to kyon mana Kia dev…

Dev: ma, vidhi ka dar yeh hai ki Amba, our mera rishta ki bath tutne ki vajah se vo Amba kahi chitra ki jindagi mein kuch problems create na Kare…..

Priya: my foot vo low class ladki our uski low class thinking… I will never accept her as bahu of this house. Bhaisaab aap kaise USs gavar ko mere equal ki darja de sakte hai…

Abhi: priya… mind your words… tum mere bhai se bath kar rahe ho…

Chitra: bhai … aap aisa kaise kar sakte hai bhai Amy mousi ke saath… vo aapse bahut pyar karti hai bhai….. 

dev: chitra… mere bacha…main tumhe kaise samjhaye.., shayad Amba mujhse pyar karti hogi par main usse kabhi USs nazar se nahi dekha .vo sirf mera dost hai… our vidhi … vo bahut achi  hai.. vo bahut sochti hai tumhare baare mein..,

Chitra remembered the achar incident and said… Vidhi… vo ladki… meri bhabhi banegi…

Abhi: dev bhai… main bahut khush Hu aapke liye..mujhe nahi pata aapke liye vidhi sahi hai ya nahi par main hamesha se chahte Hu ki aap apne jindagi mein settle hojaye bas…and he hugged dev …

Satya: ha… dev … mujhe BAs isi din ka intezar tha. Tumhe finally tumhara pyar mil hi gaya…

Priya: bhai sahab vo ladki iss ghar ki bahu kabhi nahi ban sakti….

Dev: it’s ok Priya … agar tumko Vidhi achi nahi lagti tho koi baat nahi hai.. main iss ghar mein nahi rahunga.. par main ab Vidhi ke bina nahi jee sakta…

Satya,abhi: yeh kya bol rahe ho bhaiya/dev…

Dev: ha..Priya .. mujhe pehle lagta tha ki vidhi ke sath nahi rah sakta tho kya main akele hi apni jindagi jeelunga vidhi ko kush dekh kar.. par nahi main galat tha… jindagi bahut choti hai.. our usse khud khushi se bithana chahiye .. kisi our ki khushi door se dekh kar nahi.. balki uss insan ke saath paakar jindagi mein khushiya bhar kar  jeena hai…

Ma, our mujhe pata hai meri iss decision ki vajah se chitra ki jindagi mein bahut problems aayenge.. mujhe Amba ke baare mein bahut ache se pata hai…isiliye maine kuch soch Lia hai ..

Satya: kya soch Lia hai dev… mujhe kuch samajh nahi aaraha hai..

Dev gave some papers to Chitra and said

Chitra bachi.. yeh RGI mein jo bhi mera shares hai main vo sab kuch tumhare naam transfer Kia hai taki Amba future mein tumhare jindagi mein koi problem khada na kare…

Chitra: bhaiya… iski kya jaroorat hai bhaiya… agar Amy mousi mujhe darate bhi tho .. Vikram hai na bhaiya .. maine usse pyar karke shadi Kia bhaiya.. vo mera jaroor support karega… our main kabhi yeh nahi chahti Hu ki meri khushi keliye aap Amy mousi se samjhauta kare… main BAs apni bhaiya ki jindagi banate dekhna chati Hu bhaiya… agar meri bhabhi meri jan pehchan hai tho bahut acha hoga . Our Amy mousi aapke liye perfect hai .. isiliye ithna jidd Kia… par ab aap kisi our se pyar karte hai tho main koun hoti Hu mana karne vali… aap meri our abhi bhaiya ki pyar mein kithna help Kia hai.. Bina kuch puche .. our bina kuch soche..

Abhi: ha bhaiya ham bas aapko kush dekhna chahte hai …bhaiya aajtak aapne hamare jindagi keliye sab kuch Kia hai.. ab bhi kar rahe hai… par ab BAs bhaiya .. ab aap sirf aapke jindagi ke baare mein sochenge..

Dev: sach… abhi our Chitra .. tum log sach mein mangaye… 

Ha bhaiya both went to dev and hugged him … 

Chitra: ha mujhe vo vidhi bhabhi uthna pasand nahi hai.. par meri pyare bhai keliye kuch bhi ….

