BEST MOM ❤ ~ RishMi OS

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Posted: 2 years ago
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Lakshmi sitting beside rishi holding his hand. She got teary eyes, seeing him in this condition. He was struggling between life and death. His condition was getting worse every second until she arrives. Neelam oberoi saw lakshmi there in the emergency ward. She started to go inside, but then stops. neelam oberoi realised her mistake, but not able to apologize lakshmi. After sometime doctor came and did rishi's checkup. He said there's nothing to worry now and they shifted rishi to the general ward.


Days passed, rishi's health was getting better day by day. On the other hand lakshmi was disturbed. She was lost thinking about rishi and his markesh dosh. She has not even talked to rishi since she went to the hospital last time. Neelam oberoi's words were echoing in her mind. She started packing her bags and decided to go back to the oberoi mansion for the sake of rishi's life. She went to oberoi mansion and rings the bell. Sudeep bhaiya opened the door, he gets so happy seeing lakshmi is back to home. He picks one of her bag and went inside screaming "lakshmi bhabhi aayi hai" everyone came except Rishi, neelam, virebdra and dadi as they went to mandir. Malishka and sonia started showing attitude as usual and karishma bua started taunting her badly and threw her out of house. Lakshmi was about to fall but neelam holds her on time.


Dadi & virendra started scolding karishma bua. Karishma bua tells them that Lakshmi wants to be with rishi again so she came back to Oberoi mansion. Neelam went inside the house without saying anything. Dadi says Lakshmi has right to stay here, it's her house too. No one has right to stop Lakshmi from staying in this house. Lakahmi is staying with us from now. Dadi ask lakshmi to come inside, but neelam stops her.

Sonia : ab ayega maja.....mom isey ghar k andar aane hi nahi dengi.


Malishka : exactly!! Lakshmi ne soch bhi kese liya ki usey iss ghar mein dubara aane milega.


"But mom" rishi interrupted and and was about to enter the house but neelam stops him too.

"shyam jaldi aao aur kitni der" neelam said loudly. Shyam comes with aarti thaal. Neelam take aarti thaal in her hand.


Neelam : Oberoi khandan ki bahu hai Lakshmi, isey aise hi thodi andar aane denge hum.


Everyone gets happy hearing this except karishma bua, sonia and malishka. Neelams makes rishi Lakshmi stand together and did their aarti. Both enter the house together. Everyone welcomes lakshmi and hugs her.


Days passed, things get better in oberoi mansion & between rishi Lakshmi. They decided to give one chance to their so called relationship and started newly with friendship. Neelam still didn't talk to Lakshmi after her grah pravesh. Neelam was completely silent these days. No one knows what's going in her mind.


It's been more than a month Lakshmi is back to oberoi mansion. She got more comfortable with Rishi. Rishi also realises that he loves Lakshmi and not malishka but he is afraid to open up about his feelings for Lakshmi because he thinks Lakshmi don't love him anymore. Although he told malishka not to interfere in his life anymore as she is no one to him and he loves his wife Lakshmi.


Months passed, it's almost a year of Rishi and Lakshmi's marriage. Their anniversary is on the way, just 3 weeks away. But today is another special day. It's the best day for Rishi Oberoi, because he was awarded as best businessman of the year. Neelam threw a small party to celebrate his achievement. He is so happy and everyone in Oberoi family and the most happiest person is Lakshmi. Rishi dedicated his award to Lakshmi. Lakshmi felt so happy because that was unexpected. Everyone was surprised because before this Rishi used to dedicate every award to his mother. Neelam was expecting this time too Rishi will take her name for sure, but Rishi called for his wife. Rishi handed over his award to Lakshmi. Her happiness has no bounds. She really felt happiest and luckiest this time.


"Iss baar Biwi baazi maar gayi" A lady commented.


"Humari Lakshmi hai hi itni pyaari" Neelam oberoi replied giving her furious attitude looks.


"Aakhir Bahu kiski hai, Neelam oberoi ki" virendra said supporting his wife.


Lakshmi heard this. She hides herself behind pillar and tears forming up in her eyes. She was thinking about her and Rishi's life after a few days. A year will be completed and she had to leave him as his markesh dosh period will also end. She got so much love from everyone here. Closeness between her and Rishi got stronger than before, since she came back in his life. She doesn't want to leave him nor family, but she has to leave them. Rishi will divorce her and will get married to malishka.

