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Dilon ki dastan ; ViDev;TS

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Dilon ki dastan; ViDev; TS

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This scene starts where Abhimanyu requests Vidhi to convince dev marry Amba.

Vidhi: main kaise sir.

Abhi: yeh tumhi kar sakte ho vidhi. Bhai ko sirf tum hi convince kar sakte ho. Pls.. hamara pura family bas yehi chate hai our un donon ne age ,status, intelligence sab mein barabar hai. Mere bhai ko Amba ji se acha life partner kahi nahi mil sakta. Main our Chitra ne Amba ji ko apna bhabhi maan bhi chuke hai par dev bhai nahi maan rahe hai. 

Tumhi batao vidhi jo kuch bhi maine kaha vo sab sach hai na.. tho bhai kyon nahi maan rahe hai yeh sab.aajtak hamesha vo Hi hamare liye sab kuch Kia bina kisi expectation ki. Ab ham unko kush dekhna chahte hai. Pls vidhi ek baar try karo . Mujhe pura yakeen hai tum yeh kar sakte ho..

Vidhi got emotional by their love towards his brother and she remembered his dedication towards his family.. 

she said theek hai sir main koshish karti Hu.

Abhi: kal mujhe our Arjun ko Ujjain meeting keliye jana hai. Par main kuch karke dev bhai ko meri jagah jane keliye manaunga. Thum Arjun ko manage karlo our dev bhai ko yeh patha nahi chalna hai ki Arjun ki jagah tum aa rahe ho. Vo bahut smart hai vidhi . Be careful.

She nodded with heavy heart and ready to go to home.

Arjun came to Vidhi with runningly and said Vidhi.. kal dev sir Ujjain meeting keliye ja rahe hai our main soch raha Hu ki mere jagah tum chale jao. Tumhare paas bahut time rahega confess karne keliye. 

Vidhi: dev sir office time pe personal bathe nahi discuss karte hai Arjun our nahi business trips mein.

Arjun: aap log tho gadi mein honge our lamba safar hai.tumhe himmat dikhana hai vidhi. Yeh bahut acha mouka hai vidhi. Kahi tum late na ho jaye .. pls..

Vidhi whispered agar dev sir mujhe reject karega  tho..

Arjun: agar vo maan gaya tho , vo bhi tumse pyar kar rahe ho tho.. socho vidhi.. milapini ma pe bharosa karke dev sir se apni dil ki baat bathado.

Vidhi thanked Arjun and said mein koshish karti hu Arjun and left.

Vidhi tossed for some time unable to sleep by the thoughts of the right thing to do. She thinks about lens of objectivity. Agar vo mujhse pyar karta hai  tho meri shaadi kyo karvana chahenge kisi our ke saath…main dev sir se bahut pyar karthi Hu par main usee pana nahi chathi Hu balki main usse khush dekhna chahti Hu.our unki khushi, parivaar ki khushi mein hai.She know dev sir will do anything for his family and Abhimanyu’s words echoed in her mind. Dev sir keliye yehi sahi hai she thought. jo bhi ho jaye par  usse apna niyat saaf rakhna hai.

Vidhi asked Bimla in the morning 

Ma, pyar bada hai ya tyag. With confusion.

Bim: Vidhu.. pyar ki doosri pehlu hoti hai tyag our subah subah tum yeh sab kyon puch rahi ho.. jaldi nikalna hai na .. dev sir intezar kar rahe honge.

Vidhi in thoughts that how many sacrifices he should have done to maintain the happy relationship with his step siblings.so you have no right to break their relationship, their happy family Vidhi for your selfishness ..her inner self said.

Next day morning dev went to office to pick Arjun he was surprised by seeing Vidhi waiting to accompany him.A whole hearted smile came on to his lips after seeing her innocent, confused face in the early hours of morning.

Beautiful!!! he whispered by lost in her.

Driver stopped the car and dev signalled Vidhi to join. He opened the door for her and she joined him on the back seat. 

Both lost in thoughts. 

Dev: yeh sab jo horaha hai uske peeche abhi ka hath tho nahi hai. Subah bhi vo pray kar raha tha.abhi our Arjun ko jaana tha pehle meeting keliye par ab un donon ki jagah main our vidhi..

Iska matlab kya abhi ko pata chala hai hamare baare mein.

Arjun .. vo kaise…vo khud vidhi se…. he don’t want to think about that.

Vidhi: said dev sir vo.. Arjun ki tabiyat kharab hai . Isiliye main aapke sath aa rahi Hu our maine presentation keliye ache se prepare bhi Kia .

Dev: thinks …kya main vidhi ko sab kuch bata du.. mere feelings, mere  py…. Par this age gap

Vidhi:thinks about the words of Arjun, Bimla and Abhimanyu.

Car got bounced by the speed breaker and Vidhi about to fell on his lap and dev carefully catches her and both lost in eye lock. 

Vidhi realised soon and broke eye lock and sat little far from him.

Dev was still lost in her… realised her discomfort by the distance and it pained him so much.
Driver plays the song and both looked each other

Vidhi don’t know how to talk infront of driver.

Dev :asked the driver to reduce sound and turned to Vidhi. 

Vo ms Vidhi tum USs din kuch important bath kahane ki koshish kar rahi thi na..kya tha vo.. bolo..

Vidhi : dev sir  vo.. vo.. she hesitated while seeing the driver and bent her head.

Dev asked the driver to stop for chai .

Vidhi: said hame late ho jayega dev sir....

Dev: mujhe chai peene ka bahut man kar raha hai vidhi .. said and both went out.

Romantic Song playing background..they sat on a bench leaving a little space between them. He orders chai. Vidhi’s hair locks are spreading on her face because of the flow of wind. Dev who adoring her shamelessly got disturbed by the hair which is hiding his vision . So thought to tuck the hair locks.

