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Part 2
The door Slammed open as Raavi reached
her room panting, exhausting physically
and mentally, tears still streaming down
from her swollen eyes. But she dont want
to rest, anger is overpowering her
senses and she is agitatingly looking for
something. Finally she got it in her
wardrobe The diary. She opens and pull
out the cap of pen down. Talking to
herself
RAAVI: sab khatam ho gya hai na , sab
khatam krna tha na tujhe. Theek hai ab ho
gyi tere mann ki . Ab nhi rahungi tujhse
chipak ke jo krna hai kar. Tu apni zindagi
jee aur main apni jiyugi. Main kyu spoil kru
apni life tere peeche ? Aaj se teri meri
kahani ka THE END shiva.
She spoke this in a single breath, and
about to write her last thoughts in her
diary , but her hands jammed. Like
thunderstorm lightening strike her, she
comes out from her stupor where she was
living in her anger . Whole conversation
from his harsh words to she breaking her
wedding chain all played like a movie in
her mind. The diary and pen fell on floor
followed by the owner, she came into
present and her eyes overflowing with
unending hot tears.
"Ye kya kar diya mene
"Kese ho gya mujhse ye "
She looked up at the mirror in front,
Her devastated image is what nobody ever
imagined in somnath. Messed hair, red
eyed, dupatta carelessly hung half on her
arm and half on floor. But these things are
not what she noticed in her form. Her
hand goes to her forehead where her
sindoor is not visible and then to her
neck, which is bruised by herself.
She remembers dhara di's words of
kuldevta Pooja.
'Sindoor ke bina adhoori lag rhi hai'
That day she didn't mind that words but at
present, she is not recognizing the person
in front of her. She wasn't Raavi Narayan
who claims herself as somnath most
beautiful girl. She wasn't looking like Raavi
shiva pandya and that realization is
killing her. Her identity with which she was
living is gone away from her .
Adhoori nahi.. . Aap galat thi di , adhoori
nhi, bikhri huyi lag rhi hu main.
Khud ko hi Anjaan lag rhi hu main
Beautiful moments of shiva with her are
coming in her mind.
Tu hamare hisse me to aane wali hai "
Raavi naam hai uska
Phoolkumari hai kyaa'
Jaan se maar dunga.
Tujhe pareshan krne ka haq sirf mera hai'
Mere bachpan ke har hisse me tujhse
ladai ke kisse hai"
Agar mere bhai nhi bhi aate na
To bhi tujhse akela nhi chodta'
Aaj chipkaliyo ki beauty queen
Chayi huyi hai'
Raavi: Aise kese sab khatam ho gya
shiva ? Kese sab kuch itna badal gya ? Haa
galat rahi hogi main bhot si cheezo me,
par unhe sudharne ki bhi koshish to kr rhi
thi na main. Ptaa hai tujhe pe meri aur mere
dosto ki baato ka bhot asar padaa
hai, par itnaaaa... , itnaaa.. ki... us Aag me
hum dono... hum dono ki sari zindagi hi jal
gyi
"Main to ummed krne lagi thi, hum dono
ko sath dekhne lgi thi,. pyaar ya Shaadi ka
tag thopna nhi chahti thi tujh par, par
saari zindagi sirf ladte jhagadte nhi
guzregi aisa vishwas dila rha tha tera
behaviour mujhe.
Kya jhoothi thi wo muskurahat jo tere
chehre par, sirf mujhe dekh kar aayi thi.
Kya meri aankho ko dhokha ho gya, jo teri
aankhon me badla dekha tha mene.
Kya jyada soch liya tha mene ki main Mami
ki behen ki beti se aage badkar Raavi ho
gyi hu tere liye.
Kya phir se galti kar di shiva mene ye chah
ke ki Tere dil me jagah bana lungi main.
Tu to badal rha tha na, gussa krna chod
diya tha tune mujhse . Aur agar nhi
badalna chahta tha to main badal jati, tu
ek mauka dekar to dekhta mujhe, bilkul
wese ban jati jesi tu chahta tha. Tune
kabhi btaya hi nhi tujhe kya chahiye. Tujhe
baar baar compromise krne ko isliye nhi
kehti thi ki tujhe badalna tha mujhe, main
bas khud ko teri nazron me dekhna chahti
thi, jese tu meri nazro me Rehne lgaa tha.
