Thank you ,Glad that you liked it , will try to update it soon and iam also waiting for next part of your story
Thank you ,Glad that you liked it , will try to update it soon and iam also waiting for next part of your story
Originally posted by: Butterfly09
Hey Buddy
Superb update
Loved the every bit of it.
So it's Arjun's birthday 💐 yayyy... Shaa ke birthday ke din yeh post karke ekdam sahi kiya... Waise I thought the same but some personal stupid reasons me post nahi kar paayi
Anyways mr. Rathod apne Mr. Rawte ko wish kiye bina reh nahi paaye... Isse kehte hai dosti... Itna hate karte hai phir bhi sarcastically hi sahi dost ko wish kiya...
Yeh lo team ko nahi pata aur ek chhoti bacchi ne aake wish kiya...
Awww Arakshi are super cute yaar... Sakshi's love is so pure and I am sure jab kabhi Arjun ko sab yaad aayega vo bhi apne romeo andaz mein wapas aa jaayege
Eagerly waiting to know the exact incident jisne humare pyaari jodi ko alag kiya ☹️
Waise haan as @bodhianveshika Ji asked agar Sakshi ko pata tha toh Arjun ki shaadi Roshni se kyun hone di!!! Waise I know koi proper reason hoga aur waqut rehte aap khud reveal karegi...
Excited for upcoming updates. ✌
Thanks for beautiful update and for PM❤
Yeah that's the sweetness of friend ship , soon they would become from Rawate , rathod to arjun- Sam , ha team ko nahi patha arjun ke birthday ke bare me abb patha chala na dekhna kya Kya karthe apne boss ke birth day ke liye 😜, ya sakshi love is so pure , wo arjun ko itna pyar karne ki reason arjun ka sacha pyar hai, arjun ka pyar ke baree aage parts may patha chalenge, and will also reveal the reason behind the separation of our lovely arakshi in coming parts and you will also get to know about why did sakshi did not stop Arjun's marriage in upcoming parts , iam so happy that you loved it will try to update the next part as soon as possible
Originally posted by: devikadevthosh
Lovely update
So sakshi celebrate arjun's birthday in orphanage
Flashback was nice
How did arjun lose his memory
Why did sakshi took so long to find arjun
Loved arakshi message convos
Waiting for arakshi meet
Continue soon
Glad that you liked it , Arakshi meet will be in next part for sure , and will have more arakshi cute scenes in upcoming parts, and the reason behind Arjun's memory loss and sakshi not being with arjun this long will be revealed soon in upcoming parts , will try to upload next episode as soon as possible ,keep supporting ❤️
Originally posted by: Navyasree08
Thank you ,Glad that you liked it , will try to update it soon and iam also waiting for next part of your story
☺️ That's so sweet of you 😊
Here comes the next part of" Hamari adhoori kahani " , please read it and let me know about your views and if you want any changes inthe story let me know it in the coment section .
Part - 5
Location: conference room
Shree liza and chotu were thinking seriously
Shree : aree yar Aaj arjun sir ka birthday hai
par ham ko patha bi nahi , what would arjun sir
think about us , shame on us guys
Chotu : sachme yar ham ithna budhu hai , ek
choti si bachi ko patha hai arjun sir ke birthday
Kay barame par hame nahi patha .
Liza : Jo hua so hua guys , shall we surprise arjun sir.
Chotu / shree : done 🥳
Chotu : ok then let's arrange a surprise party 🥳
Liza : I will cook for arjun sir ,par arjun sir ka favourite dish kya hai 🤔
Shree : votho muje bi nahi patha ,let's guess.
Chotu mere favourite tho chicken 65 , wo banungi ham .
Liza : 🤦 chotu ham arjun sir ka favourite dish Banna hai thumara nahi.
Shree : kuch idea sochna padenga 🤔 sir ka fav dish pathane keliya.