Dev laughed and said thank you bacha .. and Abhi .. par main yeh bath guarantee ke sath keh sakta Hu ki aapki bhabhi aapko disappoint nahi karegi..aap hi kahenge ek din hamara bhabhi bahut sweet hai…

Abhi/chitra: aweee bhai aap tho bahut romantic ban gaye ho.. yeh jaadu kaise hua…

Satya: pyar beta pyar sab ko badalte hai…

Yeh sab theek hai dev.. par…vidhi… vo ..

Dev: boliye ma… aapki man mein jo bhi sawal hai bas boliye..

Satya: vo ithni choti Umar mein yeh sab handle kar sakti hai? Our Hariprasad ji , Bimla ji unka kya? Sab se badi baat vidhi ko iss rishte ke baare mein sab pata hona chahiye…. kahi future mein vo apni decision ko lekar regret na Kare… our dev tum… tum ache se socha na  iss rishte ke baare mein.. kyon ki aisa rishta nibhana aasan nahi hai..

Dev: ha ma, mujhe pata hai.. Vidhi choti hai .. jhalli hai tho mujhe hi sab sambhalna hai.. uski nadaniyon ko sahna hai our usse pyar se sab samjhana hai jab tak vo sab ache se na seekhein..ham donon mein mein hi bada Hu na tho mujhe hi sabar karna hai..

Satya: dev tum ache se socha hai na iss bare mein.. varna koi bath nahi hai beta.. tumhe jitna vakt chahiye .. lelo par soch ke decision lena..

Dev: ma, ma, mujhe pata hai.. aap kyon ithna pareshan ho raha hai .. kyonki jo jindagi mere vajah se vidhi ko mil raha hai vo aap jee raha hai ma…mujhe pata hai… iss rishte mein aap bahut kuch saha hai… mujhe pata hai log vidhi ko gold digger bolenge our mujhe opportunistic, womaniser bahut tane milenge … our ek our sach yeh bhi hai ki … kaise aap har din papa ko yaad karke raat mein apne kamre mein rote the…. iss akelapan se aap kithna dard mehsoos kar raha hai mujhe sab pata hai.. ma, bas isi dar se ithni dinon se main apne aapko rok rahe the ma…

Par ab main Vidhi ke bina ji nahi sakta ma… main ek baar mere pyar keliye selfish hona chahta Hu ma… ha .. ma, Chitra, abhi.. main aisa aapki marzi ke khilaf nahi jaana chahta tha par main vidhi ke pyar mein majboor Hu..main ek baar mere pyar keliye selfish hona chahta Hu …bahut mushkil se ye nirnay liya Hu ma… ab mujhe bas kisi bhi tarah se vidhi ko manana hai ma..ismein aap mera madad karenge na…

Abhi, chitra: ha, bhaiya aapka pyaar aapko jaroor milega…we are so happy for you…

Satya: aaj main bahut kush Hu.. mere sare bachein ki jindagi settle ho gaye hai…

Jao jao … bahut raat huyi hai chalo so jao sab.. main khana room mein bhijawaungi..

dev: ma, Abhi, Chitra … ek baat yeh baat abhi kisi ko nahi pata chalne chahiye … khaskar Amba, Bimla ji our hari prasad ji…

Abhi: aap chinta mat kariye bhaiya main priya ko sambhalunga

Chitra: don’t worry bhaiya… I will be careful with Vikram and Amy mousi…

All went to rooms…

Dev just sat on bed thinking ways to manao Vidhi…he felt relieved after seeing Chitra and Abhi happy about  his decision but he is worried about Priya. He want all his family members happily accept Vidhi……

Slowly dev went to slumber…..



To be continued…

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Part 3:
Dev woke up with shake and shouted Vidhi…

Baar baar uski rote huye chehra dev ki nazron ki saamne aaraha hai.. he dailed Vidhi number but still it is switched off. He sighed and went to freshen up and left to jog early….

There he saw a couple with age gap 60,40… 

she is wiping his face lovingly and gave water to him. He drank water and said honey don’t worry about me … go and jog… I can’t jag now but you can … so why are you wasting your time by walking with me…. Pls go….. have fun..

She: No baby you know right why we come to this park .. not to jog or walk…just to spend this beautiful morning time with each other.. so pls allow me to walk along with you pls…with a pout…

He: honey …don’t blackmail me with your pout… I am not melting… immediately next minute he laughed and both went for walking side by side… 

All wished them good morning with smile and teased them cause every body know about their lovely banter.