Nahi chahiye tha mujhe koi prince
charming. Nhi chahiye tha well dressed
gentlemen. Nhi poore krne barish me bike
ride ke sapne . Tera ungli pakad ke
somnath ki galiyon mein chalna hi bhaa
rha tha mujhe.
Kyu nhi dekh paya tu ye sab shiva ??
Kyuuuu?
Kyu??? Kyuuuu??
And she broke down into tears once again.
Meanwhile on Shiva's side
Shiva get up with a surprise face as he
look at the person.
SHIVA: KRISHHH ?????
(yessss guyss krish is the person who
listened Shiva's words)
KRISH: Ha bhai main, tera bhai , teri
family ka ek hisaa, jinhe lgta hai tu bhool
gya. Kya pagalpan ki baatein ke rha tha tu
SHIVA: kri..shh tu... Tu.. ja yaha.ha se.
KRISH: main kahi nhi ja rha . Aur tu, tu
chal mere sath abhi, ye sab faltu ka
tamasha clear kar. Chal.
(He started dragging him, but no one can
do anything without chattan pandya's will)
SHIVA: krish chod mujhe, aur mujhe kahi
nhi jana, tu ja ghar . Aur mujhe akela chod
KRISH: akela hone ki koshish to tu wese
bhi bhot brilliantly kar hi chuka hai.
Par main ye sab tere MAHAAN HERO wale
karname pe na abhi the end lgauga. Bada
aaya Hero no. 1 .abhi call krta hu main
Raavi bhabhi aur ghar main sabko
SHIVA: krish mene khaa na tu kuch nhi kr
rha hai, mtlb kuch nhi krega.
KRISH :dekh shiva teri ye faltu ki dhamki
side rakh, mere liye teri khokhli dhamki se
badkar tu hai, aur tu.. Tu.. jese.. abhi
toota.. huaa...
His words hang in air as he embraced his
brother providing much needed support
which shiva needed from a long time
eyes are glistening but the warmth is
lightly soothing his heart.
KRISH: shiva tu yr kya kr rha hai ? Tu sirf
khud ko aur raavi bhabhi ko tod rha hai.
Pariwar se jaan boojh ke door ho rha hai
tu. Ye sab galat hai. Ham sab wapas se
sahi kr dete hai tu chal.
SHIVA:( getting a grip over his emotions
Shiva pulled out) Tujhe lgta hai sab sahi
ho jayega. Aur kya sahi ho jayega.
raavi ke chehre pe wo khushi wapas aa
jayegi jo shadi ke phle rha krti thi?.Kya wo
raavi wapas aa jayegi jo full of life thi?. Kya
main uske layak ban jauga? ya wo mujhe
aise apna legi ?bol na jya sahi ho jayega?
KRISH: shiva tu samajh nhi rha hai ,shayad
wo tujhe pasand krti hai, aajkal tum dono
close aa rhe the, hum sab ne dekha hai .
SHIVA: wo majboori thi uski krish, khushi
nhi. Wo is shadi me adjustment kr rhi thi,
compromise ke sath zindagi jeena chahti
thi. Main khushi bnna chahta tha uski
zindagi mein, jo wo mere sath mehsoos
nhi kr skti.
KRISH:par shiva .
SHIVA Tu ghar ja rha hai krish
Aur tune na kuch suna na kuch dekha. Jo
jesa chal rha hai wese hi chalega.
KRISH: shiva tu ...
SHIVA: ham is bare me aur koi baat nhi
krege krish.
KRISH:(unwillingly start taking steps
backwards, while watching his brother,
who tackle every difficult situation without
any flinch. But never share his worries to
anyone, not to his family ,whom he
considers everything. krish is feeling
miserable by the thought that he had
misunderstood his brother and his family
is still in that hallucination that this man
has done some crime. They have failed to
read him , they ignored his pain and let him
suffer when he needed them the most.