Before he reaches Vidhi tucks herself and realised dev sir  tried to tuck the hairs. It gave her confidence  and a small smile crept to her face.

Vidhi: dev sir..

Dev: ha bolo na he said desperately.

Vidhi: USs din aap milapini ma ka ashirvad  le rahe the na tho ma ne pucha kahi aap shadi ke bare mein tho soch nahi rahe hai.

Dev thinks tum kya soch rahi ho mujhe vo janna hai vidhi..

Ms vidhi…Main pray kar lia iska bathlab vo shadi ke bath hi hona hai.. main bas darshan kar rahe the vidhi. 
Vidhi thinks app kya soch rahe the darshan ke vakt mujhe vo janna hai sir..

Driver: sir bahut traffic hai ham chale..

Dev got disappointed and asked driver to leave and he will manage.

Dev asked Vidhi while driving 

Ms Vidhi…Arjun ke baare mein tumhara opinion kya hai..

She looked with confusion.

I mean about his work and his behaviour.  he corrected his question.

Vidhi: Arjun bahut acha ladka hai sir.. mujhe bahut support karta hai…our mera bahut madad bhi Kia ghar ki demolish vale din . He did a big favour on me sir… she said sincerely…

Unable to hear her praise Arjun..   a utterly jealous dev stopped the car with sudden brake and said to the confused Vidhi…

Ms Vidhi…dhaba me kuch khake jaayenge Ujjain pahunchne mein bahut time lagega and got down without hearing her.

He walked faster without waiting for her by blinded by jealousy and tried to sat but it’s difficult to hide his emotion from her he thought. 

Vidhi literally ran after him and smiled little by seeing his hesitation to sit .She showed him how to sit and both settled on cots.

Dev orders the food but Vidhi stopped him and said bahar ka khana jyada mat khayiye sir…vo aapko nahi suit karega and showed the food sent by her mother. 

They ordered some snacks and started to eat food.

Dev said to Vidhi that Tripathi ji will be accompany them on return .. indirectly pushing her to confess what she want to say..

Vidhi whispered lanka lag gayi vidhi… he smiled slightly by seeing her antics.

Dev took a bite and said hmmm.. the curry is too good.. full of swad…. Hmm..

Hai na sir.... Arjun ko bhi bahut pasand hai sir said an  excited Vidhi..

Dev coughed hard by listening that and Vidhi helped him with water.

They talk about priya and abhi’s love and dev cleared that their marriage is love cum arranged marriage and they talked for some time.

Finally dev gave in and asked her ms Vidhi.. what you want to say him that much important on demolition day…

Vidhi looked here and there..

They finished the food and went for hand wash. 

Dev agin asked ms Vidhi what you wanted to say that much important to me ? with desperation while helping her wash her hands.

Vidhi says I want to say that you should get married.

He got shocked and asked what?

She went to wipe her hands .. Dev asks her confused whom I shall marry?  and blindly following her.

Vidhi wipes her hands harshly and said sir..

AAP Amba maam se shadi kar lijiye…

Dev got shocked and with anger he shouted 

ms Vidhi..do you even know what you are blabbering?

Every body is waiting for your approval. Abhi sir, Chitra mam They will be very happy by this. AAP Amba mam se shadi kar lijiye sir..pls.. she said and tried to ignore him.

He fisted his hands with anger and hurt when he hear her say … say that again .  And realised his unwashed hands asked her to help him in washing.

Vidhi pouring the water on his hands and said sir.. Amba mam aapke liye bahut perfect hai. Aapka status ka hai , aapki tarah badi business woman hai, aapki tarah bahut educated bhi hai.. our aapki family ka pasandida aurat hai..isiliye aap bas shaadi keliye ha kah dijiye..
dev gave a fierce look and she dropped the water jug on him with fear…

Dev: he enraged and said  Marriage, status yeh sab kya ? ms vidhi yeh sab kya hai? Our tumhe yeh kyon lagta hai ki log bas status ki hisaab se shadi karte hai. Pehle yeh batao ki  tum kyon yeh marriage consultant banke fir rahe ho ..our kis liye..?.

Vidhi: aap aap aisa gussa karegi tho kya main dar jaagungi aapse?

Dev: ms vidhi..tumhe lagta hai tum mujhse ha bulva sakti ho.our kisne .. kisne yeh sab kuch bakwas tumhare dimag mein dala hai.. koun tumhe pressure kar raha hai batao vidhi.. he shouted with frustration of being hurt and angered.

She got teary eyed by seeing his anger said with pain.. aapko kuch samajh mein nahi aata  hai... kisi ki feelings .. ya kisi ki struggle .  Kuch bhi nahi…Aap ko bas apne dil ke Charon taraf deewar khada karna aata hai.
dev got confused by her outburst…..

Aap koshish  karne keliye tayyar hi nahi hai.. Abhimanyu sir ne koshish Kia na .. aap bhi kariye  na kya pata koshish karne se…

Dev: ms Vidhi… shouted ab main samajh gaya Hu.. tumhe lagta hai tum abhi manyu ko manalia tho mujhe bhi mana lenge vo bhi Amba ke bare mein. .. nahi .. kabhi nahi.. I don’t want to burst your bubble but you are wrong miss Vidhi.. you are damn  wrong..

Vidhi: kahi baar aapko halat ko samajhne keliye kisi tisare ka bath Sunani pada thi hai dev sir..

Dev: ms tisare insaan ..no thanks.. mujhe ithna akal hai ki main khud apna decision le sakta Hu..

Vidhi: got tired by asking him again and again. She also shouted angrily ..tho decision le lijiye .. Amba mam se shadi keliye ha kah dijiye.. sab bahut khush honge..

Dev: ms vidhi.. iss se aage ek our shabd nahi.. main iss shadi keliye kabhi ha nahi kahunga.. kabhi bhi nahi..mujhe mat ukaso… said an enraged dev with big eyes.