Shree, Liza, chotu starts thinking for idea , the trio
keeps on roaming here and there in order to get
an idea .just then sameer enters and calls shree
Shree : disturbe math kar ,ithna deeply think karahahu idea keliye ( he did not observe sameer as he was so much involved in thinking)
Sameer : shree ( calls him once again )
Shree : aree kya hai re chotu , thume ek bar kaha tho samaj mai nahi atha kya wo rathod sir ki jaise dammit aur Arjun sir ke jaise sys bola thothab samj may ayengi kya ??
Sameer : shree ( serious tone )
Shree : ( shocked ) sir aap ,good morning sir
Sameer : it's after noon shree
Shree : sorry sir, good after noon
Sameer : kya ho raha hai idar.
Shree : kuch nahi sir kuch nahi
Sameer : chotu thum bolo kya baath hai
Chotu : wo wo wo
Sameer : kya wo wo wo chotu , any way I need
that Sharma's file.
Liza : abi latha hu sir.
( She brings and gives the file to sameer , sameer starts to leave the room and stops at the end of the room )
Sameer : by the way usko katal aur gulabjamun pasad hai.
( Saying this he rushes out of the room )
Chotu : rathod sir ko kaise patha arjun sir ki fav food.
Shree : let it be yaar ,hamari kaam tho asan hogayi na.
Liza : kya asan specky , thume patha hai katal kaatna kithna tough hai , ye arjun sir ko bi katal kaise fav hua .
Chotu : don't worry Li, we will help you in cutting
Liza : aww you are so sweet chotu
Shree ( gets jealous ) : ithna sweet ho tho gulab jamun Mai sugar kay jagaha isse daldho 😏😏
Chotu : thum bee na shree
All starts laughing
Liza : ok guys let's go and start our cooking.
They are about to go out from conference room just then arjun enters
Chotu : ( slowly) Sher agaya , abb tho ham Gaya
Liza / shree : exactly.
Arjun : Liza I want autopsy of previous case now urgently.
Liza : par sir wo tho analysis keliye dusra lab becha tha , kal ajeyene yaha.
Arjun : no Liza I want it right now , thum jakar Lavo uss report ko.
Liza , shree , chotu looks each other
Shree : sir Mai jakar lavungi
Arjun : don't you know that only research team have entry there shree , so Liza go now , chotu Liza ke sath javo .
Chotu / Liza : par sir .
Arjun : right now guys .
Saying this arjun leaves the hall.
Chotu : hame tho jana hai aur arjun sir bahar ke kana nahi katha, aab ham kya kare ☹️
Liza don't worry chotu Mai mummy ko bolunge food prepare karne keliye , after completing shree would bring it , till then we would be back .
Shree/chotu : super 🤩 done.
After 2 hours
Liza and chotu are back just then shree enters conference room
Shree : guys food is ready let's complete decoration fastly .
They complete all decoration and they leave to bring arjun to conference room
(In Arjun's cabin )
Shree Liza and chotu enters the cabin
Arjun : why all of you are here ??
Shree/Liza/chotu : happy birthday arjun sir 🥳
Arjun just nodes
Chotu : sir ham small cake cutting arrange Kiya conference room may aap keliye pls ayina.
Arjun : muje ye sab pasand nahi hai chotu
Liza : but sir please hamare liye ....
Arjun : Maine kaha thana Liza
Arjun glares at them, his one glare is enough for them to leave,chotu shree and Liza leave with dissapointment , shree again comes in with 2 boxes and gives it to arjun.
Arjun : ye kya hai shree ??
Shree : aap ke liye kana .
Arjun : i already said iam not interested.
Shree : sir aap celebrations Mai intrested nahi hai par ye tho just kana hai na please lijiye na sir
Arjun takes the box shree becomes very happy and leaves the hall , before he left arjun calls him.
Arjun : shree
Shree : boliye sir.
Arjun : thank you.
Shree : welcome sir.
And leaves from the cabin and informs to chotu and Liza , they also feels happy .