Noooo he can't let him suffer anymore , he
is not going to listen this time, promising
himself. I will correct all this, this is not
what you deserve Bhai .I can't see you
broken. Hey somnath help me to reunite
two broken souls.
Originally posted by: frnd_ship
Part 2
The door Slammed open as Raavi reached
her room panting, exhausting physically
and mentally, tears still streaming down
from her swollen eyes. But she dont want
to rest, anger is overpowering her
senses and she is agitatingly looking for
something. Finally she got it in her
wardrobe The diary. She opens and pull
out the cap of pen down. Talking to
herself
RAAVI: sab khatam ho gya hai na , sab
khatam krna tha na tujhe. Theek hai ab ho
gyi tere mann ki . Ab nhi rahungi tujhse
chipak ke jo krna hai kar. Tu apni zindagi
jee aur main apni jiyugi. Main kyu spoil kru
apni life tere peeche ? Aaj se teri meri
kahani ka THE END shiva.
She spoke this in a single breath, and
about to write her last thoughts in her
diary , but her hands jammed. Like
thunderstorm lightening strike her, she
comes out from her stupor where she was
living in her anger . Whole conversation
from his harsh words to she breaking her
wedding chain all played like a movie in
her mind. The diary and pen fell on floor
followed by the owner, she came into
present and her eyes overflowing with
unending hot tears.
"Ye kya kar diya mene
"Kese ho gya mujhse ye "
She looked up at the mirror in front,
Her devastated image is what nobody ever
imagined in somnath. Messed hair, red
eyed, dupatta carelessly hung half on her
arm and half on floor. But these things are
not what she noticed in her form. Her
hand goes to her forehead where her
sindoor is not visible and then to her
neck, which is bruised by herself.
She remembers dhara di's words of
kuldevta Pooja.
'Sindoor ke bina adhoori lag rhi hai'
That day she didn't mind that words but at
present, she is not recognizing the person
in front of her. She wasn't Raavi Narayan
who claims herself as somnath most
beautiful girl. She wasn't looking like Raavi
shiva pandya and that realization is
killing her. Her identity with which she was
living is gone away from her .
Adhoori nahi.. . Aap galat thi di , adhoori
nhi, bikhri huyi lag rhi hu main.
Khud ko hi Anjaan lag rhi hu main
Beautiful moments of shiva with her are
coming in her mind.
Tu hamare hisse me to aane wali hai "
Raavi naam hai uska
Phoolkumari hai kyaa'
Jaan se maar dunga.
Tujhe pareshan krne ka haq sirf mera hai'
Mere bachpan ke har hisse me tujhse
ladai ke kisse hai"
Agar mere bhai nhi bhi aate na
To bhi tujhse akela nhi chodta'
Aaj chipkaliyo ki beauty queen
Chayi huyi hai'
Raavi: Aise kese sab khatam ho gya
shiva ? Kese sab kuch itna badal gya ? Haa
galat rahi hogi main bhot si cheezo me,
par unhe sudharne ki bhi koshish to kr rhi
thi na main. Ptaa hai tujhe pe meri aur mere
dosto ki baato ka bhot asar padaa
hai, par itnaaaa... , itnaaa.. ki... us Aag me
hum dono... hum dono ki sari zindagi hi jal
gyi
"Main to ummed krne lagi thi, hum dono
ko sath dekhne lgi thi,. pyaar ya Shaadi ka
tag thopna nhi chahti thi tujh par, par
saari zindagi sirf ladte jhagadte nhi
guzregi aisa vishwas dila rha tha tera
behaviour mujhe.
Kya jhoothi thi wo muskurahat jo tere
chehre par, sirf mujhe dekh kar aayi thi.
Kya meri aankho ko dhokha ho gya, jo teri
aankhon me badla dekha tha mene.
Kya jyada soch liya tha mene ki main Mami
ki behen ki beti se aage badkar Raavi ho
gyi hu tere liye.
Kya phir se galti kar di shiva mene ye chah
ke ki Tere dil me jagah bana lungi main.