Vidhi: aapko kya lagta hai aap aisa mujhe gusse se apni badi badi ankh dikha ke dara the tho Mai dar javungi..Har baar aap aisa hi karte hai. Aapki aisi badi badi ankhe dikhake mujhe darane ki koshish karte hai . Our main jo bolna chahta Hu dar ke mare bol hi nahi pata…

Dev: tum bol nahi pata .. ha tum.. bas 15 minut se sirf tum hi patar patar ki boli ja rahe ho.. boli ja rahe ho.. tum bol nahi pata.. tum mujhse darte ho…

Vidhi: ha aap sahi hai .. aaj bilkul bhi aisa nahi hoga.. main aapse nahi darne vali  Hu..

Dev : miss Vidhi..shouted being in a fear that he could say some thing to her for which he will regret  it later..

Vidhi: chillayi ye mat our yeh batayiye aap kyon iss shadi keliye inkaar kar rahe hai?

Kyon? Batayiye.. aap Amba mam se shadi kyon nahi karna chahte hai?? balki vo aapko bahut chathi hai…she asked in her high voice..

Dev: kyonki main bhi tumse pyar karne laga Hu.. yes!! I am falling in love with you every minute….he shouted with frustration being failed her to stop talking this nonsense about to set him with other woman who is utterly obsessed with him.

Vidhi got rooted still and her body is shivering and her eyes and heart shedding happy tears with the truth of being claimed by her love.

His confession soothed her bleeding heart all this while.

He realised his slip.. he closed his eyes to hide his embarrassment but he felt light hearted rather than embarrassed and happy tears are making their way.he opened his hopeful eyes and lost in thoughts that he confessed but what next? He is afraid to think about future .

Dev and Vidhi both lost in the time like they never want to move further.

Just when Abhimanyu’s message popped up and slapped by harsh reality Vidhi broke her eye lock turned back wiped her tears and said 

Par ..Ab  main aapse pyar nahi karti Hu.. completed it with a heavy heart and dry throat.

Dev is not at all shocked by her reaction because he know how stubborn Vidhi is and now she can do anything to make him agree to marry Amba.but kyon? Why she is adamant to marry him with Amba.. He cursed Amba for all this mess being the root cause…
Dev: Agar reject karne ka man bana hi Lia tho muh pe karo na. Tum kyon apna muh chupa rahi ho. Agar tum sach kaha rahe hai tho See into my eyes and say ms vidhi.. that you never loved me…

Vidhi: she shivered by the tender ness of his pleading voice but controlled herself and turned to face him.

Ha sir Maine bahut baar khud se kaha main aapse bahut pyar karti Hu.. par aisa mujhe lagtha tha.. ha main apni crush ko apna pyar samajh Lia. Ha Aaj bhi aap meri mentor hai, meri professor hai, meri boss hai , meri dost hai our meri jindagi ka sab se special insaan bhi hai par meri jeewan saathi ..nahi hai.. our yeh kabhi nahi hoga.. kyonki main jo aap keliye feel karti Hu na vo kya tha main samajh Lia. Vo pyar nahi hai..( vo in sab se bahut upar hai sir .. bahut upar…she thought in mind)

Dev: He got surprised by her guts to say this being firm and looking straight in to his eyes. He laughed with tears and said aisa mat bolo ms Vidhi .ham donon ko pata hai shayad tum thik kaha rahe ho par yeh pura sach nahi hai. Our mujhe pura sach janna hai jo maine tumhare ankhon mein bahut pehle dekh chuka hu..ms Vidhi ab  tumhe khud vo sach mere ankhon mein aankhe daalke bolna padega.

Vidhi: feared by his argument she know he will convince her at any cost but now she don’t want to.. tumhe unhe pana nahi hai vidhi. Tumhe usse khush dekhna hai.. tyag pyar ka dusri pehlu hota hai ..tired by all this inner conflict…

sir pls zidd chodiye… maan jayiye.. pls ..aap mere sath aisa nahi kar sakte hai  pls.. she pleaded with her eyes.

Dev: lowered his eyes unable to take her pleading  and thought no.. Vidhi main tumhare saath yeh na- insafi hone nahi dunga, mujh par agar kisi ka haq hai tho vo sirf tum ho. Main yeh kisi our ko nahi de sakta.

Vidhi: she don’t want to leave this opportunity.. she have to push the wrong buttons to convince him she thought . She squeeze her eyes hard and said tho Sun lijiye dev sir .. aaj main apna pura sach bathaunga aapko.

Jab tak meri jindagi mein vo nahi aaya na tab tak mujhe bhi laga ki aap mera pyar bhi hai sirf crush or respect hi nahi.par jab main unke sath time bitane shuru Kia na tab mujhe sab crystal clear hogaya ki aap mera crush hai our main respect ko pyar samajh Lia . Our mera sacha pyar mujhe finally mil hi gaya…

Dev: choked but managed to whisper  koun?  .. and lowered his face...he couldn’t see her take other man’s name as her love…. 

vidhi: aap bhi usse ache se jaante hai…Arj…

Dev: eyes become blood shot red and his mind clouded with jealousy he shouted 

don’t … don’t dare to say that name infront of me..

(He don’t want to listen that name.. no .. not even in pretence…)

He couldn’t breathe … he .. he..rushed from there and punched the cement pole making that to uncountable pieces unable to control his jumbled up jealousy, pain, frustration ,defeat.

Vidhi packing the box and gasped by hearing the sound and ran to him.  

By the time he sat in the car and controlling his anger, hurt, frustration on his helpless situation.

She ran to him with heavy breath and tried to held his hand.

He shoved his hand away by not allowing to touch her and put on the seat belt with other hand. 

She saw the blood on his knuckles and immediately tore her dupatta and held his wrist stubbornly to know him that she won’t leave him without bandaging.