On the other side everyone was enjoying the party and Rishi's eyes were searching for his wifey.


"Yaha itni acchi party chal Rahi hai aur ye Lakshmi pata nahi kaha hai. Kabse dhund rha hun" Rishi said to himself frustratingly.

There he saw Lakshmi standing with a support of the pillar.


"Lakshmiiiii" Rishi called her.


She heard him & quickly wipe her tears. She makes an excuse and was to go. He reached to her and pull her behind pillar putting his hands on her shoulder.


RISHI : Kya hua Lakshmi (making her chin up)


LAKSHMI : Kuch nahi. Tum yahan kya kar rahe ho? Jao party enjoy Karo. (Still not looking at him)


RISHI : tumhare bina? (Said caressing her cheeks) Lakshmi meri taraf dekho please. Koi baat hai toh batao mujhe (Cupping her face)


LAKSHMI : nahi kuch khaas nahi.


RISHI : Toh tum ro kyu Rahi thi?


LAKSHMI : m....main Kahan ro rhi hun. Ye toh Khushi k aansoo hai Rishi (she said again wiping her tears)


RISHI : juthh!! Main jaanta hun tumhari ye adat acche se. Chalo abhi btao.


(Lakshmi was about to tell him the reason, but ahana calls them for cutting the cake. They both go. Rishi cuts the cake with Lakshmi but he was confused whom he should feed the cake first. Rishi didn't want to make his mom and wife nervous. He keep looking at wifey and mom holding a piece of cake. Neelam understand what's going into his mind. She took a piece of cake and feed Lakshmi. Lakshmi was surprisingly looking at Neelam)


LAKSHMI : Mummy ji aapne mujhe kyu khilaya ?


NEELAM : Humare bete ki jeet toh tumhari jeet hui na lakshmi.


LAKSHMI : Nahi mummy ji, sirf meri nahi.....humari jeet hui (And feeds cake to Neelam)


RISHI : Areyy!!! Ye saas-bahu toh ek dusre ko hi cake khilane mein busy hogue. Jiske liye hai usey toh khilao.


(Neelam and Lakshmi both feed him a big piece of cake at the same time. Everyone laughs looking at Rishi. He was looking like a cartoon because the cake was spread over around his mouth. He cleans his mouth with a tissue and thank his mom and wifey. Rishi was happy to have his both lady love besides him and side hug both of them. Two most special people in his life)


"Let's take a family picture" ahana says with an excitement.

Everyone joins their side hug, standing close to them.


"Ok guys come Closer...Closer" cameraman requested.

Everyone shifted close keeping hands on each other shoulder. While Rishi pull Lakshmi and slid his hand from her shoulder, caressing her bare back to waist. He holds her tightly by waist, pulling her more closer to him.


After party everyone retired to their room respectively. Neelam oberoi went to Terrace after taking a shower while Lakshmi also comes there.


LAKSHMI : Mummy ji.....aap soyi nahi.


NEELAM : tum yahan?


LAKSHMI : Main abhi bauji ki Medicine dekar aayi. Aapke baare mein pucha toh unhone btaya ki aap yha ho. Isiliye....


NEELAM : Isiliye tum yahan.....kuch kaam tha humse.


LAKSHMI : Kuch kehna tha aapse.


LAKSHMI : Mummy ji..... I'm sorry (tears formed up in her eyes) Mummy ji mere kuch hi din bache h iss Ghar mein. Fir main chali jaungi yaha se. Itne din iss Ghar mein Rahi pr aapse baat krne se darti Rahi. Lekin main ab apne dil mein jo hai sab btana chahti hun. Aap please mujhe maaf kardijiye. Maine bohot kuch boldiya tha usdin chachi k ghar.


(Lakshmi apologizes to Neelam for misbehaving with her and disobeying her words when she came to bajwa house with the money)


NEELAM : Nahi Lakshmi. Maafi toh Hume maangni chahie. Humse bohot badi galti hui. Hamein iss galti ka ehsaas bhi usi din hogya tha jab tum hospital aayi thi. Pr tabse lekar Aaj Tak tumse maafi nahi maang paaye kyuki bohot guilty feel kar rhe the hum. Humne soch bhi kaise liya ki tumhe paise offer kare. Tumhari acchaiyan jaante hue bhi humse ye galti hogyi. Ho sake toh Tum humein maaf kardo lakshmi.