Tu to badal rha tha na, gussa krna chod
diya tha tune mujhse . Aur agar nhi
badalna chahta tha to main badal jati, tu
ek mauka dekar to dekhta mujhe, bilkul
wese ban jati jesi tu chahta tha. Tune
kabhi btaya hi nhi tujhe kya chahiye. Tujhe
baar baar compromise krne ko isliye nhi
kehti thi ki tujhe badalna tha mujhe, main
bas khud ko teri nazron me dekhna chahti
thi, jese tu meri nazro me Rehne lgaa tha.
Nahi chahiye tha mujhe koi prince
charming. Nhi chahiye tha well dressed
gentlemen. Nhi poore krne barish me bike
ride ke sapne . Tera ungli pakad ke
somnath ki galiyon mein chalna hi bhaa
rha tha mujhe.
Kyu nhi dekh paya tu ye sab shiva ??
Kyuuuu?
Kyu??? Kyuuuu??
And she broke down into tears once again.
Meanwhile on Shiva's side
Shiva get up with a surprise face as he
look at the person.
SHIVA: KRISHHH ?????
(yessss guyss krish is the person who
listened Shiva's words)
KRISH: Ha bhai main, tera bhai , teri
family ka ek hisaa, jinhe lgta hai tu bhool
gya. Kya pagalpan ki baatein ke rha tha tu
SHIVA: kri..shh tu... Tu.. ja yaha.ha se.
KRISH: main kahi nhi ja rha . Aur tu, tu
chal mere sath abhi, ye sab faltu ka
tamasha clear kar. Chal.
(He started dragging him, but no one can
do anything without chattan pandya's will)
SHIVA: krish chod mujhe, aur mujhe kahi
nhi jana, tu ja ghar . Aur mujhe akela chod
KRISH: akela hone ki koshish to tu wese
bhi bhot brilliantly kar hi chuka hai.
Par main ye sab tere MAHAAN HERO wale
karname pe na abhi the end lgauga. Bada
aaya Hero no. 1 .abhi call krta hu main
Raavi bhabhi aur ghar main sabko
SHIVA: krish mene khaa na tu kuch nhi kr
rha hai, mtlb kuch nhi krega.
KRISH :dekh shiva teri ye faltu ki dhamki
side rakh, mere liye teri khokhli dhamki se
badkar tu hai, aur tu.. Tu.. jese.. abhi
toota.. huaa...
His words hang in air as he embraced his
brother providing much needed support
which shiva needed from a long time
eyes are glistening but the warmth is
lightly soothing his heart.
KRISH: shiva tu yr kya kr rha hai ? Tu sirf
khud ko aur raavi bhabhi ko tod rha hai.
Pariwar se jaan boojh ke door ho rha hai
tu. Ye sab galat hai. Ham sab wapas se
sahi kr dete hai tu chal.
SHIVA:( getting a grip over his emotions
Shiva pulled out) Tujhe lgta hai sab sahi
ho jayega. Aur kya sahi ho jayega.
raavi ke chehre pe wo khushi wapas aa
jayegi jo shadi ke phle rha krti thi?.Kya wo
raavi wapas aa jayegi jo full of life thi?. Kya
main uske layak ban jauga? ya wo mujhe
aise apna legi ?bol na jya sahi ho jayega?
KRISH: shiva tu samajh nhi rha hai ,shayad
wo tujhe pasand krti hai, aajkal tum dono
close aa rhe the, hum sab ne dekha hai .
SHIVA: wo majboori thi uski krish, khushi
nhi. Wo is shadi me adjustment kr rhi thi,
compromise ke sath zindagi jeena chahti
thi. Main khushi bnna chahta tha uski
zindagi mein, jo wo mere sath mehsoos
nhi kr skti.
KRISH:par shiva .
SHIVA Tu ghar ja rha hai krish
Aur tune na kuch suna na kuch dekha. Jo
jesa chal rha hai wese hi chalega.
KRISH: shiva tu ...
SHIVA: ham is bare me aur koi baat nhi
krege krish.
KRISH:(unwillingly start taking steps
backwards, while watching his brother,
who tackle every difficult situation without
any flinch. But never share his worries to
anyone, not to his family ,whom he
considers everything. krish is feeling
miserable by the thought that he had
misunderstood his brother and his family
is still in that hallucination that this man
has done some crime. They have failed to
read him , they ignored his pain and let him
suffer when he needed them the most.