She held his palm gently with silent tears while blowing into his knuckles she applied medicine from first aid box and bandaged with her dupatta Cloth.

She looked fiercely into his eyes by accusing him with hurt like what an earth he is doing ? and get back to the passenger seat .

Killing silence spreaded there for some time. 

She couldn’t bear the silence and said.. aapko yaad hai na..hame meeting keliye jana hai..

He dailed Tripathi number and said that he won’t make it and they will plan again at the earliest.

She don’t know how to convince him. Here she is breaking inch by inch inside and find it hard to control for more time. She came back from the thoughts by the call. She checked and this time it was Arjun. 

By seeing his name dev enraged and starts the car with a jerk and driving in a mad speed.

Luckily it was a highway and nothing to fear of the chances of crash.

Vidhi: she held the side handle hard to control her to balance and finally she couldn’t balance and her head hitted to the dash board.

Dev : coming back to senses by this he stopped the car and said 

sorry ..sorry… Vidhi and caresses her wound and jerked back by remembering her lie.

Vidhi got confused by his care and anger at same time.

Dev: if it’s true even a bit you won’t be here in the place of him  whispered….

Vidhi: Amba mam is the perfect life partner for you… pls understand.

Dev: he didn’t even give a head to her plea ..he don’t know he will accept vidhi or not . Still he has his doubts about their age gap and concerned about her happy life.

But he can’t take this rejection he thought…

He don’t know how she survived when he silently rejected her..yet she bounced back with smile.he shut his eyes with unbearable pain.

Dev: said after a long pause .. asked softly kyon …. Kyon.. 

vidhi: shut her eyes to let out the tears and said I just wanted you to convince to marry Amba mam but not intended to hurt you….

Dev: hurt… hmmm .. and unable to speak with jumbled emotions.

Vidhi: I want you to know ki your family will be so happy if you agree… the family which you delicately yet beautifully built with so many sacrifices all along your life and now with in a blink you can’t afford to broke brutally that tenderly weaven nest.
Our mein.. mein aapko apne parivaar se hi ladte huye nahi dekh sakta..aapka parivaar apka vajud hai sir…

Dev: dev got tounge tied by the truth and bites his lips to control his helpless scream inside him trying to not to shake her with fear.

Finally he gave in and started the car .this time carefully he drives and they are about reach Vidhi said aap yaha gadi rok dijiye..yaha se aap apna rasta our main apna.our kabhi milne ki gunjaish hi nahi hai.she whispered the last line to herself.

Dev: Kuch der our ham aise sath rahane se kuch ho nahi jaayega..

vidhi: khamakhah takleef ho jayegi sir..main aapko our pareshan nahi karna chahti Hu..

Par Aapko yaha se khud chalna hoga dev sir… our chinta mat kijiye… main khud apna rasta bana lungi. Kuch bhi meri jindagi se chale jaaye par app se seekha  hua yeh atmavishwas meri akhri dam tak mera sath rahega.

He just want to stop her this ….. nonsense by kissing her fiercely until she claims Back her love on him.but if she comes back what he will do .. will he accept her ? Will he allow him to see her to daily pain herself by stepping into the thorns of their path.

He lost in these thoughts and she get down from car and started to leave.

He came to senses and ran to her and called her 

ms Vidhi… she turned and signed him what?

Did she really want to do what she is doing? 

She stood like puzzled and thought she really wished to have a chance to choosed by him . But unfortunately she don’t have that .

Aapko mujhe rokne ka haq hai dev sir.. par mujhe aapke our aapke khushiyon ko beech mein aane ka haq nahi hai..

Seeing her silent he asked 

Did she really want to punish him? 

She gave a dry laugh .

After seeing that he got mad and asked with hurt tumhari dil ki baat sunke bhi un suna karne keliye tum mujhe punish karna chahti ho na ?

batao  vidhi…

She pitied on her self.

Kaash vo jaj batein un suna hi rahate…

Kash aap ithna acha nahi hote ..

Kash Main aapke laayak hote…

Kash app mere liye khud se lad pate..

Kash aap mujhe bhi uthna hi chahte jithna main aapko chahti Hu…

Kash…. Kash….. aap meri bhagya mein hotein…she whishpered  and left from there leaving a vulnearable dev on the middle of the road….

Vidhi…. He screamed and sat on the road being drained out even to take breath.


DIL JUDE BINA HI TUT GAYE…


Dil jude bina hi tut gaye
Hatth mile bina hi chhut gaye
Ki likhe ne lekh kismet ne……


to be continued..,

SHINIKA.

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Posted: 11 months ago

This one is just mind blowing ❤️❤️ 

Xr the way you put their love into words just took my heart away.. ❤️❤️🥺🥺 

Now will love to see how Dev will take stand for their love.. 

Continue this one soon plz  🙏🏻 its a request 🥺🙏🏻

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Oh God 😭😭😭 This was so emotional rollercoaster, very clear depiction of ViDev emotions. Reminded me that Dhaaba episode which is my all time favourite and very much natural presentation of emotions. This is extra ordinary Shinika, you wrote it from heart and it just touched my heart. It bought tears 😭😭 to my eyes. 

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Oh God 😭😭😭 This was so emotional rollercoaster, very clear depiction of ViDev emotions. Reminded me that Dhaaba episode which is my all time favourite and very much natural presentation of emotions. This is extra ordinary Shinika, you wrote it from heart and it just touched my heart. It bought tears 😭😭 to my eyes. 


I am missing Dev’s ms Vidhi badly revu. Tabhi yeh thought aaya if dev proposes instead of Vidhi that day how it will be and what will happen next . So tried something.

Glad you liked it. I am worried because it’s a beautifully presented scene in show and  favourite for many people.