(Lakshmi made Neelam sit on the couch and she sat on the floor in front of her holding her hands)


LAKSHMI : Nahi mummy ji. Uss waqt aapko sirf Rishi ki fikar thi. Aap rishi ki zindagi k liye kuch bhi kar skti ho. Har maa ko apne bacche ki fikar hoti hai. maa apne bacche k zindagi bachane k liye sahi-galat nahi dekhti. Uss waqt Jo thik Lage vahi krti hai aur aapne bhi vahi kiya. Uss waqt aapke dil pe kya beet rhi hogi. Aap rishi k markesh dosh ko lekar itni pareshaan hojati hai. Lekin Mujhe samjhna chahie tha. I'm sorry mummy ji.

(Lakshmi laid her head on neelam's lap. They both cry immensely. After sometime Rishi walks in. He cleared his throat, bringing saas-bahu back to normal zone. He thought of teasing them)


RISHI : Niceee....very nice.....yaha saas-bahu alag group banake bethi hai. Kahi aap dono mere ya dad k khilaf koi planning toh nahi kr rhe the?

(They both get up wiping tears )


NEELAM : Rishiiiiiiii


RISHI : SO....Sorry mom....I was just kidding.


NEELAM : Better then


RISHI : Vese maine sab sun liya (rubbing his neck lightly)


NEELAM : Toh tum yahan chupke chupke humari baatein sun rahe the?


RISHI : Nahi mom main toh bas Lakshmi ko dhundte dhundte ya...han...aaya. vaise accha laga dekh ke.... ki meri pyaari mom aur pyaari wife ko meri kitni fikar hai.

(You're my best mom (he said pulling neelam's cheeks)


NEELAM : Accha.......aur woh? (Pointing to Lakshmi)


RISHI : W...wohhh.... Kya mom aap pehchanti nahi ho....woh Lakshmi hai.


NEELAM : Rishiii....Masti nahii....


RISHI : Sorry sorry mom ( He back hugged Neelam ) ye mere best mom ki best bahu hai......Mrs. Lakshmi Rishi Oberoi ( he said giving her teasy looks making Lakshmi blush)


NEELAM : Humari lakshmi toh hai hi sabse best....humare bete se bhi. (teasing Rishi)


RISHI : Mom aapne party change Karli.....dad aur dadi toh pehle se hi Lakshmi ke side hai....ab aap bhi.....aur mu...mujhse best mtlb.....mujhse best kaise hui.


NEELAM : Han.... kyuki woh best beti hai....bahu hai....behen hai....bhabhi hai....wife hai and I'm sure aage chalkr BEST MOM bhi banegi.


LAKSHMI : Mummy ji...mai.....


NEELAM : Please Lakshmi tum kuch mat kaho. Hum ek maa hai aur tumne humare dil ki baat kitne acche se jaan li.......humari Mamta ko aur koi nahi pr tum samjh gayi itne acche se. Rishi kehta hai Hum Best Mom hai. Hum kehte hai tum bhi BEST MOM banogi.


RISHI : Aise toh dad bhi mujhe sab mein best samjhte hai........toh uss hisaab se main bhi BEST DAD banunga na mom. (He said looking at lakshmi in a jealous tone)


(Lakshmi's face lightens up hearing this, but gets sad thinking about her life after a few days, where she has to live without the person she loves the most. Rishi's facial expressions also changed into serious one, but deep down he felt happy inside but didn't show)


RISHI : Mom btaiye na......


(Lakshmi went from there making an excuse)


NEELAM : pehle tum toh bade hojao (hits lightly on his cheeks)


RISHI : mommmm


NEELAM : Rishi....tum bhi best dad banoge but before that you need to be the best husband......tum samjh rahe ho na hum kya keh rahe h. I know things are not that normal between you two. Lakshmi ne pehle Jo kaha usse hum samjh gaye......so be clear with her beta.


RISHI : Y..Ya...Yeah mom


NEELAM : Ok chalo ab.... it's too late.