Noooo he can't let him suffer anymore , he
is not going to listen this time, promising
himself. I will correct all this, this is not
what you deserve Bhai .I can't see you
broken. Hey somnath help me to reunite
two broken souls.
Here posting part 2 on behalf of CheerlessIM (sorry yaar didn't know your name)
As she was unable to post
Originally posted by: frnd_ship
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PART -4
Previously - Krish takes raavi to hospital and she get to know , shiva is injured in accident and currently in ICU .
Silence. Only Silence is what she feels when, she slowly starts getting conscious.
She thinks maybe she is the only person in this white room , greeting her with medicine smell . her eyes open fully and move around in whole room , there she see dhara bhabhi sitting beside her , gaumbi stood in some distance and krish is resting beside window , but every person's eyes on her. it took her some minutes to realize the whole situation, she hear krish saying what she never wants to happen in her dream , but it is actually happening in real. She tightly close her eyes , fingers gripping the bedsheet so tightly . Why I woke up to see this is reality . She wants to know how is he now ? But the expression on their faces is not showing any good sign . She gets courage and ask .
DHARA : " Raavi tu theek to hai na ?" Dhara asked with concern.
RAAVI :"main theek hu di " she said with an smile .
She wants to know how is he now ? But the expression on their faces is not showing any good sign . She gets courage and ask .
RAAVI : " wo kesa hai ab ?? " she asks in a low voice , not looking towards them .
GAUMBI :" Abhi bhi doctor uske hosh me aane ka hi intezar kr rhe hai . Kuch btaya nhi aur " says with a defeated voice .
Silence prevail in the room after that. Everyone having their own thoughts but directing towards only one . SHIVA.
D: " Accha chal rha tha sabkuch , ptaa nhi achanak se aisa kya bhoot sawar ho gya is ladke par jo itna sab kuch ho gya. "
her voice is mixed with anger , pain , fear , and a little bit of unlikeliness .
"Maine kabhi expect nhi kiya tha usse ki aise behave krega wo hmare samne , ham sabke sath , raavi ke sath . "
G: " Dhara , abhi in sab baato ko nikal ke koi mtlb nhi hai . Tu stress mat le "
He somewhere agree with her thoughts but he doesn't know what should he do to correct things right now . And he is worried about dhara's difficult pregnancy also.
Raavi was just listening to Dhara and she also starts thinking about same . Maybe if they hadn't fought , he didn't put allegation on her , if they didn't had leave each other , maybe they would not be in this situation .
D : " to aur kya karoon gaumbi ? Kya karu ? San kuch upar neeche kr kr rakh diya hai shiva ne. Sara somnath batein bnaa rha hai hmare ghar ki . Maa dukhi hai . Raavi ki kya halat hi gyi hai , abhi bhi ye bechari uski chinta krti hai . Behish ho gyi uske bare me sunkar . Aur ek wo hai jisko na hmari kuch sunni hai na kuch krba hai bas apne mann se kiye ja rha tha . Shayad Maine hi galat faisla kr liya . Shiva raavi ke layak tha hi nhi kabhi . "
"Bhabhi "
Krish's voice was slightly high . He was listening to his bhabhima and his heart n mind was in another zone , they don't know why all this happened but why are they blaming him , they could ask him about this mess . They are just like parents to all 3 brothers . Ans shiva respects and love them a little more then the other two , blindly follows their voice . So why can't for once they think they should calmly talk it out and assured him to share his piece of information from him.
Without thinking about the solution or how can they bring the couple together they first have to see where is the problem .
Krish was cursing himself when he ask God to help him 'This is what you had done somnathji' he was finding a way to do something at this matter but before he could proceed , he gets hits by a news of his brother is in hospital , after a serious accident. He was statue for some seconds and then tell this to his family , they all were terrified after this , but quickly rushed to the hospital holding onto their emotions.
Krish also was going with them , when he thinks about a person who also deserves to know about this . Who will also get affected by this and then he made his way to his Maami's house .