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Absolutely marvelous :):) Nice spin off on the scene, instead of Vidhi confessing, Dev confessed, loved it through and through.. eagerly waiting for the next chapter

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You wrote it from heart and trust me I loved it very much. That episode was one of the best from them. Wish we get our old writers who wrote deep dialogues for ViDev. 

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Absolutely marvelous :):) Nice spin off on the scene, instead of Vidhi confessing, Dev confessed, loved it through and through.. eagerly waiting for the next chapter

Thankyou Deeksha. Rewatching the show and missing the ms Vidhi from dev. So tried to present in different way. Hope I will update soon.

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The spin off 👏👏...  the twist at Dhaba ...

Hum Devji ki convincing power jaante hai...Gf ko convince karke rahenge 

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Originally posted by: Shinika

Dilon ki dastan; ViDev; TS

Shot1:

This scene starts where Abhimanyu requests Vidhi to convince dev marry Amba.

Vidhi: main kaise sir.

Abhi: yeh tumhi kar sakte ho vidhi. Bhai ko sirf tum hi convince kar sakte ho. Pls.. hamara pura family bas yehi chate hai our un donon ne age ,status, intelligence sab mein barabar hai. Mere bhai ko Amba ji se acha life partner kahi nahi mil sakta. Main our Chitra ne Amba ji ko apna bhabhi maan bhi chuke hai par dev bhai nahi maan rahe hai. 

Tumhi batao vidhi jo kuch bhi maine kaha vo sab sach hai na.. tho bhai kyon nahi maan rahe hai yeh sab.aajtak hamesha vo Hi hamare liye sab kuch Kia bina kisi expectation ki. Ab ham unko kush dekhna chahte hai. Pls vidhi ek baar try karo . Mujhe pura yakeen hai tum yeh kar sakte ho..

Vidhi got emotional by their love towards his brother and she remembered his dedication towards his family.. 

she said theek hai sir main koshish karti Hu.

Abhi: kal mujhe our Arjun ko Ujjain meeting keliye jana hai. Par main kuch karke dev bhai ko meri jagah jane keliye manaunga. Thum Arjun ko manage karlo our dev bhai ko yeh patha nahi chalna hai ki Arjun ki jagah tum aa rahe ho. Vo bahut smart hai vidhi . Be careful.

She nodded with heavy heart and ready to go to home.

Arjun came to Vidhi with runningly and said Vidhi.. kal dev sir Ujjain meeting keliye ja rahe hai our main soch raha Hu ki mere jagah tum chale jao. Tumhare paas bahut time rahega confess karne keliye. 

Vidhi: dev sir office time pe personal bathe nahi discuss karte hai Arjun our nahi business trips mein.

Arjun: aap log tho gadi mein honge our lamba safar hai.tumhe himmat dikhana hai vidhi. Yeh bahut acha mouka hai vidhi. Kahi tum late na ho jaye .. pls..

Vidhi whispered agar dev sir mujhe reject karega  tho..

Arjun: agar vo maan gaya tho , vo bhi tumse pyar kar rahe ho tho.. socho vidhi.. milapini ma pe bharosa karke dev sir se apni dil ki baat bathado.

Vidhi thanked Arjun and said mein koshish karti hu Arjun and left.

Vidhi tossed for some time unable to sleep by the thoughts of the right thing to do. She thinks about lens of objectivity. Agar vo mujhse pyar karta hai  tho meri shaadi kyo karvana chahenge kisi our ke saath…main dev sir se bahut pyar karthi Hu par main usee pana nahi chathi Hu balki main usse khush dekhna chahti Hu.our unki khushi, parivaar ki khushi mein hai.She know dev sir will do anything for his family and Abhimanyu’s words echoed in her mind. Dev sir keliye yehi sahi hai she thought. jo bhi ho jaye par  usse apna niyat saaf rakhna hai.

Vidhi asked Bimla in the morning 

Ma, pyar bada hai ya tyag. With confusion.

Bim: Vidhu.. pyar ki doosri pehlu hoti hai tyag our subah subah tum yeh sab kyon puch rahi ho.. jaldi nikalna hai na .. dev sir intezar kar rahe honge.

Vidhi in thoughts that how many sacrifices he should have done to maintain the happy relationship with his step siblings.so you have no right to break their relationship, their happy family Vidhi for your selfishness ..her inner self said.

Next day morning dev went to office to pick Arjun he was surprised by seeing Vidhi waiting to accompany him.A whole hearted smile came on to his lips after seeing her innocent, confused face in the early hours of morning.

Beautiful!!! he whispered by lost in her.

Driver stopped the car and dev signalled Vidhi to join. He opened the door for her and she joined him on the back seat. 

Both lost in thoughts. 

Dev: yeh sab jo horaha hai uske peeche abhi ka hath tho nahi hai. Subah bhi vo pray kar raha tha.abhi our Arjun ko jaana tha pehle meeting keliye par ab un donon ki jagah main our vidhi..

Iska matlab kya abhi ko pata chala hai hamare baare mein.

Arjun .. vo kaise…vo khud vidhi se…. he don’t want to think about that.

Vidhi: said dev sir vo.. Arjun ki tabiyat kharab hai . Isiliye main aapke sath aa rahi Hu our maine presentation keliye ache se prepare bhi Kia .

Dev: thinks …kya main vidhi ko sab kuch bata du.. mere feelings, mere  py…. Par this age gap

Vidhi:thinks about the words of Arjun, Bimla and Abhimanyu.

Car got bounced by the speed breaker and Vidhi about to fell on his lap and dev carefully catches her and both lost in eye lock. 

Vidhi realised soon and broke eye lock and sat little far from him.

Dev was still lost in her… realised her discomfort by the distance and it pained him so much.
Driver plays the song and both looked each other

Vidhi don’t know how to talk infront of driver.

Dev :asked the driver to reduce sound and turned to Vidhi. 