Dev felt very happy by seeing this and for a second he imagined him and Vidhi in them walking side by side…

He went to home and dailed koushik….

Sharma house:

Vidhi slept late night by crying and Bimla came and woke up Vidhi.

Bimla: Vidhi… yeh kya hai… office jana nahi hai kya… tum aise soyegi tho late ho jagogi utho… vidhi…

Vidhi woke up and find she is late … she got ready fast and skipped the breakfast and checked her phone… she switched on and saw many call notifications from dev but she didn’t want to talk with him. She left to office by informing Bimla that she is getting late and she will eat something in office and she got call from unknown number and 

Person:ms. Vidhi… kuch din pehle aap ek project keliye koushik group of industries aaye the na…

USs project ke baare mein aap firse aaj yaha aa sakte hai .. kyonki hame pata chala hai ki aaj mr devvrat raichand chutti par hai toh ….hame kuch project ke baare mein…..

Vidhi:she came to reality aaj press conference Amba mam our dev sir ka rishta…public annou…

Person: hello ms Vidhi… BAs thodi der keliye aap a sakte hai..

Vidhi: yehi better hoga . Office jaye tho sab log press conference ke baare mein discuss karenge .. toh..thought ..

Ha.. ha ji main abhi aadhe ghante mein pahunch jaaungi.. thank you..

Person: thank you mam…

Koushik: called dev and said mere work tho khatam  bhai..par pls don’t involve me further bhai pls…agar bhabhi ko kuch pata chala tho….pls yaar…

Jai bolenath ki….

 sab thik hoga… dev… and he cut the call.

Dev left to office in hurry Satya stopped him and said dev tumne kal raat bhi kuch nahi khaya pls breakfast karke jao.. 

dev: nahi ma.. mujhe bahut urgent meeting hai our main office mein kuch khalunga..

Dev came to the presentation room and he checked all the cameras are off or not. He asked koushik to cut off all the cameras and prepared to lock the room himself when Vidhi entered the room. He asked koushik to arrange breakfast in that room.

Vidhi came to the koushik office with difficulty by following location and she got directed to presentation room for meeting …

Once she entered the doors were closed to her surprise and she couldn’t find any one… she just went inside and the lights turned on she found dev standing there with smile….

She got angry by his this mischievous plan and decides to leave the room.   she tried to unlock the door …..

Dev: vo door ithni aasani se nahi khulega ms vidhi… yeh remote control se control hota hai our control mera pass nahi hai.. bas do ghante ke baad yeh lock kholne keliye maine koushik se kaha hai . Isiliye tum chahe ya na chahe tumhe do ghante yaha baithna hi padega…

Vidhi sighed and sat in a chair far from him…

Dev laughed by seeing her stubbornness he took the breakfast and sat near her…..he know she also didn’t eat any thing from yesterday and cried all time….

Ms vidhi ab tumhara sar dard kaisa hai.. vo kal maine hari prasad ji ko call Kia tho unhone bataya ki tumhe sar dard hai our tum so rahi thi….

Maine tumhare phone pe bhi call Kia par….

Vidhi: switched off hai mera phone mujhe pata hi nahi chala kab off hogaya…. Our main bilkul thik Hu…

Dev: ha.. kam se kam abhi ko message karne tak tumhara phone on mein tha .. thank god varna bahut gadbad ho jata…

Vidhi got annoyed by his taunt but didn’t show it on face. 

Dev: ms Vidhi mujhe pata hai tum mujh se bahut gussa  ho… our mere gussa khana par mat nikalo. Chalo eat this…

Vidhi:thank you but Maine ghar pe breakfast karke aaya Hu..,

Dev: ms Vidhi mujhe ache se pata hai…tum kal se kuch nahi khaya ho our chup chap khalo…

Vidhi: aapko ithne ache se kaise pata hai aap yeh bhi hari prasad ji se puch Lia kya call karke… 

Dev: laughed mentally by her kiddish behaviour replied ha… sach mein maine call karke puch Lia par Bimla ji se… unhone bola ki tum kal se kuch nahi khaya…

Vidhi thought she got defeated but countered him app bhi kuch nahi khaya na kal se mujhe pata hai….tho aap kha lijiye…main nahi khaungi…

Dev: pehle tum…

Vidhi: pehle aap….

Tum…

Aap…

Tum….

Aap….

Tum….