Krish was somewhere expected her condition after knowing it. Her expression , her eyes, tears , blank face , fear , everything was usual . As he knew how much they try to show the indifference for each other to this world , they are connected for whole life .
He was worried seeing her unconscious . He was praying for both of them to get consciousness soon . And she opens her eyes , he was half happy half worried till he hear his Bhabhi ma's words .
Is he hallucinating ? Did he hear correctly ? His bhabhima was saying hurtful words to his pyara baccha when he is unconscious with life supporting machines . She is thinking about all this mess even now. She is worried about everything n everyone but him ? Yeahhh it was Shiva's fault he was taken forgranted and he let it happen. But enough now be it hurt , anger , care , pregnancy moodiness or stress , she is not saying something right . He had to stop their thoughts by showing them mirror of Truth . This is time for unraveling shiva's side of story .
K: " Bhabhi I know ki usse galti huyi hai , par koi to karan hoga na ki usme ye sab kuch kiya . Kisne kabhi Janne ki koshish nhi ki. Bas sab lecture de rhe the ki usne sahi nhi kiya , nhi krna chahiye tha . Wo galat kr rha hai . Par kya soch ke ye sab kiya usne ye kisi ne na hi socha na hi poocha .
Usse door ho gye ham sab , bura bhala khaa ,apne actions se hurt kiya , uspe haath bhi uthaya gya . Par uske pas Baith kar baat nhi ki .
Main manta hu , uski raavi bhabhi se ki gyi badtameezi aur kahi huyi baato ke liye , kuch had tak wo behavior sahi tha . Par wo hamare shiva hai , hamare shiva , jiske life ke kisse hamesha se doosro ke liye zindagi jeene se bhare huye hai , hamare socha kyu nhi ki saalo se jis shiva ko ham sath khada dekhte aaye hain wo chip chaap ham logo se door ho gya , joki sabse jyada matter krte hai uski life mein .
Main bhi aap sabki tarah gussa tha uspe , shayad hamesha rehta agar... agar us din Park me usse itna toota huaa na dekhta "
His eyes started watering, as that scene plays on his mind . Dhara n gaumbi are surprised by krish sudden outburst but he was saying everything in a way which made them realize they had done a mistake. But they are curious about what else was krish gonna say.
Dev and rishita who were outside , comes in after listening to krish's voice .
Raavi was listening to krish words and her eyes are clouding again, she realise , she had everyone beside her , his family and her family . But nobody was there for him . Supporting Or taking his side , listening him , no one . And it pained her to know that . Her heart is hammering , she is having intuitions that krish is gonna say something which will be something big for her .
K: " us din jab aap dono Park se chali gyi , main bhi jane wala tha par shiva ki cheeku se ruk gya .
Waha.. waha ..shiva ... shiva...ko kkko...pehli bar ...pehli bar ..itna haara... huaa ..dekha ..dee..kha ..Maine."
" Shiva ko hamesha hmare ghar ka sabse mazboot pillar bnte dekha hai mene , aise ghutne tek kar aankhon se aansu bahata dekh , main nahi seh PA rha tha . Maine usse khaa ki ye sab aap logo ko btaa de aur sab theek kr de , par wo nhi mana . Usse ye zaruri lga , sahi lg rha tha kyuki wo azaad krna chahta tha raavi bhabhi ko ek zabardasti ke unchahe rishte se ."
" he was cursing his fate, cursing himself for not doing what he actually want to do . What he want in his life but restraining himself , thinking he not deserve it . He don't deserve a princess like Raavi bhabhi ." His gaze moved towards raavi while saying the last part .
"Yess he deliberately did this , insulted raavi bhabhi , saying things which he actually didn't mean , he knew he had committed a sin, he know he should apologize for everything yet he didn't . he want her to get away from a compromise and to live her life , what she want . He made her cry momentarily so she can smile all her life with her heart . He want to see her Happy ."
Each person was in his own thought with unshed tears of regret , guilt and shame in themselves. They all are failed to see his pain and it is pricking them .
Their rivery broken by a knock on the door . They composed themselves as doctor come in .
" He regain consciousness "
To be continued......
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