Vo ms Vidhi tum USs din kuch important bath kahane ki koshish kar rahi thi na..kya tha vo.. bolo..

Vidhi : dev sir  vo.. vo.. she hesitated while seeing the driver and bent her head.

Dev asked the driver to stop for chai .

Vidhi: said hame late ho jayega dev sir....

Dev: mujhe chai peene ka bahut man kar raha hai vidhi .. said and both went out.

Romantic Song playing background..they sat on a bench leaving a little space between them. He orders chai. Vidhi’s hair locks are spreading on her face because of the flow of wind. Dev who adoring her shamelessly got disturbed by the hair which is hiding his vision . So thought to tuck the hair locks.

Before he reaches Vidhi tucks herself and realised dev sir  tried to tuck the hairs. It gave her confidence  and a small smile crept to her face.

Vidhi: dev sir..

Dev: ha bolo na he said desperately.

Vidhi: USs din aap milapini ma ka ashirvad  le rahe the na tho ma ne pucha kahi aap shadi ke bare mein tho soch nahi rahe hai.

Dev thinks tum kya soch rahi ho mujhe vo janna hai vidhi..

Ms vidhi…Main pray kar lia iska bathlab vo shadi ke bath hi hona hai.. main bas darshan kar rahe the vidhi. 
Vidhi thinks app kya soch rahe the darshan ke vakt mujhe vo janna hai sir..

Driver: sir bahut traffic hai ham chale..

Dev got disappointed and asked driver to leave and he will manage.

Dev asked Vidhi while driving 

Ms Vidhi…Arjun ke baare mein tumhara opinion kya hai..

She looked with confusion.

I mean about his work and his behaviour.  he corrected his question.

Vidhi: Arjun bahut acha ladka hai sir.. mujhe bahut support karta hai…our mera bahut madad bhi Kia ghar ki demolish vale din . He did a big favour on me sir… she said sincerely…

Unable to hear her praise Arjun..   a utterly jealous dev stopped the car with sudden brake and said to the confused Vidhi…

Ms Vidhi…dhaba me kuch khake jaayenge Ujjain pahunchne mein bahut time lagega and got down without hearing her.

He walked faster without waiting for her by blinded by jealousy and tried to sat but it’s difficult to hide his emotion from her he thought. 

Vidhi literally ran after him and smiled little by seeing his hesitation to sit .She showed him how to sit and both settled on cots.

Dev orders the food but Vidhi stopped him and said bahar ka khana jyada mat khayiye sir…vo aapko nahi suit karega and showed the food sent by her mother. 

They ordered some snacks and started to eat food.

Dev said to Vidhi that Tripathi ji will be accompany them on return .. indirectly pushing her to confess what she want to say..

Vidhi whispered lanka lag gayi vidhi… he smiled slightly by seeing her antics.

Dev took a bite and said hmmm.. the curry is too good.. full of swad…. Hmm..

Hai na sir.... Arjun ko bhi bahut pasand hai sir said an  excited Vidhi..

Dev coughed hard by listening that and Vidhi helped him with water.

They talk about priya and abhi’s love and dev cleared that their marriage is love cum arranged marriage and they talked for some time.

Finally dev gave in and asked her ms Vidhi.. what you want to say him that much important on demolition day…

Vidhi looked here and there..

They finished the food and went for hand wash. 

Dev agin asked ms Vidhi what you wanted to say that much important to me ? with desperation while helping her wash her hands.

Vidhi says I want to say that you should get married.

He got shocked and asked what?

She went to wipe her hands .. Dev asks her confused whom I shall marry?  and blindly following her.

Vidhi wipes her hands harshly and said sir..

AAP Amba maam se shadi kar lijiye…

Dev got shocked and with anger he shouted 

ms Vidhi..do you even know what you are blabbering?

Every body is waiting for your approval. Abhi sir, Chitra mam They will be very happy by this. AAP Amba mam se shadi kar lijiye sir..pls.. she said and tried to ignore him.

He fisted his hands with anger and hurt when he hear her say … say that again .  And realised his unwashed hands asked her to help him in washing.

Vidhi pouring the water on his hands and said sir.. Amba mam aapke liye bahut perfect hai. Aapka status ka hai , aapki tarah badi business woman hai, aapki tarah bahut educated bhi hai.. our aapki family ka pasandida aurat hai..isiliye aap bas shaadi keliye ha kah dijiye..
dev gave a fierce look and she dropped the water jug on him with fear…

Dev: he enraged and said  Marriage, status yeh sab kya ? ms vidhi yeh sab kya hai? Our tumhe yeh kyon lagta hai ki log bas status ki hisaab se shadi karte hai. Pehle yeh batao ki  tum kyon yeh marriage consultant banke fir rahe ho ..our kis liye..?.

Vidhi: aap aap aisa gussa karegi tho kya main dar jaagungi aapse?

Dev: ms vidhi..tumhe lagta hai tum mujhse ha bulva sakti ho.our kisne .. kisne yeh sab kuch bakwas tumhare dimag mein dala hai.. koun tumhe pressure kar raha hai batao vidhi.. he shouted with frustration of being hurt and angered.

She got teary eyed by seeing his anger said with pain.. aapko kuch samajh mein nahi aata  hai... kisi ki feelings .. ya kisi ki struggle .  Kuch bhi nahi…Aap ko bas apne dil ke Charon taraf deewar khada karna aata hai.
dev got confused by her outburst…..

Aap koshish  karne keliye tayyar hi nahi hai.. Abhimanyu sir ne koshish Kia na .. aap bhi kariye  na kya pata koshish karne se…

Dev: ms Vidhi… shouted ab main samajh gaya Hu.. tumhe lagta hai tum abhi manyu ko manalia tho mujhe bhi mana lenge vo bhi Amba ke bare mein. .. nahi .. kabhi nahi.. I don’t want to burst your bubble but you are wrong miss Vidhi.. you are damn  wrong..