Arjun opens the boxes and gets surprised to see his favourite katal and gulabjamun 😊
Arjun : in logonko kaise patha Mera favourite ke bare mai , kahi rathod ne bathaya kya ??
Thinking deeply about that he starts eating gulab jamun , he feels some thing unique as if he know the taste from long time , he enjoys both katal and gulabjamun delightly .
Then his phone buzz and shows message from
Ms. anonymous
( Yeah arjun saved sakshis number as ms anonymous)
Arjun : abb use kya chahiye
And opens the message
Sakshi : did you had your lunch acp saab??
Arjun : Mai Kaya ya nahi , why do you care
Sakshi : i should only care you na 😉
Arjun : ye bakwas bandh karo 😡
Sakshi : aree itna kyu gussa karthe hu aap , Mai tho aapkeliye kithna mushkil se vo katal kata ,muje cut be Laga 😔 phir bi ithna ache say khana banakar beja par aap muje tanx be nahi kaha ,aur upar se dantraha hai , kitna akdu hu aap, i am hurt javo may aap say bath nahi karunga 🤔
Arjun : iska matlab thum ne becha wo food 😡
Sakshi : ha , aapke pasad hai na katal aur gulab jamun isliye.
(Arjun's mind voice : Shree Mai thume chodunga nahi 🤬and stands from his seat to go to shree, just then his phone beeps again )
Sakshi : bechare shree ko kuch pata nahi , aap usko kuch math kahna , usko patha bi nahi ki ye khana Maine banaya tha , after picking lunch box from lizas home wo aapkeliye cake karidne keliye bakery Aya tha , thab Maine box exchange karliya 🤭, isme uska kya galti hai ,ha arjun Liza ko thank you bolo na mere tarah say , unka mumma bahuth acha kana banaya , wo kya hai na i don't waste food so I completed it 😅 ,and last but not least , don't think of coming to the bakery to check cc photoge uss bakery Mai cc cameras nahi tha , aur mai bhi vaha ek budi aurath ki getup may ayatha , so you won't find anything , now go and enjoy your birthday bye arjun ❤️
Arjun frowns by that message and thinks to find her as soon as possible.
Time : 4pm
The team were present in conference room except arjun , just then a lady knocks the door
Lady : may I come in sir.
Sameer : come in.
She hands over a paper to sameer
Sameer : Teaam she is Aisha kapoor encounter specialist , new joining in ETF ( he forwards his hand and says )
Welcome to ETF MS . AYEESHA KAPOOR
Ayeesha: thank you sir it's great pleasure to work with you all.
Every one wishes ayeesha , just then sameer phone rings , sameer talks on the phone .
Sameer : Rawate kaha hai
Shree : arjun sir bahar Gaya
Sameer : kaha ??
Chotu : patha nahi sir , he said to call if we have any new case .
Sameer : ok team I have to go ,there's an urgent meeting at commissioner sir place , I will meet you all tomorrow morning agar kuch case agaya tho Rawate will lead you .
Team : ok sir.
Sameer leaves for the meeting
* * * * * *
Location : Arjun's house
Arjun stares at Roshni's pic and talks to it
Arjun : I miss so much roshni , agar thum Aaj hothe tho kitna acha hota , uss din thum mere baath mana tho shayadh Aaj ham ek saath hothe ,shayadh mera dosth bee mujse dur na hothe ( then his eyes falls on pic of arjun and Sameer , he takes the pic in his hand )
Thume patha hai roshni Aaj thumare bhayya muje birthday wish Kiya par wo wish arjun keliye nahi Rawate keliye , patha nahi kyu Aaj muje bahuth un easy feel hori ,aise lag raha hai mere kareeb walonko kuch hone vala hai,mere liye thum sabkuch ho par thum tho muje chodkar chali gayi ,aur koun hai mereliye
......... SAM ............
Arjun calls to sameer at the instant but sameer does not pick the call , he runs to office .