Aap…

Tum….

She got annoyed and tried to took a piece …par…

Isse pehle dev took a bite and stuffed in her mouth.she about to shout dev stuffed one more… she again tried to talk and dev fed one more …..

She looked with smile at him and he tried feed her one more bite with love…taking it as chance Vidhi bites his finger and he hissed and opened his mouth to blow air… Vidhi fastly fed a bite to him …. Dev forwarded a bite again to her and she  ate that silently.. dev continued it and Vidhi stopped him and said aap bhi kha lijiye pls…..

Vidhi went far from him and staring into the void… he know she is fighting her tears and he wiped his hands and went to her…

Vidhi: finding him approach her she asked mere liye aap kyon yeh sab kar rahe hain?

Dev: Vidhi….I know you are upset with me… and pls mujhe sab explain karne ke liye ek mouka tho do pls…

Vidhi: ab aapko batane ka our mera sunne ka kuch nahi bacha hai … pls aap yeh sab chod dijiye our aapke family ke pass jayiye .. sab bahut kush honge aapke saath mein….

Dev: held her hand and said suno tho….Mai hi buddhu Hu yaar kal tumhe time se nahi rok paaya par main samajh gaya Hu vidhi tum ne mujhe kya samajhane ki koshish Kar rahe the… ab main samajh gaya Hu…pls… ek baar mere taraf dekho… pls vidhi….he turned her to face him but she looked grounded….

Main tumse bahut pyar karta Hu vidhi and jan buch ke tumhe ithne din wait karane ke liye I am sorry vidhi.. par tumhe our tumhari pyar ko neglect karna mera intention nahi tha vidhi… tum .. tum … perfect ho vidhi … par main…. Mera age kuch bhi perfect nahi hai vidhi … isiliye mujhe lagta tha ki main tumhare liye sahi nahi Hu…..isiliye khud ko tumse door rakhne keliye bahut koshish Kia maine..yeh soch ke ki tum tumhari ham umra ke saath kush rahogi….. ha vidhi main galat tha … lade bina hi haar maan chuka Hu main par iska matlab yeh nahi hai ki main tumhe uthna nahi chahta Hu jitna tum mujhe chahte ho…he held her both hands and urged her to see into his eyes… dekho vidhi ek baar mere ankhon mein dekhkar yeh batao ki main tumhare liye kuch nahi feel karta Hu … tho main tumhe yehi chodkar chala jaunga… ek baar mere dil ki dhadkan Sun ke batao ki mere dil tumhare liye nahi dhadak rahe hai tho main kabhi tumhare saamne nahi aaungaa…batao vidhi…

Mujhe pata hai hamari umra ki faasla se tumhe koi problem nahi hai… par hamare beech tho generations ka fasla hai vidhi…tum umra ki iss ore khade ho our main ithna door tumse…hamara living style, hamara up bringing , hamara soch sab mein bahut antar hai vidhi … isiliye main Dar Gaya tha vidhi iss umra ki Seema ki vajah se tumhe iss samaj our logon ki taane se bachane se..iss duniya ki logon ne hamare raste mein ithne kaante bichake rakha hai ki tum USs par nahi chal paogi vidhi.. tum nahi seh paogi iss duniya ki nafrat ko…mujhe aisa lagta tha… par ab bhi main yeh sab nahi  rok paunga par inn saari problems mein main tumhare saath khada rahunga our tumse aage khade hoke har mushkil ka samna karunga… ham donon milakar saare dard, saare khushiya jo bhi hamare jindagi mein aaye ham donon share karenge….she pressed his hand to give him strength and state her support to share his insecurities.

Our main Dar Raha tha ki mujhse rishta jhodne se tum future mein kabhi regret na Kare iss decision se kyon ki main tumhare ham umra jaisa tumhe vo sab kuch nahi de sakta hu… our jab tumhe yeh realise ho jayega tab kahi sab khatam na ho jaaye…

He said with his eyes grounded..

Vidhi got annoyed by this and cupped his face and made him look into her eyes..

Dev took a deep breath and said mera sab se bada dar yeh hai ki bas kuch din ki khushiya dikhake beech mein hi tumhen jindagi bhar ke liye akele chodke chali na jaoon. He closed his eyes unable to see into her eyes with pain and guilt…

Mere swardh keliye BAs kuch din ki sapne dikhake tumhari puri jindagi barbaad nahi kar sakta Hu vidhi main…

Mujhe aisa karne ka koi haq nahi hai..