Vidhi: kahi baar aapko halat ko samajhne keliye kisi tisare ka bath Sunani pada thi hai dev sir..

Dev: ms tisare insaan ..no thanks.. mujhe ithna akal hai ki main khud apna decision le sakta Hu..

Vidhi: got tired by asking him again and again. She also shouted angrily ..tho decision le lijiye .. Amba mam se shadi keliye ha kah dijiye.. sab bahut khush honge..

Dev: ms vidhi.. iss se aage ek our shabd nahi.. main iss shadi keliye kabhi ha nahi kahunga.. kabhi bhi nahi..mujhe mat ukaso… said an enraged dev with big eyes.

Vidhi: aapko kya lagta hai aap aisa mujhe gusse se apni badi badi ankh dikha ke dara the tho Mai dar javungi..Har baar aap aisa hi karte hai. Aapki aisi badi badi ankhe dikhake mujhe darane ki koshish karte hai . Our main jo bolna chahta Hu dar ke mare bol hi nahi pata…

Dev: tum bol nahi pata .. ha tum.. bas 15 minut se sirf tum hi patar patar ki boli ja rahe ho.. boli ja rahe ho.. tum bol nahi pata.. tum mujhse darte ho…

Vidhi: ha aap sahi hai .. aaj bilkul bhi aisa nahi hoga.. main aapse nahi darne vali  Hu..

Dev : miss Vidhi..shouted being in a fear that he could say some thing to her for which he will regret  it later..

Vidhi: chillayi ye mat our yeh batayiye aap kyon iss shadi keliye inkaar kar rahe hai?

Kyon? Batayiye.. aap Amba mam se shadi kyon nahi karna chahte hai?? balki vo aapko bahut chathi hai…she asked in her high voice..

Dev: kyonki main bhi tumse pyar karne laga Hu.. yes!! I am falling in love with you every minute….he shouted with frustration being failed her to stop talking this nonsense about to set him with other woman who is utterly obsessed with him.

Vidhi got rooted still and her body is shivering and her eyes and heart shedding happy tears with the truth of being claimed by her love.

His confession soothed her bleeding heart all this while.

He realised his slip.. he closed his eyes to hide his embarrassment but he felt light hearted rather than embarrassed and happy tears are making their way.he opened his hopeful eyes and lost in thoughts that he confessed but what next? He is afraid to think about future .

Dev and Vidhi both lost in the time like they never want to move further.

Just when Abhimanyu’s message popped up and slapped by harsh reality Vidhi broke her eye lock turned back wiped her tears and said 

Par ..Ab  main aapse pyar nahi karti Hu.. completed it with a heavy heart and dry throat.

Dev is not at all shocked by her reaction because he know how stubborn Vidhi is and now she can do anything to make him agree to marry Amba.but kyon? Why she is adamant to marry him with Amba.. He cursed Amba for all this mess being the root cause…
Dev: Agar reject karne ka man bana hi Lia tho muh pe karo na. Tum kyon apna muh chupa rahi ho. Agar tum sach kaha rahe hai tho See into my eyes and say ms vidhi.. that you never loved me…

Vidhi: she shivered by the tender ness of his pleading voice but controlled herself and turned to face him.

Ha sir Maine bahut baar khud se kaha main aapse bahut pyar karti Hu.. par aisa mujhe lagtha tha.. ha main apni crush ko apna pyar samajh Lia. Ha Aaj bhi aap meri mentor hai, meri professor hai, meri boss hai , meri dost hai our meri jindagi ka sab se special insaan bhi hai par meri jeewan saathi ..nahi hai.. our yeh kabhi nahi hoga.. kyonki main jo aap keliye feel karti Hu na vo kya tha main samajh Lia. Vo pyar nahi hai..( vo in sab se bahut upar hai sir .. bahut upar…she thought in mind)

Dev: He got surprised by her guts to say this being firm and looking straight in to his eyes. He laughed with tears and said aisa mat bolo ms Vidhi .ham donon ko pata hai shayad tum thik kaha rahe ho par yeh pura sach nahi hai. Our mujhe pura sach janna hai jo maine tumhare ankhon mein bahut pehle dekh chuka hu..ms Vidhi ab  tumhe khud vo sach mere ankhon mein aankhe daalke bolna padega.

Vidhi: feared by his argument she know he will convince her at any cost but now she don’t want to.. tumhe unhe pana nahi hai vidhi. Tumhe usse khush dekhna hai.. tyag pyar ka dusri pehlu hota hai ..tired by all this inner conflict…

sir pls zidd chodiye… maan jayiye.. pls ..aap mere sath aisa nahi kar sakte hai  pls.. she pleaded with her eyes.

Dev: lowered his eyes unable to take her pleading  and thought no.. Vidhi main tumhare saath yeh na- insafi hone nahi dunga, mujh par agar kisi ka haq hai tho vo sirf tum ho. Main yeh kisi our ko nahi de sakta.

Vidhi: she don’t want to leave this opportunity.. she have to push the wrong buttons to convince him she thought . She squeeze her eyes hard and said tho Sun lijiye dev sir .. aaj main apna pura sach bathaunga aapko.

Jab tak meri jindagi mein vo nahi aaya na tab tak mujhe bhi laga ki aap mera pyar bhi hai sirf crush or respect hi nahi.par jab main unke sath time bitane shuru Kia na tab mujhe sab crystal clear hogaya ki aap mera crush hai our main respect ko pyar samajh Lia . Our mera sacha pyar mujhe finally mil hi gaya…

Dev: choked but managed to whisper  koun?  .. and lowered his face...he couldn’t see her take other man’s name as her love…. 

vidhi: aap bhi usse ache se jaante hai…Arj…

Dev: eyes become blood shot red and his mind clouded with jealousy he shouted 

don’t … don’t dare to say that name infront of me..