(Neelam goes to her room while Rishi keeps roaming outside his room in passage area. After some time he went inside his room. He saw Lakshmi was standing in balcong enjoying fresh air. He goes close to her and stand by her side)


LAKSHMI : Tum aagye....main tumhare liye kapde nikal deti hun change krlo aur fresh hojao.

(she starts to go towards wardrobe, but Rishi held her hand and asks her to stay with him. He told her he want to confess something)


RISHI : Lakshmi I'm sorry.....past mein maine tumhare sath bhot galat kiya hai. Aur uske liye mujhe saza bhi milni chahie. Tum jo saza do manzoor hogi. Pr abhi main jo kehne wala hun......ekdam genuinely kehrha hun. Main chahta hun ki humari life ekdam normal ho jaye.....pehle jesi happy happy waali.


LAKSHMI : Meri pata nahi.....pr tumhari life hojayegi normal. Bas kuch din aur....phir...


RISHI : phirrrr...... ?


LAKSHMI : Phir main chali jaungi aur tum malishka k sath Khushi khushi reh sakte ho.


RISHI : Main bhi khushi khushi apne aage ki zindagi bitana chahta hun..........Tumhare sath.


LAKSHMI : Rishi!


RISHI : Lakshmi main hamesha k liye tumhare sath rehna chahta hun....tumhara banke....sirf aur sirf tumhara Lakshmi. Main dilse tumhare sath apna future chahta hun. Past mein bhot galtiya hui.... misunderstandings hui.....pr I'm gonna make up for everything.....apni saari galtiya sudharne ka mauka do mujhe Lakshmi.


LAKSHMI : yeh tum kya keh rahe ho Rishi....ye kaise ho sakta hai.


RISHI : Kyu nahi ho sakta Lakshmi.........jab mai dilse tumhe chahta hun....... malishka Mera past thi usko Mai peeche chod chuka hun......apna present aur future sirf mujhe meri Lakshmi k sath hi dekhna hai toh kyu nahi. (He said in a loud voice)


(Lakshmi was completely numb after listening Rishi's confession. She was confused, whether she should be happy or not. She smiles looking at him with a teary eyes. Her heartbeats started increasing when Rishi comes close to her. This time very closer that not even air can pass between from them. Rishi holds her hand tightly intertwining fingers. He caresses her face with right hand)


RISHI : Lakshmi will you be my forever. (He said with intensity & His lips were brushing hers)


(Lakshmi being confused not knowing how to react. She just closed her eyes and opened again to make sure is she dreaming or it's happening really. She looked straight in his eyes and smile crept on her face. Rishi too smiles and she closed her eyes again. He looks at her luscious lips, but he could see how his wifey is shivering because of closeness. He placed a long kiss on her forehead and hugged her tightly)


RISHI : Lakshmiiii


LAKSHMI : Hnmmm


RISHI : Tumne jawab nahi Diya.


LAKSHMI : kaisa jawab?


RISHI : kaho na ki tum mere sath hamesha rahogi. Mujhe chhod k nahi jaogi.

(Lakshmi broke the hug & nods her head slightly in a yes with a smile on her face)


RISHI : Mrs. Oberoi....My legally wedded wife....My Love....My Life.....My Everything.....would like to be a Best Mom of my future daughter. ( He said loudly and pull her by holding her waist ) ab bolo bhi (he nudges his nose with hers & she Chuckles)


LAKSHMI : I love you papa oberoi of my future son 😳(she whispered in his ear and kiss on his cheeks)


RISHI : Not bad Mrs. Oberoi, so you want a baby boy and girl both. Don't Worry, why fear when Rishi Oberoi here. (He whispered back in her ear, making her blush. Her cheeks turned completely Tomato red this time) 😳


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**************The End**************


Hello Guys. I don't know you guys will Like it or not but i always wanted something like this. A scene between neelam and lakshmi. Makers are busy ruining neelam oberoi's character. So i decided to write one. I just Hope you guys like it. Even is you don't, feel free to drop your opinions in Comment section.

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Posted: 2 years ago
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Kash aisa kuch achha sa serial me bhi ho current track is getting on my nerves anyways enjoyed this update ❤️

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It's a pity that I can not read Hindu but it's was a beautiful Os dear I loved it.

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