Location : ETF office
Shree , Liza , chotu are interacting with their new friend ayeesha and having lots of fun as their both boses were not at office , suddenly arjun rushes into the conference room
Arjun : rathod kaha hai ??
Liza : rathod sir meeting attend karne keliye Gaya tha ,par aap ithna tensed kyu lagraha hu
Arjun : kuch nai
( Arjun again tried sameer phone it's not reachable , then he calls comm sir he informs that meeting has already been finished before 2 hours ,but sameer did not reach home or office , arjun is tensed more now )
Arjun : shree rathod ka number trace Karo fast.
Shree : ok sir , rathod sir ka phone abhi switch off hai so exact location nahi patha saktha .
Arjun : last active location ??
Shree : devgarh forest (fictional place)
Arjun : let's move
Just then arjun phone rings
Arjun : koun ??
Girl : sir Mai city hospital se bolraha hu , aap acp arjun ho na ??
Arjun : yes
Girl : sir acp sameer rathod has been appointed in our hospital , aap jaldhi ayena.
Arjun : what !!!!!!kya hua sam ko I mean rathod ko , kaise hai wo aab ??
Girl : he was been attacked sir , he is fine now , aap tension math kijiye, please come fast .
Arjun : Mai abhi araha hu , aur uska kyal rakhna
Arjun rushes out of the room , team understood the matter not completely but enough to understand the situation through Arjun's tension they also ran along with arjun to suv , arjun drove like a miniiac , he was not in his senses , he can't loose the only one person left in his life .
Location : hospital
Arjun : where is sameer rathod admitted
Receptionist : room no 304
Arjun runs to the room , doctors were treating sameer.
Doctor : koun ho aap aise room may nahi ana
Arjun : iam his frien...., ( His words struck in his throught) iam his colleague acp arjun .
Doctor : aap bahar ayiye.
They leave from the room
Arjun : doctor wo kaise hai ,kya hua usse.
Doctor : acp arjun please calm down , usse 2 goli laga, treatment ho chuka hai he is fine now , don't worry .
Arjun : thank you doctor thank you so much
Doctor : muje nahi , tell this thanks to the one who saved him and brought here , agar thodi dher hua tho it would be so difficult for him , Aaj acp sameer zinda hai tho uss ladki ki waja say
Arjun : koun hai wo ladki , i want to meet her , kaha hai wo ??
Doctor : she went to donate blood to sameer , athe hi honge .
Just then the girl comes from the room
Doctor she is the one who saved your colleague ( and doctor leaves from there )
Arjun goes towards the girl
Arjun : thank you thankyou so much rathod ko bachane keliye , aur hospital lane keliye .
Girl : pleasure is mine , Maine doctor say bath Kiya he is fine now don't worry.
Arjun : ha, abhi doctor ne bathaya , by the way iam acp arjun rawate ( he forwards his hand to the girl )
Girl : sakshi, sakshi Anand
( They both shake hands )
Arjun feels some different feeling by touching her hand , he gets some memory flashes and suddenly he fells down unconscious .
Sakshi : arjun arjun kya hua aapko , arjun please uto na arjun ... ..
From next part we will have more arakshi scenes
Ahhan
This time I am first one to comment. yay!
I would say superb and fantastic update.
Loved it.
Awww our ETF team is so cute yaar!!!! Jaise unho ne Arjun ke liye brithday surprise plan kiya it was so touching.
Aree yaar Shree🤣... Sameer ke saamne SYS and Damn it😆... Afternoon me good morning... lagta hai dimaag hang ho gaya hai iska and the way he got jealous of chotu🤣
But iss akdu aur khadus ka kya kare?!! Team ka effort dikha hi nahi... celebration ke liye mana kar diya😒 poor team... chalo accha hai atleast khana toh khaya... Sakshi ko bolo jaldi aauo aur apne iss khadus ko thoda sadbuddhi do taaki vo apne ass pass ke logon ko thoda aur better tareeke se treat kare aur unke pyaar ki acche se respect kare... 😵
So Ayesha Kapoor is on duty now. ❤️
Oh God Sameer ko goli lag gayi... but Sakshi Saved him... thank god and thanks to Sakshi... humare cute Chief aur Arjun ke SAM ko bachane ke liye
Arjun and Sakshi mil gaye but yeh kya Arjun falls unconscious. I guess memories ki wajah se pressure aa gaya hoga aur kuch recall naa kar paane ki stress ki wajah se aisa hua...