(He don’t want to listen that name.. no .. not even in pretence…)

He couldn’t breathe … he .. he..rushed from there and punched the cement pole making that to uncountable pieces unable to control his jumbled up jealousy, pain, frustration ,defeat.

Vidhi packing the box and gasped by hearing the sound and ran to him.  

By the time he sat in the car and controlling his anger, hurt, frustration on his helpless situation.

She ran to him with heavy breath and tried to held his hand.

He shoved his hand away by not allowing to touch her and put on the seat belt with other hand. 

She saw the blood on his knuckles and immediately tore her dupatta and held his wrist stubbornly to know him that she won’t leave him without bandaging.

She held his palm gently with silent tears while blowing into his knuckles she applied medicine from first aid box and bandaged with her dupatta Cloth.

She looked fiercely into his eyes by accusing him with hurt like what an earth he is doing ? and get back to the passenger seat .

Killing silence spreaded there for some time. 

She couldn’t bear the silence and said.. aapko yaad hai na..hame meeting keliye jana hai..

He dailed Tripathi number and said that he won’t make it and they will plan again at the earliest.

She don’t know how to convince him. Here she is breaking inch by inch inside and find it hard to control for more time. She came back from the thoughts by the call. She checked and this time it was Arjun. 

By seeing his name dev enraged and starts the car with a jerk and driving in a mad speed.

Luckily it was a highway and nothing to fear of the chances of crash.

Vidhi: she held the side handle hard to control her to balance and finally she couldn’t balance and her head hitted to the dash board.

Dev : coming back to senses by this he stopped the car and said 

sorry ..sorry… Vidhi and caresses her wound and jerked back by remembering her lie.

Vidhi got confused by his care and anger at same time.

Dev: if it’s true even a bit you won’t be here in the place of him  whispered….

Vidhi: Amba mam is the perfect life partner for you… pls understand.

Dev: he didn’t even give a head to her plea ..he don’t know he will accept vidhi or not . Still he has his doubts about their age gap and concerned about her happy life.

But he can’t take this rejection he thought…

He don’t know how she survived when he silently rejected her..yet she bounced back with smile.he shut his eyes with unbearable pain.

Dev: said after a long pause .. asked softly kyon …. Kyon.. 

vidhi: shut her eyes to let out the tears and said I just wanted you to convince to marry Amba mam but not intended to hurt you….

Dev: hurt… hmmm .. and unable to speak with jumbled emotions.

Vidhi: I want you to know ki your family will be so happy if you agree… the family which you delicately yet beautifully built with so many sacrifices all along your life and now with in a blink you can’t afford to broke brutally that tenderly weaven nest.
Our mein.. mein aapko apne parivaar se hi ladte huye nahi dekh sakta..aapka parivaar apka vajud hai sir…

Dev: dev got tounge tied by the truth and bites his lips to control his helpless scream inside him trying to not to shake her with fear.

Finally he gave in and started the car .this time carefully he drives and they are about reach Vidhi said aap yaha gadi rok dijiye..yaha se aap apna rasta our main apna.our kabhi milne ki gunjaish hi nahi hai.she whispered the last line to herself.

Dev: Kuch der our ham aise sath rahane se kuch ho nahi jaayega..

vidhi: khamakhah takleef ho jayegi sir..main aapko our pareshan nahi karna chahti Hu..

Par Aapko yaha se khud chalna hoga dev sir… our chinta mat kijiye… main khud apna rasta bana lungi. Kuch bhi meri jindagi se chale jaaye par app se seekha  hua yeh atmavishwas meri akhri dam tak mera sath rahega.

He just want to stop her this ….. nonsense by kissing her fiercely until she claims Back her love on him.but if she comes back what he will do .. will he accept her ? Will he allow him to see her to daily pain herself by stepping into the thorns of their path.

He lost in these thoughts and she get down from car and started to leave.

He came to senses and ran to her and called her 

ms Vidhi… she turned and signed him what?

Did she really want to do what she is doing? 

She stood like puzzled and thought she really wished to have a chance to choosed by him . But unfortunately she don’t have that .

Aapko mujhe rokne ka haq hai dev sir.. par mujhe aapke our aapke khushiyon ko beech mein aane ka haq nahi hai..

Seeing her silent he asked 

Did she really want to punish him? 

She gave a dry laugh .

After seeing that he got mad and asked with hurt tumhari dil ki baat sunke bhi un suna karne keliye tum mujhe punish karna chahti ho na ?

batao  vidhi…

She pitied on her self.

Kaash vo jaj batein un suna hi rahate…

Kash aap ithna acha nahi hote ..

Kash Main aapke laayak hote…

Kash app mere liye khud se lad pate..

Kash aap mujhe bhi uthna hi chahte jithna main aapko chahti Hu…

Kash…. Kash….. aap meri bhagya mein hotein…she whishpered  and left from there leaving a vulnearable dev on the middle of the road….

Vidhi…. He screamed and sat on the road being drained out even to take breath.


DIL JUDE BINA HI TUT GAYE…


Dil jude bina hi tut gaye
Hatth mile bina hi chhut gaye
Ki likhe ne lekh kismet ne……


to be continued..,

SHINIKA.


Very well written, don't know why but I like such stories more with MU between leads then beautiful confession 😁

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Posted: 11 months ago

Originally posted by: Shinika

Dilon ki dastan; ViDev; TS

Shot1:

DIL JUDE BINA HI TUT GAYE…


Dil jude bina hi tut gaye
Hatth mile bina hi chhut gaye
Ki likhe ne lekh kismet ne……


to be continued..,

SHINIKA.


Beautiful take on the scene having Dev confess instead of Vidhi ! One of my favourite scenes in the show too! ❤️

waiting for part 2