Mera ladai kabhi bhi tumhe our parivaar ke beech mein chun ne ka nahi hai vidhi…

Mera ladai sirf tumhari khushi our mere Kushi ka beech ka tha… isiliye har baar tumhari khushi ko chun ke khud ko tumse door rakhne ki koshish kar raha tha vidhi….

Vidhi: par aapne yeh kaise bhul gaya hai ki aapki khushi mein hi meri khushi hain…Said by making him stunned…

She left from there to control her self….

Dev ran behind her and said I am sorry Vidhi.. mujhe aisa nahi sochna chahiye tha tum sahi ho our tum sahi tarike se mujhe sachai dikhayi dia.. main hi buddhu Hu hamari rishte ko our hamare pyar ko samajh nahi paya. Par main promise karta Hu aage se yeh sab nahi hoga.. pls vidhi man jao na yaar pls… 

Vidhi can’t put facade after listening this turned other side and said main bahut gussa Hu aapse and yeh sorry vorry nahi chalega… 

Dev went near her and kissed on her cheek from back side… she turned by this surprise and he kissed on other cheek ….. Vidhi kept her hand on cheek and said Dev Sir yeh aap kya kar rahe hai… 

He listened Dev Sir from her today for the first time and he got emotional and said looking into her eyes while cupping her face.. vidhi I Love You … I Love You so much …. 

She is stunned by his honest confession and laughed whole heartedly by thinking that how much she waited to listen this from him….

Dev: kuch tho bolo Vidhi… pls…tumhe kuch nahi kehna hai…? bahut tadpaya na maine tumhe yeh sunne ke liye… I am Sorry …

She kept his finger near his lips and nodded no…

Main kya kahu dev sir… aapne jo kaha vo sunkar mujhe sab kuch mil gaya hai dev sir.. mujhe ab isse jyada our kuch nahi chahiye..main bahut kush Hu…and I love you too sir!!!!

Dev: vidhi… main aaj yeh tumse yeh keh paye tho   Iss ki vajah bas tum ho vidhi… main pehle hamare rishte ko impractical our impossible sochta tha… par kal tumhari himmat dekh ke yeh mehsoos hua ki agar ham donon saath hai tho sab kuch possible hai vidhi… tumne mujhe sachai ka .. hamara rishte ka dusre taraf dekhne ka himmat dia hai vidhi… 

Thank you Vidhi … meri jindagi mein aane keliye our mujhe jindagi sahi tarike se jeena sikhane ke liye… thank you so much…

He just cupped her face closely and looking intensely at her he just placed his lips  on her…

For Vidhi the world stopped there and their moments all revolving around her…Vidhi clutched Dev’s coat with her hands to balance her…

It’s a very gentle kiss and their first magical… Vidhi got stunned by this and melted by his gentleness she also responded to him…. Both are in sync and taking their own time to cherish each other… both are tearing up with an un bound happiness … sensing her fight for breath dev left her lips and wiped her tears..

Vidhi controlled her jumbled emotions and wiped Dev’s tears and both went for a hug…

Their First magical hug…both cherished their time being in hug and Vidhi suddenly shouted dev sir… lanka lag gayi…

Dev: kya hua vidhi…

Vidhi: vo vo dev sir… vo press conference… I am sorry sir … yeh sab na meri vajah se hua hai.. kal main abhi sir ko jhoot nahi kaha hota tho aaj yeh sab nahi hota .. par ab ham kya kare sir… aapki shadi ka announcement vo bhi … Amba m…..

Dev: vidhividhividhi relax aisa kuch nahi hua hai…

Vidhi: kya?

Dev : ha yeh dekho …

dev played the press conference footage on the screen.

Abhi and Chitra are hosting the press conference..

Abhi:good morning gentlemen ….hamne kal jo merger ki baath Kia hai na vo hai ki… yeh hamare behan our Mehta group of industries ki one of the heir Chitra got 25% shares of Raichand industries… so iss deal ko bhi main hamare donon parivaaron ki merger keh sakte Hu na…

Dev switched off the screen and he got a voice message…

Dev opened the message and 

Abhi/ Chitra: Ham aap logon keliye bahut khush hai bhaiya our bhabhi…

Welcome to raichand family Vidhi bhabhi….