Dekhte hai aage kya hota hai.
excited for upcoming updates.
Thank you so much for this beautiful part and for PM
Nice update
Team loves arjun so much
They wanted to celebrate arjun's birthday
Sameer still cares for arjun but doesn't admit it
So sakshi cooked arjun's favourite food and made him eat it as well
Who attacked sameer and how did sakshi save him
Finally arakshi met
Will arjun come to know about sakshi's truth
Waiting for the next update
Continue soon
Originally posted by: Butterfly09
Ahhan
This time I am first one to comment. yay!
I would say superb and fantastic update.
Loved it.
Awww our ETF team is so cute yaar!!!! Jaise unho ne Arjun ke liye brithday surprise plan kiya it was so touching.
Aree yaar Shree🤣... Sameer ke saamne SYS and Damn it😆... Afternoon me good morning... lagta hai dimaag hang ho gaya hai iska and the way he got jealous of chotu🤣
But iss akdu aur khadus ka kya kare?!! Team ka effort dikha hi nahi... celebration ke liye mana kar diya😒 poor team... chalo accha hai atleast khana toh khaya... Sakshi ko bolo jaldi aauo aur apne iss khadus ko thoda sadbuddhi do taaki vo apne ass pass ke logon ko thoda aur better tareeke se treat kare aur unke pyaar ki acche se respect kare... 😵
So Ayesha Kapoor is on duty now. ❤️
Oh God Sameer ko goli lag gayi... but Sakshi Saved him... thank god and thanks to Sakshi... humare cute Chief aur Arjun ke SAM ko bachane ke liye
Arjun and Sakshi mil gaye but yeh kya Arjun falls unconscious. I guess memories ki wajah se pressure aa gaya hoga aur kuch recall naa kar paane ki stress ki wajah se aisa hua...
Dekhte hai aage kya hota hai.
excited for upcoming updates.
Thank you so much for this beautiful part and for PM
Thank you so much 🥰
Haa ETf team are so cute they wanted to surprise arjun but kya kare akdu na ithni asan say nahi sudhrega ,sakshi agayi na abb sab kuch handle karlongi, aur ha ayeesha ka entry hogayi wo karlengi next part Mai dekhna hai , jab thak arakshi hothi na Sam ko kuch nai hosaktha , ha arjun stress ki waja say unconscious hogaya dekna hai usse past yad atha ya nahi , will update next part soon and thank you so much for your support ☺️
Originally posted by: devikadevthosh
Nice update
Team loves arjun so much
They wanted to celebrate arjun's birthday
Sameer still cares for arjun but doesn't admit it
So sakshi cooked arjun's favourite food and made him eat it as well
Who attacked sameer and how did sakshi save him
Finally arakshi met
Will arjun come to know about sakshi's truth
Waiting for the next update
Continue soon
Thank you so much 🥰
Yaa team loves arjun a lot, even arjun also loves his team but as we know he won't admit it, samjun na aise hi hotha ek dusroko bahuth care kartha par dikatha nahi , sakshi agayi na unn donoko teek kardengi , yeah sakshi cooked and made arjun eat it 🥰, who attacked sameer and how sakshi saved him will be in next part , yeah finally arakshi met from now there would be more arakshi scenes , and Arjun knowing about sakshis truth ithna jaldhi tho nahi , toda time lagenga , and thank you so much for your support , glad that you are liking my story , and will update next part by Sunday
Awesome
🤍🤍🤍
Loved the efforts put by shreetu & liza to have a little celebration.
Waiting for more 🤍🤍🤍
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