Abhi: bhaai hope ab tak aap bhabhi ko mana Lia hoga .. aap se nahi hua tho bata dena ham log khud aake apni pyari bhabhi ko manayenge .. kyon chitra?

Chitra: ha bhai bilkul…par mujhe pata hai my dev bhaiya is best…

Have fun bhaiya bhabhi .. bye…

Vidhi felt very happy and tears are flowing from her eyes…

Dev: Vidhi … Vidhi… 

Vidhi: sach … batayiye dev sir .. yeh sach mein sach hein.. our Satyavati mam…

Dev nodded his head and assured her that sab kuch theek hai…

Vidhi’s face sulked next moment by thinking about her family… dev senses her and said Dar ne ki koi jaroorat nahi hai vidhi ham tumhare parents ko bhi mana lenge…

Vidhi: par papa.. papa .. bahut mushkil hoga sir…

Dev: pata hai Vidhi mushkil hoga.. par koi jaldi nahi hai .. ham aaram se unke ache mood dekh ke un donon ko batayenge… our mujhe lagta hai ki vo jaroor maanenge …yeh hamare pyar haina vo khud apna rasta banalengi.. tum dekhna.. main bata raha Hu… and he cheered up and wiped her tears…

Tho Vidhi jab Tak tumhare parents ko nahi manaye na shayad tab tak hame kuch karna padega…he said with mischief to lift her mood…

Vidhi: kya karna hoga…asked confused…

Dev:Dating … our kya?

Vidhi blushed hard and punched him in stomach.

Dev said ouch and sach mein keh raha Hu vidhi pls maan jao na…

Vidhi: sapne baad mein dekh lijiye dev sir… par pehle vo remote bahar nikal lijiye jo aapne USs cupboard mein chupa dia tha…

Dev: shocked and asked tumhe pehle se pata tha….

Vidhi raised her imaginary Collar and both smiled

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Dev rushing hurriedly to the river and Vidhi turned to ask time and dev held his ears with puppy eyes… 

Vidhi lowered his hands and holded his hand and made him sit and leaned on him while listening her favourite music she closed her eyes… dev also closed his eyes and lean on her head…

Time passes with their beautiful heart to heart conversation and their silence broke by the rain fall…Vidhi ran up some steps and asked dev to follow her.

Dev sir aap bhig rahe hai .. pls yaha aa jayiye…

Dev: iss baarish ko ham donon par barasane se koi problem nahi hai tho hame bheegne se kyon problem hona hai..and he opened his arms for her…

Vidhi quickly ran to him and hugged him tightly…

Both sat there being in each other arms and enjoyed the rain…

After enjoying their favourite task some time dev lifted Vidhi chin and whispered huskily I Love You and said ab to bolo yaar 6 mahine ho gaye hai.. ab mujhse our intezar nahi hoga…vidhi…bolo na pls bas ek baar……… pls…

I LOVE YOU DEV!!!! Shouted Vidhi being so close to him .… her voiced echoed through the rain shore and followed by a roar of thunder that reverberated their love through out universe…..


Na Umr Ki Seema Ho
Na Janm Ka Ho Bhandhan
Na Umr Ki Seema Ho

Na Janm Ka Ho Bhandhan

Jab Pyar Kare Koi

To Dekhe Keval Man

Nayi Reet Chalakar Tum

Ye Reet Amar Kar Do

Nayi Reet Chalakar Tum

Ye Reet Amar Kar Do…

Playing on radio on a tufani raat…..



Oh my god !!!  finally khatam… hope you all will like this my small effort of making spin-off for one off ViDev beautiful moment.

Thank you

SHINIKA.


Edited by Shinika - 10 months ago
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Posted: 10 months ago

Beautiful creation❤️

In first part, the nice twist...... If this had come in episode, would have been enjoyable.


In 2nd part, Dev-Shik pairing..... Koushik lifted Dev and hugged him smiley37 Par sawaal mast poochha late latif kaise nahi?


In last part, I fell in love with that initial old couple..... whenever I see such old loving couples, I get wistful.... So can well imagine Dev putting himself and Vidhi in that shot

Edited by Loving2Missing2 - 10 months ago
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Posted: 10 months ago

Will be reading tomorrow 😃 Abhi kaam ke beech mein bache huye waqt mein hurry burry mein theek se pad nahi pawungi mein.